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Xiaomi：次期発売タブレット Mi Pad、16セントでベータ版販売へ

今月上旬、中国で人気の携帯電話メーカーXiaomiが、近々販売が予定されているMi Padを7.9インチスクリーン、保存容量16GBで1499中国元（およそ$240）で売り出すと発表した。この発表は驚くような物ではないが、１点謎が残った。創始者のLei Jun氏は販売がいつになるのかは明らかにしなかった。

一般の中国人消費者がXiaomiのウェブサイトにログインしてMi Padを手に入れられるかはまだ分からないが、最後まで反対するようなファンはすぐに1人民元（およそ$0.16）というような衝撃を受けるだろう。

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Xiaomi：次期発売タブレット Mi Pad、16セントでベータ版販売へ

今月上旬、中国で人気の携帯電話メーカーXiaomiが、近々販売が予定されているMi Padを7.9インチスクリーン、保存容量16GBで1499中国元（およそ240米ドル）で売り出すと発表した。この発表は驚くような物ではないが、１点謎が残った。創始者のLei Jun氏は販売がいつになるのかは明らかにしなかった。

一般の中国人消費者が何時XiaomiのウェブサイトにログインしてMi Padを手に入れられるかはまだ分からないが、最後まで反対するようなファンはすぐに1人民元（およそ$0.16）というような衝撃を受けるだろう。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact to us.
It seems like the payment page is displayed in Japanese.
Please select the country "China", then it will be displayed in Chinese.
If this does not work well, please let me know then I will send you the invoice by e-mail.

I noted your request.
We will cancel the item, and send invoices for the rest 4 items.

Hello, I hope this e-mail finds you well.
In regard to the item you inquired the other day, since another customer has cancelled, we are now able to offer to you.
Please kindly let me know if you still have intention to purchase it, or anything else you might want to purchase from us.

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Thank you for your contacting us.
It seems like the payment page is displayed in Japanese.
Please select the country "China", then it will be displayed in Chinese.
If this does not work well, please let me know then I will send you the invoice by e-mail.

I noted your request.
We will cancel the item, and send invoices for the remaining 4 items.

Hello, I hope this e-mail finds you well.
In regard to the item you inquired the other day, since another customer has cancelled, we are now able to offer to you.
Please kindly let me know if you would still like to purchase it, or anything else you might want to purchase from us.

元の翻訳
We are ready to carry out the above mentioned sales plan.
I aim at the seller that I carry out these plan properly, and get a trust by a buyer.
↵
That is all, and then could you consider the sale return?
Thank you in advance.

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We are ready to carry out the above mentioned sales plan.
By properly carrying out these plans, I will do everything in my power to be a seller who gains the trust of the buyers.
Based on the above statement, could you please consider reinstating my selling privilege?
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Referring to your inquiry,
When you choose the shipping by Japan Post, Canadian post will delivery the goods continuously after arriving.
The goods have been bought by the customers of Canada several times, however, there have been no problem.
Please consider it. Best regards.

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Hello.
Referring to your inquiry,
when you choose the shipping by Japan Post, the Canadian post office will take over the delivery after the package arrives in Canada.
This product has been purchased by customers in Canada several times, but there have been no problems.
Please take it into consideration. Best regards.

元の翻訳
もう一つeBayアカウントを所有してますか？弊社と販売するのは初めてですか？

eBayでどのような商品を販売する予定ですか？ 新品それとも中古品ですか？

eBayに何個商品を出品する予定ですか？

販売予定の商品はどこから仕入れますか？

販売予定の商品は平均でおいくらでしょうか？

入金完了した後、どのくらいの速さで商品を出荷しますか？

どの配送方法を利用予定しますか？ 配送追跡システムを導入予定ですか？

PayPal経由で入金を行いますか？ もしそうでないなら、入金の際はどこをご利用予定ですか？

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もう一つeBayアカウントを所有してますか？弊社と販売するのは初めてですか？

eBayでどのような商品を販売する予定ですか？ 新品それとも中古品ですか？

eBayに何個商品を出品する予定ですか？

販売予定の商品はどこから仕入れますか？

販売予定の商品は平均でおいくらでしょうか？

入金完了した後、どのくらいの速さで商品を出荷しますか？

どの配送方法を利用予定しますか？ 配送追跡システムを導入予定ですか？

PayPal経由で入金を行いますか？ もしそうでないなら、入金の際はどこをご利用予定ですか？

元の翻訳
#habit
I've checked the change of USPS tracking information.
Thank you for your prompt procedures.
With your help, sales in Japan is very favorable.
Exhibition on ebay has been reduced, so Do you wait the product arrival from the maker
#Amazon.
Today, I contact you because I have make the return goods document .
Name of goods.
Quantity.
Method of transport.
Tracking number.
Fee of return goods.
Sorry for troubling you but please pay back to me the fee of return goods.

