kujitan — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Answer a survey! You can get 500 Yen of Starbucks coupon!

We are recruiting people who take a 10-mins survey.
Business person in the following area can take part in.

Otemachi, Yurakucho, Marunouchi
* Only workers in those area can take part in the survey this time.

The content of the survey is about business area in Tokyo.
First 300 persons only.

* This is a survey for non-Japanese residents, therefore Japanese can not join.

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Answer a survey! You can get Starbucks coupons worth 500 Yen!

We are expecting people who take a 10-mins survey.
Office workers in the following area can take part in.

Otemachi, Yurakucho, Marunouchi
* Only workers in these areas can take part in the survey this time.

The content of the survey is about the business areas in Tokyo.
First 300 persons only.

* This is a survey for non-Japanese residents, therefore Japanese cannot join.

元の翻訳
おはようございます！
下記メールについて了解しました。

１）Sonu手作り器は本日午後3時（インド時間）に発送します。
それで、詳細はいいがいさんへ追跡詳細情報を添えて連絡します
彼女はあなたに同じ情報を電子メールでお伝えするでしょう

２）インフィニティについてですが、本日最終のインボイスをあなたにお送りします。
そして荷物のステータスについてはいいがいさん経由でお知らせします。

よろしくお願いします！

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おはようございます！
下記メールについて了解しました。

１）Sonu Handicraftは本日午後3時（インド時間）に発送します。
それで、詳細はいいがいさんへ追跡詳細情報を添えて連絡します
彼女はあなたに同じ内容をeメールでお伝えするでしょう

２）Infinitiについてですが、本日最終のインボイスをあなたにお送りします。
そして荷物のステータスについてはいいがいさん経由でお知らせします。

よろしくお願いします！

元の翻訳
スーツケースの取っ手は完全に壊れています（ケース自体はきちんと梱包されていて、特にダメージはないようです）。また、説明ではこの商品は「NEW」とありましたが、それは間違っています。明らかに使用され、開けられています。

迅速な回答をお願いします。
商品とダメージについての添付の写真を確認ください。残念ですが、荷物の重さに耐えられるように、張り付けたり修理する手立てを見つけられません。（こちらの郵便局には問い合わせしました。あなたもそちらの郵便局に商品のダメージについてのレポートを出すべきです。郵便局の人がこのプロセスはアメリカと日本の両サイドからスタートする必要があると言っていました。何か進展があればあなたにお知らせします。

これは実際に追いやられたということでしょうか？

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スーツケースの取っ手が完全に壊れています（ケース自体はきちんと梱包されていて、特にダメージはないようです）。また、説明ではこの商品は「新品」とありましたが、それは間違っています。明らかに使用され、開けられています。

迅速な回答をお願いします。
商品とダメージについての添付の写真をご確認ください。残念ですが、荷物の重さに耐えられるように、張り付けたり修理する手立てを見つけられません。（こちらの郵便局には問い合わせしました。あなたもそちらの郵便局に商品のダメージについてのレポートを出すべきです。郵便局の人がこのプロセスはアメリカと日本の両サイドからスタートする必要があると言っていました。何か進展があればあなたにお知らせします。

これは本物の拳銃でしょうか？

元の翻訳
Thank you for your purchase.
Please be informed we have sent out your item. We hope you like it.
If you have any question, inquiry about status of posting, any breach of the item, please feel free to contact us.
Once again, thank you for choosing our shop from many shops.

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Thank you for your purchase.
Please be informed we have sent out your order. We hope you will like it.
If you have any questions including the one about the shipping status or find any damage or defects in the item, please feel free to contact us.
Once again, thank you for choosing our shop among many others.

元の翻訳
正しい日にちは5月14日ですが、あなたは5月11日に入手できるでしょう。
心配しないでください、私たちは全て神のお思いで約束を守ります、あなたは私たち兄弟の約束として小包を入手できるでしょう。
責任をもってあなたに発送します。
それからあなたの２つのDucatiジャケットは準備できています。小包を受け取ったら私たちにフィードバックをください。その時点で発送します。

私たちがもしMonsterについて何かミスをしていることが分かったら、私たちでそれを解決します。

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正しい日にちは5月14日ですが、5月11日に届くでしょう。
心配しないでください、私たちは全て神のお思いで約束を守ります、あなたは私たち兄弟の約束として小包を入手できるでしょう。
責任をもってあなたに発送します。
それからあなたの２つのDucatiジャケットは準備できています。小包を受け取ったら私たちにフィードバックをください。その時点で発送します。

私たちがもしMonsterについて何かミスをしていることが分かったら、私たちでそれを解決します。

元の翻訳
Model Press

KUMI KODA special interview will appear in the Model Press!
http://mdpr.jp/interview/detail/1478277

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Modelpress

KUMI KODA's special interview has appeared in modelpess!
http://mdpr.jp/interview/detail/1478277

元の翻訳
A tiny dust is in this lense, but it doesn't affect to a quality of photo.

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There's a tiny dust particle in this lens, but it doesn't affect the quality of the photos taken.

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The random sampling method is a correct method as it picks up data based on probability theory, but in field, it is not easy to pick up samples randomly from a storage etc. which items are stacked in piles.
What is worse is that it is impossible to prove later if the samples picked up randomly or not. In order to solve the problem, it is made various kinds of efforts.
I think to become to define defectives properly with looking at limit samples well is the best thing to execute quickly.

Unclear expression causes leaving it to worker's estimation.

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Random sampling is a correct method as it picks up data based on probability theory, but in the field, it is not easy to pick up samples randomly from a storage etc. where items are stacked in piles.
What is worse is that it is impossible to prove later if the samples were picked up randomly or not. In order to solve the problem, various kinds of efforts have been made.
I think defining defects properly while looking at limit samples is the best thing to execute quickly.

