yukio — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
私は、耳の部分の不格好なデザインに問題があると感じました。風を切って走るときにこれを付けていると、フィットしていない感じがあります。私たちのバイクには風防がついていますので、特に問題はありません。ゴーグルはフィットしますが、最後までガッチリとはめ込まないと使用に耐えません。一日中使用しても、電池の消費はごく僅かでした。今のところの最大の不満は、一日中走り回ってヘルメットを取ると、耳がたいへん痛むということです。それは丁度、サングラスの上にスカルキャップを被るような感じです。わかりますよね？全体的には、インターカムなどの、これらの機能性は私たちの期待していたものよりも高かったですし、その長所は短所を上回っていると言えるでしょう。

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私は、耳の部分の不格好なデザインに問題があると感じました。風を切って走るときにこれを付けていると、フィットしていない感じがあります。私たちのバイクには風防がついていますので、特に問題はありません。ゴーグルはフィットしますが、最後までガッチリとはめ込まないと使用に耐えません。一日中使用しても、中くらいの充電量が残っていました。今のところの最大の不満は、一日中走り回ってヘルメットを取ると、耳がたいへん痛むということです。それは丁度、サングラスの上にスカルキャップを被るような感じです。わかりますよね？全体的には、インターカムなどの、これらの機能性は私たちの期待していたものよりも高かったですし、その長所は短所を上回っていると言えるでしょう。

元の翻訳
このヘッドセットは、まさに私と夫がずっと探していたものなのです！私がこのレビューを書いたのは、どうやら皆ヘルメットと一緒にこのヘッドセットを使用しているみたいだからです。私たち二人共自分のバイクを持っていて、これを見つけるまではヘルメットを被っていませんでした。というのは、これまで私たちにぴったりで、使用に耐えるインカムがなかったものですから。最初にこれを着けて走ってからは、正にこれが求めていたものだと思いました。インカムは驚くべきほど綺麗な65mphの音声です。ヘッドフォンは本物のステレオで、速度が遅い時はすばらしい音なのですが、速度を早めるとすぐに、音質は下がります。75mphのインカムはしかしまだ大丈夫です。音質は完璧ということはありませんが、私たちの期待していたものよりも良いと思います。

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このヘッドセットは、まさに私と夫がずっと探していたものなのです！私がこのレビューを書いたのは、どうやら皆ヘルメットと一緒にこのヘッドセットを使用しているみたいだからです。私たち二人共自分のバイクを持っていて、これを見つけるまではヘルメットを被っていませんでした。というのは、これまで私たちにぴったりで、使用に耐えるインカムがなかったものですから。最初にこれを着けて走ってからは、正にこれが求めていたものだと思いました。インカムは驚くべきほど綺麗で時速65マイル以下では驚くほどすばらしい音声です。ヘッドフォンは本物のステレオで、速度が遅い時はすばらしい音なのですが、速度を早めるとすぐに、音質は下がります。時速75マイルではインカムはしかしまだ大丈夫です。音質は完璧ということはありませんが、私たちの期待していたものよりも良いと思います。

元の翻訳
このヘッドセットは、まさに私と夫がずっと探していたものなのです！私がこのレビューを書いたのは、どうやら皆ヘルメットと一緒にこのヘッドセットを使用しているみたいだからです。私たち二人共自分のバイクを持っていて、これを見つけるまではヘルメットを被っていませんでした。というのは、これまで私たちにぴったりで、使用に耐えるインカムがなかったものですから。最初にこれを着けて走ってからは、正にこれが求めていたものだと思いました。インカムは驚くべきほど綺麗な65mphの音声です。ヘッドフォンは本物のステレオで、速度が遅い時はすばらしい音なのですが、速度を早めるとすぐに、音質は下がります。75mphのインカムはしかしまだ大丈夫です。音質は完璧ということはありませんが、私たちの期待していたものよりも良いと思います。

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このヘッドセットは、まさに私と夫がずっと探していたものなのです！私がこのレビューを書いたのは、どうやら皆ヘルメットと一緒にこのヘッドセットを使用しているみたいだからです。私たち二人共自分のバイクを持っていて、これを見つけるまではヘルメットを被っていませんでした。というのは、これまで私たちにぴったりで、使用に耐えるインカムがなかったものですから。最初にこれを着けて走ってからは、正にこれが求めていたものだと思いました。インカムの音声は毎時65マイル (およそ105km/h) の走行でも驚くほど鮮明です。ヘッドフォンは本物のステレオで、速度が遅い時はすばらしい音なのですが、速度を早めるとすぐに、音質は下がります。インカムの音声は毎時75マイル (およそ120km/h) でも聞き取れます。音質は完璧ということはありませんが、私たちの期待していたものよりも良いと思います。

元の翻訳
Sehr geehrten Damen und Herrn,

wir bestätigen ihre Rücksendeantrag.

