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Have you checked the shipping fee of the tea service that I knocked down?
Also, I would like to deposit the total fee to your bank account, so please tell me your bank information.
I'll be waiting for your reply,

Thank you.

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Have you checked the shipping fee of the tea service that I won the bid for?
After that, I will transfer the total fee to your bank account, so please tell me your bank information.
I'll be waiting for your reply,

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I have the following questions for you:

Do you have a TourID Band?
Please tell me the length you need.
Do you have a serial number?
Do you have a genuine rocker cover?

I have got the photographs ready, so please check that there are no discrepancies between them and the real item.

How would $330 be?

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I have the following questions for you:

Do you have a TourID Band?
Please tell me its length.
Do you have a serial number?
Do you have a genuine head cover?

I have got the photographs ready, so please check that there are no discrepancies between them and the real item.

How would $330 be?

元の翻訳
I'm really sorry that my reply was a lit bit late, because I referred to the Amazon.

I'm afraid to say that you misunderstand this problem.
This product is sold in one of them not a case.
I cannot understand why you make an assertion as case sale.

I guess if you requested this item from the different page before.
Please look at the page you requested once again.
This product is not sold with a case.

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I'm really sorry. I made an inquiry to Amazon so my reply was a bit late..

I'm afraid to say that you misunderstand this problem.
This product is sold individually and not as a case.
I don't understand why you believe it's sold as a case.

Perhaps you requested this item from a different page before.
Please look at the page you requested from once again.
This product is not sold as a case.

元の翻訳
I received a claim from a customer when I sent the product.
The claim was that this product should be sold as a bunch, not only one.

I thought the product on this catalog is for only one, so I sent the customer only one.
I don't understand why this product is sold by case.

Is this product sold by case?
If so, how many should be in one case?

Or, should this be sold one each?

Please check as soon as possible.

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I received a complaint from the customer when I sent the product.
The claim was that this product should be sold by the case, not individually.

I thought the products on this catalog were sold individually, so I sent the customer only one.
I don't understand why this product is sold by the case.

Is this product sold by the case?
If so, how many should be in one case?

Or, should this be sold individually ?

Please check as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I am out of office from yesterday to tomorrow. I will let him or her answer on Monday. If you are in a hurry, I will ask him or her to answer immediately.

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＊＊＊ has been out of the office since yesterday but will return tomorrow. I will have ＊＊＊ reply to you on Monday. If it is urgent, I will ask ＊＊＊ to reply immediately.

元の翻訳
I am very interested in this product.
I would be grateful if you could send me a few pictures of it.

Best regards.

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I am very interested in this product.
I would be grateful if you could send me a few pictures of it so I can get a better feel for the product.

Best regards.

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late response.

I have already shipped the item, so would you close the case that you have opened?

Thank you so much.

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Sorry for the late response.

I have already shipped the item, so would you close the case that you have opened?

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your e-mail.
Please take a careful look to the explanation.
This product will be shipped from Japan.
It will take about 8 to 16 days to reach.
Therefore, I am afraid to say that it is impossible to deliver the product by 3rd of August.
May you please cancel your order.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
Please take a careful look at the explanation.
This product will be shipped from Japan.
It will take about 8 to 16 days to reach you.
Therefore, I am afraid to say that it is impossible to deliver the product by 3rd of August.
Could you please cancel your order?

元の翻訳
I realize you have shopped at our store just recently.

Sorry I was busy and did not notice.

Since you’ve purchased once, we can reduce the price of （商品名）to $540 (including the cost to ship with EMS) if we can do the transaction without going through eBay.

In that case, I will send an invoice via PayPal and then you will make a payment.

Or we can register the item at our online store and ask you to make payment there. ↵

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I realized you have shopped at our store just recently.

Sorry I was busy and did not notice.

Since you've purchased from us once, we can reduce the price of （商品名）to $540 (including the cost to ship with EMS) if we can do the transaction without going through eBay.

If you accept, I can send an invoice via PayPal and then you can make the payment.

Alternatively we can register the item at our online store and ask you to make payment there.

元の翻訳
I understood the situation.
This time I don't mind if it's not an AC adaptor with PSE.
I will contact you later about the AC adaptor.

Please ship today.

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I understand the situation.
This time I don't mind if it's not an AC adaptor with PSE.
I will contact you later about the AC adaptor.

Please make the shipment today.

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Apologies to my late response as I was having my regular day off.
I have instructed to the Quantium Soulutions Inc to open the cardboard boxes and to take a picture of the product. Also explained that it will be the proof to show that it has surely been shipped.
I think that they wouldn't peel the shrink pack off from the product, but I suggest you to contact directly to Qiantium by email with your name VP294790 HL Joo just to make sure.
Thank you.

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Apologies for my late response as I was having my regular day off.
I have instructed Quantium Soulutions Inc to open the cardboard boxes and to take a picture of the product. I've explained to them to use it as proof to show that it has definitely been shipped.
I think that they wouldn't peel the shrink pack off from the product, but I suggest you to contact directly to Qiantium by email with the name VP294790 HL Joo just to make sure.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I tried to translate the Japanese maintenance manual that I have. I hope these instructions will be useful to you.

Usual maintenance
Soon after use, wash it well enough with a sponge with detergent, then rinse.
Wipe the water away after rinsing.

