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I have received a mail saying "Complete your purchase" again.

I have completed payment. What is going on?

When do you ship my order?

Please let me know as soon as possible.

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I have received a message saying "Complete your purchase" again.

I have completed payment so what is going on?

When will my order be shipped?

Please let me know as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
Hello,
my name is ○○。

I've recently ordered from your company in large quantities.
I'd love to keep ordering from you--is your Net-Shop being actively maintained?
If it's quite alright, I just wanted to contact you to see if you might inform me on this matter.

My e-mail address is：abc123★gmail.com（Please change "★" to "@"）

Thank you in advance.

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Hello,
my name is ○○。

I've recently ordered from your company in large quantities.
I'd love to keep ordering from you--do you have an online store?
If it's quite alright, I just wanted to contact you to see if you might inform me on this matter.

My e-mail address is：abc123★gmail.com（Please change "★" to "@"）

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
This is email concerns packages ID 22, 33, and 44.
I have sent an email a few days ago, but there was still no reply.
Please forward these three packages to the following address

xxxx

Since the "Return to Sender" button cannot be selected on the login page, this email will be my request for returning theses packages back to the sender. I have purchased these items via Paypal, and after inquiring about the address of the seller, this address was given to me in their reply.

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This is email concerns packages ID 22, 33, and 44.
I sent an email a few days ago, but there is still no reply.
Please forward these three packages to the following address

xxxx

Since the "Return to Sender" button currently cannot be selected on the login page, this email will be my request for returning these packages back to the sender. As for why this address is the delivery address, it is because I purchased these items via Paypal. After inquiring about the address of the seller, this address was given to me in their reply.

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I'm going to purchase the small size one. Would you tell me about the defects specifically? I'd like to see the picture of it if possible.

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I'm going to purchase the S-size one. Could you tell me about the defects specifically? I'd like to see a picture of it if possible.

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It is planned to buy S size. Could you tell us particular defects of S size? I want to see the photograph, if possible.

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I plan to buy the S size. Could you tell me the particular defects it has? I want to see a photograph if possible.

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I will purchase a S-size. Could you tell me a concrete defect? If possible, I'd like to watch its photo.

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I will purchase the S-size. Could you tell me the exact defect? If possible, I'd like to see a photo.

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Only exhibiter account will be disengaged, buyer account stays
registered.
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Thank you for your comperehension.

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Only the seller account will be terminated but I will leave the buyer account.

Thank you for your understanding.

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I received the ring yesterday. It is beautifully crafted. I am very confident that ordering the production to you was the right decision. Thank you very much.

We will begin setting up the sales website from the beginning of next year. I think full scale sales will begin around march.

From my experience it takes a while before an item starts to sell regularly. It depends on the item but it takes roughly around 3 months.

therefore　I think it will take a while before we make a repeat order. I am sorry to repeat this again but please do not destroy the mold type we built this time.

If sales do not pick up within a year I will contact you again including the destruction of the mold type.

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I received the ring yesterday. It is beautifully crafted. I am very confident that ordering the production from you was the right decision. Thank you very much.

We will begin setting up the sales website from the beginning of next year. I think full scale sales will begin around march.

From my experience it takes a while before an item starts to sell regularly. It depends on the item but it takes roughly around 3 months.

Therefore I think it will take a while before we make a repeat order. I am sorry to repeat this again but please do not destroy the mold type we built this time.

If sales do not pick up within a year, I will contact you again regarding the destruction of the mold type.

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・Does not include AC adapter.
・This Nintendo 3DS is a domestic Japanese model.
Please ensure that you use the correct AC adapter and charger for your country.
・ We are unable to guarantee this unit when used with software sold outside Japan.

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・Does not include AC adapter.
・This Nintendo 3DS is a domestic Japanese model.
Please ensure that you use the correct AC adapter and charger for your country.
・ We are unable to guarantee this unit will work with software sold outside Japan.

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Thank you for your reply so quickly.

I refunded all budget $176.44 via paypall.

Please check your account.

I will send you evaluation list.
I am happy to positive evaluation.

I am willing to your cooporation.

I want to study more by this transaction.

if I can help you, please feel free to contact me.
I will do my best next time.

I am willing to unfair promotion.

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Thank you for your quick reply.

I refunded all $176.44 in expenses via Paypal.

I will appreciate it if you could confirm this for me.

I am sending you a change of evaluation request.
I will appreciate you positive evaluation.

I am sorry to put you through all this extra effort.

I want to learn from this experience and improve my business from here forward.

if I can be of help to you, please feel free to contact me.
I will do my best next time to redeem myself.

I truly forward to your future patronage.

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I'd like to order a product # xxx-xxx, but it's not on the shop website.
Can't I place an order of xxx-xxx any longer?

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I'd like to order product # xxx-xxx, but it's not on the shop website.
Can't xxx-xxx be ordered anymore?

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20 shafts from True Temper had arrived here.
We didn't make any order for this, we would like to return them.
We are looking forward your reply.

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20 shafts from True Temper have arrived here.
We didn't make any order for this, so we would like to return them.
We are looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
We received twenty the shaft from True Temper.
Because we did not order, please let us to send back them.
We look forward to hearing from you.

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We received twenty shafts from True Temper.
As we did not order them, please allow us to send them back.
We look forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you for the questions.

I do not have those items.

As you may know, those packs and boxes are very unusual and can be hard to find in any Japanese store or auction sites. But if I have the chance, I will be buying them.

