スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We apologize that we sent a wrong item this time.
As we told you a few days ago, we sent the item that you ordered on ↵
October 4th 2014, which is 3 days after sending the DHC supplement.
May we ask you a little patience?
As we also told a few days ago, the supplement is new, and you can use it as it is.
If you like it, please use it.
This time we will send it by SAL.
As it is an international mail, we appreciate that you might not be able to receive it↵
on the exact scheduled day.
We will work on the last process of our trading seriously.
If you have any question, please let us know.

修正後
We apologize that we sent a wrong item this time.
As we told you a few days ago, we sent the item that you ordered on October 4, 2014, which is 3 days after sending the DHC supplement.
May we ask you to be a little patient?
As we also told a few days ago, the supplement is new, and you can use it as it is.
If you like it, please use it.
This time we will send it by SAL.
As it is an international mail, we appreciate that you might not be able to receive it on the exact scheduled day.
We will work on the last process of our trading seriously [?].
If you have any question, please let us know.

元の翻訳
We ask you to send the ordered item to the address we requested.↵
Otherwise it gives me an inconvenience.
We requested you to send the item to the address other than our company and you accepted it. We hope that you do in the same way as the last time this time.
Plese send the invoice to our company.
We appreciate your handling.

修正後
Please send the ordered item to the address we requested, or I would be in trouble.
↵
We have requested shipment to the address other than our office, and you accepted it at the time. We hope that you do in the same way this time.
Plese note that we want to have the invoice sent to our company.
We appreciate your accepting our request, in advance.

元の翻訳
"I feel sorry. You noticed it. No one tells you to live in a hurry.
Look at this blue sky, white cloud and happy school life.
I am sure that all of them will defeat your ambition slowly and comfortably.
What you need from now is desperation and impatience.
It is the best if you can live without knowing anything. Are you still coming here?"
Tetsujin Akuta (Heaven's door to G fighting place)

Extracted from "Heaven's door to G fighting place" by Yoko Nihombashi
This phrase changed my view for life.
I love Akuta.

修正後
"I feel sorry. You noticed it. No one tells you to live in a hurry.
Look at this blue sky, white clouds and happy school life.
I am sure that all of them will defeat your ambition slowly and comfortably.
What you need from now is desperation and impatience.
It is the best if you can live without knowing anything. Are you still coming here?"
Tetsujin Akuta (Heaven's door to G fighting place)

Extracted from "Heaven's door to G fighting place" by Yoko Nihombashi
This phrase changed my view for life.
I love Akuta.

元の翻訳
We are a trading company, but we also sell on the Internet.
If you would like to sell in Japan, we are sure that we can cooperate with you.

Could you please tell us the wholesale price if you are not going to be an agency?
We will look forward to your positive reply.

This is our website.

Other than that, we manage 15 websites.
We will be able to contribute to your company by using the market on Internet.

修正後
We are a trading company, but we also sell on the Internet.
If you would like to sell in Japan, we are sure that we can cooperate with you.

Could you please tell us the wholesale price if you are not going to be an agency?
We are looking forward to your positive reply.

This is our representative website.

Other than that, we manage 15 websites.
We will be able to contribute to your company by using the market on Internet.

元の翻訳
You purchased a present of your daughter at Bic, but it is difficult to see the Angel We apologize to you about it.
We will search if we have other item in an differnt color that we can prepare in place of it and let you know.

I have not seen the tuner of Yairi only whose parts is sold.
I am inquiring the wholesaler and retailer that I know.
We are weekend here in Japan, and I will notify you of the result immediately after the weekend.

修正後
You purchased a present for your daughter at Bic, but it is difficult to see the Angel [fused sentence] We apologize for it.
We will search [what?] if we have another item in a differnt [spelling] color that we can prepare [word choice] in place of it and let you know.

I have not seen the tuner of Yairi only whose parts is sold [unclear].
I am inquiring wholesalers and retailers that I know.
We are weekend [?] here in Japan, and I will notify you of the result immediately after the weekend.

