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I am thinking of handling your products through a sales on order format.

I will be making a single unit order, but how much would the wholesale price be cheaper compared to the list price?
I want you to tell me the Discount codes that can be used when purchasing on the B2B site.

Would the shipping be free of charge if I purchase from the B2B site?

Would it be cheaper than the selling price of this site?

The products this time are lesser compared to the previous time, but the shipping charge is more expensive.

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I am thinking of handling your products through a sales-by-order format.

I will be making a single unit order, but how much more would the wholesale price be cheaper compared to the list price?
I want you to tell me the Discount codes that can be used when purchasing on the B2B site.

Would the shipping be free of charge if I purchase from the B2B site?

Would it be cheaper than the selling price on this site?

The products this time are lesser compared to the previous time, but the shipping charge is more expensive.

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The peeling of the bridge is clearly an initial defect of the manufacturer. I sent the guitar in order to claim the manufacturer's repair warranty, but since I am not able to receive the warranty then there is no point. The guitar that was returned was far from being repaired nor improved with far worst symptoms so that's why I thought that it was doubtful that it was really repaired by Taylor. I will send the guitar next week so can you kindly issue a refund? I won't be requiring an exchange.

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The peeling on the bridge is clearly an initial defect from the manufacturer. I sent the guitar in order to claim the manufacturer's repair warranty, but since I am not able to receive the warranty then there is no point. The guitar that was returned was far from being repaired nor improved with far worst symptoms so that's why I thought that it was doubtful that it was really repaired by Taylor. I will send the guitar next week so can you kindly issue a refund? I won't be requiring an exchange.

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Is the warranty period from the Taylor from one year from the date of purchase? Or is it two years?
I will send you the guitar at the end of the month. Since there is no hope of refurbishing this guitar, even if it is repaired, I would strongly suggest you replace it with a new one. The sound has deteriorated since the repair, proving fatal. By the way, while this guitar is an old model from 2013, if you want to replace it, would you like a new model released in 2014? I apologize for the inconvenience, but could you check with Taylor.

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Is the warranty period from Taylor one year from the date of purchase? Or is it two years?
I will send you the guitar at the end of the month. Since there is no hope of refurbishing this guitar, even if it is repaired, I strongly hope that it will be replaced with a new one. The sound has deteriorated since the repair, proving fatal. By the way, while this guitar is an old model from 2013, if it's replaced then would it be replaced with the new model released in 2014? I apologize for the inconvenience, but could you check with Taylor?

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Display period: Tue. Mar.4. 9:00am --Thu.Mar.6. 7:00pm

Place: Shinjuku station square

Address: 3-900-1, Shinjuku, Shinjuku-ku, Tokyo (1-minute's walk from the JR Shinjuku Station east )

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Display period: Tue. Mar. 4 9:00am --Thu. Mar .6 7:00pm

Place: Shinjuku Station Square

Address: 3-900-1, Shinjuku, Shinjuku-ku, Tokyo (1-minute's walk from the JR Shinjuku Station east )

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The memorial of "TREE"release! a huge visual Ad appears in Shinjuku!
In commemoration of release of NEW ALBUM "TREE", the member's huge visual Ad and the monument of the cherry blossoms and flowers telling the coming of spring in advance appear to the Shinjuku station square!

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The anniversary of the "TREE" release! A huge visual ad appears in Shinjuku!
In commemoration of the release of the NEW ALBUM "TREE", a huge visual of the members and a monument of cherry blossoms and flowers marking the coming of spring will appear in Shinjuku Station Square!

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① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, there is a need to confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Suppose that a product gets lost or became missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two points.
ⅰ. Full amount refund
ⅱ. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

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① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, we will immediately confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Supposing that a product gets lost or goes missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two options.
i. Refund for full amount
ii. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

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I cannot upload the image data which has the title in Japanese.
That provide the white screen image only.

Maybe I think that there is the restriction which alphabetize the name of file for uploading data.
Could you tell me the name of the file and row.
I could modify the error cause if I knew the point.

I'd like to ask for improvement for the site.
On your site, the title for categories and tags are all the same. Please modify them.
Thank you.

