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元の翻訳
香港スタートアップのSky Droneはあなたを無人操縦機で空の旅へ

あなたはかつて体験したことがあるだろうか。無人操縦機で空を飛ぶ楽しさを。もちろん面倒なミリタリーでの体験ではなく。

香港発のスタートアップ SkyDroneはあなたの夢を叶える。
もちろん軍用機を提供するわけではない。むしろ操縦機自体提供しない。

SkyDroneが開発した搭載カメラを実際の操縦機に搭載しAppを起動することで、スマートフォンを通じてまるで自らが操縦しているかのような体験が出来るのである。↵

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香港スタートアップのSky Droneはあなたを無人操縦機で空の旅へ

あなたは無人操縦機を飛ばす楽しさを味わいたいと思ったことがあるだろうか。軍隊に入ることに伴う面倒や心的外傷無しに。

香港発のスタートアップ SkyDroneはあなたの夢を叶える。
もちろん軍用機を提供するわけではない。それどころか、操縦機自体も提供しない。

SkyDroneが開発した搭載カメラを実際の操縦機に搭載しAppを起動することで、スマートフォンを通じてまるで自らが操縦しているかのような体験が出来るのである。

元の翻訳
I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we started our business in the USA. You were very kind to us who were not good at English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking to make an order on 22 August.

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I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we did business with in the USA. You were very kind to us who could barely speak English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking of placing an order on 22 August.

元の翻訳
Long time no see everyone! It's flower member!
It's finally summer isn't it!

I've watched lots of good summer cartoons, but my best recommendation is definitely○○!

●●was also interesting, of course, but ○○was so imaginative!

The characters' bathing suits and muscles were so fine and they had such cool faces.

It's been a long time since I've seen real-looking muscles....

I particularly like the main character, Haruka, and the young guy Nagisa!

Haruka has a cool character, and Nagisa has numbingly cute behaviours...!

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Long time no see everyone! It's flower member!
It's finally summer isn't it!

I've watched lots of the first episodes of the summer animes, but my best recommendation is definitely○○!

●●was also interesting, of course, but ○○was better than I imagined!

The characters' muscles were so fine in their bathing suits even though they had such cool faces.

It's been a long time since I've seen real-looking muscles in anime....

I particularly like the main character, Haruka, and the young guy Nagisa!

Haruka has a cool character, and Nagisa has numbingly cute behaviours...!

元の翻訳
Germany
I checked the status with the delivery company and found the parcel had god lost.
DHL should have lost it.
It may take long to trace and find the item.

I would like to sugguest you the following to two options to prevent you from further troubles.

1. Full refund
2. Reshipment of new item
* Reorder and shipment will not be charged.

Please advice me.
Have a nice day!

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Germany
I checked the status with the delivery company and found that the parcel has gotten lost.
DHL may have lost it.
It may take a long time to track down the item.

I would like to suggest you the following two options to save you from further troubles.

1. Full refund
2. Reshipment of new item
* Reorder and shipment costs will not be charged.

Please advice me.
Have a nice day!