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元の翻訳
Hello,

My name is OO.

I’d like to purchase commodities at fixed intervals.
Until now, I purchased the following gods using coupon tickets as well.

Part number. OOO
Part number. △△△

Would you please issue coupons only especially for me, since this time I want to order 20 in total?↵
If it’s possible, I’ll be happy if you contact me.

Thanks for reading till the end.
Have a nice day.

Kind regards.

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Hello,

My name is OO.

I’d like to purchase products at fixed intervals.
Until now, I have purchased the following products using coupons.

Part number. OOO
Part number. △△△

This time I would like to order a total of 20 items, and was wondering whether you would be willing to issue me a special coupon?↵
Please contact me back if this is possible.

Thank you for reading until the end.
Have a nice day.

Kind regards.

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I am sorry. After discharge, was shipped luggage in a hurry. You should have arrived on the 19th. Because it is this incompleteness and discount 20% than the purchase price as an indication of the apology. Would you please make a payment of $ 36? I send an invoice from paypal. Thanking you in advance.

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I shipped the items as soon as possible after I was discharged.↵
They should have arrived by the 19th.↵
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I am extremely sorry.↵
It was my mistake, so as a token of my apology I will take 20% off the purchase price.↵
Could you please make a payment for $36?↵
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I will send you an invoice via PayPal.↵
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
The last time I have ordered, the card information is stolen from this site, there is a notice of the unauthorized use for the card, and it asks to reissue the card.
This time, after I order something from your site, I've also been re-issued the proceedings that is unauthorized use.
Card information in this site has become a Dada leakage.

The number of the order : 5
I want to order, but this kind of thing is repeatedly annoying.
Would you please deal about this matter?

Thank you


Yesterday, I was completed the remittance procedure for $ 10,000

I hope you can ship it fast.

Here, I have ended the test of processing for ** persons.

Workmanship is good, and the other thing is, I just wait for the goods arrive.

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The last time I placed an order, my card information got stolen from your site, it was misused, and I had to have it reissued.
This time again, my card was misused after I placed an order on your website, and I am now going through the procedures to have it reissued.
There's an uncontained leak of card information on your website.

Order number: 5
I want to place an order, but having this happen for a third time is just too much trouble.
Would you please have it fixed?

Thank you


Yesterday, I completed the remittance procedure for $10,000

Please ship it as soon as possible.

I have finished the tests for adding names on 00.

It looks good, now I just have to wait for the products to arrive.

元の翻訳
It is not appropriate to put "in excellent conditions" as the description of this. It is an extremely exaggerated expression to give an impression that the item is in excellent conditions. I believed your explanation of excellent conditions and bid for it. Because of your inappropriate explanation that was far different from the fact, I was led to purchase the junk product of such poor quality that I never imagined to be. This is not an appropriate business. Therefore, you should accept my return of the good and do the refund.

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It is not appropriate to put "in excellent conditions" as the description of this. It is an extremely exaggerated expression to give an impression that the item is in excellent conditions. I believed your explanation of excellent conditions and bid for it. Because of your inappropriate explanation that was far different from the fact, I was led to purchase a junk product of lower quality that I could imagine. This is not a fair transaction. Therefore, you should accept my return of the goods and give me a full refund.

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Descripting this item as excellent conditions is not appropriate. That means that is an exaggeration to make me think the item is an excellent. I belived your description and made a bid though, there was a big difference from the fact , thus i was obliged to buy a cheaper item i had not though. This is not a fair trade, thereby, you have to refund and accept the shipping return.

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Describing this item as in "excellent condition" is not appropriate. It is an exaggeration to make potential customers think the item is in good condition. I believed your description and made a bid. But because of your deceiving description of the items, this time I was made to buy an item that is different from the advertised one, and of very low quality. This is not a fair transaction, and therefore you should allow me to return the item and give me a full refund.

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Thank you for investigating.
The buyer wrote only "There is a problem about sending" but after I reply "I am sorry, I have refunded", he said "You haven't paid the tax".

I cannot help but think that the buyer actually didn't want to pay tariff and rejected to accept the item.

I care the word "F seller".
To think generally, the meaning is Fuck, right?
Is it allowable to write violent language in the comment box?

I can notice it is dirty on the whole.
The clock is working but function of alarm is not available.

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Thank you for investigating.
The buyer wrote only "There is a problem with the shipping" but after I replied "I am sorry, I have given you a refund", he said "You haven't paid the tax".

I cannot help but think that the buyer actually didn't want to pay for custom duties and rejected the item.

What bothers me is the word: "F seller".
Generally speaking, this "F" would mean Fuck, right?
Is violent language like this allowed in the comment box?

