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Hello, I am Yamamoto.
Tatsuya introduced you to me.
I heard that you take care of him very well.
It is very nice to know you.

So could you send me a list of items?
I will send it back to you after I fill in how many items I want.

About payment, I would like to use Paypal.

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Hello, I am Yamamoto.
Tatsuya introduced you to me.
I heard that you take care of him very well.
It is very nice to know you.
I look forward to doing business with you for many years to come.↵

So could you send me a list of items?
I will send it back to you after I fill in how many items I want.

About payment, I would like to use Paypal.

元の翻訳
According to the trace result of the item in Japan Post,
the item is being delivered with no problems.
However, tracing is not available in some states of the USA.
- Now under construction

And the international post is delayed due to weather condition.
Post delivery has a delay of 2 or 3 weeks, which is usually delivered in a month.

I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but I would be glad if you could wait it for a while as I had already sent a request to trace the item to American Post.

Despite the inconvenience that the item has not delivered, however, I'm going to handle this problem till the end, so you don't have to worry for it.

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According to the trace result of the item in Japan Post,
the item is being delivered with no problems.
However, tracing is not available in some states of the USA.
- Now under construction

And the international post is delayed due to weather condition.
The delivery usually takes a month, but it is currently delayed by 2 to 3 weeks.

I apologize for the inconvenience, but I would be glad if you could wait it for a while as I have already sent a request to trace the item to American Post.

I am aware of the great inconvenience caused by the item not being delivered yet, but please rest assured that I will be on top of the matter until it is solved.

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The details are the below;
http://avex.jp/aaa/news/detail.php?id=1018732

In addition!
We are developing a collaboration good of 'UN' which is a brand produced by Naoya Urata and a rhinestone shop, 'NIAC'.

We are going to sell the following two kinds.

Customized 'Skateboard Key Chain' in front
&
'iPhone Case' which a logo is customized

urata naoya (AAA) × NIAC ZENYA COLLABORATION SHOP

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Further details below!
http://avex.jp/aaa/news/detail.php?id=1018732

In addition!
We are developing collaboration merchandise with "UN," which is a brand produced by Naoya Urata, and a rhinestone shop, "NIAC."

We are going to sell the following two kinds.

"Skateboard Key Chain" customized in the front
&
"iPhone Case" with a customized logo

urata naoya (AAA) × NIAC ZENYA COLLABORATION SHOP

元の翻訳
We ask you to refrain from staying overnight in or around the hall since it causes a nuisance to those in the neighborhood.
You must pay for the expense for transportation and staying at a hotel, etc. on the day.
↵
Inquiry↵
Avex Music Creative 0570-064-414(11:00 to 18:00 on weekdays)

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* Please refrain from staying overnight in or around the hall, as it will cause a nuisance to those in the neighborhood.*
* You will be responsible for your own transportation and stay expenses.↵
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If you have any inquiries contact us at:
Avex Music Creative 0570-064-414 (11:00 am to 6:00 pm on weekdays)

元の翻訳
I want to thank you for your last time quick shipment. This time I was thinking to buy from 7 to 10 items.

Please reply to this mail and tell me which one you have. My order of preference is A, B, C, D. (I am looking for items in good conditions).

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Thank you for your prompt reply. I checked the list and I would like to buy the items listed below. In addition to the purchase I am considering to buy again from you in the future so I would like to ask if you could you set me a price of ●● per item?

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I want to thank you for your last time quick shipment. This time I was thinking to buy from 7 to 10 items.

Please reply to this mail and tell me which one you have. My order of preference is A, B, C, D. (I am looking for items in good conditions).

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Thank you for your prompt reply. I checked the list and I would like to buy the items listed below. In addition to this purchase I am considering to buy again from you in the future so I would like to ask if you could you set me a price of ●● per item?

元の翻訳
Hello.
I made a mistake to the schedule of the stay the other day I sent.
Please change the schedule of the reservation to 15- 18 days.

Also the flight schedule has decided, too.
(Arrival at Whitehorse Airport on 15, 23:40 - Departure at the same airport on 18, 5:50)

If you have a vacancy for the tour, please join a dog sled tour alone on March 15-18.
Can I still reserve it?

I look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello.
I made a mistake in the schedule of the stay the other day I sent.
Please change the schedule of the reservation to the 15th through the 18th.

The flight schedule has been finalized too.
(Arrival at Whitehorse Airport on the 15th at 11:40 pm - Departure from the same airport on the 18th at 5:50 am)

If there are still vacancies for the tour, I would like to join the dog sled tour by myself from March 15th through 18th.
Am I still on time to make a reservation for it?

I look forward to hearing from you.

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There were several items I wanted to purchase, but I accidentally ordered them separately. Would it be possible to send them together?

I accidentally paid the shipping fee twice also, so please give me a refund for the second one.

I would like to add that I am in a hurry to receive these products.

Please give me a prompt reply during your busy schedule.

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There were several items I wanted to purchase, but I accidentally ordered them separately. Would it be possible to send them together?

