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元の翻訳
Hello.
We are under investigation of the non delivery Item.

I would like to ask you that have you got any contact from custom about your request for rapidly refund?

It is the onus on clearing thru Customs is Buyers by eBay agreement.

If it is applicable of embargo goods, please take the procedure of refund.

We will refund deducting the service charge and our default practical sending fee.
In case of loss or any cause that we admit that you are not responsible of, we will pay full refund.
Please wait for survey response form.
Thank you for your corporation.

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Hello.
We are under investigation of the non delivery Item.
"We are under investigation" > 我々が捜査されている、という意味になります。
non delivery item > undelivered item ↵
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I would like to ask you that have you got any contact from custom about your request for rapidly refund?
??? 英文の意味が不明↵

It is the onus on clearing thru Customs is Buyers by eBay agreement.

If it is applicable of embargo goods, please take the procedure of refund.

We will refund deducting the service charge and our default practical sending fee.
In case of loss or any cause that we admit that you are not responsible of, we will pay full refund.
Please wait for survey response form.
Thank you for your corporation. ↵
↵
細かい文法ミスや単語の選択ミスが多く、文章として外国人が↵
読んで意味が不明な箇所も多く、ビジネスメールとしては厳し↵
いです。

元の翻訳
I would like to refound US＄67 through paypal because there is a mistake about hood description.
Can you accept this settlement?
I will be waiting for your reply.
Best Regards.

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I would like to refund US$67 that you paid through paypal because there was a mistake in the description of the hood.
Can you accept this settlement?
I look forward to your response.
Best Regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry. This product will be send by airmail, therefor there will be no tracking code. If you have any other questions please let us know by email. Please wait a while until your goods arrive.

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Thank you for your inquiry.↵
This product will be sent by airmail, therefore there is no tracking number.↵
If you have any other questions please let us know by email.↵
Please wait a while until your goods arrive.

元の翻訳
Is this your first travel in Japan?

Many foringners come to Shirosaki recently.
Shirosaki has 7 public bath house.
I reccommend you "Go Sho No Yu","Iti No Yu"and"Kou No Yu".You must go there with Kevin while you are in Japan.

How was Tokyo? Where did you go?

They are YUKATA and SETTA.Defenitely It will good on you.Do you want to have them? I 'll present some for you this time.

Can we go to HANANOYA? Or not?
How long dose it take to Japan from U.S.? Aren't you tiered?

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Is this your first visit to Japan?

Many foreigners come to Shirosaki recently.
Shirosaki has 7 public bath houses.
I recommend you "Go Sho No Yu","Iti No Yu"and"Kou No Yu". You must go there with Kevin while you are in Japan.

How was Tokyo? Where else did you go?

They are YUKATA and SETTA. Defenitely they will look good on you. Do you want them too? I'll get you as a gift next time.

Do you want to go to HANANOYA now? What should we do?
How long does it take to Japan from the U.S.? Aren't you tired?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

I only accept the payment with PayPal.
I do not understand the payment method other than that.

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Thank you for your message.

I only accept the payment with PayPal.
>I have only [used/dealt with] Paypal before.↵
I do not understand the payment method other than that.
>I do not know about other methods.

元の翻訳
Is it possible to delivery to China? I bought goods from here.
If it is possible, can you tell me about delivery charges?

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Is it possible to have the goods I buy here delivered to China?
If it is possible, can you tell me the delivery charge to Qingdao?

元の翻訳
We need you regulate voltage of eight to twelve 3-watt LED to connect series circuit.
In this case, do we need to pay an additional charge?

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We need you to adjust the voltage so that we can use eight to twelve 3-watt LEDs connected in series.
In this case, do we need to pay an additional fee?

元の翻訳
Since I was the kid, I felt the infinity spread from the stone found at the river, the seashell washed by wave at the beach, and the flower at the road. I have been thinking that someday I would like to obtain it beautifully. Now I became adult, and it is getting achieved with the skill of the sculpture.
More than finishing the accessories, finding the stone at the beach is creative for me.
When I feel that the stone on the ground is more beautiful than the jewelry, I realize that the world is really the wonderful place.

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Since I was a kid, I felt the infinity spread from the stone found at the river, the seashell washed by wave at the beach, and the flower at the road. I have been thinking that someday I would like to wear them beautifully. Now I became an adult, and I am starting to achieve [that dream] with the skill of the sculpture.
More than finishing the accessories, finding the stones at the beach is a creative activity for me.
When I feel that the stone on the ground is more beautiful than the jewelry, I realize that the world is really a wonderful place.