Paul Dots (premiumdotz) — もらったレビュー

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I will be able to send "◯" to you if you need it, provided that you would pay for its handling charge and postage to America. Please understand that I will sell the item once the 14th has passed.

I am hoping for the completion of your collection.
I will once again cooperate with you if you happen to lose in the bidding.
Please continue keeping in touch with as I will be putting on display the products of "◯", which can only be acquired here in Japan.

Thank you for uploading the photo.
I was deeply moved by the products, which can be rarely found in stores in Japan, and by Christmas illuminations. I also wanted to go and see "◯."

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If you need "◯", and you will pay handling and shipment charge to US, I can send to you. Please understand that I will sell the item once the 14th has passed.

I am hoping for the completion of your collection.
I will cooperate with you if you happen to lose in the bidding as usual.
Please keep in touch as I will be putting on display the products of "◯", which can only be acquired here in Japan.

Thank you for upload the photo.
I was deeply moved by the products that can be rarely found in stores in Japan, and the Christmas illuminations. I also wanted to go and see "◯."

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Generally, the first thing that comes into one's mind when Italy is mention is tomato. However, tomatoes are not from Italy, but from South America. Furthermore, the history of tomato as an ingredient for cooking is very superficial. It's doesn't even go over 200 years. Looking back at Ancient Rome where Italian cuisine originated from is like a thing of yesterday.

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Generally, the first thing that comes into one's mind that one of the most representative products in Italy is a tomato. However, a tomato's place of origin is not Italy but South America. Furthermore, the history of tomato as an edible food is very superficial. It just goes back over 200 years. Compared to the fact that the birth of Italian cuisine dates back ancient Rome, it seems like yesterday that we began consuming tomatoes.

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Thank you for your courteous response.

I am a Japanese, so the address indicated in my credit card is Japan.

However, I am in a contract with an American delivery company.

That address that I sent you is the address of the aforementioned delivery company.

I want you to send the item through that company.

Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your courteous response.

I am a Japanese, so the address indicated in my credit card is Japan.

However I have a contract with an American delivery company.

That address that I sent you is that of the delivery company I have mentioned earlier.

I would like you to send the item to that company.

Thank you in advance.

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The inter-tech examination has successfully ended.
There were no problems found, so it passed. In addition, the submission of documents has also been done.
The schedule of the shipping will be set on October 10.
Initially it was scheduled on September 24, but it got delayed for a little bit because of the iter-tech examination.
I will contact you again for any updates.

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The inter-tech examination has successfully ended.
There were no problems found, so it was given a passing mark. In addition, the submission of documents has also been done.
The schedule of the shipping will be set on October 10.
Initially it was scheduled on September 24, but it got delayed for a little bit because of the inter-tech examination.
I will contact you again for any updates.

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Thank you for sending me a very courteous reply. I've always liked the dolls that you put o display. However, I am not able to submit my bid if I set Japan as my 'Primary Shipping Address' on Ebay. You would be able to submit the bid if you set the address to America, so that's what I did this time. If I would win the bidding, I will change the address to Japan and send you an invoice request. Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for sending me a very courteous reply. I've always liked the dolls that you put on display. However, I am not able to submit my bid if I set Japan as my 'Primary Shipping Address' on Ebay. You would be able to submit the bid if you set the address to America, so that's what I did this time. If I would win the bidding, I will change the address to Japan and send you an invoice request. Thank you in advance.

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I deeply apologize for the trouble that my carelessness has caused you.
The cause of this is from my lack of experience in Ebay's system, as well as in English.
Because of this, I deeply regret for causing trouble to Ms. Libby.
If I was in the same place as Ms. Libby, I would most probably cancel the transaction as well.
However, is it really impossible for us to continue this transaction?
I've been searching for this item for a while, and fortunately, I have finally found it.
While this is a selfish request, I'm looking forward to your positive response.

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I deeply apologize for the trouble that my carelessness has caused you.
The cause of this is from my lack of experience in Ebay's system, as well as in English.
Because of this, I deeply regret for causing trouble to Ms. Libby.
If I was in the same situation as Ms. Libby, I would probably have cancelled the transaction as well.
However, is it really impossible for us to continue with this transaction?
I've been searching for this item for a while, and I was lucky enough to have finally found it.
While this is a selfish request, I'm looking forward to your positive response.

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Will you make an HTML form for mailChimp and the email template of the text format?

This is the address of the store in Ebay.
Please get the image files for the header and others, as well as the logo in here.

We will be using it for our store's mail magazine, so please match it with the online shop.

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Can you create an email template for MailChimp in HTML and Text formats ?

This is the address of the store in Ebay.
Please create using the image files and logo headers here.

We will be using it for our store's mail magazine, so please use a suitable template for the online shop's product sales.

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Thank you for the Email.
I'm very sorry that you weren't able to receive the item.
We will be sending it again.
As an apology, we will be giving you something for free.
Please choose from numbers one to five.
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Thank you for the Email.
This DVD is Region A.
You will be able to use it in South and North America, Southeast Asia, Japan, Korean Peninsula and regions in Taiwan.

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Thank you for the Email.
I'm very sorry that you weren't able to receive the item.
We will be sending it soon again.
As an apology, we will be giving you something for free.
Please choose from numbers one to five.
1
2
3
4
5
Thank you for the Email.
This DVD is for Region A.
You will be able to use it in South and North America, Southeast Asia, Japan, Korean Peninsula and regions in Taiwan.