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I cannot upload the image data if it has the title in Japanese.
It just comes up as a completely white page.

I think that maybe there is the restriction where you need to alphabetize the name of the file for uploading data.
Could you tell me the name of the file and row?
I could modify the error cause if I knew the point.

I also have some improvements I'd like to request.
The title for categories and tags are all the same so please modify them.
Thank you.

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Please create the site that ask for shopping to fill in for those who are interested in the goods in Japan.↵
We refer to the people who live in Japan and outside of Japan. Of course, the Japanese who live abroad and the foreign people who live in Japan will be our customers.
This site will be used as brokerage site for personal trade.

We image the site which members could entry to toll SNS by certifying their IDs and passwords. and create the top page both in Japanese and English.

It is the system that members can participate in the SNS which is supproted by Buddy Press after logging in the site and communicate each other.
We will make the top page by using Word Press.

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Please create a site where people living outside of Japan (also including Japanese people) who are interested in buying products sold in Japan can ask the people living in Japan (including people who are not Japanese) to go shopping on their behalf.
This site will be used as a brokerage site for personal trade.

We are imagining a site where the top page is made in Japanese and English and members can enter a (paid) membership SNS by certifying their IDs and passwords.

It will be arranged so that members can participate in SNS supported by Buddy Press after logging in to the site and can then communicate with each other.
We will make the top page with Word Press.

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I have something I would like to discuss regarding the current shape of the deal.
Regarding the items planned on being supplied by us, we are thinking we want to send 10 units each of USB memory and calculators.
We are thinking 10 units would be good, because we would like you to try a sampling of the items and attach and furnish a planned purchase order.
We would like you to ask the buyer on site what price and how many units they plan on ordering.
Speaking of which, what is the manner you use to collect payments from buyers?
Please inform us of the collection period and wage flow.
We are considering the number of items to ship out based on these figures.

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I have something I would like to discuss regarding the current shape of the deal.
Regarding the items planned on being supplied by us, we are thinking we want to send 10 units each of USB memory sticks and calculators.
We are thinking 10 units would be good because we would like you to try a sampling of the items and attach and furnish a planned purchase order.
We would like you to ask the buyer on site what price and how many units they plan on ordering.
Speaking of which, what is the manner you use to collect payments from buyers?
Please inform us of the collection period and wage flow.
We are considering the number of items to ship out based on these figures.

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Good day,
I want to create another new account besides my current one.
Is this possible?
Is there anything I need to prepare in order to do that?
Also, is it possible to deposit the proceeds on a bank account in Europe?
Thank you very much.
I wish the best for you!

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Good day,
I want to create another account besides my current one.
Is this possible?
Is there anything I need to prepare in order to do that?
Also, is it possible to deposit the proceeds to a bank account in Europe?
Thank you very much.
I wish the best for you!

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I was told I would receive the payment on Monday, so since there was no contact nor a payment, I started the procedures for an ''Open Unpaid Item Case''. I need to do this because I would otherwise lose 100 dollars in handling charges over the total bid if you were not to pay. There's a deadline to being able to file for those procedures, so I had to hurry.
Once you make the payment the ''Unpaid Item Case'' in the system also disappears. I think it's a bit long to take up to three weeks to pay after your bid is accepted, but I will wait until the 9th.

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I was told I would receive the payment on Monday, so since there was no contact nor a payment, I started the procedures for an ''Open Unpaid Item Case''. I need to do this because I would otherwise lose 100 dollars in handling charges over the total bid if you were not to pay. There's a deadline to being able to file for those procedures so I had to hurry.
Once you make the payment the ''Unpaid Item Case'' in the system also disappears. I think it's a bit long to take up to three weeks to pay after your bid is accepted, but I will wait until the 9th.

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Thank you for the reply.
I would like to choose (b) Wire Transfer for the method of the return. But your e-mail did not include the "agreement" you mentioned you "attached". Please send the agreement which I need to sign on immediately.

As I have been exchanging e-mails with you since last November without seeing any progress, I am getting to suspect if you are really going to return my money.

I hope you proceed with the refund once I sign and return the agreement to you.

