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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2013/09/11 10:48:19
・商品にロゴを入れる場合、追加の費用は必要ですか？
・シートの色をオリーブにしたいと考えていますが、見本の画像はありますか？
・If I want to add a logo to a product, should I pay additional charges?
・I want to use olive color in the sheet, then is there a sample picture of it?
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元の翻訳
・If I want to add a logo to a product, should I pay additional charges?
・I want to use olive color in the sheet, then is there a sample picture of it?
修正後
・If I want to add a logo to a product, do I need to pay additional charges?
・I'm considering making the sheet color olive. Do you have any sample pictures?
First sentence: 'should' sounds voluntary,
Second sentence: "I want..." sounds too definite. They are only thinking about/considering it
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