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Thank you for your reply.
I accept about the payment and delivery date.
Thank you for your quick response.

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Thank you for your reply.
I agree to the payment and delivery date.
Thank you for your quick response.↵
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Sincerely,

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We are afraid but we have got a problem.

Since the arrival of a camera case is very late, I have checked with the distributor. They say that there was a system trouble and they couldn't inform us the out of inventory situation.

We immediately checked with another distributor and their earliest shipping date will be next Monday since we have weekend. So our earliest shipping date will be next Tuesday(9/3).

We are ready to ship out a camera and a SD card, so if you are in urgent need, we will ship them out first.

After we receive the camera case, we will send it by EMS. (Surely additional cost will not occur.)

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We are afraid that there is a problem.

Since the arrival of the camera case is very late, I have checked with the distributor. They say that there was a system trouble and they couldn't inform us of its out-of-inventory situation.

We immediately checked with another distributor and their earliest shipping date will be next Monday because of the weekend. So our earliest shipping date will be next Tuesday (9/3).

We are ready to ship out a camera and a SD card so, if you are in urgent need of them, we will ship them out first.

After we receive the camera case, we will send it by EMS. (There will be no additional cost for you.)

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I am terribly sorry for the late reply and would like to sincerely apologize. The number is was told to call by my host mother was the number of another store. As I am currently looking for part-time work, I ended up calling that other number thinking it was for a reply about a job. The person on the other number told me it was the wrong number, and once I returned home and asked my host mother again in more detail I realized the mistake.
Just earlier I left a message on your answering machine as I just bought a new phone today. My number is 〜.

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I am terribly sorry for the late reply and would like to sincerely apologize. The number I was told to call by my host mother was the number for another store. As I am currently looking for part-time work, I ended up calling that other number thinking it was for a reply about a job. The person on the other number told me it was the wrong number, and only once I returned home and asked my host mother again in more detail did I realize the mistake.
Just earlier I left a message on your answering machine as I just bought a new phone today. My number is 〜.

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I heard from my host mother that you would like to know about my English level. My TOEIC score is 570. Since coming here in August, finally once month has passed. To be honest I don't have much confidence in my speaking but I am trying my best. Again I am terribly sorry about today, and will do better in future.

Best regards,

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I heard from my host mother that you would like to know about my English level. My TOEIC score is 570. Finally once month has passed since coming here in August. To be honest, I don't have much confidence in my speaking but I am trying my best. Again I am terribly sorry about today, and will do better in the future.

Best regards,

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Thank you for continued business.
I have received the product yesterday.
I appreciate your quick correspondence.

According to our staffs, there are many holds that we can not let bolts get into.

As we will check the product in this weekend, we will let you know detail.

I hasten to thank you.↵

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Thank you for your continued business.
I received the product yesterday.
I appreciate your quick correspondence.

According to our staff, there are many holds that we can not let bolts get into.

As we will check the product in this weekend, we will let you know the details later.

This is just a quick note to express my gratitude.

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Check 2
Delivery lot contents

I have a question regarding your request to packed 4~5 products in each lot.
Regarding product weight, 1 product is about 4 oz.
The weight will exceed 1 pound if 4~5 products were packed in the delivery box plus the weight of the delivery box itself.
Based on this reason, it is difficult to fit the products just like above description below than 1 pound.
If you still want the product to fit below than 1 pound, we need to reduce the number of products in the lot.
We will try to consider again if there is other method to solve above problem.

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Check 2
Delivery lot contents

I have a question regarding your request to pack 4~5 products in each lot.
Regarding product weight, 1 product is about 4 oz.
The weight will exceed 1 pound if 4~5 products are packed in the delivery box plus the weight of the delivery box itself.
Based on this reason, it is difficult to fit the products just like above and keep it under 1 pound.
If you still want the product to be under 1 pound then we need to reduce the number of products in the lot.
We will try to consider again if there is another method to solve above problem.

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How to price an item: For example, you may find an item on a Japanese webshop good for posting on eBay. Its price is 880 JPY. How to price this item to sell on eBay.

My exchange rate is $1 = 90 JPY.

So, 880JPY x 1.8 = 1589 JPY, then 1589/90 JPY = $17.6

I will be able to give you the manual for Commerce, the eBay listing tool, tomorrow night at the latest.

At the beginning, search and list items that are also posted on Amazon U.S.

I see you have a child. Are you available at night? I will have time on Monday, so let's talk on Monday.

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How to price an item: For example, you may find an item on a Japanese online shop good for posting on eBay. Its price is 880 JPY. This is how to price this item to sell on eBay.

My exchange rate is $1 = 90 JPY.

So, 880JPY x 1.8 = 1589 JPY, then 1589/90 JPY = $17.6

I will be able to give you the manual for Commerce, the eBay listing tool, tomorrow night at the latest.

At the beginning, search and list items that are also posted on Amazon U.S.

I see you have a child. Are you available at night? I will have time on Monday, so let's talk on Monday.

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Thank you very much for sending us an invoice.

