Lara (kanon84) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I hope you are doing well.

Regarding what was pointed out by you, we made a final check and delivered without any errors.

However, on "KOMPLETE 10" which we delivered today, although we put "▶" on a proper place, it was moved to wrong place automatically. And several "▶" were not able to be put on proper places.

Therefore, we think that this is a systemic problem on AGITO. Could you please check?

Thank you very much for your support in advance.

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I hope you are all doing well.

Regarding the issue that you pointed out, we made a final check and delivered without any errors.

However, on the "KOMPLETE 10" that we delivered today, although we put "▶" on the proper place, it moved to a wrong place automatically. We were not able to place several "▶" symbols in their proper place.

Therefore, we think that this is a problem of the AGITO system. Could we ask you to check it?

Thank you very much for your support in advance.

元の翻訳
In APPNAME, all functions for editing, photographing are equipped.

*Effects
In APPNAME, there are 134 kinds of filters, and by choosing and using them at same time, you can create like nostalgic photos which are as if taken by a film camera etc.,
Let’s create the best photo, finding your liking effects.
Those filters will be further increased in updates in future.

*Photoeditor
After taking photos, let’s withdraw essential charm of those pictures, using edit-function of APPNAME.

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APPNAME includes all the necessary functions for taking and editing pictures.

*Effects
APPNAME offers 134 kinds of filters, and by choosing and combining them, you can easily create retro looking pictures or pictures with a film camera-like texture.
Find your favorite effect to create amazing pictures!
More filters will be added in future updates.

*Photoeditor
Use APPNAME editing tools after you take your pictures to bring out their essential charm!

元の翻訳
Thank you so much for your quick response regarding the SQ. Based on your homepage, there are several color. May I know which color we could produce? At a later date, I may want to order one product first.

We need the delivery on Christmas. However, the timing of order is highly depending on the sales situation. We have not yet decided the actual timing. If necessary, I will let you know our order as soon as possible.

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Thank you so much for your quick response regarding the SQ. Based on your homepage, there are several colors. May I know which color we could produce? At a later date, I may want to order one product first.

We need the delivery on Christmas. However, the timing at which we will place our order depends on how sales go. We have not decided yet when we will be ordering, but if necessary we will do it early on.

元の翻訳
For various procedures in Japan, I will fill in to complete the documents, Please let me know the date of birth of Male &Female.
Please attach invoice also.
Thank you for your prompt action.

P/S
Did you confirm the document I ask you many time?
We are in hurry.
I will ask again.
This is very important thing. I am looking forward to your quick reply.

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I would like to begin working on the documents required for various procedures in Japan. Please let me know the date of birth of Male &Female.
Please attach the invoice also.
Thank you for your quick work.

P/S
Did you confirm the matter regarding the documents that I have asked you several times about?
We are in hurry.
Please email me if you have not received them.↵
I will apply again.
This is very important, so I would appreciate it if you could reply as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
This is inquiry about your health.
Your answers shall only used as the basic information for recruiting, proper positioning, and health control and not be provided to a third party without your agreement.

Our business policy is "**". Thus we note the importance of employees who use our system to enter a company and our future employee as well will be able to make a great performance utilizing their abilities.

Although it's essential to maintain physical and mental health, some employees pushes themselves to fit in a new working environment.

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The following questions are about your health.
Your answers shall only be used as the basic information for recruiting, proper positioning, and health control and will not be provided to a third party without your agreement.

Our business policy is "**". Thus we note the importance of employees who use our system to enter a company, along with our own employees, being able to make a great performance utilizing their abilities.

Although it is essential to maintain physical and mental health, some employees push themselves to fit in a new working environment.

元の翻訳
Dear Sir or Madam

I received the following notice from Amazon.co.uk today.

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I do really apologize for having put your item up for Amazon, which has no marketing permission in EEA.

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Dear Sir or Madam

I received the following notice from Amazon.co.uk today.

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Please accept our most sincere apologies for having listed your item, which has no marketing permission in EEA, for sale in Amazon.
We are terribly sorry.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
August is too hot, going outside is very hard. So, I think it is better when it becomes cool (From October)
Please feel free to contact me if you have any trouble.
I am looking forward to the day we can meet.
I will contact again.
Please take care of yourself.

P/S: Regarding to the document you attached in the last EMAIL, I have not received yet. Please check it again.

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Thank you for contacting me.
August is too hot, and going out might be too hard for you. So, I think it would be better if you come after it has cooled down a little bit (After October)
Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to the day when we can meet.
I will contact you again.
Please take care of yourself.

P/S: Regarding the document you attached in the last email, I have not received it yet. Please check it again.

元の翻訳
The schedule above may be changed uninformed due to the flight company, weather, misfortune or the local situation.
There might be flight changed or cancelled by weather. The unexpected cost of the transportation due to the cancelled or delayed flight would have to be payed on customers own. We hope you could understand.

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The schedule above may be changed without previous notification due to the flight company's circumstances, weather, natural disasters or the local situation.
The flight may be cancelled depending on the weather on the day of departure. The customer is responsible for costs of transportation or extended stay caused by a cancelled or delayed flight. Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
I understand.
You snet me 0% of nicotine liquid, righ?
Please add the chocolate mint flavored liquid when you order next time.

I'm looking forward you to send me the certification that my nicotine has no inclusions.

Thank you.

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I understand.
You snet me 0% of nicotine liquid, righ?
Please add the chocolate mint flavored liquid on my next order.

I'm looking forward you to send me the certification that my nicotine has no added contents.

Thank you.