翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2015/02/19 23:20:56

kujitan
kujitan 50
日本語

学校に行くのですか?
それはとても良い事ですね!
どんな事を勉強するのかな?
新しい事を始めるのはとてもワクワクしますね。
私も春になったら新しい事をやってみたいなぁ?

もうすぐ春です。日本人は春になると温かくなり身体が軽くなるのか?新しい事を初める事が多いです。
フィンランドではどうですか?
フィンランドは今とっても寒いと思います。
身体に気をつけて下さいね。

英語

Are you going to go to school?
That sounds good!
What are you going to study?
Start a new thing is very exciting, isn't it?
I also want to do something new, when spring comes.

Spring will come soon. It becomes warm in spring and our bodies seem to become light, Many Japanese start something new in spring.
How about Finland?
I think it's very cold now in Finland.
Take care of yourself.

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yakuok 60 ・日英・英日翻訳・通訳。 ・海外の国際校で教育を受け、イギリス英語・アメ...
yakuokはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/24 01:40:33

元の翻訳
Are you going to go to school?
That sounds good!
What are you going to study?
Start a new thing is very exciting, isn't it?
I also want to do something new, when spring comes.

Spring will come soon. It becomes warm in spring and our bodies seem to become light, Many Japanese start something new in spring.
How about Finland?
I think it's very cold now in Finland.
Take care of yourself.

修正後
Are you going to go to school?
That sounds good!
What are you going to study?
Starting a new thing is very exciting, isn't it?
I also want to do something new when spring comes.

Spring will come soon. It becomes warm in spring and our bodies seem to become light, Many Japanese start something new in spring.
How about Finland?
I think it's very cold now in Finland.
Take care of yourself.

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