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The press release that carbon dioxide (CO2) concentration was over 400ppm has been issued for the past two years.

For example, the Meteorological Agency announced "monthly average value in the observatory in Ryori, Iwate was over 400ppm".

In May 10th in this year, Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration of the United States (NOAA) announced "daily average value of
May 9th date in Mauna Loa, Hawaii was over 400ppm".

Hawaii is an important observation point that has the longest observation records of CO2 concentration.

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Multiple press releases reporting that carbon dioxide (CO2) concentration exceeded 400ppm have been issued during the past two years.

For example, the Meteorological Agency announced "monthly average value in the observatory in Ryori, Iwate was over 400ppm".

On May 10th this year, Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration of the United States (NOAA) announced "daily average value on
May 9th in Mauna Loa, Hawaii was over 400ppm".

Hawaii is an important observation point that has the longest observation records of CO2 concentration.

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You can nullify the effects of ABC by setting PHP but you don' t have admin panel.
Thank you for nice update.
I hope if I can manage users by Database.
Also,I'm glad if XYZ texts would be replased to many kinds of lanuage　by auto.

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There is no admin panel but you can disable the ABC function by setting PHP.
Thank you for a nice update.
And this is a request but it would be very nice if I could manage users by Database.
Also, it would be nice if XYZ texts could automatically switch to different languages.

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POP Inc. published "event &MICE support company guide 2014-2015" on March 31, 2014.
"The event support company guide" is a guide book collecting up <Exhibition exhibition＞<meeting, society＞<preview, campaign＞<party symposium＞<sports, music, culture event> in a book.
As the company guide which helps companies, it is sorted by 13 types of industry!
A company profile, business contents, the main event results, the information of the main business partner are unified↵

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POP Inc. published "Event & MICE Supporting Company Guide 2014-2015" on March 31, 2014.
"Event Support Company Guide" is a guidebook that summarizes information about companies that support <Trade Fairs and Exhibitions><Meeting, Conferences><Preview Events, Campaigns><Parties, Symposiums><Sports, Music, and Cultural Events> in a single book. ↵

As a company guide which helps you with "events", it is sorted by 13 types of industry!
The book organizes information about company profiles, business contents, records of major events, and major business partners.

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I will commit to make ever efforts to increase our customer satisfaction.
For one of the efforts, I will introduce FBA.
I hereby declare that I will increase our customer satisfaction wIth ever better sales.
I love B-Germany.
Could you please give me a chance to sell B-Germany?
I hope you will take this into consideration.

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I will commit to making every effort to improve our customer satisfaction.
As one of the efforts, I will introduce FBA.
I hereby declare that I will improve our customer satisfaction with ever better sales.
I love B-Germany.
Could you please give me a chance to sell at B-Germany?
I hope you will take this into consideration.

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The item, which I had ordered, should have arrived on March 17; however, there is no record that it arrived to you.
According the tracking number, you received the item on March 17, which I had shipped.
Could you please check where the item I shipped is, urgently?
Thank you in advance.

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The item I ordered should have arrived on March 17; however, there is no record that it has arrived at your place.
According the tracking number, you received my item on March 17.
Could you please check where my item is as soon as possible?
Thank you in advance.

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Copyright

Hello,
Thank you for contacting me.
I do not sell false products.
Did your company verify this fact?
I would be really sad to hear that your sent me this without a close look at the facts.

I have noticed recently that our rival store is making these kind of groundless claims and damage the accounts of our sellers.
This makes me very sad.

I hope to hear from the seller/buyer who made the claim.
It is fair in this way.
Therefore, I will firmly support this.

I wish you luck!

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Copyright

Hello,
Thank you for contacting me.
I do not sell counterfeit products.
Did your company verify this fact?
I would be really sad to hear if you contacted me without a close look at the facts.

I have noticed recently that our rival store is making these kinds of groundless accusations to damage the accounts of sellers.
This makes me very sad.

I hope to hear from the seller/buyer who made the accusations
It is fair in this way.
Then, I will handle this appropriately.

I wish you luck!

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Thank you for your inquiry.

DId you get the cords for 5000yen?
Was it impossible for you to get it by the way I send you before?

Does Disital Cord mean the campain point that could be added ?
We would like to respond to your request as soon as possible , so could you contact us again?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Did you get the code for 5000 yen?
Were you not able to get it by the method I sent to you before?

By Digital Code do you mean the additional campaign points?
We would like to respond to your request as soon as possible , so could you contact us again?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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We have good responses from customers in exhibition.
Also, we receive a lot of questions.
About TP71, individuals enjoying circuit on his own or shop owners supporting them feel good.
They cared about mud or water when using in circuit. Is that problems?
Other customers gave attention to relationship with color of a wheel. You can provide silver caps, can't you?
Customers enjoying circuit on their own always care of air pressure, so We think that they can be the best customers as Early Adapter in Japanese market.
I want your reply as soon as possible.

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We have good responses from customers at exhibitions.
Also, we receive a lot of questions.
Individuals enjoying circuit on his own and the shop owners supporting them feel good about TP71.
They are concerned about mud or water when using it at circuits. Is that a problem?
Other customers were concerned about the matching of the color with wheels. You can make silver caps, can't you?
Customers enjoying circuit on their own always care about the air pressure, so we think that they can be the ideal customers as early adopters in Japanese market.
I would appreciate your reply as soon as possible.