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I ordered very vicky on Sep 15.
The order number is ...
I've waited the parcel so long, but it haven't come.
The trucking number is ...
Could you look into where it is now?
Thanks you.

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I ordered very vicky on Sep 15.
The order number is ...
I've waited for the parcel so long, but it hasn't come.
The tracking number is ...
Could you look into where it is now?
Thank you.

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The base in the photograph is sample.
The bases’ grain and pattern differ each because we purchase them from the wholesaler.
I can divide this invoice into two ones.
I e-mail you the two invoices of PayPal after the purchase. So please make payments with them.

Invoice 1
$ 600
Invoice 2
$ 534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $ 999.99 + shipping fee $ 135)

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The base in the photograph is sample.
The bases’ grain and pattern differ each because we purchase them from the wholesaler.
I can divide this invoice into two.
I will e-mail you the two invoices through PayPal after your purchase, so please use these to make the payments.

Invoice 1
$600
Invoice 2
$534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $999.99 + shipping fee $135)

元の翻訳
These bases of pictures are samples.
Each actual merchandises is a little different because I purchase it from a wholesaler.

I can divide an invoice into two.
Please pay on Paypal when you received those two invoices in e-mails that I will send you after your purchasing.

Invoice #1
$600

Invoice #2
$534.99

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These bases in the pictures are samples.
The wood grain and patterning will be a little different as they were purchased from a wholesaler.

I can divide the invoice into two payments.
Please pay on Paypal when you receive those two invoices by e-mail that I will send you after your purchase.

Invoice #1
$600

Invoice #2
$534.99↵
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Total↵
$1134.99 (Item $999.99 + Shipping $135)

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I am really sorry to be late. The goods are assembled today.
The weight of the goods is 1.75kg, e-Packet mailing cost is $28.
Insurance will be to $60.
The mailing cost of EMS is $36.
The total of here is compensated. Please choose the one you prefer.
The total amount is $370 for e-packet and $378 for EMS.

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I am really sorry to be late as always. The goods all came together today.
The weight of the goods is 1.75kg, so the e-Packet mailing cost is $28.
We can only do the insurance for $60.
The mailing cost by EMS is $36.
We compensate the full amount. Please choose the one you prefer.
The total amount is $370 for e-packet and $378 for EMS.

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Thank you for bidding this item.

It is sufficient to use P67 45mm lens and 120 film that you already have plus the battery ( 4LR44 or 4SR44 ) to take pictures with this camera.

Do not worry because the camera works perfectly.

The difference between other published mirror up model is the external appearance which is slightly different and its accessories.

Do not worry because the camera works perfectly.

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Thank you for bidding for this item.

The P67 45mm lens and 120 film that you already have, as well as a battery ( 4LR44 or 4SR44 ) are all you need to take pictures with this camera.

Do not worry because the camera works perfectly.

The difference between this and the other listed mirror up model is its external appearance which is slightly different and its accessories.

Do not worry because the camera works perfectly.

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According to some source, a selfish ant can live longer

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According to some sources, ants which don't work appear to live longer

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According to some article, ants who don't work seem to live long.

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According to some articles, ants who don't work seem to live longer.

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Is this model in perfect condition?
Are there any bulges of glass parts or like that?
Are there any grimes of the adhesion bond or like that?
I am looking for a perfect model.

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Is this model in perfect condition?
Are there any bulges in the glass parts?
Is there any grime from the glue?
I am looking for a perfect model.

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Is this model in perfect condition?
Is there a flaking in the glass parts?
Is there a remaining dirty glue?
I am looking for a perfect one.

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Is this model in perfect condition?
Is there a flaking in the glass parts?
Is there any remaining dirt from the glue?
I am looking for a perfect one.

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Does this model have a perfect condition?
Are there any convexes on the glass part?
Are there any dirt of glue?
I am looking for the perfect model.

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Is this model in perfect condition?
Are there any convexes in the glass part?
Are there any glue blemishes?
I am looking for a perfect model.

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The customer is coordinating within their company to place an order from our company. However, they may not order all at once since they are not in a rush for the due date.