I will be waiting for the agreement for now.

Thank you for your attention.

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Thank you for the reply.
I would like to choose (b) Wire Transfer for the method of the return. But your e-mail did not include the "agreement" you mentioned you "attached". Please send the agreement which I need to sign on immediately.

As I have been exchanging e-mails with you since last November without seeing any progress, I am beginning to suspect if you really will return my money.

I hope you proceed with the refund once I sign and return the agreement to you.

I will be waiting for the agreement for now.

Thank you for your attention.

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I won't be able to use a software if I tell you my password and ID. Moreover, my account will be suspended.

I tell you the information using 〇〇.

Please let me know what you want to know.

For examples,

You want to know about Japanese sellers using a keyword "japan".

You want to know about Japanese sellers using a keyword "SONY".

They are just examples but I will give you the information if you tell me the keywords like them.

It will make the research easier.

What do you think?

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I won't be able to use the software if I tell you my password and ID. Moreover, my account will be suspended.

I will tell you the information using 〇〇.

Please let me know what you want to know.

For example,

You want to know about Japanese sellers using the keyword "japan".

You want to know about Japanese sellers using the keyword "SONY".

These are just examples but I will give you the information if you tell me something like those keywords.

It will make the research easier.

What do you think?

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Can I go to the hotel at $ 6?

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Can I get to the hotel with $6?

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As I have attached the documents regarding delivery to Japan, please confirm.

Your some time, we have made purchases from your company, but from now on as we will make purchases at fixed intervals, could you please waive the taxes from every purchase?

Also, could we receive a discount if we increase our amount of purchases?

There are a few issues with defected products, wrong size, and unclean merchandise on our products we received recently.

If you give attention to this, it would be of help.

Could you please reply quickly to the questions we sent you yesterday?
We are becoming concerned.

From now on, could you please reply within one day?

Also, because the delivery of the order was slow, can you modify the form stating to make a payment within 30 days from the time the order arrives?

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As I have attached the documents regarding delivery to Japan, please confirm.

For some time we have made purchases from your company but from now on, as we will make continued purchases at regular intervals, could you please waive the taxes from every purchase?

Also, could we receive a discount if we increase our amount of purchases?

There are a few issues with defected products, wrong sizes, and unclean merchandise on the products we received recently.

If you'd give attention to this, we would be grateful.

Could you please reply quickly to the questions we sent you yesterday?
We are becoming concerned.

From now on, could you please reply within one day?

Also, because the delivery of the order was slow, can you modify the form to stating to make a payment within 30 days from the time the order arrives?

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I had a inquiring from the important customer.
This customer is driving a red Japan car made in 1962.
It is said that the car is very old, so the baking finish is fading.
Renewing the baking finish would make the car's value going down.↵
Therefore, I was told that if any possible to recovery the car by your company's product?
In this occasion, do you have any advise better for me?
Would you please tell me about more details of construction way and products for using?
Recently, my customers are grown up, I felt even myself have to get more knowledge.
Please tell me with your best answer.

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I had an inquiry from an important customer.
This customer is driving a red Japanese car made in 1962.
It is said that the car is very old, so the coat is fading.
Renewing the coat would make the car's value decrease so I was told by my customer that he wants to recover the car any possible way with your company's product.
For this occasion, do you have any better advice for me?
Would you please tell me more details on how it's made and products that use it?
Recently, my customer base has grown and I even feel like I have to become more knowledgeable.
Please tell me with your best answer.

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Earn free jewels at the "shop!"
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Tap the "earn for free" icon at the shop. Then, download an application of your choice from the applications list and earn free jewels just like that! It's now possible to earn as many jewels as you like and keep reading!!

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Earn free jewels at the shop!
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Tap the "earn for free" icon at the shop. Then, download an application of your choice from the applications list and earn free jewels just like that! It's now possible to earn as many jewels as you like and keep reading!!

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Importamt! Please respond today.

Subject: Order#1209
To: All customers who ordered this item

All orders have already been sent except for the items mentioned below.

If you are not able to send the duvet covers, the all of the products that I delivered will be sent back used, and all purchases will be cancelled.

