yoppo (yoppo1026) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Dear Jason.
Thank you for contacting me immediately.
However, I have confirmed the image, this is a terrible condition.
I am really sorry.
Initially it is in a state corresponding to the return message returned, but you will fix it
it, you can correspond to a half price refund?
We will refund as soon as you can.
I am waiting for your reply.
I appreciate your understanding

修正後
Dear Jason.
Thank you for contacting me immediately.
However, I have confirmed the image, this is a terrible condition.
I am really sorry.
Initially it is in a state corresponding to the return message returned, but you will fix
it, you can correspond to a half price refund?
We will refund as soon as you can.
I am waiting for your reply.
I appreciate your understanding

元の翻訳
Can you calculate single digits?
It’ an Easy Brain Training puzzle, moving the panel to make “0”!

“0 -zero-“ is the puzzle game for brain training to make “0” on the center panel by moving panels of which numbers are written with flicking from side to side and up and down.

Brain activation is expected by repeating easy calculation with simple operation, and it can be played as the daily brain training with mission mode. Beyond that, it includes collection element that you can get the unique theme by using diamond of which you can obtain during the game.

Enjoy a simple brain training puzzle”0 -zero-“.

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Can you calculate single digits?
It’ an Easy Brain Training puzzle, moving the panel to make “0”!

“0 -zero-“ is the puzzle game for brain training to make “0” on the center panel by moving panels of which numbers are written with flicking from side to side and up and down.

Brain activation is expected by repeating easy calculation with simple operation, and it can be played as the daily brain training with mission mode. Beyond that, it includes collection element that you can get the unique theme by using diamond of which you can obtain during the game.

Enjoy a simple brain training puzzle ”0 -zero-“.

元の翻訳
Top-Bottom, Right-Left, move a number by flicking and make "zero" in the middle panel.
How many zeros will you be able to make before time out?

Number Puzzels using simple and causal operation!
How intersting to calculate with this!
Everyday brain training, and the more you continue this the cleverer you become!
You can see your improvement from actual mode setting to extreme difficulty!
30 kinds of themes all individual!
Compare scores with friends, skite as you please!
All free to play!

Calculations when shopping will become easy.
Calcurating in head will become your strength.
Math will become your favorite subject.
Great memory training for workplace.
Your eye vision will improve.

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Top-Bottom, Right-Left, move a number by flicking and make "zero" in the middle panel.
How many zeros will you be able to make before time out?

Number Puzzels using simple and causal operation!
How intersting to calculate with this!
Everyday brain training, and the more you continue this the cleverer you become!
You can see your improvement from actual mode setting to extreme difficulty!
30 kinds of themes all individual!
Compare scores with friends, skite as you please!
All free to play!

Calculations when shopping will become easy.
Calcurating in head will become your strength.
Math will become your favorite subject.
Great memory training for workplace.
Your eye vision will improve.

元の翻訳
Move the panel with numbers upward, downward, to left, or to right and make "zero" in the middle of panels.
How many "zero" can you make within until the time expires.

This is a numerical puzzle with very simple maneuvers! How fun it is to calculate!
Train your brain every day with this daily mission! The more you continue playing the more your brain gets smarter!
The difficulty increases in the achievement mode that will allow you to feel your improvements!
It has 30 unique themes with variety.
Share your scores with your friend and boast each other!
You can play totally free of charge!

The calculation during your shopping will get easier.
You will be good at the calculation in your head.
You will get to like arithmetic.
It can be a training for your working memory.
You will have wider vision range.

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Move the panel with numbers upward, downward, to left, or to right and make "zero" in the middle of panels.
How many "zero" can you make within until the time expires?

This is a numerical puzzle with very simple maneuvers! How fun it is to calculate!
Train your brain every day with this daily mission! The more you continue playing the more your brain gets smarter!
The difficulty increases in the achievement mode that will allow you to feel your improvements!
It has 30 unique themes with variety.
Share your scores with your friend and boast each other!
You can play totally free of charge!

The calculation during your shopping will get easier.
You will be good at the calculation in your head.
You will get to like arithmetic.
It can be a training for your working memory.
You will have wider vision range.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the price.
I would like to purchase all!

As I would like to lessen product's damage during transportation, I would like to purchase by case.
◯◯ product contained 20 pieces in one case. I checked it when I purchased last time.

How many pieces are there in one case for other products?
Are they all 20 pieces in one case?

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Thank you for the price.
I would like to purchase all!

As I would like to lessen product's damage during transportation, I would like to purchase by case.
20 pieces of ◯◯ product were in one case. I checked it when I purchased last time.

How many pieces are there in one case for other products?
Are they all 20 pieces in one case?

元の翻訳
ハンズのサンプルについて
同一物について輸出者と話し合ったことをお知らせします。
輸出者は以前フェデックにより出荷していました。
輸出者のアカウントからサンプルを送る場合Rs.10,200かかります。

弊社はそれは高いと思います。
別の輸送会社でサンプルを送るつもりです。
過去にも同じ事を計画しました。
今日までに積極的に同じ物をお知らせします。

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ハンズのサンプルについて
同一物について輸出者と話し合ったことをお知らせします。
輸出者は以前フェデックにより出荷していました。
輸出者のアカウントからサンプルを送る場合Rs.10,200かかります。

弊社はそれは高いと思います。
別の輸送会社でサンプルを送るつもりです。
過去にも同じ事を計画しました。
今日までに積極的に同じ事をお知らせします。

元の翻訳
Incidentally, I believe yous shop deals with ●● and ○○, but can I purchase them with 20% discount, either?
(I found out them on ○○ (the on-line site).)