It is dirty all over.
The clock is working but the alarm function is not available.

元の翻訳
International shipping is not covered by free shipping service such as "Including postage", "Free postage for every purchase over ○○ yen" and "Free postage for reviewing".
Postage varies depending on the region or weight.
Please refer to the table below for details.

Smallpacket corresponds up to 2kg.

If you'd like to know the postage in advance, please send your

- Item number
- Quantity
- Ship-to address

by e-mail. ↵
↵
If there are multiple items, please describe all of the item numbers and quantity.

We will calculate the sum of the postage after confirmation, and contact you by e-mail.

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International shipping is not covered by free shipping service such as "Including postage", "Free postage for every purchase over ○○ yen" and "Free postage for reviewing".
Postage varies depending on the region and weight.
Please refer to the table below for details.

Smallpacket is available for parcels up to 2kg.

If you'd like to know the postage in advance, please send us an email including:

- Item number
- Quantity
- Shipping address

If there are multiple items, please specify all of the item numbers and quantity.

We will calculate the sum of the postage after confirmation, and contact you by e-mail.

元の翻訳
Dear Kevin,

It is very sad today is the last lesson. I wish I could have started learning English at AEON earlier. Your story was so exciting that I was looking forward to coming to lessons every week. We hope you will stay healthy and happy after going back to Ireland. It was short time but I enjoyed very much! Thank you for your kindness. Please remember us. I do not say good-bye. See you soon.

Risa

P.S. This is a present for you. I am happy if you use it.

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Dear Kevin,

It is very sad that today is the last lesson. I wish I could have started learning English at AEON earlier. Talking to you was very interesting and always made me look forward to the next lesson the following week. I hope you will stay healthy and happy after going back to Ireland. It was a short time but I enjoyed very much! Thank you for your kindness. Please remember us. I do not say good-bye. See you soon.

Risa

P.S. This is a present for you. I would be happy if you use it.

元の翻訳
My exact address can be confirmed in ebay, why can't you return the goods in 2 months?

I have not actually done the operation test, but I accept returned goods if there is problem in operation.

The goods have been shipped to your indicated address.

It is a machine for sharpening a double-edged scissors in one time which I bought from a craftsman.
However, as I do not have the manual, I don't know how to use.
Maybe people related to hairdressing industry will know? Please decide with the image.

Including goods that have missed parts or are broken.

A collaboration product by ◯ and ◯.

Horn-made comb for hair and beauty salon.

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My exact address can be confirmed on eBay, why haven't you been able to return the goods even though 2 months have passed?

I have not actually tested the operation at the moment, but I am willing to accept your return if there is problem in operation.

The goods have been shipped to your indicated address.

It is a machine for sharpening a pair of double-edged scissors at once which I bought from a craftsman.
However, as I do not have the manual, I don't know how to use it.
Maybe people in to hairdressing industry will know? Please use the image for reference.

Includes products that have missing parts or are broken.

A collaboration product by ◯ and ◯.

Horn-made comb for hair and beauty salon.

元の翻訳
Thank you for introducing your young brother to me.
Is this the product that your brother are looking for?
I am afraid if your brother can buy this product from other sellers at price much cheaper than me.
If I would sell this product, the price should be above US$300.
My price would become much cheaper in June when the product would be sold agian.
The reason why other seller can offer cheaper price is because they still has old stocks which has already procured in the past or they might refer to the price in coming June by mistake.
In case I would dispatch the prodcut via EMS (express mail system; courie services by Japan Post Office), it will take more 3 to 7 days for its delivery.
Please transfer these information to your brother.
if you send me an email during this weekend, please allow me to reply your email in the next week because I don't work in this weekend.

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Thank you for introducing your young brother to me.
Is this the product that your brother is looking for?
I believe your brother can buy this product from other sellers at a cheaper price than I can offer.
If I sell this product, the price would be above US$300.
My price would become much cheaper in June when the product is released on sale again.
The reason why other sellers can offer a cheap price is because they may still have old stock which they have procured in the past, or they might be using the price for the coming June by mistake.
If I were to dispatch the product via EMS (express mail system; courier services by Japan Post Office), delivery would take about 3 to 7 days.
Please pass along this information to your brother.
I do not work on weekends, so if you send me an email during the weekend, I won't reply until the beginning of the week.

元の翻訳
We apologize to have caused you an inconvenience since you have not
received the item yet.
The zip code when we listed the address to which the items are sent was not listed.
It is our mistake. We apologize to you again.
You can check the status in the following website. It was returned to us.
We hate to say, but as it takes long time if we send the item to you again↵
after we receive it, we would like to refund the full amount that you had paid to you.↵
Would you agree to it?
We appreciate your understanding.

