Lara (kanon84) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your purchase.
I checked your deposit, so we are preparing the shipment.
When the shipment is done, we’ll send you its tracking number, so wait a moment.

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Thank you for your purchase.
I have verified your payment, and we are preparing the shipment.
When the shipment is done, we will send you the tracking number. Thank you for your patience.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.

I filled in the “Credit Card authorization form”.
And I attached it in this mail, please check it.

I checked the contents of the order form.
Is “888003” of itemNo “16800” right?
If this is *** of 16800, this order is alright.

Please process this order.

Best regards,

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Thank you for contacting me.

I filled out the “Credit Card authorization form”.
I have attached it to this mail, so please check it.

I checked the contents of the order form.
Is ItemNo “888003” “16800”?
If this is *** of 16800, this order is alright.

Please process the order.

Best regards.

元の翻訳
Stock of gray one ran out, so is it possible to despatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

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Stock of gray one ran out, so would it be possible to dispatch only the gray one I ordered on September 8th earlier?

It's getting cooler in Japan and sales has increased.
I think my order to you will gradually increase as well.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
1. Sign in to Google Docs (GD)
2. Purchase the item for which an order number has been added. (Your are in charge of dates after 7/12)
3. Portion for the input that is green.
→ <Representative Office> In principle, always Osaka
<Shipping instructions>
For GD sale amount less than $ 100 SAL. less than $ 300: e Package. Higher:EMS

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1. Sign in to Google Docs (GD)
2. Purchase the item for which an order number has been added. (Your are in charge of dates after 7/12)
3. The parts to enter the data are marked in green.
→ <Representative Office> In principle, always Osaka
<Shipping instructions>
For GD sales amount less than $ 100 SAL, for less than $ 300: e Package. Anything higher: EMS

元の翻訳
I purchased Yugioh Japanese CPL1-JA023, in August 16th.
I received the item, check it up at shop, apparently this item seems fake.
I do not want this, and I'd like to return this item, then get my shipping fee and price I paid.
If you not agree with this, I am going to use Paypal buyer protection.
Contact me as soon as possible, please.

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I purchased Yugioh Japanese CPL1-JA023 on August 16th.
I received the item but I was told that it seems to be a fake when I had it checked at a shop.
I do not want this; I'd like to return it and get a refund for the price of the item and the shipping fees.
If you do not agree with this, I am going to use Paypal buyer protection.
Contact me as soon as possible, please.

元の翻訳
It was shipped from our end as of 9/4, however it seems like taking a while to pass through the customs.
Please refer to the below URL.

Once again, we are very sorry for the inconvenience caused.
Your patience is appreciated.

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It was shipped from our end as of 9/4, however it seems like it is taking a while for it to pass through the customs.
Please refer to the below URL.

Once again, we are very sorry for the inconvenience caused.
Your patience is appreciated.

元の翻訳
#illiam

Thank you for the contact.

I am intersted in 1.92.AR.7◆MYSTERY.
Please allow me to ask you a few question since it is an expensive item.

Is this correct that this patter was obtained from Tour Van?
Is there an ID band attached below the grip?

Is the item in the same condition as the below URL?
In terms of the head, the grip, and patter cover.

How many inventories do you have for this patter?

If the item has no issues with regard to the aforementioned, I would consider purchasing multiple quantities.

Sorry to bother you, but I look forward to hearing from you.

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#illiam

Thank you for the contact.

I am intersted in 1.92.AR.7◆MYSTERY.
Please allow me to ask you a few question since it is an expensive item.

Is this correct that this putter was obtained from Tour Van?
Is there an ID band attached below the grip?

Is the item in the same condition as the below URL?
In terms of the head, the grip, and putter cover.

How many inventories do you have for this putter?

If the item has no issues with regard to the aforementioned, I would consider purchasing multiple quantities.

Sorry to bother you, but I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
As for the order oo, I received negative feedback.
This order is FBA. Please delete NF.
Moreover, according to the contents of evaluation, it seems that it was refunded because of the damage during shipping.
Will this refund return to me?

I tried to ship ＡＳＩＮ○○ to ＦＢＡ, but I couldn’t send it with displaying the massage “AAA”.
Why I can’t ship this product to FBA?
This product should not be considered as like hazardous item.
I could ship similar product to FBA without problems.
Please let me know after your investigation.