元の翻訳
We appreciate your email.
We are making an effort in the activity of Europe, so we go to London regularly.
When we go to London next time, we will let you know.
We are looking forward to talking with you then.

修正後
We appreciate your email.
We are [making an effort] concentrating our efforts in Europe, so we go to London regularly.
When we go to London next time, we will let you know.
We are looking forward to talking with you then.

元の翻訳
We apologize to have sent a wrong item.
You sent a picture of the broken lid, but I misunderstood it as a cup.
To solve this problem, we are going to send a new tea pot.
We will prepare it as soon as possible, but it takes 4 days until we send it.
We will send it by EMS. Are you all right about it?
We are very sorry that we gave an inconvenience to you.
We apologize to you from the bottom of the heart.

修正後
We apologize to have sent a wrong item.
You sent a picture of the broken lid, but I misunderstood it as a cup.
To solve this problem, we are going to send a new tea pot.
We will prepare it as soon as possible, but it takes 4 days until we send it.
We will send it by EMS. Are you all right about it?
We apologize for the inconvenience we have caused you.
We apologize to you from the bottom of the heart.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
Today we received a reply from USPS. It is as follows.

According to their reply, the item is stored in the post office listed below.
Although there is an address to which it is sent, the number of the apartment, etc. might be missing.

Inquiring place(post office where the item is stored)
We hate to ask you, but could you please call the post office by yourself and tell them the number of the apartment?

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry.
Today we received a reply from USPS. It is as follows.

According to their reply, the item is stored in the post office listed below.
Although there is an address to which it is sent, the room number of the apartment, etc. might be missing.

Contact Information (post office where the item is stored)
We hate to ask you, but could you please call the post office by yourself and tell them the room number of the apartment?

We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
As I was planning to leave at 4 o'clock by airplane, and I was looking for the tour where I can visit only in the morning and found this tour.
Although it was inexpensive, the contents of the tour was fully satisfying.
The building of the Park of White Lovers was European style and very beautiful.
The rose garden was so beautiful in this season, and I was satisfied with it very much.
As I had to purchase a number of souvenir, I purchased the White Lovers and sent it by Takuhai. In the market outside, the crabs and melons were sold at the reasonable price.

修正後
As I was planning to leave at 4 o'clock by airplane, and I was looking for the tour where I can visit only in the morning and found this tour.
Although it was inexpensive, the contents of the tour was fully satisfying.
The building of the Park of White Lovers was European style and very beautiful.
The rose garden was so beautiful in this season, and I was satisfied with it very much.
As I had to purchase a number of souvenirs, I purchased the White Lovers and sent it by home delivery service. In the market outside, the crabs and melons were sold at the reasonable price.

元の翻訳
I received the item.
This time the screen does not appear.
Why do you send an item with defect?
You said that you inspected the item.
I cannot trust you any more.
I will not forgive you this time.
I will file a claim. I ask you to refund.
My customer requested me the compensation for damage.

I ask you to pay for the shipping charge since it is for returning the item.
It is 200 dollars.
I do not need the item with defect.

I heard from a person who sells the same item in Japan.
I found that there are many similar defects.
It is must be swindling to send the item with defect by knowing that it has a defect.

修正後
I received the item.
This time the screen does not appear.
Why did you send an item with defect?
You said that you inspected the item.
I cannot trust you any more.
I will not forgive you this time.
I will file a claim. I ask you to refund.
My customer requested me the compensation for the damage.

I ask you to pay for the shipping charge since it is for returning the item.
It is 200 dollars.
I do not need the item with defect.

I heard from a person who sells the same item in Japan.
I found that there are many similar defects.
Is not it a fraud to send an item knowing that it is defective?

