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元の翻訳
I know that you can check order status for me, but I have ever ordered this goods before. Every time I received them there was a leak ; and the box and the manual was often wet. Please the pictures of them that I attach to this e-mail. This time I do not want to receive that kind of goods, so please check whether there was any leak before shipping and ship me goods that has no leak. I am looking for your reply.

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You can check my order status, but I have ordered this product before. The last time I received them, many of the boxes and the manuals were wet from the leak. Please check the pictures of them that I attached to this e-mail. This time I do not want to receive that kind of goods, so please check for any leaks before shipping and ship me only those items that have no leaks. I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply immediately. I understood his solution is a harmless non-toxic . But I think that to you can see even through the photograph was attached to my e-mail, package and manual got wet by the leak liquid from the product. Is this a trouble of the product? Or the specifications of the product is with such a leak of liquid? Some of the products that I received do not leak. Seemingly liquid leakage due to failure of the product, or the problem occur on the specification, we will wait for your answer.

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Thank you for your quick reply. I understood this solution is harmless and non-toxic . But I think that as you can see even in the photograph attached to my e-mail, the package and manual got wet by the liquid leaking from the product. Is this a defect of the product? Or do the specifications of the product allow such a leak of liquid? Some of the products that I received do not leak. Is the liquid leakage due to a failure of the product, or can the problem occur based on the specification? We look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Powdered green tea is including to a lot of dietary fiber and vitamin, and your wake up will be freshed by caffeine effect.

Effect for diet and beauty whitening skin
The element of catechin and caffeine including to tea have great effect for diet.
Catechin has effect to refrain from absorbing fat and Caffeine has effect to burn the fat.

As powdered green tea is a tea which we can drink all of nutrition of tea leaves,
it has much more effect than normal drinking tea.

Catechin has antioxidant effect and detoxification effect,
so it has effect to prevent from catching a cold and effect for beauty skin.
Vitamin C including to powdered green tea is absolutely necessary for blotch and freckle treatment.

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Powdered green tea is including to a lot of dietary fiber and vitamin, and your wake up will be freshed by caffeine effect.

Effect for diet and beauty whitening skin
The element of catechin and caffeine including to tea have great effect for diet.
Catechin has effect to refrain from absorbing fat and caffeine has effect to burn the fat.

As powdered green tea is a tea which we can drink all of nutrition of tea leaves,
it has much more effect than normal drinking tea.

Catechin has antioxidant effect and detoxification effect,
so it has effect to prevent from catching a cold and effect for beautiful skin.
Vitamin C including to powdered green tea is absolutely necessary for blotch and freckle treatment.

元の翻訳
This product 100V AC.
Many of our customer, who from America, did not use the power transformer, but for safety, it is better to use power transformer.
The aroma function comes with aroma tablet for trial.
Thank you for your consideration.
We received your request change of address, but can not address change here on the Amazon system.
In the following procedure customers should cancel your order, after that, you can put your new order and then fill in the correct address again
Sorry for the trouble, but I would appreciate your favor.

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This product is [works on] 100V AC.
Many of our customers, who are from America, seem to be using it without a power transformer, but for safety and to prevent damage, it is better to use a power transformer.
The aroma function comes with aroma tablets for trial.
Thank you for your consideration.
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We received your request for change of address, but we cannot change the address here due to the Amazon system.
In the following procedure you should cancel your order, after that, you can place your new order and then fill in the correct address again.
Sorry for the trouble, but I would appreciate your favor.

元の翻訳
Thank you for shopping with us.
The items that you bought missed on the way to our warehouse and we will order again.

We will do our best to send you until the 20th but if we can't we will contact you again.Could you please wait a little more?If you can't,you can cancel your order.We apologize about this inconvenience.

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Thank you for shopping with us.
The items that you bought got lost on the way to our warehouse and we will order again.

We will do our best to send you by the 20th but if we can't we will contact you again. Could you please wait a little more? If you can't, you can cancel your order. We apologize for this inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Do you think you can make it to the concert this year?
I really would like you to go. I can't wait for the dates to come out!
I am crossing fingers for you to get driver's license and you can go to their concert this year!
Someone might have gave you already but I though you might like this? If you do, I am happy to send this to you. Is there any treats that you want?
Please wait patiently.
I will only go to Japan tour.
I don't like that kind of game.
I love your drawings! You are a good painter!

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Do you think you can make it to the concert this year?
I really would like you to go. I can't wait for the dates to come out!
I am crossing fingers for you to get driver's license and you can go to their concert this year!
Someone might have given you already but I thought you might like this? If you do, I am happy to send this to you. Are there any treats that you want?
Please wait patiently.
I will only go to Japan tour.
I don't like that kind of game.
I love your drawings! You are a good painter!