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The Japan post office contacted us today saying that it's currently in transition.

They requested us to confirm the maker, color and packaging of the damaged product to the Toronto post office.

We have relayed the important information that the Toronto post office asked us to give to the Japan post office.
We have also requested to quickly process the authorization of the compensation.

In addition, we will immediately contact you if something happens.
Sorry for worrying you. Please wait for a little while.

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The Japan post office contacted us today saying that it's currently in transition.

They requested us to confirm the maker, color and packaging of the damaged product to the Toronto post office.

We have relayed the important information that the Toronto post office asked us to give to the Japan post office.
We have also requested them to quickly process the authorization of the compensation.

In addition, we will immediately contact you if something happens.
Sorry for worrying you. Please wait for a little while.

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I'm very sorry that your Japanese seller did not live up to your expectations.
If you would give us another chance, then we would offer you a 30% discount for items that cost within 200 dollars on your next order.
Please tell us your suggestions.

We are very sorry that you were not able to receive the item.
The response of the Japan post office was that, if the customs haven't contacted us about this, then the item might have been lost. We are very sorry that we were not able to solve this.

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I'm very sorry that your Japanese seller did not live up to your expectations.
If you would give us another chance, then we would offer you a 30% discount for items that cost within 300 dollars on your next order.
Please tell us your suggestions.

We are very sorry that you were not able to receive the item.
The response of the Japan post office was that, if the customs haven't contacted us about this, then the item might have been lost. We are very sorry that we were not able to solve this.

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Good day.↵
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I found out that the tracking number was wrong when I checked it.↵
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The parcel is held off by the delivery company.↵
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I am very sorry for the trouble.↵
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I have inserted the correct tracking number, so please check it.

Thank you!

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Hello. When I checked the tracking number I found it was wrong. The parcel is being stopped by the delivery company. I am very sorry for the trouble. I have inserted the correct tracking number, so please check it.

Thank you very much.

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I have read your report. I am very satisfied. However, I would be more pleased if you would consider the postage of the freeshipping in the profit's calculation.

I am very satisfied with the level of your skill.

I am in a contract with 3 other people. Please select your category of your display in order to not overlap the display of the people with the same product that I am in a contact with.

What category do you want to choose?

Please give me some time to ask the developer about the display tools.

I am looking forward to the result of your display.

This is the ID and Password of your display tool.

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I have read your report. I am very satisfied. However, I would be more pleased if you considered the postage of the freeshipping in the profit's calculation.

I am very satisfied with the high level of your skill.

I am in a contract with 3 other people. Please select your category of your display in order not to overlap the display of the people displaying the same product whom I am in a contact with.

What category do you want to choose?

Please give me some time to ask the developer about the display tools.

I am looking forward to the result of your display.

These are your ID and Password for the display tool.

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US,

Thank you for purchasing from this store.↵
There has been a mistake in the pricing of this product.↵
We are very sorry.↵
We would like to express our deep apologies.↵
The correct price is ●●.↵
Rest assured that there would be no invoice before the shipping.↵
Please contact us if you want to cancer the order, so that we would be able to immediately address your concern.↵
Thank you in advance.↵
Have a good day!!

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US,

Thank you for purchasing from this store. We are very sorry but there was a mistake in the pricing of this product. We would like to express our deep apologies. The correct price is ●●. Rest assured that there will be no invoice before the shipping. Please contact us if you want to cancel the order so that we will be able to immediately address your concern. Thank you in advance.

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Please have your bid accepted if you want the item.
After this, please pay the amount of the item and postage through a bank deposit transfer to the designated bank account.
In this occasion, we will send the item to the designated address.

You must have a good eye for finding this car.
It's a good bargain.

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If you want the item then please win in the auction.
After this, please pay the amount of the item and postage through a bank deposit transfer to the designated bank account.
Then we will send the item to the designated address.

You must have a good eye for finding this car.
It's a good bargain.

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■ It is possible to change the price. However, listed below are the points you need to be aware of.
・The item will be insured and will be given a tracking number.
・However, We will not be able to warranty it if an accident happens during the delivery.
・We will not be able to warranty items with prices above 〇〇 dollars.

Do you agree with these conditions?

■ We cannot make the postage free. This is because, the price of this game console is increasing and I am selling it at a price that has little profit in it.
However, since you have contacted me several times, I will decrease the postage by 10 dollars.

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■ It is possible to change the price. However, listed below are the points you need to be aware of.
・The item will be insured and will be given a tracking number.
・However, we will not be able to give you a warranty in case an accident happens during delivery.
・We will not be able to give warranty to items that have prices above 〇〇 dollars.

Do you agree with these conditions?

■ We cannot make the postage free. This is because the price of this game console is increasing and I am selling it at a price that has little profit in it.
However, since you have contacted me several times, I will decrease the postage by 10 dollars.

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It's brand new. It would take a week for it to arrive after shipping. There are cases where you need to pay for customs tariff and VAT. However, we could not guarantee it.

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It's brand new. Shipping will take a week to reach you. In some cases, you may have to pay customs duty and VAT. There is no warranty for this article.