An unclear expression will leave it to each operator's judgement.

元の翻訳
The random sampling method is a correct method as it picks up data based on probability theory, but in field, it is not easy to pick up samples randomly from a storage etc. which items are stacked in piles.
What is worse is that it is impossible to prove later if the samples picked up randomly or not. In order to solve the problem, it is made various kinds of efforts.
I think to become to define defectives properly with looking at limit samples well is the best thing to execute quickly.

Unclear expression causes leaving it to worker's estimation.

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The random sampling method is a correct method as it picks up data based on probability theory, but in field, it is not easy to pick up samples randomly from a storage etc. which items are stacked in piles.
What is worse is that it is impossible to prove later if the samples were picked up randomly or not. In order to solve the problem, it is made various kinds of efforts.
I think to become to define defectives properly with looking at limit samples well is the best thing to execute quickly.

Unclear expression causes leaving it to worker's estimation.

元の翻訳
The details are the below;
http://avex.jp/aaa/news/detail.php?id=1018732

In addition!
We are developing a collaboration good of 'UN' which is a brand produced by Naoya Urata and a rhinestone shop, 'NIAC'.

We are going to sell the following two kinds.

Customized 'Skateboard Key Chain' in front
&
'iPhone Case' which a logo is customized

urata naoya (AAA) × NIAC ZENYA COLLABORATION SHOP

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Further details below!
http://avex.jp/aaa/news/detail.php?id=1018732

In addition!
We are developing collaboration merchandise with "UN," which is a brand produced by Naoya Urata, and a rhinestone shop, "NIAC."

We are going to sell the following two kinds.

"Skateboard Key Chain" customized in the front
&
"iPhone Case" with a customized logo

urata naoya (AAA) × NIAC ZENYA COLLABORATION SHOP

元の翻訳
こんにちは
私はこのレンズに興味があります。枠組みの詳細を教えていただけますか？またもし可能なら商品の写真をいただけますか？
私は（購入を）決める前にもっと知りたいと思っています。
よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは
私はこのレンズに興味があります。カビの詳細を教えていただけますか？またもし可能なら商品の写真をいただけますか？
私は（購入を）決める前にもっと知りたいと思っています。
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
Are you busy now? I have something to ask you, do you have time to talk with me?
It might not the thing I ask you, but no one except you tells me.
No one tells me about products, how to use the system, and the procedure to shipping.

First of all, I would like you to tell me how to see the shipping data which we send you everyday.
Which row is the amount of shipped items from the storage?
Which row is the amount of awaiting shipment items?
Which row is the amount of balancing orders?

Can I ask you again if I have something what I don't know?
Thank you for your help.↵
Thank you in advance.

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Are you busy now? I have something to ask you. Do you have time to talk with me?
Maybe I should not be asking you this, but I couldn't think of anyone else.
No one tells me about the products, how to use the system, and the procedure of shipping.

Firstly, I want you to tell me how to see the shipping data which we send you everyday.
Which row is for the items which have been shipped out from the storage?
Which row is for the items waiting to be shipped out?
Which row is for the remaining orders?

If I have some questions in the future, can I ask you again?
Thank you in advance for your help and assistance.

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Can I specify the dates?↵
(e.g. Search only posts on or before 1week ago)

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Can I specify a date? (e.g. Search only posts within 1 week)

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Are you going to go to school?
That sounds good!
What are you going to study?
Start a new thing is very exciting, isn't it?
I also want to do something new, when spring comes.

Spring will come soon. It becomes warm in spring and our bodies seem to become light, Many Japanese start something new in spring.
How about Finland?
I think it's very cold now in Finland.
Take care of yourself.

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Are you going to go to school?
That sounds good!
What are you going to study?
Starting a new thing is very exciting, isn't it?
I also want to do something new when spring comes.

Spring will come soon. It becomes warm in spring and our bodies seem to become light, Many Japanese start something new in spring.
How about Finland?
I think it's very cold now in Finland.
Take care of yourself.

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Hello. Thank you for your message.
Which items have been canceled?
(**) Are these two items?
The dispatching mail has been sent, so please reconfirm it.

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Hello. Thank you for your message.
Which items have been canceled?
(**) Are they these two items?
The dispatching mail has been sent too, so please reconfirm it.

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I would like you to adjust the electric voltage of the 3W LED so that I can use with circuit of series of 8 to 12 main elements.
In case of this, is additional cost needed?

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I would like you to adjust the electric voltage of the 3W LED so that I can use 8 to 12 main elements and connect them to form a series circuit?
In this case, is an additional cost needed?

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply as I had inquired the detail to the maker.
The detail of the item you inquired is as below.
Thank you for your consideration.

Name: AA
ASIN: BB

Inside of the hood is yellow like the picture.
Size: Free (Unisex)
Body height: 165 - 175cm
Chest measurement: 88 - 96cm
* The size of the body height and the chest measurement are approximate.

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Sorry for the late reply as I had inquired the detail to the manufacturer.
The detail of the item you inquired is as below.
Thank you for your consideration.

Name: AA
ASIN: BB

Inside of the hood is yellow like the picture.
Size: Free (Unisex)
Body height: 165 - 175cm
Chest measurement: 88 - 96cm
* The size of the body height and the chest measurement are approximate.

元の翻訳
I think the procedure you did is not "Cancel Transaction", but "Unpaid item case". So could you check it again?
We cannot complete the procedure unless we proceed the cancellation with both satisfaction as there is no fitted category.

Best regards.

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I think the procedure you did is not "Cancel Transaction", but "Unpaid item case". So could you check it again?
We cannot complete the procedure unless we proceed the cancellation with mutual agreement as there is no fitted category.

Best regards,