Mark (ichi_style1) — もらったレビュー

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Hello. As always thank you very much.
Thank you for attaching EA ''Day Trader'' and EA ''Special MM''.
However, it seems that there was a problem with the back test of EA ''Day Trader''.
We have done back tests on a variety of currency pairs for over 4 years, but it just refuses to trade.
The transaction always ends up as zero. Do you have any idea what the reason could be?
The License Key is set to ●● .
By the way, we didn't have any problems with EA ''Special MM'' and managed to back test it without any problems.

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Hello. As always thank you very much.
Thank you for attaching EA ''Day Trader'' and EA ''Special MM''.
However, it seems that there was a problem with the back test of EA ''Day Trader''.
We have done back tests on a variety of currency pairs for over 4 years, but it just refuses to trade.
The transaction always ends up as zero. Do you have any idea what the reason could be?
The License Key is set to ●● .
By the way, we did not have any problems with EA ''Special MM'' and managed to back test it without any problems.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

This product will be shipped using AIR, so it will arrive before July 13.

It will arrive on July 10 at latest.

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Thank you for your message.

This product will be shipped to you via AIR, so it will arrive by July 13.

We think it will be delivered to you on July 10 at the latest.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

This product will be shipped using AIR, so it will arrive before July 13.

It will arrive on July 10 at latest.

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Thank you for your message.

This product will be shipped using AIR, so it is estimated to be delivered before July 13.

It will be delivered on July 10 at latest.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your carefully written reply.
5200 dollar means that the price has gone up 2000 dollars from last years, right?
Has there been a change in the prices of all the 22K items?

There are some other items I would like to know the price and stock numbers of, so I would highly appreciate if if you could let me know the price and stock numbersof the items written above.

I am looking forward to your reply.

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Thank you for your carefully written reply.
$5,200 means that the price has gone up $2,000 from last year, right?
Has there been a change in the prices of all the 22K items?

There are some other items I would like to know the price and stock numbers of, so I would highly appreciate if you could let me know the price and stock numbers of the items written above.

I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
You aren't able to check the tracking status?
I will try and check it for you.
I will send you another e-mail once I know more about the whereabouts of the package.


Thank you for your message.
My apologies for the inconvenience, but could you send me the URL or the ASIN code of the purchased product?

Thank you for your message.
My sincerest apologies, but we are unable to check whether or not it contains English subtitles.
I hope this gives you enough information.

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Thank you for your message.
You aren't able to check the tracking status?
I will try and check it for you.
I will send you another e-mail once I know more about the whereabouts of the package.


Thank you for your message.
My apologies for the inconvenience, but could you send me the URL or the ASIN code of the purchased product?

Thank you for your message.
My sincerest apologies, but we are unable to check whether or not it contains English subtitles.
I hope this gives you enough information [?].

元の翻訳
I am really happy that you can understand my enthusiasm.
''AOB'' is a abbreviation of ''xxxxx'', which is a group that discovers rare products around the world, and does business with customers that have a good sense of art and a creative mind.


I will add an URL of the group's site which does a good job of introducing the various businesses the group is involved in.

This site is online with the goal to give people information about what the group exactly does.

This is just one example of the products individual members handle in. I could keep on writing, so I'll keep it to this one example.

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I am really happy that you can understand my enthusiasm.
''AOB'' is an abbreviation of ''xxxxx'', which is a group that discovers rare products around the world, and does business with customers that have a good sense of art and a creative mind.


I will add a URL of the group's site which does a good job of introducing the various businesses the group is involved in.

This site is online with the goal to give people information about what the group does exactly .

This is just one example of the products individual members handle. I could keep on writing for a while, so I'll keep it to this one example.

元の翻訳
<The quality is really high>
I went on the first day of my Korea holiday. I have seen NANTA before, so I went there thinking it was probably about the same thing. The contents were all non-verbal, so even if you don't speak Korean you can enjoy it. There were less customers than with NANTA, but I guess that's because they're less well known? The performance was just as good, so there's no need to worry about that. The MC also did some very powerful commentating.

<I love dancing>
I like dancing so I went for this work. The story itself develops very quickly and is very fast. I picked up most of it, but it was fun!