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As for the order oo, I received negative feedback.
This order is FBA. Please delete NF.
Moreover, according to the contents of the evaluation, it seems that it was refunded because of the damage during shipping.
Will this refund return to me?

I tried to ship ＡＳＩＮ○○ to ＦＢＡ, but I got this mesage “AAA” and could not do it.
Why can't I ship this product to FBA?
This product should not be considered a hazardous item.
I have been able to ship similar products to FBA without problems.
Please let me know after your investigation.

元の翻訳
First of all, Happy Birthday!
If the shipping method will be EMS, the item will be delivered between 2 to 4 days from Japan to France. Hence therefore you should be able to receive it prior to 9/15. Additional $15 will be required for arranging EMS.
Please take this into your consideration. Kind regards.

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First of all, Happy Birthday!
If the shipping method will be EMS, the item will be delivered in between 2 to 4 days from Japan to France. Therefore you should be able to receive it prior to 9/15. An additional $15 will be required for arranging EMS.
Please take this into your consideration. Kind regards.

元の翻訳
I am sorry that our translation task was in delay.

As far as our recent translation task is concerned, a sentence which stands as one by combining its clauses, could sometimes be split in multiple pieces. Does this mean I should translate one by one?

So far, I used to translate them individually as a sentense flowed, it would make it appear awkward.

If possible, I would like to submit the completed task by combining those clauses in one sentence. How does this sound to you?

Kindly advise your instruction.
Thank you and best regards!

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I am sorry that our translation task was in delay.

As far as our recent translation task is concerned, a sentence which could stand as one by combining its clauses, is sometimes split in multiple pieces. Does this mean I should translate one by one?

So far, I used to translate them individually, but they appear awkward.

If possible, I would like to submit the completed task by combining those clauses in one sentence. How does this sound to you?

Kindly advise your instructions.
Thank you and best regards!

元の翻訳
Thanks for your reply.
As with our comformation, only one item was not sold.
As far as I know, the white area seen in the photo is a kind of innocuous fugus,↵
but we prudently keep it from market.

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Thanks for your reply.
We have confirmed that there is only one item that we cannot sell.
The white thing seen in the photo looks like a kind of innocuous fungus, but we will keep it from the market to be on the safe side.↵

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply first of all.
As long as we checked, the number of merchandises which is not suitable for sale is only one.
Though the white thing which can be seen in the photo looks harmless fungi, we refrain from selling to be safe.

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Thank you for your reply.
We checked and the number of products that are not suitable for sale is only one.
Though the white thing that appears in the photo looks like harmless fungi, we will refrain from selling it for safety reasons.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
The police department, credit card company, and consumer affairs centre, they all say I should return the item after confirming the full refund.
So, would you please pay JPY 24,055 to the below account by 9/12? I have created a dedicated account for refund.
Thus VISA would withdraw its investigation request for the international credit card company.
Since the investigation schedule is approaching, please contact me ASAP.
I anticipate your sincere response.

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Thank you for your reply.
The police department, credit card company, and consumer affairs centre all say that I should return the item after confirming the full refund.
So, would you please pay JPY 24,055 to the below account by 9/12? I have created a dedicated account for refund.
If you do so, I will withdraw the request for VISA to investigate the international credit card company.
Since the investigation schedule is approaching, please contact me ASAP.
I anticipate your sincere response.

元の翻訳
I received your order.

OO is written to be 6, could you tell me the details? And I ordered 8kinds, in total, 16 so far.

About △△, could you discound a little bit more? This product will be popular, but the price is quite high, so people can't buy so much.
In this season, I will order a lot with responsibility, so please discount.

Moreover, could you give us production which is not good shape with cheap price like a year ago?
This year, there are funds, so depend on the price, we will buy all in one time.

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I received your invoice.

OO is written to be 6, could you tell me the details? I ordered 8 different types, for a total of 16 units..

About △△, could you lower the price a little bit more? This product will be popular in Japan, but the price is quite high, so it is not very accessible.
In this season, I will order a lot with responsibility, so please discount.

We were wondering if you could sell to us your defective items for a cheap price like last year.
We have enough funds this year so depending on the price, we may buy all at once.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
I understand.
I will place a positive feedback with five stars if you refund me $200 to my PayPal account.
Please proceed the refunding process.

