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My apologies for the vague description.
This jazz bass is a 38mm nut width.
The neck scale is 34 inches so it's the same length as usual jazz basses and precision basses.
This one in particular is a limited edition jazz bass manufactured by Fender Japan.
Actually, the professional bass player FD of the official Queen cover band called *** also uses this bass, I sold it to him last year.
I will attach an on-stage picture of him!
I can definitely recommend you this great bass!
They go fast, so I would recommend you to buy it sooner than later.

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My apologies for the vague description.
This jazz bass is a 38mm nut width.
The neck scale is 34 inches so it's the same length as regular jazz basses and precision basses.
This one in particular is a limited edition jazz bass manufactured by Fender Japan.
Actually, the professional bass player FD of the official Queen cover band called *** also uses this bass, I sold it to him last year.
I will attach an on-stage picture of him!
I can definitely recommend you this great bass!
They sell fast, so I would recommend you to buy it as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I have attached a screenshot for you to look at.
I am not sure what part is necessary exactly, but is it alright like this?

The money that hasn't been added to Payoneer, is the amount that was withdrawn from my Paypal.
(Most of this is money has been made through ebay, but what you need is a picture of my Amazon account, right?)

I requested the money withdrawal from Paypal on the 27th of February. I would appreciate it if it could be added quickly.
Thank you very much.

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I have attached a screenshot for your perusal.
I am not sure what part is necessary exactly, but is it alright like this?

The money that hasn't been deposited to Payoneer, is the amount that was withdrawn from my Paypal.
(Most of this is money has been made through ebay, but what you need is a picture of my Amazon account, right?)

I requested the money withdrawal from Paypal on the 27th of February. I would appreciate it if you could deposit the money quickly.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I have attached a screenshot for you to look at.
I am not sure what part is necessary exactly, but is it alright like this?

The money that hasn't been added to Payoneer, is the amount that was withdrawn from my Paypal.
(Most of this is money has been made through ebay, but what you need is a picture of my Amazon account, right?)

I requested the money withdrawal from Paypal on the 27th of February. I would appreciate it if it could be added quickly.
Thank you very much.

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I have attached a screenshot for you to look at.
I am not sure what part is necessary exactly, but is it alright like this?

The money that hasn't been deposited to Payoneer, is the amount that was withdrawn from my Paypal.
(Most of this is money has been made through ebay, but what you need is a screenshot of my Amazon account, right?)

I requested the money withdrawal from Paypal on 27 February. I would appreciate it if it could be added quickly.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
My account has been deleted.

Although I can't deny I overlooked a few cases, I did everything in my power to respond to the copyright warnings swiftly, and also followed all the given instructions.
Even though it was never my intention to break any rules, my account was deleted immediately.

Responded very quickly and is also friendly to customers, so my rating is 5 stars.
I think this rating gives a good impression of how people feel about my store on Amazon.

Where did things go wrong?
Having my funds frozen for 90 days is an extremely hard blow to me.
Would it be in any way possible to give my case some extra consideration?

Thank you for your time.

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My account has been deleted.

Although I can't deny I overlooked a few cases, I did everything in my power to respond to the copyright warnings swiftly, and also followed all the given instructions.
Even though it was never my intention to break any rules, my account was deleted immediately [itashimashita is kenjo-go].

I responded very quickly and was ["is" doesn't work here because the subject is "I"] also friendly to customers, so my rating is 5 stars.
I think this rating gives a good impression of how people feel about my store on Amazon.

Where did things go wrong?
Having my funds frozen for 90 days is an extremely hard blow to me.
Would it be in any way possible to give my case some extra consideration?

Thank you for your time.

元の翻訳
I also purchased X their script, but this one is so much better you can't even compare the two.

There's however one thing I just can't wrap my head around, and that's how uploading videos works.

I think there are the following problems.
1. It is not possible to upload both a video and a comment of your own at the same time.
2. I was unable to intuitively guess where to put the URL of the video.

There were also some questions from people who didn't understand how to upload videos on the forums.
It's probably not a good thing if something like that requires extra explanation.

It made me wonder if there is any reason for things to be designed this way.

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I also purchased X their script, and I found this one is incomparably better.

However, there's one thing I just can't wrap my head around, and that's how to upload video works.

I think there are the following problems.
1. It is not possible to upload both a video and a comment of your own at the same time.
2. You are unable to intuitively guess where to put the URL of the video.

