yoppo (yoppo1026) — 付けたレビュー

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Can you hear the sounds of Skype?
The image of Skype is not in motion. Is there any trouble?

There is no problem with me.

I was at home this weekend doing nothing special as usual.
I felt like going out, but actually I stayed at home and studied English because it was expected to rain heavily due to the typhoon today.

Was there any influence by the typhoon in your neighborhood?

I am glad to hear there was no such influence.

As I was not able to dry my clothes after washing them, I went to the laundromat while it was raining.

I hate rainy days, but I am also fed up with sunny days with the temperature of around 40 degrees.

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Can you hear the sounds of Skype?
The image of Skype is not in motion. Is there any trouble?

There is no problem with me.

I was at home this weekend doing nothing special as usual.
I felt like going out, but actually I stayed at home and studied English because it was expected to rain heavily due to the typhoon today.

Was there any influence of the typhoon in your neighborhood?

I am glad to hear there was no such influence.

As I was not able to dry my clothes after washing them, I went to the laundromat while it was raining.

I hate rainy days, but I am also fed up with sunny days with the temperature of around 40 degrees.

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I have taken a month off from last month, but I am preparing to buy a lot at your shop.
I have checked and new products have also arrived! I am looking forward to working with you.

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I have taken a month off since last month, but I am preparing to buy a lot at your shop.
I have checked and new products have also arrived! I am looking forward to working with you.

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I’d been taking time off since last month but now I’m prepping as I’d like to buy a lot from your shop again. So you are getting new items as well!
Thank you always.

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I’d been taking time off since last month but now I’m prepping as I’d like to buy a lot from your shop again. You are getting new items as well!
Thank you always.

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There are many places handling prepaid SIM at Haneda Airport.
Although it is a web page only in Japanese, please refer to it.
International Arrival Floor: JAL ABC Counter
International Arrival Floor: Mobile Communication Counter
International Arrival Floor: Telecom Square
1F Lawson

Montbell is located in Shinjuku · Ikebukuro · Shibuya etc.
There are 14 stores in Tokyo, but I think Shinjuku is easy to find.

Please have seafood rice bowl whenever you go to Tsukiji.
This shop is also good for Uni (sea urchin).
For the best mainstream seafood rice bowl, the following recommended.

Please enjoy Tokyo!

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There are many places handling prepaid SIM at Haneda Airport.
Although it is a web page only in Japanese, please refer to it.
International Arrival Floor: JAL ABC Counter
International Arrival Floor: Mobile Communication Counter
International Arrival Floor: Telecom Square
1F Lawson

Montbell is located in Shinjuku, Ikebukuro, Shibuya etc.
There are 14 stores in Tokyo, but I think Shinjuku is easy to find.

Please have seafood rice bowl whenever you go to Tsukiji.
This shop is also good for Uni (sea urchin).
For the best mainstream seafood rice bowl, the following is recommended.

Please enjoy Tokyo!

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Shunsuke様(or "-san")

DHLからの請求書を確認するまで、遠隔地の課徴金について知る方法はありません。
改めてそれらをチェックして、あなたの荷物に遠隔地の追加料金が追加されていることに気付きました。

これからは、それぞれの配送料に遠隔地の追加料金が加算されます。
私たちが請求する送料は0にしてます。 DHLが私たちに請求するものだけを追加請求します。

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しゅんすけ様(or "-san")

DHLからの請求書を確認するまで、遠隔地の課徴金について知る方法はありません。
改めてそれらをチェックして、あなたの荷物に遠隔地の追加料金が追加されていることに気付きました。

これからは、それぞれの配送料に遠隔地の追加料金が加算されます。
私たちが請求する送料は0にしています。 DHLが私たちに請求するものだけを追加請求します。

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彼の剃刀の件、おめでとうございます。
私の名前はLuis Lamas Lopedといいます、スペインに住んでおります。
私は岩崎玉鋼 剃刀の新品58ミリの購入を考えておりまして、購入可能かどうか、また値段を教えて頂けないでしょうか。

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私は岩崎職人の玉鋼の新品もしくは新古品剃刀を購入したいのですが、あなたがお持ちのものは中古品のように思えるのですが、そちらは中古品でしょうか、それとも新古品でしょうか。こちらをはっきりさせて頂きけますでしょうか。 またリーフ仕様の岩崎剃刀玉鋼の50-60ミリの新品もしくは新古品を入手して頂くことはできますでしょうか。
もしどなたかお持ちでしたら写真を送って頂くことは可能でしょうか。
私は翻訳者を介すことになると思いますがご了承願います。
あなたと理解し合えることを願っております。質問にお答え頂けたら嬉しいです。

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彼の剃刀の件、おめでとうございます。
私の名前はLuis Lamas Lopedといいます、スペインに住んでおります。
私は岩崎玉鋼 剃刀の新品58ミリの購入を考えておりまして、購入可能かどうか、また値段を教えて頂けないでしょうか。