However, the estimate of this invoice is set as 21 units.

I purchased 20 units last time.

Please kindly ship us 21 units, including the rest of another unit.

Last time, you shipped 20 units to Japan at the cost of $511.80.
Please revise the estimate and send us an invoice to this paypal. (paypal)

Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you very much for sending us an invoice.

However, the estimate on this invoice is set for 21 units.

I purchased 20 units last time.

Please kindly ship us 21 units, including the last one from the other order.

Last time you shipped 20 units to Japan at the cost of $511.80.
Please revise the estimate and send us an invoice to this paypal. (paypal)

Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for your proposal.

Do you think you are available in either of the evening on Sep 3 or 4? I also would definitely like to meet you. However, I am not good at speaking English, and would like to accompany an interpreter. Is this all right with you?

If you have any request, please feel free to tell me.

Thank you very much for your offer to spare your precious time for me.

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Thank you for your proposal.

Do you think you are available on either the evening of Sept. 3rd or 4th? I also would definitely like to meet you. However, I am not good at speaking English, and would like to bring an interpreter. Is this all right with you?

If you have any requests, please feel free to tell me.

Thank you very much for your offer to spare your precious time for me.

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In this way, Asama Shrine carries the prayer from people to suppress the eruption of Mt. Fuij.
By the way, Asama means the old word of volcano.(There are some places called Asama all around Japan, and they all means that there are or were volcanic activity.)
Then, about the mother's Shirataki(white water fall) we are heading to, it is closely related to what I told you now.
As I told you before, Mt. Fuji is the mountain which had been scared and respected for long time. Therefore, many people climb the mountain to worship for the benefit.
This act is called Mountain pilgrimage.

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In this way, Asama Shrine carries the prayers from people to suppress the eruption of Mt. Fuij.
By the way, Asama is an old word of volcano.(There are some places called Asama all around Japan, and they all mean that there are or were volcanic activity.)
Now, about the mother's Shirataki(white water fall) we are headed to, it is closely related to what I told you just now.
As I told you before, Mt. Fuji is a mountain that has been sacred and respected for a long time. Therefore, many people climb the mountain to worship it, seeking divine favors.
This act is called the mountain pilgrimage.

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Actually, Mt. Fuji has three stories. What is the meaning of it?
About 10,000 years ago, the present Izu peninsula was located around present Hawaii. Then, it had moved toward North, hit the main island of Japan(Honshu), rose the ground, and conposed mountain. This became Komitake which was first story of Mt. Fuji.
After that, more than 10,000 to 100,000 years ago, there were lots of big eruptions besides Komitake. Because of the successive eruptions, the lava had gotten cold and been accumulated.
In this way, the basis of present Mt. Fuji and the second story called old Mt. Fuji was formed.

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Actually, Mt. Fuji has three stories. What is the meaning of it?
About 100,000 years ago, the present Izu peninsula was located around present Hawaii. Then, it had moved toward the north, hit the main island of Japan (Honshu), pushed the ground up, and created a mountain. This became Komitake which was the first story of Mt. Fuji.
After that, more than 100,000 to 10,000 years ago, there were lots of big eruptions besides Komitake. The lava that came from these successive eruptions cooled and accumulated.
In this way, the basis of present Mt. Fuji and the second story called old Mt. Fuji was formed.

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Your response is amzingly quick!

Another shop I am dealing with is very slow to respond.

Therefore, it takes time when I place regular orders with them, although they offer a very good price for us. In order to maintain good relationship, you need to build up trust.

In this point, you always give us a quick reply and you are reliable.

So could you, in one way or another, offer us a good price as the another one we deal with does ($xxx, including shipping cost)?

We assure you our continued purchase from you.

Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

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Your response is amzingly quick!

Another shop I am dealing with is very slow to respond.

Therefore, it takes time when I place regular orders with them, although they offer a very good price for us. In order to maintain a good relationship, you need to build up trust.

In this point, you always give us a quick reply and you are reliable.

So could you, in one way or another, offer us a better price than the other one we deal with does ($xxx, including shipping cost)?

We assure our continued purchases from you.

Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

元の翻訳
Hello.

The tracking number is definitely correct.

After confirming it just now, it seems that the product is at the customs house in Japan.

It is scheduled to be leave Japan soon.

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Hello.

The tracking number is definitely correct.

After confirming it just now, it seems that the product is at customs in Japan.

It is scheduled to leave Japan soon.

元の翻訳
If you want a product, please make a bid for it at the auction.
After having your bid accepted, please make a payment for the product and its shipping to the designated bank account.
And then, the product will be shipped to the designated address.

You have a discerning eye because you have found this car.
This car is a good bargain.

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If you want the item please make a bid for it at the auction.
After having your bid accepted, please make a payment for the product and its shipping to the designated bank account.
And then the product will be shipped to the designated address.

You must have a discerning eye to find this car.
This car is a good bargain.

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Please have your bid accepted if you want the item.
After this, please pay the amount of the item and postage through a bank deposit transfer to the designated bank account.
In this occasion, we will send the item to the designated address.