I confirm your refunding.
Thank you.
Please check my feedback.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I understand.
I will place a positive feedback with five stars if you refund me $200 to my PayPal account.
Please proceed with the refunding process.

I have confirmed your refund.
Thank you.
Please check my feedback.

元の翻訳

Thank you very much for information of the product etc.
But currently for me, additional $50 is a huge expenditure.
I’d like to restrain myself from buying the goods you suggested at great pains.

I am going to ship and return the commodity which came to me and is in a wrong size,↵
so could you repay for the commodity price?

While a dealing was not consisted, I’d like to say thank you for your interaction with a great faith.

Is any shipping method ok for you when returning?
Please understand that I postpone the payment until the returned goods arrive.

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Thank you very much for information of the product etc.
But currently for me, an additional $50 is a huge expenditure.
I appreciate the suggestion but I'd like to restrain myself from buying the goods.

I am going to ship and return the item that I received in a wrong size, so could you please give me a refund?

I'd like to thank you for your honest and thorough service, even if the transaction did not work out.

Is any shipping method ok for you when returning the item?
Please understand that I will postpone the payment until the returned goods arrive.

元の翻訳
It seems that my transaction failed due to the attempt with an expired credit card.
Please charge me urgently then I can settle the payment with another credit immediately.
My apologies for bothering you repeatedly.

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It seems that my transaction failed because I attempted to pay with an expired credit card.
Please charge me urgently so I can settle the payment with another credit immediately.
My apologies for bothering you repeatedly.

元の翻訳
It seems like I tried to pay with a credit card beyond the date when its validity ends, so it was impossible.
I will pay with a different card immediately, so please urgently send me an invoice.
I'm sorry I requested this many times.

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It seems like I tried to pay with an expired credit card, so it was impossible.
I will pay with a different card immediately, so please send me an invoice as soon as possible.
I'm sorry I requested this many times.

元の翻訳
Have you had a chance to ship the merchandise already?
If completed, kindly advise the tracking number.

Your prompt response is appreciate as I am considering an additional order.

If my order has happened to be unshipped as of yet, since it's too late, I would request for a full refund and like you to know this would be it.

* If we do not hear from you by 23:59 on September 1 at Japan Standard Time, this case will be reported to "PayPal".

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Have you had a chance to ship the merchandise already?
If completed, kindly inform me of the tracking number.

Your prompt response is appreciated as I am considering an additional order.

If my order has happened to be unshipped as of yet, since it's too late, I would request for a full refund and like you to know this would be it.

* If we do not hear from you by 23:59 on September 1 at Japan Standard Time, this case will be reported to "PayPal".

*

元の翻訳
Have the goods been shipped as yet?
If they have could you please provide the inquiry number please.

I am now considering an additional order, I ask that you contact us as soon as possible.

If the goods have not shipped as yet, they are now too late, I request a full refund↵
and please understand that we will have no future dealings with you in business.

** I will be reporting this to PayPal if I have not heard from you by the 1st of September, 23:59 Japan time.

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Have the goods been shipped as yet?
If they have could you please provide the inquiry number please.

I am now considering an additional order, so I ask that you contact us as soon as possible.

Please understand that if the goods have not been shipped as yet, I will request a full refund and will not be doing business with you anymore.

** I will be reporting this to PayPal if I have not heard from you by the 1st of September, 23:59 Japan time.

元の翻訳
Tomorrow, I will request to change the due date for the cheque. However, the bank he has business with says the cheque is valid still after passing the due date. Since I will be on leave from next week, I would like to take over those merchandises in the warehouse within the next few days. Would you please let me know the contact person at the ware house and his contact information? Without receiving them, we won't be able to pay for the next purchase. We are sorry for bothering you, but please proceed to ship those inventories in the warehouse to us at the earliest opportunity.

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Tomorrow, I will request to change the due date for the cheque. However, the bank he has business with says the cheque is valid still after passing the due date. Since I will be on leave from next week, I would like to take over those merchandises in the warehouse within the next few days. Would you please let me know the contact person at the warehouse and his contact information? If we do not receive these items, we won't be able to pay for the next purchase. We are sorry for bothering you, but please proceed to ship the merchandise in the warehouse to us at the earliest opportunity.