Therefore please find a way to send the duvet covers, or if that's not possible, I must request for you to send me the payment to cover my products.

Please respond within today as this is an emergency.

Thank you very much.

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Important! Please respond today.

Subject: Order#1209
To: All customers who ordered this item

All items have already been sent except for the items mentioned below.

If you are not able to send the duvet covers, then all of the aforementioned second-hand products will be sent back used, and all purchases will be canceled.

Therefore, please find a way to send the duvet covers or, if that's not possible, I must request for you to send me the payment to cover my products.

Please respond within today as this is an emergency.

Thank you very much.

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I have not received 2 of 12V/150W bulbs ordered on December 12 and 5 of 12V/150W bulbs ordered on December 13, totaling 7 bulbs, yet.

Tracking them with the tracking number provided from you on December 20 shows they were shipped to Switzerland.
Did you misdeliver my order?
I needed them by the end of this week by all means, so if you misdelivered them, please ship them again to my address by Express EMS. Please arrange the shipment so that they reach me within a week from now.
I may file a claim to eBay.

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I have not received the two 12V/150W bulbs ordered on December 12 and the five 12V/150W bulbs ordered on December 13, totaling 7 bulbs, yet.

Tracking them with the tracking number provided from you on December 20 shows they were shipped to Switzerland.
Did you misdeliver my order?
I need them no matter what by the end of this week so, if you misdelivered them, please ship them again to my address by Express EMS. Please arrange the shipment so that they reach me within a week from now.
I may file a claim with eBay.

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It is planned to buy S size. Could you tell us particular defects of S size? I want to see the photograph, if possible.

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I plan on buying the S size. Could you tell me about the particular defects for the S size? I want to see photographs too, if possible.

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May I request for a refund, as there is a jumpiness. If there will be no reply from you
I will make a claim to paypal. Look forward for your reply.

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May I request for a refund, as the record needle jumps. If there will be no reply from you
I will make a claim to PayPal. I look forward to your reply.

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No box and user manual. As displayed in the photo, it seemingly has almost all the accessories , but not confirmed exactly.
Please consider the below three items as discounted.
Old Ray: One arm is missing
Jagi: One arm is missing
Big Kenshiro: Hip is broken
Please understand before bidding.

Ranger Squadrons Disguise Masks Various toys set
I have not checked the condition and the operation of the goods. Prices are cheap due to that reason.
Please see the image and confirm the condition.

Thank you very much for the great deal this time.
I would like to do business with you again. If there is any Japanese product that you want, I can look for it.

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No box or user manual. As displayed in the photo, it seemingly has almost all the accessories, but that cannot be confirmed exactly.
Please consider the below three items as discounted.
Old Ray: One arm is missing
Jagi: One arm is missing
Big Kenshiro: Hip is broken
Please understand this before bidding.

Ranger Squadrons Disguise Masks Various toys set
I have not checked the condition and the operation of these goods. Prices are cheap due to that reason.
Please see the image and confirm their condition.

Thank you very much for the great deal this time.
I would like to do business with you again. If there are any Japanese products that you want, I can look for them.

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The package has no instructions. It seems like all the accessories shown in the display image are there, but I can't confirm exactly.
please consider about the 3 points bellow:
Kyurei: is missing an arm
Jagi: is missing an arm
big Kenshiro: has a broken hip.
If you accept the above please bid.

I haven't checked the current state and operation of the set of various ranger squadron transformer toys. For this reason I offer it at a low price.
Please check the state through the image.

Thank you for the great transaction this time.
I want to do business with you again. If there's any japanese article you'd want I'll look for it.

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The package has no instructions. It seems like all the accessories shown in the display image are there, but I can't confirm that exactly.
Please be aware of the three points below:
Kyurei: is missing an arm
Jagi: is missing an arm
Big Kenshiro: has a broken hip.
If you accept the above then please bid.

I haven't checked the current state and operation of the set of various ranger squadron transformer toys. For this reason, I'm offering it at a low price.
Please check the condition through the image.

Thank you for the great transaction this time.
I want to do business with you again. If there's any Japanese items you want I'll look for them.