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日本語

それに伴い、本作業において、
　
黄金町が「基点」として描かれている作品を目標とし欲しいです。
　例えば））黄金町の家から、違う街へ出かける作品の場合、はじめは黄金町にいた事が伝わるような作品にしたり、帰ってくるところが黄金町の駅だったりと、行動の基点が黄金町にある事を示唆するような作品にしてみるとか・・・。
もちろん黄金町の中だけで撮影してもかまいません。
上記前提をもとにして、作品作りに取り組んでいただければと思います。
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英語

Along with that, in this work,

I want Koganecho to be the goal of work depicted as a "reference point".
For example)) From a house of Koganecho, in the case of a work getting out to a different town, the first is to do the work transmitting things which come from Koganecho, and to be the Koganecho station when you come back home, so trying to make a work which provide indications of things taking place at Koganecho reference point of action and so on ...
It can of course take place only in Koganecho.
I think assuming the work with above-mentioned conditions would be greatly appreciated.
Detailed rules and points below

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ilyatranslationはこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2013/09/19 15:01:40

元の翻訳
Along with that, in this work,

I want Koganecho to be the goal of work depicted as a "reference point".
For example)) From a house of Koganecho, in the case of a work getting out to a different town, the first is to do the work transmitting things which come from Koganecho, and to be the Koganecho station when you come back home, so trying to make a work which provide indications of things taking place at Koganecho reference point of action and so on ...
It can of course take place only in Koganecho.
I think assuming the work with above-mentioned conditions would be greatly appreciated.
Detailed rules and points below

修正後
Along with that, in this work,

I want you to aim at a piece of work that depicts Koganecho to be the "reference point".
For example)) In a case which a character goes out from a house in Koganecho to another town, try to make a piece that shows the character was in Koganecho at first, or shows that the character comes back to Koganecho station. In such way, you can make a piece that shows the reference point of action is at Koganecho and so on...
Of course, you can just shoot scenes only at Koganecho.
I'd like you to make your piece with above advises.
The followings are detail rules and some points to note.

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2014/01/20 22:24:35

This looks machine translated