If yes, I would like to introduce them to my customers, too.

修正後
Incidentally, I believe your shop deals with ●● and ○○, but can I purchase them with 20% discount, either?
(I found them out on ○○ (the on-line site).)

If yes, I would like to introduce them to my customers, too.

元の翻訳
Hello,

Thank you for your continuous support.
I have received the product today.
I ordered a figure made of stainless material, I wonder if you have made it with different material?
Color of this figure looks very different from the one I ordered last time which is made of stainless material.
Stainless necklace I ordered together with this figure looks like it has the same color as the last one I ordered.
Only the figure I ordered as stainless material has a problem.
Here are the pictures of the products. The one I ordered last time is on the right, and the one I received today is on the left. Please make a comparison between the pictures.
Thank you for your corporation.

修正後
Hello,

Thank you for your continuous support.
I have received the product today.
I ordered a figure made of stainless material, and I wonder if you have made it with different material?
Color of this figure looks very different from the one I ordered last time which is made of stainless material.
Stainless necklace I ordered together with this figure looks like it has the same color as the last one I ordered.
Only the figure I ordered as stainless material has a problem.
Here are the pictures of the products. The one I ordered last time is on the right, and the one I received today is on the left. Please make a comparison between the pictures.
Thank you for your corporation.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you as always.
Today, the item ordered was delivered.
I have ordered stainless material figure, have not you made the material wrong?
The color of the stainless material figure is quite different from the one I ordered before.
The stainless material necklace ordered this time is the same color with the former one.
Only the this time's ordered stainless material figure has problem.
Please compare the photos, the right one is the former order and the left one is this time's order.
I look forward to hearing from you.

修正後
Hello.
Thank you as always.
Today, the ordered item was delivered.
I have ordered stainless material figure, have not you made the material wrong?
The color of the stainless material figure is quite different from the one I ordered before.
The stainless material necklace ordered this time is the same color with the former one.
Only the this time's ordered stainless material figure has problem.
Please compare the photos, the right one is the former order and the left one is this time's order.
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
It seems I have told you a wrong schedule.
(One day was shifted.)

As ◯◯ has some other thing to do on 13 March, he will return home in a morning flight.
I will come back to Japan on the 16:00 flight.

As I was thinking this time's main theme was a meeting with A company (technology transfer), though there was not enough time, by adjusting ◯◯‘s schedule, I planed this business trip.

As for the meeting with B company, I would like you to arrange on the next business trip.
As I think there is a chance to go on a business trip, please let me discuss about the schedule.

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It seems I have told you a wrong schedule.
(One day was shifted.)

As ◯◯ has some other thing to do on 13 March, he will return home in a morning flight.
I will come back to Japan on the 16:00 flight.

As I was thinking this time's main theme was a meeting with A company (technology transfer), though there was not enough time, by adjusting ◯◯‘s schedule, I planned this business trip.

As for the meeting with B company, I would like you to arrange on the next business trip.
As I think there is a chance to go on a business trip, please let me discuss about the schedule.

元の翻訳
Ir seems that I contacted the schedule was informed one day mistaken.
(The date slipped each one day.)

As XX has another matter on March 13 in the afternoon, he/she will go home by the flight in the morning.
I am going back to Japan by the 16:00 flight.

As I thought that the main theme was the meeting (technical transfer) with A Company this time, I there was not enough time to the schedule very much, but I adjusted XX's schedule, and I planned the business trip this time.

I would like to ask the arrangement of the meeting with B Company at the next visiting.
I think that I will have an opportunity of a business trip next month again, so please let me talk to you about the schedule.

修正後
It seems that I contacted the schedule was informed one day mistaken.
(The date slipped each one day.)

As XX has another matter on March 13 in the afternoon, he/she will go home by the flight in the morning.
I am going back to Japan by the 16:00 flight.

As I thought that the main theme was the meeting (technical transfer) with A Company this time, I there was not enough time to the schedule very much, but I adjusted XX's schedule, and I planned the business trip this time.

I would like to ask the arrangement of the meeting with B Company at the next visiting.
I think that I will have an opportunity of a business trip next month again, so please let me talk to you about the schedule.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your response.
I understand that this ASIN is unique. Also I understand that I can put the product on another ASIN.
I have put the same product on another ASIN. Even though it is the lowest price of $48, I have not sell a product yet.
As you know that SEO of this product page is weak, and also its ranking is horrible.
Although it is the same product, isn't it totally different thing if it does not lead to sale?
On the ASIN I used before, I surmise that dozens to one hundred of the product would be sold even in the price of $54.
What should I do?

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Thank you for your response.
I understand that this ASIN is unique. Also I understand that I can put the product on another ASIN.
I have put the same product on another ASIN. Even though it is the lowest price of $48, I have not sell a product yet.
As you know that SEO of this product page is weak, and also its ranking is horrible.
Although it is the same product, isn't it totally a different thing if it does not lead to sale?
On the ASIN I used before, I surmise that dozens to one hundred of the product would be sold even in the price of $54.
What should I do?