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When I click "Buy it now", the payment screen appears soon.↵
So I can't ask for an invoice.

Is it OK that I pay the balance after purchasing it as $250?

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When I click "Buy it now", it goes straight to the PayPal payment screen, so I can't receive an invoice.

Is it OK if I pay the balance after purchasing it at $250?

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All right! The Red Socks are amazing.
It's great they were able to pull it off on their home grounds.
I'm sure the people of Boston are feeling great joy.
Also, it looks like Uehara is having fun to me.
His emotional strength is uncanny!

I was told that his mother was hospitalized from pneumonia and was on the verge of death. However, the doctor said she is recovering and next week she will attempt to consume food by mouth. Because she is 102 years old, everyone, the doctor and family included, are astonished at the longevity and strength she possesses.
I'll mail you again later.

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Alright! The Red Socks are amazing.
It's great they were able to pull it off on their home ground.
I'm sure the people of Boston are feeling great joy.
I also really enjoyed being able to watch Uehara play.
His emotional strength is uncanny!

I was told that his mother was hospitalized from pneumonia and was on the verge of death. However, the doctor said she is recovering and next week she will attempt to consume food by mouth. Because she is 102 years old, everyone, the doctor and family included, are astonished at the longevity and strength she possesses.
I'll email you again later.

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<br></br>the pleasure from acquiring the cultivation techniques, the pleasure to see the vegetable growing, the plesure of the harvest, and the plesure to see people eating the vegetables ... I myself sometimes visit a farm and I am impressed to see the lively work of the farmers.

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<br></br>The pleasure of acquiring new cultivation techniques, the pleasure of making vegetables grow with your own two hands, the pleasure of harvesting, and then, the pleasure to see people eating the vegetables ... I myself sometimes visit a farm and I am impressed to see the lively work of the farmers.

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Our strength is that we can do both execution of business improvement and training of experienced personnel.

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Our strength is that we can both execute improvements in our business and foster personnel rich in experience.

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Q3-1：The direction of the Worker Dispatch Law amendment is going to be clear.

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Q3-1：The direction of the Worker Dispatch Law amendments have become clear.

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Q3-4：Based on the Q3-3, what kind of dispatch will you focus on in the future?

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Q3-4：Based on Q3-3, what kind of dispatch will you focus on in the future?

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I really do not understand about the way to buy product so i always buy on ebay.
Please ship the product to Japan without damaging
I am waiting for arrival

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As I don't understand how to purchase the item, I bought it on ebay as usual.
Please ship the product to Japan safe from damage.
I am looking forward to its arrival

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Since I wasn't sure how to purchase it really, I ended up purchasing it on ebay as usual.
Please pack it carefully to avoid any damages to the item and ship it to Japan.
I look forward to receiving it.

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Since I wasn't sure how to purchase it, I ended up purchasing it on ebay as usual.
Please pack it carefully to avoid any damage to the item when shipping it to Japan.
I look forward to receiving it.

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I didn't know exactly how to purchase so I purchased on ebay as usual.
Please send the product carefully to Japan so that it won't get damaged.
I am looking forward to the arrival.

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I didn't know exactly how to purchase so I purchased on ebay as usual.
Please send the product carefully to Japan so that it won't get damaged.
I am looking forward to its arrival.

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Our deepest apologies for making you wait so long for the arrival of your product.
We have already sent the product to you so it should arrive to you shortly.
If required we will be happy to provide you with the tracking number so that you ask for the delivery status of your product at your nearest post office.

Kindest regards,

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Our deepest apologies for making you wait so long for the arrival of your item.
We have already sent the product to you so it should arrive to you shortly.
If required we will be happy to provide you with the tracking number so that you can ask for the delivery status of your item at your nearest post office.

Kind regards,

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The product below is extremely popular in Japan.
In new or nearly new condition is preferred.

If they are possible to order, please advise of your price, including postage.

I would be most grateful if you would update us when you stock any unusual TourIssue items from now onwards.

I would like to acquire things like autographed balls by Japanese professional golf players.
The following players are popular, so we would appreciate notification should you come to stock any:

We prefer balls that were actually used in play and have an authentication certificate.

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The product below is extremely popular in Japan.
In new or nearly new condition is preferred.

If they are possible to order, please advise me of your price, including postage.

I would be most grateful if you would update us when you stock any rare TourIssue items from now onward.

I would like to acquire things like autographed balls by Japanese professional golf players.
The following players are popular, so we would appreciate notification should you come to stock any:

We prefer balls that were actually used in play and have an authentication certificate.

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Okamoto's "uniform 0.02 millimeter"

The polyurethane condoms of 0.02 millimeter sold by Okamoto since 2009.

Its greatest characteristic is "uniformly thin."

It sounds obvious but ,in the world of condoms, it requires very highly advanced technique!

And the technique has realized the sense of use dramatically.

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Okamoto's "uniform 0.02 mm"

0.02 mm polyurethane condoms sold by Okamoto since 2009.