元の翻訳
Thank you for changing your feedback.

Will it be any chance to change it to positive? Because neutral feedback is hard for us to keep business at ebay. We can further discuss on compensation.Please give us a chance.

Look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best Regards

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Thank you for changing your feedback.

Is there any chance for you to change it to positive? Because neutral feedback makes it hard for us to keep business going at ebay. What more can we do to have you change the feedback to positive? .Please give us a chance.

Look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best Regards

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
As I checked Japan post site as below, item is delivered on December 30th but it was returned to closed post and kept there due to absence.
Please tell the tracking number below at your closest post office to find out when it is expected to be arrived. I am very sorry to cause you trouble but It would take long to respond any inquiry from overseas. Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your message.
As I checked the Japan Post website as shown below, the item was delivered on December 30th but it was returned to the nearby post office and is being kept there because of your absence.
Please tell the tracking number below at your closest post office to find out when it is expected to be delivered. I am very sorry for the inconvenience but It would take long to for them to respond to any inquiry from overseas. Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us about its arrival.
We are glad that you received it.
It is an authentic and correct camera.
To reduce the tax for the customer, we list the price at
a little lower at the package.
We apologize to have made you confused by it.
If you need a receipt with correct amount, we will send it by data or mail.
We appreciate your understanding.

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Thank you for contacting us about its arrival.
We are glad that you received it.
It is certainly an authentic and correct camera.
To reduce the tax for the customer, we list the price at
a little lower value on the package.
We apologize for the confusion as a result of this.
If you need a receipt with the correct amount, we will send it by data or mail.
We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
While I was handling the payment on Paypal, the error caused. I tried again, and I placed the same order twice.

Although I would like to buy 3 units, I might buy 6 units.

I am very sorry, but please cancel on 3 units.

I would appreciate it you could deal with the refund.

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While I was handling the payment on Paypal, an error occurred. So I tried again and I ended up placing the same order twice.

Although I would like to buy 3 units, I might have bought 6 units.

I am very sorry, but please cancel the order for the 3 units.

I would appreciate it if you could deal with the refund.

元の翻訳
I would like to order you. That is why I confirmed you.
But I can't order because it is not convenience that send me the product photographs of website.
I would like to contact with you as soon as possible.
If you contact with me today, I will order today.
Please get in touch immediately.

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I would like to order from you. {order youではあなたに命令するという意味になってしまいます}↵
That is why I checked with you.
But I can't order because [[it is not convenience that send me the product photographs of website. この部分は意味不明]]
I would like you to contact me as soon as possible.
If you contact me today, I will order today.
Please get in touch immediately.

元の翻訳
Why have I not been available my account? For I haven't finish the payment?

Though payments were paid from the same card I had used, why could I not do like that?

Please tell me why? It's confusing and sadness for me not to sell anything.

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Why have I not been available my account?↵
>文として意味がわかりません。主語は？↵
>Why has my account been suspended?↵
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For I haven't finish the payment?
>この文で直すとしたら "Because I haven't finished the payment?"となりますが、↵
>原文と比べてもあまりよい訳とは言えません。↵

Though payments were paid from the same card I had used, why could I not do like that?
>この文も直訳気味と、表現が不自然すぎます。↵

Please tell me why? ↵
>Please tell me whyは疑問文ではありません。↵
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It's confusing and sadness for me not to sell anything.
>同じく表現が不自然すぎます。confusingとは原文にはありません。↵
>ストレートに訳すとすれば、↵
>I am very sad that I cannot sell anything.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry.
This item is cosigned by an outsider, and we have sold by a merchandise resource being said it is the item validated. We are sorry for not checking enough and gave you trouble.

We will owe the repair payment, and refund $15 which is a little more than it supposed to be.

We are really sorry for making you an unpleasant feeling.
We will try our best not to make any more of such things.
We will take your time. Thank you for your cooperation.

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I am very sorry.
This item is cosigned by an outsider, and ↵
[[we have sold by a merchandise resource being said it is the item validated.]] > this sentence doesn't make sense.↵
"we have been selling based on the supplier's information that the product had been functionally tested."↵
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We are sorry for not checking enough and gave you trouble.

We will owe the repair payment, and refund $15 which is a little more than it is supposed to be.

We are really sorry for making you feel unpleasant.
We will try our best not to have something like this happen again.
[[We will take your time.]] too literal. ex. "We apologize for your troubles but.."↵
Thank you for your cooperation.