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We apologize to have caused you an inconvenience since you have not
received the item yet.
It appears that we missed the zip code when we wrote your shipping address.
It is our mistake, and we apologize for this.
You can check the status in the website below. It appears that it has been returned to us.
We hate to say this, but as it will take a long time if we send the item to you again after receiving it back, we would like to give you a full refund for it. Would you agree to this?
We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
I think I can't really trust him anymore. We were talking about playing music together, but honestly, I don't think I even wanna do it not. He's constantly messaging me, and I'm sure he is spoiled and hungry for attention. Well, a bit like me some time before. Remember I was sending you stuff like "I don't understand why wouldn't you reply me", and such. Sorry for causing you so much trouble before. Now I'm turning 22, and I am an adult. Well, okay, still a kid, but things will change!

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I think I can't really trust him anymore. We were talking about playing music together, but honestly, I don't think I even wanna do it. He's constantly messaging me, and I'm sure he is spoiled and hungry for attention. Well, a bit like me some time before. Remember I was sending you stuff like "I don't understand why won't you reply to me", and such. Sorry for causing you so much trouble before. Now I'm turning 22, and I am an adult. Well, okay, still a kid, but things will change!

元の翻訳
Dear Swift family
Nice to meet you. I am Risa, Kevin's music friend. How are you? It is becoming warmer and will be soon the season of cherry blossoms in Japan. This is a little Japanese souvenir. I hope you like it. I am really happy to meet Kevin and be friend. He always cheers and braves me. So, I am very grateful for him.
I wish you are healthy and happy.
Risa

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Dear Swift family
Nice to meet you. I am Risa, Kevin's music friend. How are you? It is becoming warmer and it will soon be the season of cherry blossoms in Japan. This is a small Japanese souvenir. I hope you like it. I am really happy to have met Kevin and to be friends with him. He always cheers and encourages me. So, I am very grateful to him.
I wish that you all are in good health and can spend a happy time together.
Risa

元の翻訳
You'll be able to see your family soon. I'm glad that you can stay with them. Here is a small token from Japan for your family. Please hand it over and send my love to them.

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You'll be able to see your family soon. I'm glad that you can spend time with them. Here is a small souvenir from Japan for your family. Would you please give it to them when you arrive in the US? Send my love to them too.

元の翻訳
Soon you will reunite with your family, and thinking about you being able to spend time with your family makes me happy too. It's just a small souvenir from Japan, but maybe you can give it to them when you arrive in the US? And tell I'm sending my best wishes to your family, too.

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Soon you will reunite with your family, and thinking about you being able to spend time with your family makes me happy too. This is just a small souvenir from Japan, but maybe you can give it to them when you arrive in the US? And pass along my best wishes to your family, too.

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I know you are going to meet your family soon. I'm glad that you can spend time with family. This is just a little souvenir from Japan. Could you please pass it to me when you reach America? Please send my best regard to your family.

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I know you are going to meet your family soon. I'm glad that you can spend time with your family. This is just a little souvenir from Japan. Would you give it to them when you arrive in the US? Please send my best regards to your family.

元の翻訳
Hey Tom Listen. I went out and had some meal with Akane and David my friends. David and Akane only had met the day, but on the very night he said he had gone to her home,
He said he would do nothing on her, but she was kissed so deeply after all and she was baffled about kiss marks on her neck he had made. I can't believe why he does such a thing to my great friend at the very first time.

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Hey, Tom! Listen. The other day I went to eat out with my friends Akane and David my friends. And it appears that even though it was the first time David and Akane met, on that night he said that he wanted to go to her place.
He would not make a move on her, but in the end he deep-kissed her, and she said she was really troubled because he left hickeys on her neck. I can't believe he would do that to one of my best friends on the same day he met her.

元の翻訳
I have shipped your item just now.
Discount will be done in the form of a refund after dispatch.
The refund processing has been completed from my side, so as soon as the transaction in Amazon has been completed, then there will be announced the amount of refund $10 in your account. So please wait for a while.

Regarding TW1-6, I got understood. Then I'll look for again and contact as soon as found.
In this time Thank you very much for your purchasing again.
Also I'm looking forward to the next from the bottom of my heart for the next.

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I have shipped your item just now.
The discount will be done in the form of a refund after dispatch.
The refund processing has been completed from my side, so as soon as the transaction in Amazon has been completed, you will receive a notification for the $10 refund in your account. Thank you for your patience.

Regarding TW1-6, I understood. I'll look for it again and contact you as soon as I find it.
Thank you very much for purchasing from me again.
I am wholeheartedly looking forward to doing business with you again.