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The client is making adjustments internally to make orders with our company. However, they may not order all at once since they are not in a rush with any deadline.

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I'm sorry!!

I sent you a message by mistake, which was meant for someone else.

Your products are really popular in Japan and my customers really liked them.

Thank you very much.

I would like to purchase good items from you again.

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I'm sorry!!

I sent you a message by mistake, which was meant for someone else.

Your products are really popular in Japan and my customers really liked them.

Thank you very much.

I would like to purchase such good items from you again.

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I am sorry for the inconvenience. I just shipped the item and sent you a tracking number, so please confirm it. Thanks to your cooperation, I was able to complete the transaction smoothly. I am looking forward to doing business with you again. I hope you can take many nice pictures. Thank you.
With EMS, I can ship as many items as you wish. With e-Packet, I can ship 5 or 6 at maximum since one item weighs 300 grams.

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I am sorry for the inconvenience. I just shipped the item and sent you a tracking number, so please check. Thanks to your cooperation, the transaction went smoothly. I am looking forward to doing business with you again. I hope you can take many nice pictures. Thank you.
With EMS, I can ship as many items as you wish. With e-Packet, I can ship up to 5 or 6 at a time since one item weighs around 300 grams.

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I understand your situation.
However, I've been in trouble with other customer related to this issue before.
I'm afraid I cannot send the item to address other than the one registered on PayPal.
Please change the address on PayPal or cancel the order.
This is my rule that I cannot change.

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I understand your situation.
However, I've had trouble with other customers related to this issue before.
I'm afraid I cannot send the item to an address other than the one registered on PayPal.
Please change the address on PayPal or cancel the order.
This is my rule that I cannot change.

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Thank you for your email.
I am sorry to hear that you have not received the item yet.

Would you tell me the item name you have not received yet?
And, if you inform me the order ID , I will be able to proceed for the reimbursement or ship the item again.

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Thank you for your email.
I am sorry to hear that you have not received the item yet.

Would you tell me the name of the item you have not received yet?
Also, if you provide me the order ID , I will be able to proceed with the reimbursement or ship the item again.

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The file seems to be too large for us to receive.
Would you divide it to several files and send?

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The file seems to be too large for us to receive.
Could you please divide it into several files and send them?

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It seems that I can't receive it because the file size is too big.
Could you cut it into parts and send it this way?

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It seems that I can't receive it because the file size is too big.
Could you split it into parts and send it to me?

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Is additional fee required for adding logo to the goods?
I am thinking olive color for the sheet. Is any sample picture available?

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Is an additional fee required for adding logos to the goods?
I am thinking of using olive color for the sheet. Are there any sample pictures available?

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・If I want to add a logo to a product, should I pay additional charges?
・I want to use olive color in the sheet, then is there a sample picture of it?

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・If I want to add a logo to a product, do I need to pay additional charges?
・I'm considering making the sheet color olive. Do you have any sample pictures?

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I'd say it's a pretty aesthetic and profound work of art since this is created by a filmmaker.

In this last 2 years since the founding, we gained a small reputation, held our class 15 times and about 200 efforts have been created.
Those works have been uploaded on You Tube.
Said that, a moment when we instantly comment our works each other on the spot is the most fun time.

Not only take a stroll and gaze at a town, but try to find 'something' to make them into a work so you could actively converse with a town and bring out its characteristics.

By making good use of a degital camera and PC techniques, we newly create charms of people and the town they live in.

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I'd say it's a pretty aesthetic and profound work of art since this is created by a filmmaker.

In these last 2 years since establishment, we gained a small reputation, held our class 15 times where about 200 works have been created.
Those works have been uploaded on You Tube.
With that said, the moments when we comment on each other's works on the day they are created is the most improvisational and interesting part.

Not only take a stroll and gaze at a town, but try to find 'something' to make into a work by actively conversing with the town and bringing out its characteristics.

By making good use of a digital camera and PC techniques, we newly bring forth the charm of people and the towns they live in.

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How much time will it take for the reset of all module inserted under the default configuration?

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How much time will it take to reset with all modules inserted under the default configuration?