Noriko Duck (big_baby_duck) — 付けたレビュー

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Hello, I received the item.
However, I am very bewildered because the item's box and contents inside are severely damaged than expected.
I have been desperately trying to come up with a way to sell this item to our customer, but so far no idea hits upon me. Honestly, I am very much in trouble.

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Hello. I have received the item.
However, I am rather bewildered because its box and contents are more severely damaged than expected.
I have been desperately trying to come up with a way to sell it in this condition to a Japanese customer, but I haven't hit upon a good idea so far. Honestly, I am very much in trouble.

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Hello.
Thank you for purchasing from me.
I regret to inform you that the item you ordered is very popular which will result in a delayed shipment.
The expected shipment date for the item is anywhere between late November 2014 to early December 2014. I realize this is a long time to wait and will offer you a refund if you wish.
Please contact me if you would like your money back.
I am very sorry for making you wait so long, but I am unable to do anything about the current situation.
In any case, I will make sure to keep in contact until the transaction has been finalized, regardless of what you decide.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need anything.

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Hello.
Thank you for purchasing at my shop.
I regret to inform you that the item you ordered is very popular, which will result in a delayed shipment.
The expected shipment date for the item is anywhere between late November 2014 to early December 2014. ↵
I realize this is a long time to wait, so I will offer you a refund if you wish.
I apologize for the trouble, but would you please contact me if you hope to get your money back?
I am very sorry for making you wait long, but I am unable to do anything about the current situation.
In any case, I will make sure to keep contact with you until the transaction has been finalized.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need anything.

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Some people return items when they find small stains, minor scratches and folds etc. on boxes and packages.
Our company does not separate defective items that strictly, but we decide where they are defective or good under the standard according to Japan’s common sense.
We would appreciate your understanding as we need to keep clients’ confidence in your products.

In addition, we are very careful, but we suggest returning defective products to your company in order to avoid reporting the same defect twice.↵
In this way we think we can avoid refunding doubly.
Do you have any other good idea? ↵

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Some people return items even when they find small stains, minor scratches or folds etc. on boxes or packages of them.
Our company does not separate defective items that strictly, but we decide if items are good or defective under the standard according to Japan’s common sense.
We would appreciate your understanding as we need to keep our clients’ confidence in your products.

In addition, we are very careful, but we suggest it that customers return a defective item to your company in order to avoid them reporting the same defective one to you twice. ↵
We think you can avoid refunding doubly in this way.
Or do you have any other good idea?

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同じような商品を2つ出品されていらっしゃいますが、どちらのコンデョンの方が良いでしょうか? よろしくお願いします。

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同じような商品をいくつか、売り物用として出品されていらっしゃいますが、どれが最も良い状態のものなのか、教えていただきたいです。

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Fukuoka Marinemesse

TSUKUSU
092-771-9009

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Marine Messe Fukuoka

TSUKUSU
092-771-9009

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Fukuoka Marine messa

TSUKUSU
092-771-9009

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Marine Messe Fukuoka

TSUKUSU
092-771-9009

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ご意見有難く存じます。↵
感謝いたします。

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あなたのご文書、有難く存じます。そして、それに関して、あなたに感謝いたします。

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I apologize for making you wait.
I contacted the supplier and it appears that they will not resume operations until next week because this week is the Obon holiday. The order will ship to you around the 21st.
I apologize again for making you wait and ask for your understanding in this matter. Thank you.

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I apologize for making you wait.
I contacted the supplier and it appears that they will not resume operations until next week because this week is the Obon holidays. The order will be shipped to you around the 21st because of that.
I apologize again for making you wait and ask for your understanding in this matter. Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
I have the product in stock.
I would ship them if you purchased the items.↵
Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
I have the product in stock.
I will ship the item to you if you purchase it, so I appreciate your cooperation.

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I placed an order in below text.
Did you confirm the mail?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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I placed an order of a product in the text below other day.
Did you check the mail?

I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I would like you to ship the product A.
If you have shipped, please tell me tracking number.
In addition to this, You said that you can't set the reside of lacking product.↵
So please refund appropreate amount.
Thank you.

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I would like you to ship the product A.
After you ship it, please tell me the tracking number.
Also, you say you can't buy in the rest of the order out of your stock, so please give an appropriate amount of money back to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I am sorry to cause you inconvenience over the no delivery of your item.
I will investigate, but the tracking number check has finished today at the post office in Japan so I will try again tomorrow.
Sorry again for the trouble, could I ask you to wait till tomorrow please. Thank you.

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I am sorry to cause you inconvenience over the non-delivery of the item.
I will investigate, but the service for tracking the product down was finished at the post offices in Japan today, so I will try again and let you know about it tomorrow.
I'm sorry, but could I ask you to wait till tomorrow, please? I appreciate your understanding.

