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評価: 53 / ネイティブ 英語 / 1 Review / 2013/09/17 12:45:30

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日本語

この度は私の不注意で迷惑をかけたことをまずはお詫びします。
これは、私がebayのシステムと英語に不慣れだったことにすべての原因があります。
そのためにLibbyさんに迷惑をかけることとなり、とても後悔しています。
私がもしLibbyさんの立場なら同じように取引をキャンセルしていたでしょう。
しかし、もし可能ならばこの取引を続けることはできないでしょうか。
この商品は以前から探していて、やっと手に入れるチャンスに恵まれました。
勝手なお願いだとは思いますが、良いお返事をお待ちしています。

英語

I deeply apologize for the trouble that my carelessness has caused you.
The cause of this is from my lack of experience in Ebay's system, as well as in English.
Because of this, I deeply regret for causing trouble to Ms. Libby.
If I was in the same place as Ms. Libby, I would most probably cancel the transaction as well.
However, is it really impossible for us to continue this transaction?
I've been searching for this item for a while, and fortunately, I have finally found it.
While this is a selfish request, I'm looking forward to your positive response.

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iluvsnoopy228はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/09/19 16:45:04

元の翻訳
I deeply apologize for the trouble that my carelessness has caused you.
The cause of this is from my lack of experience in Ebay's system, as well as in English.
Because of this, I deeply regret for causing trouble to Ms. Libby.
If I was in the same place as Ms. Libby, I would most probably cancel the transaction as well.
However, is it really impossible for us to continue this transaction?
I've been searching for this item for a while, and fortunately, I have finally found it.
While this is a selfish request, I'm looking forward to your positive response.

修正後
I deeply apologize for the trouble that my carelessness has caused you.
The cause of this is from my lack of experience in Ebay's system, as well as in English.
Because of this, I deeply regret for causing trouble to Ms. Libby.
If I was in the same situation as Ms. Libby, I would probably have cancelled the transaction as well.
However, is it really impossible for us to continue with this transaction?
I've been searching for this item for a while, and I was lucky enough to have finally found it.
While this is a selfish request, I'm looking forward to your positive response.

GOOD! ASTIG KABAYAN!

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