Haben Sie schon den Artikel bekommen?

Wenn noch nicht, lehnen Sie den Empfang einfach ab.
Wenn Sie schon ihn gehabt haben, bitte, schicken Sie ihn nach Japan zurück.
Dann gehen Sie aufs Ihre Bestellung bei Web seite und verfahren weiter.
Die Adresse, die Sie ihn retour senden, o.ä. werden wir Sie dabei bekannt lassen.

Wenn die Rücksendung vom Käufer gewünscht wird, müssen die entsprechenden Versandkosten und zusätzliche Gebühren vom Käufer getragen werden.
Für weitere Informationen stehen wir Ihnen gerne zur Verfügung.

Mit freundlichen Grüßen,

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Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,

wir bestätigen mit Bedauern Ihren Rücksendeantrag.

Haben Sie den Artikel bereits erhalten?

Falls nicht, lehnen Sie den Empfang einfach ab.
Falls Sie ihn bereits erhalten haben, schicken Sie ihn bitte nach Japan zurück.
In diesem Fall leiten Sie bitte über Ihre Bestellungshistorie in Ihrem Account die Rückgabe ein.
Die Adresse, an die Sie den Artikel bitte zurückschicken, und weitere Informationen werden Ihnen dabei angezeigt.

Wir möchten Sie bitten, durch die Rücksendung anfallende Kosten zu übernehmen.
Für weitere Informationen stehen wir Ihnen gerne zur Verfügung.

Mit freundlichen Grüßen,

元の翻訳
I want to order 60 of this product.
Please send an invoice to me by Paypal.

If possible, could I have you deliver that directly to Japan?
As I use our DHL account, so shipping charges will be paid upon delivery.

I am looking forward to your reply.

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I want to order 60 of this product.
Please send an invoice to me by Paypal.

If possible, could I have you deliver them directly to Japan?
As I use our DHL account, shipping charges will be paid upon delivery.

I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
お買い上げどうもありがとうございます。
誠に申し訳ないのですが、指定していただいた住所にお届けできませんでした。
御手数ですが、代わりの住所をご提示願えますでしょうか。
もしご提示できないということであれば、購入はキャンセルさせていただきます。

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お買い上げどうもありがとうございます。
誠に申し訳ないのですが、弊社では運送業者宛に発送しておりません。
御手数ですが、代わりの住所をご提示願えますでしょうか。
もしご提示できないということであれば、このお取引はキャンセルさせていただきます。

元の翻訳
I am afraid it is is a direct message, so you need not to reply.

Thank you for modifying the Script for posting to SNS service.
I tested at the Demo-site, could you encode the URL of the name of artists and songs.
If it is not encoded, we can not post a link on Twitter or something like this.

*If not encoded, the URL is as follows.

I am sure it is not the problem only in Japanese version, so please take care of the matter.

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Excuse me for contacting you through a direct message, so you need not to reply.

Thank you for making correction on the script for posting to SNS service.
I tested it on the Demo-site, but could you encode the URL for the names of artists and songs.
If it is not encoded, we can not post a link on services such as Twitter as below:

*If not encoded, the URL is as follows.

I am sure this is not the problem limited in Japanese version, so please take care of the matter.

元の翻訳
I meant to send out yesterday, but, I could not finish my work and could not go to a post-office.
So, I sent out today. I am sorry to be so late.
By the way, I went gathering clams with my nephew. I am all tired out.

It is true that ○ is not a person of that type to say words instinct with love.
I am sure that ○ will say "I love you." in the last episode.

Three of ◇ are now in stock. I put on display the product, so please bid on as soon as possible if you would like. We do not expect to be restocked it any further at the moment.

We do not accept the shipment without the tracking number.

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I meant to ship the item out yesterday, but, I could not go to the post-office as I could not finish my work.
So, I shipped it out today. I am sorry for taking so long for me to get it done.
By the way, I went to clam digging today with two of my nephews. I am all tired out.

