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Travelling through Europe together, both of us, should be good! It looks like fun!
If we, who don't understand each other, ravelled together, how would it be? lol But since we understand each other in spirit, no matter what happens, it should be fun lol
Just imagining it has been fun :)

Regarding work, the Christmas and New Year's holidays being the most busy period I only had 1 day of holidays... what bad luck ( crying.. )

Do not hesitate! I'll send you japanese stuff as well as the things I get from TC Racing any time :)

Christmas has already passed but ... Merry Christmas!
Let's make 2014 too a wonderful year for both of us!

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Travelling through Europe together, both of us, should be good! It looks like fun!
If we, who don't understand each other, travelled together, how would it be? lol But since we understand each other in spirit, no matter what happens, it should be fun lol
Just imagining it has been fun :)

Regarding work (the Christmas and New Year's holidays being the most busy period), I only had 1 day of holidays... what bad luck *cry*

Do not hesitate! I'll send you Japanese stuff as well as the things I get from TC Racing any time :)

Christmas has already passed but ... Merry Christmas!
Let's make 2014 too a wonderful year for the both of us!

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I have been on many business trips lately and haven't been able to come home. But thats just part of my job lol

I listned to the song on Youtube:) Trevino's song is really cool! I've also listned to the other songs you told me about:)
My wife likes Jazz and listens is often:) I basically like western music but there are also some great music made by japanese musicians too.
When I was a teenager I talked with my friend about my future dreams while listening to this song.
I hope from the bottom of my heart that ○○ too can make your dreams come true. ;)

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I have been on many business trips lately and haven't been able to come home. But thats just part of my job lol

I listened to the song on Youtube :) Trevino's song is really cool! I've also listened to the other songs you told me about :)
My wife likes Jazz and listens to it often :) I basically like western music but there are also some great music made by Japanese musicians too.
When I was a teenager I talked with my friend about my future dreams while listening to this song.
I hope from the bottom of my heart that you too can make your dreams come true, ○○. ;)

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the attached file is the image and my payment history of my succesfull bid.
the seller who currently has items on sale"opulentdesigns" eBay item number:171197248606 is very likely to be the same person who also sold fake item to me.
he continues to work fraud and make new accounts, I suspect that we has made quite an earning from doing so.
unfortunately I may have to bear this case silently but to stop others from becoming a victim please look into this case thoroughly and deal with it adequately.
I will also attach a warning notice that I received from the agency in Japan.

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The attached file is the image and my payment history of my succesful bid.
The seller who currently has items on sale, "opulentdesigns," with the eBay item number:171197248606 is very likely to be the same person who also sold fake items to me.
He continues to work fraud and make new accounts, I suspect that he has made quite an earning from doing so.
Unfortunately, I may have to bear this case silently but to stop others from becoming a victim please look into this case thoroughly and deal with it adequately.
I will also attach a warning notice that I received from the agency in Japan.

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Thank you for your information. I have already completed the payment through the PayPal. I am sorry for that. In response to your inquiry about insurance, I don’t care the shipping without it. Please take a great care when packing the items. I will be looking forward to receiving the item.

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Thank you for contacting me. I have already completed the payment through PayPal. I am sorry for that. In response to your inquiry about insurance, I don’t care if the shipping is without it. Please take great care when packing the items. I am looking forward to receiving the item.

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Thank you for informing me. I have already made payment via PayPal, I'm sorry. As for the insurance, I do not mind if you ship without it. All I hope you to do is a secure packaging. I look forward to receiving my order.

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Thank you for contacting me. I'm sorry but I have already made payment via PayPal. As for the insurance, I do not mind if you ship without it. All I hope you do is have secure packaging. I look forward to receiving my order.

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When comparing data from a healthy group with no risk of arteriosclerosis to laboratory data, the etiology suggests that laboratory values for young people being low, and rising as people age is not the only possible occurrence. That is to say, I think that among comparatively young people, the outbreak of diseases like arteriosclerosis, hyperlipidaemia, and hypertension is related to something else besides acquired risk factors. There exist also theories with different frameworks, raised by different studies. Certainly, I think that the differences in the rate of diseases between Asia and the Occident could be due to anatomical differences.

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When comparing data from a healthy group with no risk of arteriosclerosis to laboratory data, the etiology suggesting that laboratory values for young people is low and rises as people age is not the only possible occurrence. That is to say, I think that among comparatively young people, the outbreak of diseases like arteriosclerosis, hyperlipidaemia, and hypertension is related to something else besides acquired risk factors. There exist also theories with different frameworks, raised by different studies. Certainly, I think that the differences in the rate of diseases between Asia and the Occident could be due to anatomical differences.

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I was planned to prepay Blu-ray at ◯ this month, but I spent much money recently. I have no money to pay. Ican pay probably in early next month, but I don't know whether some benefits still remain. But I try to do my best in order to get the ◇ somehow.
How I envy you going to Belgium on vacation! I wonder if I spend only with my family in this winter vacation. Not so many people go out at the year-end of the year and New Year in Japan. May be I work at home too...