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#habit
I've checked the updated USPS tracking information.
Thank you for your prompt processing.
With your help, sales in Japan is very favorable.
The number of listings on ebay has decreased. Is it because you are waiting for the products from the manufacturer?
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#Amazon.
I am contacting you to inform you that I have processed the return today.
Name of goods.
Quantity.
Method of transport.
Tracking number.
Fee of return goods.
Sorry for troubling you but please refund the shipping cost for the return.

元の翻訳
2. It was a mistake that buyer didn't take the product after it arrived.↵
We received the contact by buyer on May 20, to informed that buyer would check out the hotel on May 21. We accepted the requirement of cancellation at this moment (May 20). Then we promised we will return the payment after we received the product in Japan.
We said that if buyer checked out the hotel, please told the staff of the hotel ABSOLUTELY DO NOT received the delivery of our products. We confirmed buyer had acknowledgement, because once the staff of the hotel received the delivery, buyer must pay the delivery fee. The product would automatically returned to Japan if no one received the delivery, and buyer need not to pay the delivery fee.

This is the process and action we took of above.
We reclaim that we could not return the payment until we receive the product without damage as we claimed at the first place.

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2. It was a mistake that buyer didn't take the product after it arrived. [this sentence doesn't make sense]↵
We were contacted by the buyer on May 20 and were informed that buyer would check out the hotel on May 21. We accepted the cancellation at this point (May 20). Then we promised we would refund the payment after we receive the product in Japan.
We said that if the buyer checked out the hotel, please tell the staff of the hotel ABSOLUTELY DO NOT receive the delivery of our products. We confirmed buyer had acknowledgement, because once the staff of the hotel received the delivery, buyer must pay the delivery fee. The product would automatically returned to Japan if no one received the delivery, and buyer need not to pay the delivery fee.

This is the process and action we took of above.
We reclaim that we could not return the payment until we receive the product without damage as we claimed at the first place.

元の翻訳
The setting of our system includes a mistake, a product of the indication exhibited it by mistake.
Currently, the system is improved.

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The setting of our system includes a mistake, a product of the indication exhibited it by mistake.
Currently, the system is improved.↵
↵
[There was an error in the setting of our system and the indicated(or mentioned) product was listed by mistake.]

元の翻訳
Would you largely make it inexpensive, if I purchase several?

Is there have any Japanese company making a deal elsewhere?

I want to purchase with a low price of Japan.


In the one that import it from the United States and sell,
The sales price of the low is 13,000 yen in Japan (approximately $ 125).

We can not win at price competition by the price that you showed us.

I am terribly sorry only for this demand,
We will purchase it in large quantities.(Or we will purchase other model) that being the case,
can I have your consideration?


It continues regularly and will purchase it in future.

We ask for your consideration on this matter.

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Would you largely make it inexpensive, if I purchase several?
[How many do I have to buy to receive a larger discount?]↵

Is there have any Japanese company making a deal elsewhere?
[Do you do business with any other companies in Japan?]↵

I want to purchase with a low price of Japan.
[We are hoping to buy at the lowest price in Japan.]

In the one that import it from the United States and sell,
The sales price of the low is 13,000 yen in Japan (approximately $ 125).
[Out of those that import from the U.S. and sell in Japan, the lowest retail price is...]
↵
We can not win at price competition by the price that you showed us.
[We cannot compete with the price you gave us.]↵

I am terribly sorry only for this demand,
We will purchase it in large quantities.(Or we will purchase other model) that being the case,
can I have your consideration?
[I am sorry for making a lot of requests but I plan to buy in large quantities (or will also buy other models), so could you please take it into consideration?]

It continues regularly and will purchase it in future.↵
[I will continue to buy from you regularly in the future]

We ask for your consideration on this matter.

元の翻訳
I have checked my own watch.

First, pull two steps of the knob(the stem) on the right side.
After that when turns the stem, the second hand move.
Then you can adjust its home.

The reasons for unmoving cause fallowing below.

・The stem is being locked.

・The stem is imperfectly pulled two steps.
-N.B. please do not do so by force.

・Its battery is critically low.

・The means to turn the stem in speed is too fast or slow.

・Its radio wave is unsuccessfully received.

・Dual-time mode is incompletely chosen.

I am afraid, please confirm again the manual in English.

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I have checked my own watch.

First, pull the crown on the right side by two notches/steps.
After that when turns (what turns?) the stem, the second hand moves.
Then you can adjust its home.

The possible reasons for (unmoving cause following below: doesn't make sense).

・The stem is being locked.

・The stem is imperfectly pulled two steps.
-N.B. please do not do so by force.

・Its battery is not sufficiently charged

・The way the crown is turned is too fast or slow.

・Its radio wave is unsuccessfully received.

・It is not set to the dual-time mode.

(I am afraid: where does this come from?), please confirm again the manual in English.