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私は岩崎職人の玉鋼の新品もしくは新古品剃刀を購入したいのですが、あなたがお持ちのものは中古品のように思えるのですが、そちらは中古品でしょうか、それとも新古品でしょうか。こちらをはっきりさせて頂けますでしょうか。 またリーフ仕様の岩崎剃刀玉鋼の50-60ミリの新品もしくは新古品を入手して頂くことはできますでしょうか。
もしどなたかお持ちでしたら写真を送って頂くことは可能でしょうか。
私は翻訳者を介すことになると思いますがご了承願います。
あなたと理解し合えることを願っております。質問にお答え頂けたら嬉しいです。

元の翻訳
レーザーご当選おめでとうございます。
私の名前は、 Luis Lamas Loped でスペインに住んでおります。
私は、新品の５８ミリのイワサキカミソリを購入したいときぼうしております。そちらでは手に入りますか？また値段を教えていただけますか。

私は、新品のカミソリを購入希望です。あるいは、NOS（在庫品の新品）同様のもので、イワサキ製で玉鋼を希望しています。しかし商品が使用されたものか、それともNOSなのかは教えてくださるようお願いします。イワサキ玉鋼の５０ミリから６０ミリくらいで新品の塗りのもの、またはほぼ新品在庫品はそちら様では販売しておられますか。
もしできれば、写真も送っていただけたら幸いです。
英語が不完全なので、通訳を間に入れています。
できれば、あなた様からの返事を直接に理解出来たら良いのですが、英語通訳者の方へ、返事を下さるようお願いします。

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レーザーご当選おめでとうございます。
私の名前は、 Luis Lamas Loped でスペインに住んでおります。
私は、新品の５８ミリのイワサキカミソリを購入したいと考えております。そちらでは手に入りますか？また値段を教えていただけますか。

私は、新品のカミソリを購入希望です。あるいは、NOS（在庫品の新品）同様のもので、イワサキ製で玉鋼を希望しています。しかし商品が使用されたものか、それともNOSなのか教えてくださるようお願いします。イワサキ玉鋼の５０ミリから６０ミリくらいで新品の塗りのもの、またはほぼ新品在庫品はそちら様では販売しておられますか。
もしできれば、写真も送っていただけたら幸いです。
英語が不完全なので、通訳を間に入れています。
できれば、あなた様からの返事を直接に理解出来たら良いのですが、英語通訳者の方へ、返事を下さるようお願いします。

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I have a question, is there any change in the specifications?
Just in case could you please send me the latest specifications ?
My boss is away for overseas business trip until the 24th, so it is not possible for me to confirm this.
I'm very sorry, please give me some more time.

Honestly, I don't get the details of the specifications you gave me, so I would like to visit in person↵
and have a meeting with you.
Could you make an appointment for the week of June 4th?
I would also like to check the progress of 〇〇's case, and I would like to visit the following users as well.

Did you send an estimate to 〇〇?

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I have a question, is there any change in the specifications?
Just in case could you please send me the latest specifications ?
My boss is away for overseas business trip until the 24th, so it is not possible for me to confirm this.
I'm very sorry, please give me some more time.

Honestly, I don't get the details of the specifications you gave me, so I would like to visit in person and have a meeting with you.
Could you make an appointment for the week of June 4th?
I would also like to check the progress of 〇〇's case, and I would like to visit the following users as well.

Did you send an estimate to 〇〇?

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II don't know why it has not repay me in spite of your cancel on ebay, but I confirm with paypal , I got the answer that the transaction is not canceled.
It might be that synchronous between ebay and Paypal isn't working well, so why don't you inquiry to ebay?

If you couldn't refund, I'll continue the process of refund in Paypal.

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I don't know why it has not repay me in spite of your cancel on ebay, but I confirmed with paypal, and got the answer that the transaction is not canceled.
It might be that synchronous between ebay and Paypal isn't working well, so why don't you inquiry to ebay?

If you couldn't refund, I'll continue the process of refund in Paypal.

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I don’t know why I don’t get the refund despite your cancellation on eBay but I have checked with PayPal and was told that the order hadn’t been cancelled or got refund.

There is a possibility that eBay and PayPal are not well linked, therefore I suggest that you check with eBay.

If you can’t refund through eBay, I will continue the refund procedure through PayPal. I appreciate your understanding.

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I don’t know why I don’t get the refund despite your cancellation on eBay but I checked with PayPal and was told that the order hadn’t been cancelled or got refund.

There is a possibility that eBay and PayPal are not well linked, therefore I suggest that you check with eBay.

If you can’t refund through eBay, I will continue the refund procedure through PayPal. I appreciate your understanding.

