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日本語

二酸化炭素（CO2）濃度が、400ppmを超えたという報道発表がこの2年間たてつづけに出されている。たとえば、昨年5月には気象庁が「岩手県綾里の観測所の月平均値が400ppmを超えた」と発表した。今年5月10日には、アメリカの海洋大気庁（NOAA）が「ハワイのマウナロアのデータで5月9日の1日の平均値が400ppmを超えた」という発表をした。ハワイはCO2濃度の最も長い観測記録を持っている重要な観測地点である。

英語

The press release that carbon dioxide (CO2) concentration was over 400ppm has been issued for the past two years.

For example, the Meteorological Agency announced "monthly average value in the observatory in Ryori, Iwate was over 400ppm".

In May 10th in this year, Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration of the United States (NOAA) announced "daily average value of
May 9th date in Mauna Loa, Hawaii was over 400ppm".

Hawaii is an important observation point that has the longest observation records of CO2 concentration.

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元の翻訳
The press release that carbon dioxide (CO2) concentration was over 400ppm has been issued for the past two years.

For example, the Meteorological Agency announced "monthly average value in the observatory in Ryori, Iwate was over 400ppm".

In May 10th in this year, Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration of the United States (NOAA) announced "daily average value of
May 9th date in Mauna Loa, Hawaii was over 400ppm".

Hawaii is an important observation point that has the longest observation records of CO2 concentration.

修正後
Multiple press releases reporting that carbon dioxide (CO2) concentration exceeded 400ppm have been issued during the past two years.

For example, the Meteorological Agency announced "monthly average value in the observatory in Ryori, Iwate was over 400ppm".

On May 10th this year, Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration of the United States (NOAA) announced "daily average value on
May 9th in Mauna Loa, Hawaii was over 400ppm".

Hawaii is an important observation point that has the longest observation records of CO2 concentration.