Maintenance in case it's very dirty
1. In case of discoloration
Fill the kettle with water up to about 70%, add 3 spoons of vinegar, put it over fire and heat it up.
It doesn't have to be boiled, just warming it up is enough. Move the kettle around so that the hot water can clean the inside of the kettle thoroughly.

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I tried to translate the Japanese maintenance manual that I have. I hope these instructions will be useful to you.

Usual maintenance
Soon after use, wash it thoroughly with a sponge with detergent, then rinse well.
Wipe the water away after rinsing.

Maintenance against heavy stains
1. For discoloration
Fill the kettle with water up to about 70%, add 3 spoons of vinegar, put it over the fire and heat it up.
It doesn't have to boil, just warming it up is enough. Move the kettle around so that the hot water can clean the inside of the kettle thoroughly.

元の翻訳
We are interested in buying ○○.
In the case we buy 24 pcs., how much is the unit price Including the shipping cost?
Our desired price is about $100.

As for cosmetics, up to 24 pcs. are allowed to be imported according to the regulation. So, we will place an order for 24 pcs. if we decide to buy.
If they are selling well, we are thinking of buying one or two time per month.

As we have an interest in △△,if possible, please send your price list for this item.

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We are interested in buying ○○.
In the case we buy 24 pcs, how much is the unit price Including the shipping cost?
Our desired price is about $100.

As for cosmetics, up to 24 pcs for each item are allowed to be imported according to regulations. So, we will place an order for 24 pcs if we decide to buy.
If they appear to be selling well, we are thinking of buying one or two times per month.

As we have an interest in △△, if possible please send your price list for this item.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
Can a Kate Spade shopping bag be included?
Thank you.

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Thank you for contacting me.
Could you include the Kate Spade shopping bag?
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
"Pre-washed rice" is rice that you can cook instantly, without washing it.

This rice is a sort called "Akita Komachi".
It's rice grown with minimal use of pesticides.
Recipes allowing anyone to cook good rice easily are enclosed.
You can have a taste of Japan very easily, it's made to be almost the same as the rice you could eat in Japan.

Put 500ml of cold mineral water and the rice into your rice cooker.
After you put rice and water in the cooker, wait for 30 minutes.
After 30 minutes have passed, turn the cooker's switch on.

The cold mineral water and waiting 30 minutes are the key points.

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"Pre-washed rice" is rice that you can cook instantly, without washing it.

This rice is a type called "Akita Komachi".
It's rice grown with minimal use of pesticides.
Recipes allowing anyone to cook good rice easily are enclosed.
You can have a taste of Japan very easily, it's made to be almost the same as the rice you could eat in Japan.

Put 500ml of cold mineral water and the rice into your rice cooker.
After you put rice and water in the cooker, wait for 30 minutes.
After 30 minutes have passed, turn the cooker's switch on.

The cold mineral water and waiting 30 minutes are the key points.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your detailed explanation. I could understand very well.
I always appreciate your careful bundle packaging of items and discount.
I think I will increase the amount of business with you, so please keep a nice deal with me hereafter also.

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Thank you for your detailed explanation, it was easy to understand.
I always appreciate your extra gifts and discounts.
I think I will increase the amount of business I do with you, so please continue to deal with me in the future.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the item which I ordered the other day.
However, there is actually a possibility that the good would be stopped at the custom clearance.
Should that happen, the proof of purchase might be necessary.
As such, would you mind sending me an email pertaining to the specifications of my order request (with the price listed on it) as soon as possible? My order number is 12345. For the monetary value of the product, kindly identify clearly between the price of product and the shipping fee.
Apologize for the inconvenience that this may cause you.
Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for sending me the item which I ordered the other day.
However, there is actually a possibility that the good would be stopped at the custom clearance.
Should that happen, the proof of purchase might be necessary.
As such, would you mind sending me an email pertaining to the specifications of my order request (with the price listed on it) as soon as possible? My order number is 12345. For the monetary value of the product, kindly identify clearly between the price of product and the shipping fee.
I apologize for the inconvenience that this may cause you.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I'm visiting Barkeley, California to participate in summer school.
Herds of turkeys can be seen walking around the college in this country town, but everything neccessary to live happy seems to be here.
I meet so many different people everyday, and it's so exciting. One more month to go in Barkeley. I can't go home in Japan before visiting to Napa valley!

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I'm in Berkeley, California to take summer school.
Flocks of turkeys can be seen walking around the college in this country town, but everything necessary to live happily seems to be here.
I meet so many different people everyday, and it's so exciting. One more month to go in Berkeley. I can't go home to Japan before visiting Napa valley!

元の翻訳
Some parts of the story didn't convince me though I enjoyed seeing how a new soldier grew up to become a veteran. After all, experience makes a man a first-rate soldier. By the way, I'm wondering if restaurants abroad charge tea after meal. Well, in Japan, at a certain TV personality chef's restaurant, it seems they charge you for water you didn't order.

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Some parts of the story didn't convince me though I enjoyed seeing how a new soldier grew up to become a veteran. After all, experience makes a man a first-rate soldier. By the way, I'm wondering if restaurants abroad charge for tea after a meal. Well, in Japan, at a certain TV personality chef's restaurant, it seems they charge you for water you didn't order.