You must have a good eye for finding this car.
It's a good bargain.

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If you want the item then please win in the auction.
After this, please pay the amount of the item and postage through a bank deposit transfer to the designated bank account.
Then we will send the item to the designated address.

You must have a good eye for finding this car.
It's a good bargain.

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The item you purchased is in the warehouse A.
Your permission is required to move the item from my ID to you ID at the Warehouse A.
Excuse me, but could you send an e-mail including following contents to your account manager?
Then, I can move the item to your ID.
Thank you!.
"I permit you to receive the item with B's ID."

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The item you purchased is in the warehouse A.
Your permission is required to move the item from my ID to your ID at the Warehouse A.
Excuse me, but could you send an e-mail including the following contents to your account manager?
Then, I can move the item to your ID.
Thank you!.
"I permit you to receive the item with B's ID."

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Thank you always for all you do.
I really like the items I've gotten from you.

My customers also really like them.
I am very appreciative.

I am looking into making more large orders from you in the future.


I also have one question. If you see me as a valued customer, is there any way you could offer me some discount coupons?

I have ordered a lot from you so far, and I plan to do so again.
I appreciate your consideration.

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Thank you always for all you do.
I really like the items I've gotten from you.

My customers also really like them.
I am very appreciative.

I am looking into making larger orders from you in the future.


I also have one question. If you see me as a valued customer, is there any way you could offer me some discount coupons?

I have ordered a lot from you so far, and I plan to do so again.
I appreciate your consideration.

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Could you kindly tell me product availability and supply status of the order?
I would like to receiver the item as soon as possible.
Appreciate if you can tell me if there is any revision.

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Could you kindly tell me the product availability and supply status of the order?
I would like to receive the item as soon as possible.
I would appreciate it if you could tell me if there are any changes made.

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As I have already offered a discount of more than $60, kindly excuse the repayment of $20.

First, please submit a positive rating on the eBay website.

Upon confirmation of your review, I will refund your amount of $20 through Paypal.

As this type of razor is also very rare even in Japan, it is extremely difficult to obtain this model.
It is made by SONY.

As you are one of our valued customers, I would really want to offer you more discount. However, as the number of watches may be quite significant compared to other products, I would have to sell the product at the current price. Nonetheless, please make a bid as I can offer you a special waiver of all shipping charges.

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As I have already offered a discount of more than $60, kindly excuse the repayment of $20.

First, please submit a positive rating on the eBay website.

Upon confirmation of your review, I will refund your amount of $20 through Paypal.

As this type of razor is also very rare even in Japan, it is extremely difficult to obtain this model.
It is made by SONY.

As you are one of our valued customers, I would really like to offer you more of a discount. However, as the number of watches may be quite significant compared to other products, I have to sell the product at the current price. Nonetheless, please make a bid as I can offer you a special waiver on all shipping charges.

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I have confirmed the issue regarding the denial of the repayment in Paypal.
Since the customer has already sent back the item, please send the main machine of the following address.
Please tell me the tracking number after shipping it.
Please send it as soon as possible. If I'm it cannot be confirmed, I will escalate it to Paypal Claim.
When it arrives, I will send back the defective product after checking if it properly works.

I have sent back the product.
The tracking number is stated below.

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I have confirmed the issue regarding the denial of the repayment in Paypal.
Since the customer has already sent back the item, please send the main machine to the following address.
Please tell me the tracking number after shipping it.
Please send it as soon as possible. If it cannot be confirmed, I will escalate it to Paypal Claim.
When it arrives, I will send back the defective product after checking that it properly works.

I have sent back the product.
The tracking number is stated below.

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Should the on-line shop does not cover anything you want, feel free to tell us, we will look for it for you.
Figures, books, toys, fishing gears, clothes and anything that is of a Japanese brand.

You can request us easily:
Just click the following and enter your request from our on-line shop.

To tell you the truth, in some cases we can offer a better price as we can ommit costs to post on a shopping mall as well as inventory costs.

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Should the on-line shop not cover something you want, feel free to tell us and we will look for it for you.
Figures, books, toys, fishing gear, clothes and anything that is of a Japanese brand.

You can make a request easily:
Just click the following and enter your request from our on-line shop.

To tell you the truth, in some cases we can offer a better price as we can omit the cost of posting on the shopping mall as well as stocking fees.

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Thank you for your sincere cooperation.

I will send you these products to you from Japan.
Please inform me the return address.

I will pay the postage from Japan, but if there is any tariff or consumption tax occurs in America, please pay for it.

I am paying the postage from Japan, so I hope there will be any discount for the next order.

I would like to order immediately, do you have any stocks right now?

Thank you.

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Thank you for your sincere cooperation.

I will send you these products to you from Japan.
Please tell me the return address.

I will pay the postage from Japan, but if there is any tariff or consumption tax that occurs in America, please pay for that.

I am paying the postage from Japan, so I hope there will be a discount on the next order.

I would like to order immediately, do you have any in stock right now?

Thank you.