○ certainly is not a type of person who would verbalize affection.
I am sure that ○ will say "I love you." in the last episode.

Three of ◇ are now in stock. I have listed them, so please bid on it as soon as possible if you are interested. We do not expect them to be restocked any further at the moment.

Currently we do not offer the shipment through shipping services without tracking numbers.

元の翻訳
Deutsch-Messe and HanoversTurky woll hold Metal Works fair called "WIN Eurasia Metalworking" from 5 to 8 June at the TUYAP Fair Convention and Congress Center ( Istanbul ).

This fair is also known as the gateway to success in the Eurasian Continent. At the same time, a welding fair "Welding EURASIA" and metal surface treatment and cutting metal fair "Surface Treatment EURASIA" was held. This fair forms the largest scale of international expert fair for a manufacturing industry in the Eurasian Continent.

the Japan External Trade Organization (JETRO) will hold a Japan pavilion.

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Deutsche Messe and Hanover Turkey will hold a Metal Works fair called "WIN Eurasia Metalworking" from 5 to 8 June at the TUYAP Fair Convention and Congress Center in Istanbul.

This fair is also known as the gateway to success in the Eurasian Continent. At the same time, a welding fair "Welding EURASIA" and metal surface treatment and cutting metal fair "Surface Treatment EURASIA" was held. This fair forms the largest scale of international expert fair for the manufacturing industry in the Eurasian Continent.

The Japan External Trade Organization (JETRO) will set up a Japan pavilion.

元の翻訳
<The precious experience>

Though there is a demilitarized zoneI, I took part in the tour with somewhat uneasiness, because the number two at the North Krorean Republic has been executed recently at a public place. The participants were came from all over the world, most of them are the westerner.
The defectors from North Korea told us their experiences, and I fell really sorry for them.
Fortunately, I could enter Panmunjom, furthermore i could even visit North Korea in the building. When I visit there, I felt a bit strage.↵

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<A Precious Experience>

Though this is a demilitarized zone, I took part in the tour with somewhat uneasiness because the number two at the North Korean was executed recently in public. I was surprised as there were more people there than I expected. There were also many Westerners and I realized that the interest in North Korea is worldwide.
The defectors from North Korea told us their experiences, and I felt really sorry for them.
Fortunately, I could enter Panmunjom, furthermore I could even enter North Korea from inside a building. It felt a bit strange.

元の翻訳
<The tour with tension>

Though I have ever took part in the optional tour all over the world, I have never felt nervous so much so far. The look and tone of local guide in the bus made us tense. He emphasized us to keep rules, or he would be fired. We took a short rest on the way and continued our journey to Panmunjom. It takes an hour to get there. Firstly, The korean soldier checked up on each participants and it was not so strictly. We got finally checked up two times.

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<The tour with tension>

Though I have taken part in optional tours in various countries, no tour made me feel nervous. First, the facial expression and tone of a local bus guide made us tense. He emphasized their strict rules. He warned us to respect them otherwise he would be fired. We took a short rest on the way and continued our journey to Panmunjom. It took an hour to get there. There were 2 inspection points to enter Panmunjom. The first one was done by Korean soldiers. I thought they just needed certification of the inspection because it was less strict than I expected.

元の翻訳
I wonder, although Germany and Vietnam have been united for many years, why there are so many of problems between the so-called compatriots even now. The tour to Korea, where apparently prosperous, made us feel " war" for real.

It was extremely fascinating that a woman defected from North Korea told us the story about the situation in North Korea and responded to our questions. Unfortunately, she could come with us part of the way. By the way, the owner of the restaurant has been changed and, therefore the amount of the meat of the meal has been decreased. It seems negotiations are under way.

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I wonder, although Germany and Vietnam have been united for many years, why there are so many of problems between the so-called compatriots even now. The tour to Korea, where apparently prosperous, made us feel " war" for real.

It was extremely interesting that a woman defected from North Korea was accompanied with the guide who showed us aroud part of the way and answered the question on the status of North Korea (she couldn't accompanied only part of the way because it would be a trouble if she got away at the meeting room. By the way, we were mentioned that the owner of the restaurant for lunch changed and the amount of the meat of the meal decreased. (It seems that increase in it is under negotiations)

元の翻訳
<The precious experience>

I think we had a really precious experience. I participated the both tour to "The third tunnel" and Panmunjom. Visiting both tourist spots, makes us think about the history of North and South Korea. So much of tours are recommended to us when we visit South Korea. Above all, you should absolutely take part in the tour I mentioned above. I spent a worthwhile time there.

