翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

あなたが持っているアップデートキットを一つ、私たちに送ってもらうのが一番良い方法だと思います。
今から私たちのアップデートキットを修理に出すのでは、Commissioningに間に合うかどうかわかりません。
前回の作業では、アップデートキットの問題でA社はとても怒りました。
もしCommissioningに間に合わなかった場合、私たちはA社からの信用を失うでしょう。

英語

I think it is the best way to have one of your update kit sent to me.
Now I am going to my update kit repaired, I am not sure if it will be in time for Commissioning.
In the former work, A company got so angry about update kit issue.
If Commissioning is not in time, I will lose face from A company.

レビュー ( 1 )

karekoraはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2018/01/20 07:01:48

元の翻訳
I think it is the best way to have one of your update kit sent to me.
Now I am going to my update kit repaired, I am not sure if it will be in time for Commissioning.
In the former work, A company got so angry about update kit issue.
If Commissioning is not in time, I will lose face from A company.

修正後
I think it is best to have one of your update kits sent to me.
I am going to have my update kit repaired, therefore I am not sure if it will be done in time for commissioning.
Previously, A company got angry about the update kit issue.
If commissioning is not done in time, I will lose trust from A company.

[setsuko-atarashi]

Thank you very much.