Noriko Duck (big_baby_duck) — もらったレビュー

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私は、あなたの文書が高価値でありがたいものだと思っており、そして、それに関して、あなたに感謝しています。↵
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警告していただきありがとうございます、本当に感謝しています。

元の翻訳
I went to a post office and submitted a tracking request of your item there.
They say there are many problems with shipments to various European countries and yours at the post office in Japan.
Products which have been shipped to the US and some other countries get delivered to their destination without failure within one week.

I've shipped items to Spain and France for another deal, but they haven't arrived there.

They will talk to a post office in your country from the post office in Japan, but the time until they resolve the problem will depend on their work at the office in your country.

If the luggage has been lost, we will compensate for it by insurance.

We're sorry about causing you the trouble, but we hope you will wait for a reply from the post office in your country.
The problem will be resolved for sure, so no worries.

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I went to the post office and submitted a tracking request for your item there.
The post office in Japan says there are many problems with shipments to various European countries, and also yours.
Products which have been shipped to the US and some other countries get delivered to their destination without failure within one week.

I've shipped items to Spain and France for another deal, but they haven't arrived there.

The post office in Japan will talk to your country's post office, but the time until they resolve the problem will depend on your post office.

If the package has been lost, it will be compensated for with insurance.

We're sorry about causing you trouble, but we hope you will wait for a reply from the post office in your country.
The problem will be resolved for sure, so no worries.

元の翻訳
親愛なる方、こんにちは。
Eメール、ありがとうございます。

あなたはなぜ、私達の商品が偽物だとお思いになるのですか？
それらの品物に、何か問題があるのですか？
私達に、その事について調べるためのそれらの写真を送っていただけますか？

そして、あなたはその全ての注文の品を、返金処理のために送り返したいと思っておられますか？

あなたのお返事、お待ちしています。
良い日をお過ごし下さい。

以上、心からの誠実さをもって。

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拝啓↵
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こんにちは。
メールを頂き、ありがとうございます。

なぜ、私達の商品が偽物だと思われたのでしょうか？
商品に、何か問題がありましたか？
調査させていただきますので、商品の写真を送っていただけますか？

全商品を送り返し、返金処理をご希望されるのでしょうか？

お返事、お待ちしています。
素敵な一日を。

敬具

元の翻訳
あなたの仕事の名前は、何ですか？↵
あなたは、どのぐらい長く仕事をしていますか？↵
あなたは、ウェブサイトをもっていますか？
あなたは、自分自身のものを含めて、何か他のウェブサイトで物を売っていますか？もしそうなら、インターネットで物を売る経験がどのぐらいありますか？
あなたには、自分がe-Bayで物を売るのを助ける従業員がいますか？もしそうであれば、何人ぐらいですか？
あなたは、在庫品を自分のe-Bayでの売人としての口座で、そこ専用の商品として登録しますか？もしそうなら、どうやってそのサイトに列記する在庫品を管理するつもりですか？
あなたは、一般的にも公開されていて購入可能な商品をリストに載せていますか？
私達は、いったんあなたのEメールでの返事を受け取ったら、あなたにできるだけ早く返事をします。ご協力、お願いします。

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下記についてお答えください。↵
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・商号↵
・事業年数↵
・もしあれば、ウェブサイトのURL
・自社を含めて、ウェブサイトでの販売経験。もしあれば、販売経験年数
・e-Bay販売のアシスタントと、その人数
・e-Bayの売主アカウント専用の在庫の有無。ある場合には、サイトに記載された在庫の管理方法
・一般的にも入手できる商品の掲載の有無
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ご返信を受領後、早急に返信します。ご協力をお願いします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

Hasn't the product been delivered to you?
We will check on the shipping situation, too. We're sorry, but please wait for about three days.
Regarding the item, if it has been lost or shipped in a wrong way, we will ship the product to you again by means such as EMS. We appreciate your understanding.

We apologize about the trouble we've caused you.

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Thank you for your message.

Hasn't the product been delivered to you?
We will check on the shipping situation, too. We're sorry, but please wait for about three days.
Regarding the item, if it has been lost or incorrectly shipped, we will ship it to you again by EMS or a similar service. We appreciate your understanding.

We apologize for the trouble we've caused you.

元の翻訳
There's only one item of this version in stock. How about having it discounted at 5%? If that's okay with you, please use this coupon.
Regarding B item, it's a product other customer has asked about, so it may be sold out.
Please understand it if that happens.
Would you please order it putting it in a cart on e-Bay? If there's been the shortage or excess of the amount of money paid for the shipping charge, I will let you know about it in this kind of message.

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There's only one item of this version in stock. How about applying a 5% discount? If you'd like to, please use this coupon.
Regarding B item, it's a product other customer has asked about, so it may be sold out.
Please understand it if that happens so.
Would you please add the item on an eBay shopping cart and order? If there's been the shortage or excess of the amount of money paid for the shipping charge, I will let you know by replying to this message.

元の翻訳
あなたのミックスは、情報連鎖の中にあなたが作った最も弱々しいつながりぐらいの良さしかもっていません。

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あなたのミックスは、シグナルチェーン上にあるあなたが作った最も脆弱なリンク程度の価値しかありません。

元の翻訳
"Yume Chika"

*"Yume Chika" By HTB
Date: June 30, Monday
Time: From 0:50 To 1:30

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"Yume Chika"

*"Yumechika" on HTB
Date: June 30, Monday
Time: 0:50-1:30

元の翻訳
The process of the refund of the product will be started in a few days after it gets delivered to us and we confirm it.

