Noriko Duck (big_baby_duck) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
日本への配送のための書類にあるDHLの口座番号は、IMPEXPONLの様です。また、その書類を添付しました。もし、それがうまくいかなかったら、これらの２１箱をDHLの保管場所に置いてくれますか？

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日本への配送のための書類にあるDHLの口座番号は、IMPEXPONLの様です。再度、その書類を添付しました。もし、それがうまくいかなかったら、これらの２１箱をDHLの保管場所に置いてくれますか？

元の翻訳
I bought a rug mat other day.
However, please see the image of it.

"MINT" is written on it.
The color of it I wanted was "AQUA".

"MINT" is a color which originally isn't of this product.

Are "MINT" and "AQUA" the same colors? ↵
The color of the one I've got looks like pale blue.

We're waiting for your immediate reply.

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I bought a rug mat other day.
However, please see the image of it.

The term "MINT" is printed on the tag.
The color I requested was "AQUA".

"MINT" is a color which originally isn't of this product.

Are "MINT" and "AQUA" the same color? --- Is MINT the same color as AQUA? のほーが好みです。 ↵
The former looks lighter blue than the latter.

We're waiting for your immediate reply.

元の翻訳
There's no problem with you canceling it. However, please let me say one thing to you, too.
The price I suggested to you was one of a new regular product, so it was fairly expensive. When it comes to second-hand ones, I can suggest selling them at $** like sellers on the link.
Also, I operate a professional music store for guitars and basses as my special occupation. I sell dozens of guitars worldwide every month. Of course my store is known for perfect set-ups, and what my customers value so highly about the store is secure packaging. Please see the past reviews. I'm sure you can buy stuff with no worries, then!

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There's no problem that you cancel it, but please let me say one thing.
The price I offered was fairly expensive since it was general price for the new product. If it was a second-hand one, I can sell it at $** as well as the sellers on the link.
Also, I run a musical instrument store that sells guitars and basses. I sell dozens of guitars worldwide every month. Of course my store is known for perfect set-ups, and what my customers value so highly about the store is the secure packaging. Please see the past reviews. I'm sure you will be able to buy our products without any worries!

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I'm sorry.
I've sold this new product as an old one by mistake.
I apologize, but is it okay to cancel it?

I'm sorry. You've sounded like you'd cancel this product in the last message, and will you do so?
Or we will ship it to you if you're okay with the shipment, but it will take some time.

Message
Would you please give me the ASIN code or the name of this product?
I will check the information about it including pictures of that.

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I'm sorry.
I've sold this new product as an second-hand product by mistake.
I apologize, but is it okay to cancel it?

I'm sorry. It seemed like you wanted to cancel this product in your previous message, but will you be doing so?
Or we will ship it to you if you're okay with the shipment, but it will take some time.

Message
Would you please give me the ASIN code or the name of this product?
I will check the information of the product including the pictures afterwards.

元の翻訳
アマゾン会社から、こんにちはです。

xxx-xxx-xxxに関するあなたの返答に感謝します。不運にも、あなたが教えてくれた配送についての情報は、配達の署名による確認を含んでいません。結果として、それは、指定された受取人への配達がなされたというのには不十分な証拠です。USPSを含める多くの運送会社は、受取人の住所への配達を確認するのではなく、代わりに、その郵便番号の所への配達を確認するだけの配達確認をしているというのを、わかっていて下さい。

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こんにちは、Amazon.comです。

xxx-xxx-xxxに関するあなたの返答に感謝します。あいにく、ご提供いただいた追跡情報には、配送の署名確認が含まれていません。そのため、意図した受取人宛てに配送されたという証拠としては不十分です。なお、USPSを含む多くの運送会社が、受取人の住所への配達を確認するのではなく、代わりにその郵便番号への配送を確認するだけの配送確認をしていることにご注意ください。

元の翻訳
It's been more than a week since I ordered the product, and hasn't it been shipped yet?

Please let me know the planned date of the shipment.

I'm sorry, but I'd like to cancel the order temporarily.

Please send me the bill when you're ready to ship it.

I appreciate your help.

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It's been more than a week since I ordered the product, and hasn't it been shipped yet?

Please let me know the estimated date of the shipment.