I accidentally paid the shipping fee twice also, so please give me a refund for the second one.

I would like to add that I am in a hurry to receive these products.

I understand you are busy, but I would appreciate a prompt reply.

元の翻訳
I am sending you the bills for this month.
I will contact you about October's payment that was delayed as soon as I confirm.

Please feel free to contact me should you have any questions.
Thank you.

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I am sending you the invoice for this month.
I will contact you about October's payment that was delayed as soon as I confirm.

Please feel free to contact me should you have any questions.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
※ We will hand 1 participation ticket of the hands shaking for 1 ticket you have.
※ As you cannot participate in the hands shaking if you lose the participation ticket, please be careful not to lose it. (We will not reissue the participation ticket of the hands shaking regardless of the reason such as loss, theft, damage, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.)
※ You are not allowed to hand a present or letter to a performer in person in the hands shaking. Would you please hand it to the staff near you?
※ When we sell out the items, we will stop handing out the participation ticket. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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※ We will hand 1 participation ticket for the hands shaking event in exchange for 1 ticket.
※ As you cannot participate in the hands shaking if you lose the participation ticket, please be careful not to lose it. (The participation ticket for the hands shaking event will not be reissued under any circumstances, may them be loss, theft, damage, etc. We appreciate your understanding in advance.)
※ You are not allowed to hand a present or letter to a performer in person during the hands shaking event. Please hand it to a member of the staff near you.
※ We appreciate your understanding in advance that we will stop handing participation tickets for the hands shaking event when we run out of stock.

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Please note that we will not be able to sell any items to a person without a ticket even if you come to the site.

*Please note that we may stop sales temporarily, depending on the situation of the site.
*We strongly forbid actions that may disturb nearby facilities or citizens, such as waiting up all night around the site.
Please do not meet up within the queue (which would result in queue jumping) as it will annoy other participants. We will not be able to take any responsibility for trouble within the participants.

[About the handshake event for those who purchased products]

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Please note that we will not be able to sell any items to a person without a ticket even if you come to the site.

*Please note that we may stop sales temporarily, depending on the situation of the site.
*We strongly forbid actions that may disturb nearby facilities or citizens, such as waiting up all night around the site.
Please do not meet up within the queue (which would result in queue jumping) as it will annoy other participants. We will not be able to take any responsibility for trouble within the participants.

[About the handshake event for those who purchased products]

元の翻訳
Could you ship the products that I ordered the other day today?

I would like to have ◯◯ and ◯◯ that I ask about today sent on Monday.

I would like to amend my order, do you have 2 pieces of ◯◯? If so I would like 2 pieces.

Also, I would like to know the tracking number for each of the items that you have sent so far up till today.

I would like to confirm which ones are already shipped, because I need to answer inquiries from my customers.
Thank you as always.

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Could you ship the products that I ordered the other day today?

I would like to have the ◯◯ and the ◯◯ that I asked you about today sent on Monday.

I would like to amend my order; do you have 2 pieces of ◯◯? If so, I would like 2 pieces.

Also, I would like to know the tracking number for each of the items that you have sent so far up till today.

I would like to confirm which ones are already shipped, because I need to answer inquiries from my customers.
Thank you as always.

元の翻訳
※Only the members who registered can participate You are not allowed to transfer the right.
※Over three years old will be charged. In addition, a preschooler needs consent from a parent.
If a preschooler are elected, please contact the fan club.

【Contact】
AAA Party
0570-666-893
(Weekday11:00～18:00)

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※Only registered members who registered can participate You are not allowed to transfer this right.
※Children over three years old will be charged. In addition, preschoolers will need the consent of their parents.
Please contact the fan club if a preschooler is elected.

【Contact】
AAA Party
0570-666-893
(Weekdays 11:00 am - 6:00 pm)

元の翻訳
1. It was a mistake. “Can’t you recognise me and her?” I already said I’m sorry…

2. I work as a salesperson for a label called A.
Are you a college student? What do you want to do in the future? You always give me a good advice. It’s like you are older than me.

3. Does anybody know her name? Can anyone reach her? I’m worried about her.

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1. It was a mistake. “Can’t you tell the difference between me and her?” I already said I’m sorry…

2. I work as a salesperson for a label called A.
Are you a college student? What do you want to do in the future? You always give me good advice. It’s like you are older than me.

3. Does anybody know her name? Can anyone reach her? I’m worried about her.

元の翻訳
2/23(Mon) "music×serendipity" Live broadcast from Solaria Plaza 1F LOVE FM Park Side Studio

LOVE FM "music×serendipity"
Live broadcast from Solaria Plaza 1F LOVE FM Park Side Studio

Time: 2/23(Mon) 16:00-20:00

http://lovefm.co.jp/music_serendipity/programs/more

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2/23(Mon) "music×serendipity" Live broadcast from Solaria Plaza 1F LOVE FM Park Side Studio

LOVE FM "music×serendipity"
Live broadcast from Solaria Plaza 1F LOVE FM Park Side Studio

Time: 2/23(Mon) 16:00-20:00

http://lovefm.co.jp/music_serendipity/programs/more

元の翻訳
I understand the situation about the invoice.
I can wait for the payment. Please don't worry.