The policy of the refund is written about in the following, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, the total refund of it will be done, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be done by 50%.
If the product has been returned to us according to your personal reason, we can not make a refund of the shipping charge you've paid.
Also, you will be in charge of the carriage for the shipment.
We can not make a refund of the item in cases like it having been lost on the way to be shipped back to us.
We recommend you add transportation insurance to the shipping system if you return an expensive product to us.

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The refound procedure will be started within a few days just after we confirm the arrival of the product.

The policy of the refund is written about in the following, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, the total refund of it will be done, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be done by 50%.
If the product has been returned to us according to your personal reason, we can not make a refund of the shipping charge you've paid.
Also, you will be in charge of the carriage for the shipment.
We can not make a refund of the item in cases like it having been lost on the way to be shipped back to us.
We recommend you add transportation insurance to the shipping system if you return an expensive product to us.

元の翻訳
The process of the refund of the product will be started in a few days after it gets delivered to us and we confirm it.

The policy of the refund is written about in the following, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, the total refund of it will be done, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be done by 50%.
If the product has been returned to us according to your personal reason, we can not make a refund of the shipping charge you've paid.
Also, you will be in charge of the carriage for the shipment.
We can not make a refund of the item in cases like it having been lost on the way to be shipped back to us.
We recommend you add transportation insurance to the shipping system if you return an expensive product to us.

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Our refund process will start within a few days following the receipt and confirmation of your returned item.

Please refer to our refund policy as follows.
A full refund will be issued when the returned item is unopened with no damage, or 50% refund unless otherwise.
Your return shipping fee will not be refunded when an item is returned for your convenience.
Also, the return shipping fee needs to be paid at your end.
We cannot issue a refund in an event where an item is lost during the return delivery.
For orders with a valuable item, customers are encouraged to add the transportation insurance.

元の翻訳
The process of the refund of the product will be started in a few days after it gets delivered to us and we confirm it.

The policy of the refund is written about in the following, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, the total refund of it will be done, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be done by 50%.
If the product has been returned to us according to your personal reason, we can not make a refund of the shipping charge you've paid. ↵
Also, you will be in charge of the carriage for the shipment.
We can not make a refund of the item in cases like it having been lost on the way to be shipped back to us.
We recommend you add transportation insurance to the shipping system if you return an expensive product to us.

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The refund of the product will go through in a few days after we receive and confirm it.

The policy regarding refunds is written below, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, a total refund will be given, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be 50%.
If the product has been returned to us because of personal reasons, you will be responsible for the shipping charge.
We can not make a refund of the item in the case that it was lost or damaged during shipping.
We recommend you add insurance if it is an expensive product.

元の翻訳
Dear Mr. LA SIESTA,

We appreciate your cooperaton.

We've paid for the received bills from the days 12th and 16th.
Please ship the product to us.

Sincerely,

Saori Hasegawa

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To: LA SIESTA

Dear Sir,

We've paid the received bills from the days 12th and 16th.
Please ship the product to us. ↵
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We would appreciate you for your cooperation in advance.

Sincerely,

Saori Hasegawa

元の翻訳
Dear Mr. LA SIESTA,

We appreciate your cooperaton.

We've paid for the received bills from the days 12th and 16th.
Please ship the product to us.

Sincerely,

Saori Hasegawa

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To: LA SIESTA,

Dear Ladies and Gentlemen↵
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We appreciate your cooperaton.

We've paid for the invoices dated 12th and 16th.
Please ship the product to us.

Sincerely,

Saori Hasegawa

元の翻訳
*It's possible that pictures will be taken for reasons like covering the event that day. It may happen that costomers will be in the photos, too, so please understand it in advance.
*Staying in the place for the event overnight from the day before would be trouble for residents in the neighborhood, so we've made a rule that it's forbidden.
*People who've been drinking or look like that aren't allowed to attend the meeting for handshake, so please understand it.
*It's possible that your hand baggage will be checked for the prevention of crimes when you're entering the place for the event. Please understand it beforehand.

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*It's possible that pictures will be taken for reasons like covering the event that day. It may happen that costomers [spelling] will be in the photos, too, so please understand it in advance [Please be aware that you may be videotaped or photographed?].
*Staying in the place for the event overnight from the day before would cause nuisance for residents in the neighborhood, so it's forbidden.
*Please be aware that people who have been drinking or look like that aren't allowed to attend the handshake event.
*It's possible that your hand baggage will be checked for the prevention of crimes when you're entering the event site. Please understand it beforehand.

元の翻訳
買い手が注文をする時は、注文中に言及された詳細は、はっきりと、関税を払うべき注文には関税が課せられるというのを示しているというのを、知って下さい。買い手に、関税はその品物の値段にも配送料金にも含まれていない請求料金なので、支払うように要求して下さい。

もし、買い手がその関税を支払う準備ができていなければ、あなたが返金処理を始められる様に、買い手にその商品を返品する様に頼んでもよいです。しかし、もしその商品があなたの所に戻らなければ、その買い手に返金処理をしてはいけないというのを知っておいて下さい。

上記の情報があなたにとって助けになるのを、望んでいます。

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買い手が注文をする際には、関税を払うべき注文には関税が課せられることが注文中に表示される詳細に明記されていることを、お知りおき下さい。買い手に、関税は当該商品価格および配送料金のいずれにも含まれていない請求料金なので、支払うように要求して下さい。

もし、買い手がその関税を支払う準備ができていないという場合には、あなたが返金処理を開始できる様に、その商品を返品する様に買い手に依頼することができます。しかし、当該商品があなたの元に返品されない場合には、その買い手に返金処理をしないで下さい。

上記の情報がお役に立てれば幸いです。