Their greatest characteristic is "uniform thinness"

It may be obvious, but in the world of condoms it uses highly advanced technology!

And this technology has greatly heightened the feeling that they're 'barely there' when using them.

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Since I can't wait any longer, please pay the refund. Please contact me if the refund is finished.

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Since I can't wait any longer, please pay the refund. Please contact me when the refund is finished.

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I could wait no longer so I am asking a refund. Please contact me once your done with the refund.

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I can't wait any longer so I am asking for a refund. Please contact me once you're done with the refund.

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Thank you for your order.
We have dispatched the ordered item by sal of Japan Post Office on December 10, but we found that it was lost by the accident during delivery. For this reason, we dispatched the item again by E-packet of Japan Post Office today. Please be assured that the expected delivery date will almost be the same as scheduled for the first dispatch. We would appreciate if you could inform us of your receipt.
Pelase note that the tracking number is ●●.

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Thank you for your order.
We dispatched the ordered item by Japan Post's SAL on October 10, but we found that it was lost by the accident during delivery. For this reason, we dispatched the item again by Japan Post's E-packet today. Please be assured that the expected delivery date will be on October 28, almost the same as scheduled for the first dispatch. We would appreciate it if you could inform us of your receipt.
Please note that the tracking number is ●●.

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Thank you for approving a marketing authorization. We heard that in the USA, an account review will be performed if a large number of merchandise are exhibited or an expensive product is sold in a short time. In fact, when we sold the expensive product, they froze our account. Does this also apply to Canada?

If you would like to know the detailed information before the release, please see the attached file that indicates the address of the YouTube video which provides the detailed explanation in English. Sorry for the inconvenience

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Thank you for approving the selling authorization. We heard that in the USA, an account review will be performed if a large number of merchandise is exhibited in a short time or an expensive product is sold. In fact, when we sold an expensive product, they froze our account. Does this also apply to Canada?

An English manual will be available from the maker as of October 28. If you would like to know detailed information before the release, please see the attached file that indicates the address of the YouTube video which provides a detailed explanation in English. Sorry for the inconvenience

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I regret that you only have three pieces in stock.
I'd like to order three of the old models, and please refund the difference.
Thank you for your kind proposal.
I'm looking forward to your delivery.

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It is unfortunate that you only have three pieces in stock.
I'd like to order three of the old models, so please refund the difference.
Thank you for your kind proposal.
I'm looking forward to your delivery.

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I'm sorry for inconveniencing for you.

If possible, could you return the item to me?

As I have done it for this time, I'd like to help you out for another time.

I have substitute items.

I have already refunded to you.

I don't mind if you order unrelated items.

I'd prepare any Japanese items for you.

I hope that we'll have a further connecting.

And again, I'm terribly sorry for you causing a trouble for this time.

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I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

If possible, could you return the item to me?

As I have caused you inconvenience this time, I'd like to be of assistance to you in the future.

I have substitute items.

I have already given you a refund.

I don't mind if you order unrelated items.

I will arrange any Japanese items for you.

I am looking forward to working with you in future.

And again, I'm terribly sorry for causing you trouble this time.

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The merchandise is delivered on October 4th.
Due to your absence, it was retrieved.
Please request the post office for redelivery for the merchandise.
You will be able to receive it.
No worries

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The merchandise was delivered on October 4th.
Due to your absence, it was retrieved.
Please make a request to the post office for the re-delivery of the merchandise.
In doing so you will be able to receive it.
There is no need to worry.

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The reason why the DVD sold in Japan is expensive is for the business model that the production costs are recovered by the proceeds of the Anime DVD.
DVD of O will be sold at 10 thousand yen with some special favors. I hope the price will be lower than that.
Can you see Blu-ray on your laptop ? It sounds good. I can watch Blu-ray only with my PS3.
I wish O were region-free and you could watch it on your lap top.
It is glad for me to watch O with big screen. However, it is a little bit shamed of me because i may be going to watch it alone..

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The reason why DVDs sold in Japan are expensive is because of the business model of recovering production costs with the proceeds of anime DVD sales.
The O DVD will be sold at 10 thousand yen with some various extras added. I hope the price will be lower than that.
Can you watch Blu-rays on your laptop ? It's really nice isn't it. I can watch Blu-ray only on my PS3.
I wish O were region-free so you could watch it on your laptop.
It is great to watch O on a big screen, but it is a bit embarrassing that I will probably end up watching it alone.

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It's a pleasure to work with you.
We coped with the customer who you asked us about on Friday. Thank you.
We had received the part of the hammock chair that hadn't been in and you sent us.
However, the customer reported that two of that part hadn't been included, so we need one more. Could you please enclose it with the items we ordered today?

Thank you.

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It's a pleasure to work with you.
We dealt with the customer who you contacted us about on Friday. Thank you.
The part that was missing from the hammock chair that you sent us before has arrived safely.
However, the customer reported that two of that part hadn't been included, so we need one more. Sorry to bother you again but could you please enclose it with the items we ordered today?

Thank you.