The auction will end in about three more hours.
There are currently still no bids.
I plan to bid within the hour.

I will send you an email after the auction ends.
Please wait a little longer.

I hope you'll be able to get into that school!
I'm praying that you'll be able to go to your schooling and job better than in Japan.

You start dieting in spring?
Japanese people are the same. Everyone is lightly dressed, so they all seem to worry about it.
It's the same in every country, eh?

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I understand the situation about the invoice.
I can wait for the payment. Please don't worry.

The auction will end in about three more hours.
At the moment, there are still no bids.
I plan to bid within the hour.

I will send you an email after the auction ends.
Please wait a little longer.

I hope you'll be able to get into that school!
I am sending you my prayers from Japan so that things will go well for you at school and at work.

You start dieting in spring?
Japanese people are the same. Everyone starts dressing lightly, so they all seem to worry about their body.
It's the same in every country, eh?

元の翻訳
Hello.
I paid by my credit card some time ago but I could not buy the product I put in a shopping cart because it was recognized automatically as a credit card company's misuse.
If you can see the stock in my shopping cart, I want to purchase it as a same product content and at same price.
I am happy if you correspond as soon as possible.
Thank you for your help.

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Hello.
I paid by credit card a while ago, but I could not settle the payment for the product in my shopping cart because the card's company automatically identified it as an unauthorized transaction.
If you can see the stock in my shopping cart, I want to purchase that same product at that same price.
I would appreciate it if you could deal with this matter as soon as possible.
Thank you for your help.

元の翻訳
Handing of presents and fan letters directly to the group members is strictly prohibited.

*We seek your understanding that the start times for the High Touch meetings and the CD sales may change without notice.
*Depending on circumstances at the venue, the High Touch meeting may end even if there are still customers waiting in line.
*For customers holding more than one participation ticket, kindly move to the back of the queue for your subsequent turns.
*Please refrain from making inquiries to the venue. This can cause the event to be cancelled.

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Handing presents and fan letters directly to the group members is strictly prohibited.

*Please understand that the start times for the High Touch meetings and the CD sales may change without prior notice.
*Depending on the circumstances at the venue, the High Touch meeting may end even if there are still customers waiting in line.
*Customers holding more than one participation ticket will be required to kindly move to the back of the queue for their subsequent turns.
*Please refrain from making inquiries directly to the venue. This could cause the event to be cancelled.

元の翻訳
Have you used your picture as the icon of the Facebook before?
I thought that I had seen it before I started to follow you.↵
I wonder if I am correct?
I am going to go to an English school from next month or the month after the next.
If I can speak English, I can be at higher position at the work, expand the view and what is the best is that I can speak with you.↵
I worried and did not have courage regarding if I can continue to learn English as it takes time and costs money. I will work hard. Would you please support me?

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Weren't you using your picture as your Facebook icon before?
I thought that I had seen it before I started to follow you, am I right?
I am going to go to an English school starting next month or the month after that.
If I can speak English, I can work at higher position, expand my world and, most of all, speak with you.↵
I was anxious about the fact that going to this school will be costly and time consuming, and worried that I might not be able to continue attending. This prevented me from gathering up the courage to start, but I have decided to make my best and try. I would appreciate your support!

元の翻訳
Carriage is expensive. SAL mail of international package can send about $21 if it is less than 3kg and cannot you use international package?
Other Pakistani sellers can use international package. Your company's correspondence is great and I will raise deals in the future.
There is no problem if delivery is delayed little bit.
Best regards.

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The shipping fees are so expensive. It appears that SAL fees for international parcels are about $21 if the weight is under, so could you ship it using this service?
Apparently, other Pakistani sellers can use this type of international shipping. Dealing with your company is great and I plan on increasing our transactions in the future.
There is no problem if the delivery takes a little longer.
Best regards.

元の翻訳
Can I pick a date? (For example, search only contributions that are posted until 1 week before.

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Can I pick a date? (For example, search only contributions posted until 1 week before.

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I will bring another company's unscented sample to Vietnam.

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I will bring an unscented sample from another company to Vietnam.

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Thank you for the response.

My reply is regarding the above mentioned incident.

We have inconvenienced you and caused you to worry.
We still do not fully understand the cause of the incident, but we think it is a problem with the driver.
Please install the newest driver from the home page, then try connecting once more.
Home page address:

In order to understand the causes for this incident, is it possible for you to tell us the specifications of the PC being used?

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Thank you for the response.

My reply is regarding the above mentioned incident.

We have inconvenienced you and caused you to worry.
We still do not fully understand the cause of the incident, but we think it is a problem with the driver.
Please install the newest driver from the home page,and try connecting it once again.
Home page address:

In order to understand the causes for this incident, could you please let us know us the specifications of the PC being used?