I'm sorry, but I'd like to cancel the order temporarily.

Please send me the bill when you're ready to ship it.

I appreciate your help.

元の翻訳
※If you accompany a child who's three years old or older than that and join the special photographing meeting, you will need a ticket to join it separately for him or her.
※Acts like staying in the meeting place all night would be trouble for residents in the neighborhood, so please don't do them. If we find out about the act of all-night stay, it's possible that we will cancel the live.
※You will be charged for the carfare and accommodation etc. that day.
※If it's been decided that carrying out the live is impossible due to inevitable causes like a break-down of an equipment in the meeting place, a natural disaster, and a strike in the traffic, we will cancel it.

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※If you accompany a child who's three years or older, then you will need a separate child ticket to join the commemoration photography meeting.
※Acts like staying in the meeting place all night would bother the residents in the neighborhood so please don't do them. If we find out about acts regarding the all-night stay, then it's possible that we will cancel the live event.
※You will be charged for the transportation and accommodation for that day.
※If it would be impossible to push through with the live show due to inevitable causes like a break-down of an equipment in the meeting place, a natural disaster, and a strike in the traffic, then we will cancel it.

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※It's forbidden to take place by putting your belongings etc. and sit inside the facilities or in the meeting place. It's possible that you'll have to move somewhere else according to an instruction by a member of the staff, so please understand it in advance.
※We will not issue the "ticket to join the meeting for handshake" again in any case (like of it having been lost, stolen, etc.), so please understand it beforehand.
※The ticket can be used only at the time for the appointment on the day of the event.
※Acts like photographing, audio recording, video recording etc. are forbidden without exception while the artists are performing.
※We have only a limited number of CDs for sale and the tickets for handshake. The distribution of them will be finished when we've run out of them, so

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※It's forbidden to save a spot by putting your belongings down or sit inside the facilities or in the meeting place. It's possible that you'll have to move somewhere else according to the directions from a member of the staff, so please understand this in advance.
※We will not issue the "ticket to join the meeting for handshake" again for any reason (such as it having been lost, stolen, etc.), so please understand this beforehand.
※The ticket can be used only at the appointed time for the day of the event.
※Photography, audio recording, video recording etc. are forbidden without exception while the artists are performing.
※We have only a limited number of CDs for purchase and tickets for handshakes available. The distribution of them will be finished when we've run out of them, so

元の翻訳
Cheke Raccho on the radio in the evening

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Evening Radio Show Cheke Raccho

元の翻訳
An event for the celebration of the release of a new album "Killing Me Softly" by Tokyo Women's Style: A mini live & a meeting for handshake

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An event for the celebration of the release of a new album "Killing Me Softly" by TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE: A mini live & a meeting for handshake

元の翻訳
総務監査官様
7518

私は、ようやく冷蔵庫用のマグネットの２番目のセットを受け取って、この２番目のセットが最初のと同じで、あなたがアマゾンでアドバイスしてくれた様なものではないとわかって、大変がっかりしています。

この上ない程不満足を感じており、大至急の全額返済をありがたく思うでしょう。あなたに、送り返し用の送料を払ってもらいたいです。

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ig
7518

私は、ようやく冷蔵庫用のマグネットの２番目のセットを受け取って、この２番目のセットが最初のと同じで、あなたがアマゾンでア宣伝していた様なものではないとわかって、大変がっかりしています。

この上ない程不満足を感じており、大至急の全額返済をしていただければ幸いです。あなたに、返送用の送料を払ってもらいたいです。

元の翻訳
総務監査官様
7518

私は、ようやく冷蔵庫用のマグネットの２番目のセットを受け取って、この２番目のセットが最初のと同じで、あなたがアマゾンでアドバイスしてくれた様なものではないとわかって、大変がっかりしています。

この上ない程不満足を感じており、大至急の全額返済をありがたく思うでしょう。あなたに、送り返し用の送料を払ってもらいたいです。

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ig
7518

私は、ようやく冷蔵庫用マグネットの２番目のセットを受け取って、この２番目のセットが最初のと同じで、あなたがアマゾンで宣伝していたものではないとわかって、大変がっかりしています。

この上ない程不満足を感じており、大至急の全額返金を希望します。あなたに、返品用の送料を払ってもらいたいです。