I put the link of january 2013 issue by mistake! Yours is correct. I'll pick on the 28th!

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I had planned to prepay for the Blu-ray at ◯ this month, but I've spent a lot of money recently. I have no money to pay. I can pay probably early next month, but I don't know whether some benefits still remain. But I will try to do my best in order to get the ◇ somehow.
How I envy you going to Belgium on vacation! I think I will spend this winter vacation only with my family. Not so many people go out at the end of the year and New Year's in Japan. Maybe I'll work at home too...

I put the link for the January 2013 issue by mistake! Yours is correct. I'll pick it up on the 28th!

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I am aware it is X'mas holiday, but I would like the items shipped as soon as possible.
I am guessing it will take about a week but can you give me a rough date?
I would like to do business with you continuously.
I am also looking for **. Can you let me know if you can get it for me.
Thank you for your help.

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I am aware it is the Christmas holiday, but I would like the items shipped as soon as possible.
I am guessing it will take about a week but can you give me a rough date?
I would like to do business with you continuously.
I am also looking for **. Can you let me know if you can get it for me?
Thank you for your help.

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I'd like to resume the purchase, for we had bought your products around 2008.
Tanaka who is the then managers and purchaser of (your?) company retired, I am in charge of this section.

Please send me a price list and wholesale latest catalog.

I am looking forward to deal again the product with your company.

Best regards

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We'd like to resume making purchases from you. We used to purchase your products around 2008.
Tanaka (who was the then-manager and purchaser of your company) retired, I am in charge of this section.

Please send me a price list and your latest wholesale catalog.

I am looking forward to dealing again with your company's products.

Best regards,

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Thank you for your inquiry.
This is an old item and has some used atmosphere.
Still, it is among the good used ones traded in Japan. And I have listed it at a rather low price for its condition. It's been traded less and less even in Japan.
Providing this price, this item is a bargain.
As for the performance, I have confirmed it with an expert professional, so please stay assured.
Before shipment, I will clean it as much as I can.

I am willing to discuss with you, so feel free to ask anything when you win the item, if necessary.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
This is an old item and has the atmosphere of some use.
Still, it is among the good used ones traded in Japan. And I have listed it at a rather low price for its condition. It's been traded less and less even in Japan.
Given this price, this item is a bargain.
As for the performance, I have confirmed it with an expert professional, so please rest assured.
Before shipment, I will clean it as much as I can.

I am willing to discuss it with you if necessary, so feel free to ask anything when you win the auction for this item.

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I want CSV to display Japanese yen.
The current app cannot do that.
You said it can do that now, though.

I want you to send such app that can do it.
The app I received is yet to be completed.

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I want CSV to display Japanese yen.
The current app cannot do that.
Although you said that it would be able to do it.

I would like you to send me an app that can do it.
The app I received has yet to be completed.

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I have inquired with DHL, and they say that the number of packages were changed to 2 from 3 when received from MyUS.

As the statement shows the golf club, I have paid for it but not received it yet.

Where is the package now? This is a very important package for me and I need an immediate answer.

I do not want a compensation, and it is so precious item that I cannot buy another. Please do whatever to deliver it to me as soon as possible.

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I have inquired with DHL, and they say that the number of packages was changed from 3 to 2 when received from MyUS.

As the statement shows the golf club, I have paid for it but have not received it yet.

Where is the package now? This is a very important package for me and I need an immediate answer.

I do not want compensation, and it is so precious an item that I cannot buy another. Please do whatever to deliver it to me as soon as possible.

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Each 3 cards have few little scratches.
Also one of them has a around 0.5 mm of breaking trace on the corner of the card,
There is no major breaking traces nor stains.
I think they are in average second-hand conditions.
2 of the cards are north America edition, and another one is EU edition.

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Each of the 3 cards have a few little scratches.
Also one of them has around a 0.5 mm trace of a tear on the corner of the card,
There is no major traces of tears nor stains.
I think they are in average second-hand conditions.
2 of the cards are the North America editions, and the other one is the EU edition.

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I have understood the situation. Our purchasing personnel for China will contact you tomorrow. I have informed that personnel on all necessary information so please wait for his contact.

Thank you very much.

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I understand the situation. Our purchasing personnel for China will contact you tomorrow. I have informed that personnel on all necessary information so please wait for his contact.

Thank you very much.

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Since the material is TPU (Thermoplastic Polyurethane), it is clear from the product name that it is made of soft plastic. Also, the word "Yawa" in the product name means "soft" in Japanese. I have no right to change the product name.

Although there is no problem with the product, you are giving a negative review.
In the review system, a rating of 3 is a negative review, so the "98%" in "Feedback Rating 98% Positive" will become lower.

Because of the above reason, could you remove the negative review?

Thanks in advance.

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Since the material is TPU (Thermoplastic Polyurethane), it is clear from the product name that it is made of soft plastic. Also, the word "Yawa" in the product name means "soft" in Japanese. I have no right to change the product name.