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Apply Here: http://?http://l-tike.com/tgs2014fc-0008/
http://l-tike.com/tgs2014fc-0008/

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Due to a system error, we have accidentally listed your great product.
When we received your notice, we withdrew the listing for the item.
We have certainly amended the system and will not list the item again.
Also having only listed the item, we have made no actual sales on Amazon so there is no loss to you.

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Due to a system error, we have accidentally listed a product of your right.
After we received your warning, we withdrew the listing for the item.
We have certainly amended the system and will never list the item again.
Also, having only listed the item, we have made no actual sales on Amazon, so there is no loss to you.

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I have recently stopped shipping products to Italy.
This is due to the country's strict customs checks and the long period of time it takes for items to make it through.
My buyers have issued complaints when their shipments take a long time to arrive, and because I send my items without tracking numbers, I cannot trace their packages.
In many cases, I am forced to refund their money, so I can no longer ship to Italy.
Please contact another seller. I apologize for the inconvenience.↵

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I have recently stopped shipping products to Italy.
This is due to the country's strict customs checks and the long period of time it takes for items to make it through.
My buyers have issued complaints when their shipments take a long time to arrive, but because I send my items without tracking numbers, I cannot trace their packages.
In many cases, I am forced to refund their money, so I will no longer ship to Italy.
Please contact another seller for purchase. I really apologize for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
[Tokyo] HARDBOILED NIGHT, The 5th night, "Promised Land"

*Information will be updated as soon as the details are decided.

Date: Sunday November 9, 2014
Venue: Akasaka Blitz

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【Tokyo】 HARD BOILED NIGHT No.5 "Promised Land"

※The information will be updated as soon as the details are decided.

Date Of The Event: Sunday, November 9, 2014
Place For It: Akasaka Blitz

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Song of Love

rhythm zone

If I could have only a wish come true.....This fall, we will release the frail and wistful love ballad "Song of Love".↵
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This is an absolute ballad singing the love delicate as glass devotedly.
Recorded the large tie-up song for cheering "World Judo Championships 2007" in the coupling, it includes 2 songs 4 versions in all. (Limited Edition, 2 songs 5 version in all)

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A Song of Love

Rhythm Zone

If we could make only one wish come true... She will release a wistful bittersweet love ballad "A Song of Love" this fall. It's a ballad of a rare value in which she sings about fine love like glass earnestly.
As for a coupling song, a big tie-up song to support "World Judo Championship 2007" is put together in the work. In total, four versions of two songs (five versions of two songs in first edition) are included in it.

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Skype allows you to talk to foreigners for free. Kory, I would have liked to talk to you once. But I can't speak English. Please provide me with someone who can speak Japanese. I will pay for the cost. You won't have to pay. It will end up being a three-way call but I would like to talk like that. Is this okay with you? Please let me know once you have a Skype ID. Thank you. And let's talk at a time that's convenient for you! At a time that won't cause any trouble for your daughter or your husband!

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Skype allows you to talk to foreigners for free. Kory, I would like to talk to you once. But I can't speak English. Please provide me with someone who can speak Japanese. I will pay for the cost. You won't have to pay. It will end up being a three-way call but I would like to talk like that. Is this okay with you? Please let me know once you have a Skype ID. Thank you. And let's talk at a time that's convenient for you! At a time that won't cause any trouble for your daughter or your husband!

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Thank you for message.

We'll send this goods by air, so it'll make it in time of july 13.

It's expected it'll arrive by July 10 at the latest.

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Thank you for your message.

We'll ship this product to you via air, so it'll arrive by July 13.

We expect it will be delivered to you on July 10 at the latest.

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Thank you for your message.

This product will be shipped using AIR, so it will arrive before July 13.

It will arrive on July 10 at latest.

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Thank you for your message.

This product will be shipped to you via AIR, so it will arrive by July 13.

We think it will be delivered to you on July 10 at the latest.

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We have placed your ordered item to EPSON, however we were informed that the item is currently out of stock and its next shippment schedule will not be any time after September. We have also tried to allocate the available inventory from the partner shops, however we could not find one for you. Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience caused.

You could either await till the next shipment or cancel the order. Which would be good for you?

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We have placed the order of the item you've purchased to EPSON which is a maker of it, however, we've got informed that it's out of stock and its shipment will not be before September. ↵
We have asked our partner shops to ship one in stock forward to us for help, too, but we've been told that it's out of stock at every one of them. ↵
We apologize from the bottom of our hearts.

You could either wait until we ship it after receiving it or cancel the order. Which would be good for you?

元の翻訳
What is the progress on the order number VIP201405294220?
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Have you already shipped it?

We received a claim from our customer.
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The customer needs the product by June 18th.

If you cannot deliver it, give us a refund without shipping it.
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Don't forget to reply this mail.

EOM

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How is the progress on the order number VIP201405294220?
Have you already shipped it?

We've received a claim from our customer.
We've been told that the person needs to get the product by 18th.

If you cannot deliver it to the customer by that day, please give us a refund of it not shipping it.
Don't forget to reply to this.

EOM