I will be selling them　whenever I find them.
Please check my ebay site from time to time.
Although I may not have a number of items, I do have a selection of unusual goods.

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Thank you for the questions.

I do not have those items.

As you may know, those packs and boxes are very unusual and can be hard to find in any Japanese store or auction sites. But if I have the chance, I will buy them.

Once I obtain them I will put them up as a listing.
So please check my eBay site from time to time.
Although I may not have a large number of items, I do have a selection of unusual goods.

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As you know, we already started promotion activity such as exhibition within Japan.
Additionally, although we have secured budget to purchase TPMS that is 315.5Mhz from you, we need to think about another means when we cost is too high that is actually needed.

As for Japanese market, we analyze that TPMS market will grow drastically in 2014. And Japanese potential TPMS market is huge.
How strongly do you wish to challenge this huge Japanese market?
Please let us know about your idea after consulting with your management team well.

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As you know, we have already started our promotions including exhibitions within Japan.
Additionally, although we have secured the budget to purchase TPMS at 315.5Mhz from you, we need to think about another means for when the actual necessary expenses are very high.

As for the Japanese market, our analysis shows that the TPMS market will grow dramatically in 2014, and so the potential in the Japanese TPMS market is huge.
How keen are is your company in taking on this huge Japanese market with the current timing?
Please let us know your thoughts after carefully consulting with your management team.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your coming yesterday.
I am so happy to work with ****

I will send you time sheet, so please write down your working time.
if you have a question, please feel free to contact me.

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Thank you for coming yesterday.
I am looking forward to working with ****

I will send you a time sheet, so please write down your working time.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your visit yesterday.
I am looking forward to working with ***.

I am sending a time sheet. Please enter your work hours.

If you have any question, please feel free to contact us.

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Thank you for your visit yesterday.
I am looking forward to working with ***.

I am sending a time sheet. Please enter your work hours.

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us.

元の翻訳
Thank you for visiting our office the other day.
We are looking forward to working with you.

Attached is a time sheet. Please input the time you worked.
If you have any question, please contact us.

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Thank you for visiting our office the other day.
We are looking forward to working with you.

Attached is a time sheet. Please input the time you worked.
If you have any questions, please contact us.

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Do you know "Yahoo! auction"?

It's like a Japanese eBay, and a lot of premium items such as those for which the production ended, or limited products, are submitted in the form of an auction.

However, a lot of them are one-of-a-kind items, and you can seldom make a successful bid with the price that you want.

It's similar to eBay.

I often make bids on nanoblock-related products, but if I don't keep calm, I will spend a big amount of money...
(And my wife will scold me.)

This time, my "trophy" is this.

Its a premium item that those who understand can understand its worth.

I can't wait for it to arrive.

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Do you know "Yahoo! auction"?

It's like a Japanese eBay, and a lot of premium items such as those for which the production ended, or limited products, are submitted in the form of an auction.

However, a lot of them are one-of-a-kind items, and you can seldom make a successful bid with the price that you want.

I guess it's similar to eBay.

I often make bids on nanoblock-related products, but if I don't keep calm, I will spend a big amount of money...
(And my wife will scold me.)

This time, my "trophy" is this.

Its a premium item that those who understand it can understand its worth.

I can't wait for it to arrive.

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Sorry for the inconveniences. I have refunded a full amount, so please check your paypal account.
Also, please agree on paypal's cancelation procedure. Thank you.

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We have refunded $30 to you, so please check your papal account.
Please leave a positive feedback on ebay.

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We sincerely apologize for not being able to send you a refund. It has been really busy for Christmas.
We will refund you the $28 you overpaid to us.

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Sorry for the inconvenience. I have refunded the full amount, so please check your Paypal account.
Also, please agree on Paypal's cancellation procedure. Thank you.

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We have refunded $30 to you, so please check your Paypal account.
Please leave positive feedback on eBay.

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We sincerely apologize for not being able to send you a refund. It has been really busy for Christmas.
We will refund you the $28 you overpaid to us.

元の翻訳
Hello. I received the goods today successfully.
Thank you very much for the great item.

If possible, could you kindly send me a poster with an autograph please?
Sorry for the trouble, but I hope you could help me.

I will bear the all shipping cost.

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Hello. I received the goods today successfully.
Thank you very much for the great item.

If possible, could you kindly send me a poster with an autograph please?
Sorry for the trouble, but it will be much appreciated.

I will bear the full shipping cost.

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1) Thank you for reply to me.
I clearly cancelled this purchase, because I have bought the similar item by my mistake.
Please refund my payment with PayPal.
I'm very sorry for making the mistake.

2)The problem has been solved. Thank you.

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1) Thank you for replying to me.
Yes, I cancelled this purchase because I bought a similar item by mistake.
Please refund my payment with PayPal.
I'm terribly sorry about this mistake.

2)The problem has been solved. Thank you.

元の翻訳
I'll use it for 749R, 2005 model.
I'd like to order full exhaust system but have some questions to clear before order.

The price of silencer homologated and for race is different??
The product here from you is full exhaust system right??
If we talk about only silencer, how much it will be?

Best Regards,

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I'll use it for the 749R 2005 model.
I'd like to order a full exhaust system but have some questions first.

Are the prices for racing and public road use silencers different?
The product you have listed here is full exhaust type right?
If we talk about only the silencer, how much it will be?

Best Regards,