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I am ◯◯ who lives in Japan.
Is VAT included in the PayPay payment bill sent just before?
When you company's name was ◯◯ before, I used to pay amount reduced BAT.
Have your rule and display changed?
If the amount is correct, I will pay it right away.
I am sorry to trouble you. I look forward to hearing from you.

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I am xx who lives in Japan.
Is VAT included in the PayPay payment bill sent just before?
When you company's name was xx before, I used to pay amount reduced BAT.
Have your rule and display changed?
If the amount is correct, I will pay it right away.
I am sorry to trouble you. I look forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you for your support. I am xx in Japan.
Is VAT included in the amount charged via PayPal I received a few minutes ago?
I have paid the amount VAT was deducted from the price listed when name of your store was xx.
Have system and listing changed?
If amount is correct, I will pay via PayPal immediately.
I hate to ask you, but am waiting for your reply.

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Thank you for your support. I am xx in Japan.
Is VAT included in the amount charged via PayPal I received a few minutes ago?
I have paid the amount VAT was deducted from the price listed when name of your store was xx.
Have system and listing changed?
If the amount is correct, I will pay via PayPal immediately.
I hate to ask you, but am waiting for your reply.

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At the moment, 3 shops are decided to handle it.

At the last order, A's verified date was August 2018 arrived.
The shortest limited date would be possible to be rejected by shops.
Please ship us items as long limited date as possible this time.

In addition, when is the limited date of real A product and B class?
Is item C's standard ※※？
Does item C include sugar?

Could you mail analysis certificate of each part except the flies you sent me before?
Also, I need ※※ documents too.

How much percent of sugar does items C contain per 1 bottle?

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At the moment, 3 shops decided to handle it.

At the last order, A's verified date was August 2018 arrived.
The shortest limited date would be possible to be rejected by shops.
Please ship us items as long limited date as possible this time.

In addition, when is the limited date of real A product and B class?
Is item C's standard xx？
Does item C include sugar?

Could you mail analysis certificate of each part except the flies you sent me before?
Also, I need xx documents too.

How much percent of sugar does items C contain per 1 bottle?

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1. I would like to ask you to pay as a deposit a half of total price at your ordering. The rest will be invoiced to you when the product manufacturing is completed and ready to be shipped.

2. As this is made for Japanese, the size is smaller than those made by European makers if you compare, Specially it is made to be smaller around the heel.

3. If you give me the size and brand of your shoes that you usually use, I can give some advice about the size.

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1. I would like to ask you to pay as a deposit a half of total price at your ordering. The rest will be invoiced to you when the product manufacturing is completed and ready to be shipped.

2. As this is made for Japanese, the size is smaller than those made by European makers if you compare, especially it is made to be smaller around the heel.

3. If you give me the size and brand of your shoes that you usually use, I can give some advice about the size.

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1. I will charge you half of amount as deposit when you order it. I will charge remaining amount when the item is completed and ready to be sent.

2. As it is the shoes made for the Japanese, it is small in comparison with the one made by European and American makers. The place around heel is remarkably small.

3. If you let me know size and brand of the shoes you usually wear, I will advise you regarding size.

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1. I will charge you half of amount as deposit when you order it. I will charge remaining amount when the item is completed and ready to be sent.

2. As it is the shoes made for the Japanese, it is small in comparison with the one made by European and American makers. The place around heel is remarkably small.

3. If you let me know the size and brand of the shoes you usually wear, I will advise you regarding size.

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Could I order goods after attached this 3 points of a credit card, pass port and credit card authorization form to this e-mail?

In order to the order is mistaken, last confirming before settlement though, ↵
are you sure that its price is 5,600 dollars, that goods I ordered, that Platinum Tiny Cross/Diamond Pave
attached this e-mail?

Sorry for making you trouble, but let me know overall cost including postage before settlement.

I wish to wait for your reply.

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Could I order goods after attaching this 3 points of a credit card, pass port and credit card authorization form to this e-mail?

In order to the order is mistaken, last confirming before settlement though, are you sure that its price is 5,600 dollars, that goods I ordered, that Platinum Tiny Cross/Diamond Pave
attached this e-mail?

Sorry for making you trouble, but let me know overall cost including postage before settlement.

I wish to wait for your reply.

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May I order by 3 points of credit card passport and credit card authorization form attached to this email?

As I do not want to make a mistake in details of the order, I want to make a final check before making a settlement.
Is the item ordered is Platinum tiny cross/Diamond pave attached to this email?
Is price 5600 dollars?

I hate to ask you many favors, but please let me know total amount including shipping charge before making a settlement.

I am waiting for your reply.

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May I order with 3 points of credit card passport and credit card authorization form attached to this email?

As I do not want to make a mistake in details of the order, I want to make a final check before making a settlement.
Is the item ordered is Platinum tiny cross/Diamond pave attached to this email?
Is the price 5600 dollars?

I hate to ask you many favors, but please let me know total amount including shipping charge before making a settlement.

I am waiting for your reply.