<Ruins of the Cold War>
We visit the Panmunjom, where is built at the cold war era.

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<The precious experience>

I think we had a really precious experience. I participated the both tour to "The third tunnel" and Panmunjom. Visiting both tourist spots gave us a chance to makes us think about the history of North and South Korea. Although many tours are available, you should absolutely take part in this tour when you visit South Korea. I could spend a worthwhile time there.

<Ruins of the Cold War>
We visited the Panmunjom which was built in the Cold War era.

元の翻訳
We went across the Bridge of Freedom to a transport corps. Until we reach there, we got checked passport up two times. After the explanation, I signed a contract with a beating heart. The time had come at last to enter Joint Security Area with another bus, possesing only a camera. In Panmunjom, I saw a UN soldiers who stood absolutely still, and we were allowed to take pictures. I had mixed feelings. Though only a small number of people accompanied, because the local guide explained so politely and thoroughly, I am satisfied with the tour.

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As for the tour in question, we went fromBridge of Freedom to a transport corps. Until we reached there, we got passport checked two times. After the explanation by slide, I signed a contract with a beating heart. The time had come at last to enter Joint Security Area after changing buses, carrying only a camera. In Panmunjom, I saw a UN soldiers who stood absolutely still, and we were allowed to take pictures. But I had a mixed feeling. Because we were a party and the local guide explained so politely and thoroughly, I am satisfied with the tour.

元の翻訳
If I get another chance I will definitely participate in that.

As a memory, I purchased bills and coins of the North Korea and album which our exclusive cameraman had made.

<Impressions of the JSA(tour to Panmunjom)>

In my opinion, thought is undeniable that the tour to Panmunjom lost substances due to long peace, I am very sutisfied with the actually experience which made our mind clear realistically by looking the place where two forces confronted each other.
I would like you all, putting aside your ideology, to recommend to visit there and it is worth visiting.

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If I have another opportunity, I will definitely participate in the tour.

I purchased bills and coins of the North Korea and a photo album which our exclusive cameraman made as a memory.

<Impressions of the JSA (tour to Panmunjom)>

In my opinion, the tour to Panmunjom seemed to lose substances due to long peace. However, I am very satisfied because I could see that two forces really confronted each other with my own eyes.
Regardless of your ideology, it is worth a lot to visit there and have direct experience.

元の翻訳
When I went to the cease-fire line where Korean and American army defence, I felt nervous and felt it for real. ↵
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<The Hisory of the World>

The local guide were kind and full of knowledge and experience.

You can carry only a cell phone and a camera. Your passport must be in your pocket. So, it may be conivenient to wear clothes with pockets when you visit there.

We were shown the sad incident happened there and it made me think about that.

I took my 12-year-old child there, and I think we had a precious experience.

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<The History of the World>↵
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I really experienced the Korean and American armies protecting the national bordre. I also felt the tension.

The local guide was kind and very knowledgeable.

Since you may only carry a cell phone and a camera, and your passport must be in your pocket, I think it is best to wear clothes with pockets when you go there.

They explained us the the unfortunate incident that had happened there and made me conscious of it.

I took my 12-year-old child there, and I think we had a precious experience.

元の翻訳
<The actually experience of militaly tunnel, DMZ and cease-fire line>

Several years ago, we intended to participate the JSA tour to Panmunjom, it was canceled due to the state visit of the President of the United States.
My wife looked moved by seeing the tunnel and DMZ for the first time.
We dropped in on the supermarket at the united village, it was lucky we found so many of goods we cannot purchase in that of Seoul. South Korea is advanced country, so we could also used the credit card.↵

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<The realistic experience of militaly tunnel, DMZ and cease-fire line>

Several years ago, we intended to participate a↵
one day JSA tour to Panmunjom, but it was canceled due to the state visit of the President of the United States.
My wife looked moved by seeing the tunnel, DMZ and the border for the first time.
We dropped in on the supermarket at the united village, it was lucky we found so many of goods we cannot purchase in that of Seoul. South Korea is advanced country, so we could also use the credit card.