元の翻訳
・I will go to the shop in person on the first purchase to buy the products
・The total amout of purchase is going to be approximately 3000 €
・ Is it possible buying at wholesale price from the price excluding value-added tax?
In case you can sell at wholesale prices, how much discount can you offer?
※ Since I plan to buy in Japan about the same amount of money as I purchased in your shop,↵
given such as travel expenses and tariffs on imports, consumption tax, interpreting cost (I am poor at both English and Italian),↵
and web shop operating costs, purchasing on fixed price is going to be the significant deficit.

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・I will go to the shop in person on the first purchase to buy the products
・The total amount of the purchase is going to be approximately 3000 €
・ Is it possible to buy at wholesale price from the price excluding value-added tax?
In case you can sell at wholesale price, how much of a discount can you offer?
※ Since I plan on selling in Japan for about the same amount of money as I purchased from you, purchasing at fixed price would cause me a significant deficit, as I have other expenses such as travel, custom duties, consumption taxes, and interpretation costs (I am not good at English or Italian.)

元の翻訳
(To Recipient)
I would like you to receive the items bought from Amazon, but it still hasn't been receive.
It was rescheduled your receiving time of the items.
What is the reason?
Please let me know about it.
(To Courier)
My items haven't been delivered yet.
Why did you reschedule the time?
Because there is the recipient in the shipping destination for sure, please deliver without the appointment.

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(To Recipient)
I would like for you to receive the items you bought on Amazon, but they have not been delivered yet.
The delivery time for the items has been rescheduled many times.
I wonder what the reason for this is.
Could you please let me know the reason why you have not been able to have the products delivered yet?.
(To Courier)
My items haven't been delivered yet.
Why has the delivery been rescheduled so many times?
The recipient of the parcel is at the delivery address at all times, so there is no need to schedule an appointment. Please deliver the items.

元の翻訳
I shop to this shop very often.
I would like to purchase more items from here, it is possible to get discounts from the indicated price?
Concretely, I want discount for about 15%.

I have purchased ○○Dollars on February, and ○○Dollars on March. This month I plan to purchase more than ○○ Dollars.
If the discount is possible, I will purchase more.

Looking forward to get a good news from you.
Thank you very much.

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I buy from this shop very often.
I would like to purchase more items from here, and I was wondering whether it would be possible to get discounts from the indicated price?
Concretely, I would like to have a discount of about 15%.

I have purchased ○○Dollars on February, and ○○Dollars on March. This month I plan to purchase more than ○○ Dollars.
If the discount is possible, I will purchase more.

I am looking forward to a positive response from you.
Thank you very much in advance.

元の翻訳
Hello.

Thank you for your new order.
Please check the 2 attachments of the orders.
I would like ① first, and ② shipped.

You shipped ooo last time, but it was thin for the thickness of the felt on the part of above us usual. I want it a little more thick.

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Hello.

I would like to place a new order.
Please check the 2 order forms attached.
I would like to have them shipped in order, ① first, and then ②.

The felt on top of the ooo that you sent me last time was thinner than the usual. Please make it a little thicker.

元の翻訳
According to your brother, it seems that my mail hasn't arrived.
I would like to place a new order for 3 pieces.
Please ship out the first 5 pieces as soon as they are finished.
I am transferring $390 to your brother's account tomorrow.

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According to your brother, it seems that my email hasn't arrived.
I would like to place a new order for 3 pieces.
Please ship out the first 5 pieces as soon as they are ready.
I am transferring $390 to your brother's account tomorrow.

元の翻訳
I heard from your brother that my email hasn't been delivered.
I place a new order of 3 pieces.
Please ship the first five pieces as soon as they are available.
I will remit $390 to your brother's account tomorrow.

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I heard from your brother that my email hasn't been delivered.
I am placing a new order of 3 pieces.
Please ship the first five pieces as soon as they are available.
I will remit $390 to your brother's account tomorrow.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for the insufficient explanation.
The purpose is not to sell your service to the card members because we are not credit-card issuer.

We are thinking about whether we can let the card members purchase your product.
Your service should be attractive to Japanese users.

It's really attractive that we can use the airport lounges at the airports all over the world, but it is more expensive to Japanese people who hardly ever go overseas if the service is available only at airports.
Therefore, we think card members should have more services except airport lounges.

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I am sorry for the insufficient explanation.
The purpose is not to sell your service to the card members because we are not credit-card issuing company.

We think about ways to encourage the card members to purchase your product.
And for this, your service should be attractive to Japanese users.

It's really attractive that we can use the airport lounges at the airports all over the world, but it is relatively expensive to Japanese people who hardly ever go overseas if the service is available only at airports.
Therefore, we think your card members should have access to other services besides airport lounges.