There were also some questions from people who didn't understand how to upload videos on this forum.
It's probably not a good thing if something like that requires extra explanation.

There might be any reason for this product to be designed this way, though.

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I also purchased X their script, but this one is so much better you can't even compare the two.
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There's however one thing I just can't wrap my head around, and that's how uploading videos works.

I think there are the following problems.
1. It is not possible to upload both a video and a comment of your own at the same time.
2. I was unable to intuitively guess where to put the URL of the video.

There were also some questions from people who didn't understand how to upload videos on the forums.
It's probably not a good thing if something like that requires extra explanation.

It made me wonder if there is any reason for things to be designed this way.

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I also purchased the script of X and this one is so much better you can't even compare them.
There's, however, only one thing I just can't wrap my head around, and that's how to upload video clips etc.

I think there are the following problems.
1. It is not possible to upload both a video and its associate comment together.
2. I was unable to intuitively guess where to put the URL of a video.

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In a forum, there were also some questions from people regarding the problem 2 that they didn't understand how to upload videos.
It's probably not a good thing if something like that requires extra explanation.

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It made me wonder if there is any reason for things to be designed this way.↵

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This is our proposal.
We have some good quality second-hand goods. It's a 500 dollar product, but because we've regretfully caused you trouble, we are willing to hand it over to you for the special price of 400 dollars.This way you can purchase it for 200 dollars less than it costs new. The box has some scratches and dents, but the product itself is still in very good (mint) state. We would appreciate it if you would take our offer into consideration.

If you want nothing but a brand-new article, we'll fully reimburse you the payed money, so please do not worry.
We are looking forward to a positive reply from your part.

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This is our proposal.
We have some good quality second-hand goods. It's a 500 dollar product, but because we've regretfully caused you trouble, we are willing to hand it over to you for the special price of 400 dollars. This way you can purchase it for 200 dollars less than it costs new. The box has some scratches and dents, but the product itself is still in very good (mint) state. We would appreciate it if you would take our offer into consideration.

In addition, we will reimburse the balance to your PayPal-account at once.↵
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If you want nothing but a brand-new article, we will fully reimburse you the paid money, so please do not worry.
We are looking forward to a positive reply from your part.

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So you have no pictures of the costumes, that's too bad!
I've got no problems with weird pictures!
I'm very open minded, lol.

That's true. We share some common traits.
I'm a little shy, but my self ego is probably strong.
Seeing how hard I work and stuff, haha.

I'll do some trial homeschooling to see what it's like!
You've really helped me out here, thank you.

Mixed bathing is also... Something I'll go and experience someday!
If I were with my boyfriend it would be alright I guess.
I don't have a boyfriend right now, so I wonder when the day comes I can go mixed bathing, haha.
Have you never been to Kyoto and Nara?
In that case I'll show you around. Right now the autumn leaves are beautiful.
My favorite place is Arashiyama. It's filled with Japanese temples, castles and Geisha.

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So you have no pictures of the costumes, that's too bad!
I've got no problems with weird pictures!
I'm very open minded, lol.

That's true. We share some common traits.
I'm a little shy, but my ego is probably strong.
Seeing how hard I work and stuff, haha.

I'll do some trial homeschooling to see what it's like!
You've really helped me out here, thank you.

Mixed bathing is also... Something I'll go and experience someday!
If I were with my boyfriend it would be alright I guess.
I don't have a boyfriend right now, so I wonder when the day will come that I can go mixed bathing, haha.
Have you never been to Kyoto and Nara?
In that case I'll show you around. Right now the autumn leaves are beautiful.
My favorite place is Arashiyama. It's filled with Japanese temples, castles and geisha.

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You told me that students can get a 20% discount if they sign up for the American Express campaign down below, but wouldn't it be possible to get a special discount on top of that?

I was hoping that I could get a 35% discount for all the students on the transfer fees.↵
If there is anything you want to request for that please let me know.

I'm looking forward to a pleasant reply from you.

Thank you.

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Students can get a 20% discount if they sign up for the American Express campaign (below given URL). 　I will convey this to students but would it be possible to get some additional special discount?

I wish to get a 35% discount on the transfer fees for all the students.↵
Please let me know your expectation.

I'm looking forward to a favorable reply from you.

Thank you.