元の翻訳
NNGは、出荷用の書類並びに本出荷における海洋の貨物及び輸入のプロセスに要する全コストをNUREXが支払うことを条件にベトナムへ製品を戻すことに合意する。
NUREXが提示した理由は、貨物の返還に妥当ではない。その理由は、同社は、品質のチェック方法を適用するが、配送に先立ち、NNGと本チェック方法に署名しなかったからである
相互の協力及びサポートの精神に則り、本件の迅速な解決のみならず貴方からのフィードバックの受領及び迅速な行動を希求する。

修正後
NNGは、出荷用の書類並びに本出荷における海洋の貨物及び輸入のプロセスに要する全コストをNUREXが支払うことを条件にベトナムへ製品を戻すことに合意する。
NUREXが提示した理由は、貨物の返還に妥当ではない。その理由は、同社は、品質のチェック方法を適用するが、配送に先立ち、NNGと本チェック方法に署名しなかったからである
相互の協力及びサポートの精神に則り、本件の迅速な解決を望む。貴方からのフィードバックの受領及び迅速な行動を希求する。

元の翻訳
佐藤様

初めに、Ngoc Nghiaインダストリー---サービス---トレーディングJSC("NNG")の代理として、取引における貴方の温情のこもった協力及び支援に感謝します。本書間は、見積もり送り状番号NNG-NUR-140711Aに関する取引の問題を収束するためにしたためました。
2.5gr キャップ1810に関する本年１0月14日に貴社から受領した速達に基づき、以下のようにフィードバックします。

修正後
佐藤様

初めに、Ngoc Nghiaインダストリー---サービス---トレーディングJSC("NNG")の代理として、取引における貴方の温情のこもった協力及び支援に感謝i致します。本書間は、見積もり送り状番号NNG-NUR-140711Aに関する取引の問題を収束するためにしたためました。
2.5gr キャップ1810に関する本年１0月14日に貴社から受領した速達に基づき、以下のようにフィードバックさせていただきます。。

元の翻訳
I am working in the town where many foreigners come.
I thought that I could communicate with a variety of people in the town if I can speak English.
In addition, I feel so happy if I can understand the foreign words in the movies without seeing the translation in Japanese.

The reason that I became interested in IT is that if I have the knowledge of ～, I can create a website where people all over the world can see. I tried to create it, and it was fun.

I have been working in IT industry for 5 years, and I found that it is an appropriate job for me. It is hard to study because the progress of technology is so fast, though.

修正後
I am working in the town where many foreigners come.
I thought that I could communicate with a variety of people in the town if I could speak English.
In addition, I feel so happy if I can understand the foreign words in the movies without seeing the translation in Japanese.

The reason that I became interested in IT is that if I have a knowledge of ～, I can create a website that people from all over the world can see. I tried to create it, and it was fun.

I have been working in IT industry for 5 years, and I found that it is an appropriate job for me. It is hard to study because the progress of technology is so fast, though.

元の翻訳
Yes. I live in Japan.↵
May I help the translation?

I tried a variety of functions, but I could not search the address in Japanese.
It will be probably impossible in Chinese and Korean as well.

We will be able to search the address without comma as below, but it will be difficult.

修正後
Yes. I live in Japan. Do you want me to help the translation?

I tried a variety of functions, but I could not search addresses in Japanese.
It will probably be impossible in Chinese and Korean as well.

It would be fixed if searching addresses without comma is available, but it seems to be tough to apply the function.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.

We apologize that you were not satisfied with it.

If you are not satisfied with it, you can return it to us.
We will refund you after we receive it.
Or we will refund 35 dollars.

Do you have other suggestions?

We were rated positive by 100 percent.

We will handle you to the last step seriously, so please do not worry about it.

We cannot accept the act that violates the policy of eBay.

We cannot accept the discount based on the customes duties and rating that violates the policy
of the eBay.
If we determine that this type of email is wrong, we will report to the authority.

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.

We apologize that you were not satisfied with it.

If you are not satisfied with it, you can return it to us.
We will refund you after we receive it.
Or we will refund 35 dollars.

Do you have other suggestions?

We were rated 100 percent positive.

We will do our best to support you, so please inquire us if you have any concern.

We can not make any action that violates the policy of eBay.

We cannot accept the discount based on the customes duties and rating that violates the policy
of the eBay.
If we determine that this type of email is wrong, we will report to the authority.