Although there is no problem with the product, you are giving a negative review.
In the review system, a rating of 3 is a negative review, so the "98%" in my "Feedback Rating 98% Positive" will go down.

Because of the above reasons, could you remove your negative review?

Thanks in advance.

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I am sending you this email to ask for your advice on logistics of SAKE and wine that we are going to commit marketing. Especially, about SAKE.

We have had difficulties in finding a buyer specialized in SAKE in HK, so we plan to start with a small-scale business in EC territories.

However, sending SAKE bottles one by one costs a lot of shipping fees, and we are thinking of selling 6 bottles a set, which may consisits of different SAKEs.

In the meantime, usually we pick up SAKEs out of the CDS's warehouse to sort them by ourselves, and release them to a delivery company. However, we are still in Japan.

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I am sending you this email to ask for your advice on logistics of the SAKE and wine that we are going to commit to marketing. Especially about the SAKE.

We have had difficulties in finding a buyer who specializes in SAKE in HK, so we plan to start with a small-scale business in EC territories.

However, sending SAKE bottles one by one costs a lot of shipping fees and we are thinking of selling 6 bottles in a set, which may consist of different SAKEs.

In the meantime, usually we pick up SAKEs out of the CDS's warehouse to sort them by ourselves and release them to a delivery company. However, we are still in Japan.

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I exhibit the products what I bought, so I do not always have the ◯ stocks.
There are lot of kinds of the ◯, so I can find the product, If you let me know a character what you like.
Additionally, a product of the ◇, There are a ☆ and a ☆ in kind of the ◯.

I used to exhibit a doll of the ☆ other time, but it was sold out immediately in popularity. The ☆ is really popular.

You can cut out a page what you want from magazines.
Products price is not discounted.
If you send a message after a successful bid, I will send a invoice with a corrected shipping charge.

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I exhibit the products on eBay that I bought so I do not always have the ◯ in stock.
There are lot of kinds of ◯ so I can find the product if you let me know which character you like.
Additionally, for ◇ products, there is ☆ and ☆ of ◯.

I used to exhibit a doll of ☆ before, but it was sold out immediately due to its popularity. The ☆ is really popular.

You can cut out the pages of what you want from magazines.
Products price is not discounted.
If you send a message after you've won the auction then I will send an invoice with the corrected shipping charges.

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Thank you for taking over work.

If it understands when finish, please let me know.
I expect you to finish as soon as possible,

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Thank you for taking over this work.

If it know when you'll be finished, please let me know.
I hope you'll finish as soon as possible,

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thank you for your question.
Following melodiess are included.

Maid To Order
It's a Small World
Some Day My Prince Will Come(Little Snow White)
Once Upon A Dream(Sleeping Beauty)
Can You Feel the Love Tonight?(Lion King)

This is a very prestige clock.
Please consider it. Thank you. ↵
Beauty and the Beast

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Thank you for your question.
The following melodies are included:

When You Wish Upon a Star
It's a Small World
Some Day My Prince Will Come (Snow White)
Once Upon A Dream (Sleeping Beauty)
Can You Feel the Love Tonight? (Lion King)
Beauty and the Beast↵

This is a very prestigious clock.
Please consider it. Thank you.

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It is the same temperature here in Tokyo. I do not have the cycling gear that is suitable for mid winter. The only winter gear that I have are Swobo Merino Beanie and DeFeet. Are you going to New York? I went to New York this June. It was raining most of the days and it was really cold. But I still think New York is a good place and want to live there. During the time when I was in New York, I went to Whole Foods Market like 10 times. The market has a lot of things that I like. (Laugh)

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It's the same temperature here in Tokyo. I don't have cycling gear that is suitable for midwinter! The only winter gear that I have is a Swobo Merino Beanie and DeFeet. Are you going to New York? I went to New York this June. It was raining most of the days and it was really cold. But I still think New York is a good place and want to live there. During the time when I was in New York, I went to Whole Foods Market like 10 times. They have a lot of things that I like. lol

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Once you put it in your mouth, it's rich flavor will spread through your senses

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Once you put it in your mouth, its rich flavor will spread through your senses

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Both the comic and the magazine had a supplementary postcard.
Do you want to only the postcard? I do not read this magazine, so I would like you to purchase a whole of magazine. The comic is $11, and the magazine is $8. Commission fee is not required.

From my research, I found that the clear file is not ○'s supplement, but a special amenity that we can get only from the shop ◇. Unfortunately the shop is not around here and it is difficult to get it.

◇which you ordered the other day has just arrived today,
I will add the fee of the goods and the shipping cost, in total of $11, to the invoice.

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Both the comic and the magazine had a supplementary postcard.
Do you only want the postcard? I do not read this magazine, so I would like you to purchase the entire magazine. The comic is $11, and the magazine is $8. There is no handling charge required.

From my research, I found that the clear file is not ○'s supplement, but a special amenity that we can get only from the shop ◇. Unfortunately the shop is not around here and it is difficult to get it.

The ◇, which you ordered the other day, has just arrived today.
I will add the fee of the goods and the shipping cost, in total $11, to the invoice.