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<The quality is really high>
I went on the first day of my Korea holiday. I have seen NANTA before, so I went there thinking it was probably about the same thing. The performance was all non-verbal, so even if you don't speak Korean you can enjoy it. There were less spectators than with NANTA, but I guess that's because they're less well known? The performance was just as good, so there's no need to worry about that. The MC also did some very powerful commentating.

<I love dancing>
I like dancing so I went for this work. The story itself develops very quickly and is very fast. I picked up most of it, but it was fun!

元の翻訳
※ For more information about the monkey & dog, please check it out for yourself on the day of the event.

[Warnings]
* This event is not a handshake event.
* The participating members may change without prior notice.

* The products will be exchanged with a reference number on the day of the event.
* None of the presents can be returned, so please take this into account.
* Once everyone present has had their turn the event will be ended.
* Video recording and voice recording are completely forbidden.
* When showing up after the event has started, you will have to start at the back of the line.

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※ For more information about the monkey & dog, please check it out for yourself on the day of the event.

[Warnings]
* This event is not a handshake event.
* The participating members may change without prior notice.

* The products will be exchanged with a reference number on the day of the event.
* None of the presents can be accepted, so please take this into account.
* Once everyone present has had their turn the event will be ended.
* Video recording and voice recording are completely forbidden.
* When showing up after the event has started, you will have to start at the back of the line.

元の翻訳
The product I bought from you yesterday has arrived.
I have a question about the R1 included.

・It says that it is Version 3, but is it possible that is has been swapped with Version 2?
The serial code starting with TD3 says the R1 is Version 2.
I have sent you a picture where V2 and V3 are compared so please confirm it for yourself.
The left one is V3 and the right one is V2.

・Once you know the head capacity of the R1 I purchased this time please let me know.

I am sorry for taking up your time, thank you very much.

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The product I bought from you yesterday has arrived.
I have a question about the R1 that was included.

・It was listed as Version 3, but is it possible that is has been mistaken with Version 2?
I understand that the R1 having a serial code beginning with TD3 is Version 2.
I have sent you a picture where V2 and V3 are compared so please confirm it.
The left one is V3 and the right one is V2. The product that arrived this time is the same product as the one on the right.

・Please inform me once you have an idea on the head capacity of the R1 that I have purchased this time.

I am sorry for taking up your time, thank you very much.

元の翻訳
My apologies.
The keyword ''Gibson'' which confused you accidentally got into the title of the product.
This guitar is made by the Japanese manufacturer CMS.
It is not a Gibson, so if you made the bid thinking it was a Gibson Les Paul I will cancel the bid for you.

It however goes without saying that the guitar is of very good quality and the sound is wonderful. It's a Japanese high quality guitar. Even when compared to Gibson guitars of the same price it doesn't lose.

My apologies for the inconvenience, but please let me know what you think.

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My apologies.
The keyword ''Gibson'' which confused you accidentally got into the title of the product.
This guitar is made by the Japanese manufacturer called CMS.
It is not a Gibson, so if you made the bid thinking it was a Gibson Les Paul we will cancel the bid for you.

It however goes without saying that the guitar is of very good quality and the sound is wonderful. It's a Japanese high quality guitar. Even when compared to Gibson guitars of the same price it doesn't lose.

My apologies for the inconvenience, but please let me know what you think.

元の翻訳
Thank you for offering me this wonderful opportunity.
I am also very grateful for the business we have done over the years.

With that said, I have listed some products that I would like to have as soon as possible.
I have also added the product's URL, so please confirm it.
If you are able to purchase it, I will let you know the quantity I would like. I will buy at least 4 pieces from you.

I am also interested in products other than the Tour Issue ones, so I might contact you again later.


I understand the matter concerning ARP. Where is the ARP stamp stamped on?

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Thank you for offering me this wonderful opportunity.
I am also very grateful for the business we have done over the years.

With that said, I have listed some products that I would like to have as soon as possible.
Please confirm the products's URL I have added.
If I am able to purchase it, I will let you know the quantity I would like. I will buy at least 4 pieces from you.

As I am also interested in products other than the Tour Issue ones, I might contact you again later.


I understand the matter concerning ARP. Where is the ARP stamp stamped on?