翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → ネイティブ 英語 )

日本語

すでに私はあなたに$60以上のディスカウントをしたので、
$20の返金で許してください

最初にあなたはeBayの評価をPositiveと記入してください

あなたの評価が確認できたら、Paypalより$20を返金します

この商品は日本でも珍しい形の剃刀で、大変希少です。
SONYというメーカーが作っていました。

あなたは私の大切な顧客なのでディスカウントしたいのですが、
他の商品と比べてウォッチ数が多いので、現状の値段で販売したいと思います。しかし、特別に送料無料にしますので落札してください

英語

As I have already offered a discount of more than $60, kindly excuse the repayment of $20.

First, please submit a positive rating on the eBay website.

Upon confirmation of your review, I will refund your amount of $20 through Paypal.

As this type of razor is also very rare even in Japan, it is extremely difficult to obtain this model.
It is made by SONY.

As you are one of our valued customers, I would really want to offer you more discount. However, as the number of watches may be quite significant compared to other products, I would have to sell the product at the current price. Nonetheless, please make a bid as I can offer you a special waiver of all shipping charges.

レビュー ( 1 )

katrina_zはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/04 06:58:28

元の翻訳
As I have already offered a discount of more than $60, kindly excuse the repayment of $20.

First, please submit a positive rating on the eBay website.

Upon confirmation of your review, I will refund your amount of $20 through Paypal.

As this type of razor is also very rare even in Japan, it is extremely difficult to obtain this model.
It is made by SONY.

As you are one of our valued customers, I would really want to offer you more discount. However, as the number of watches may be quite significant compared to other products, I would have to sell the product at the current price. Nonetheless, please make a bid as I can offer you a special waiver of all shipping charges.

修正後
As I have already offered a discount of more than $60, kindly excuse the repayment of $20.

First, please submit a positive rating on the eBay website.

Upon confirmation of your review, I will refund your amount of $20 through Paypal.

As this type of razor is also very rare even in Japan, it is extremely difficult to obtain this model.
It is made by SONY.

As you are one of our valued customers, I would really like to offer you more of a discount. However, as the number of watches may be quite significant compared to other products, I have to sell the product at the current price. Nonetheless, please make a bid as I can offer you a special waiver on all shipping charges.