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Something just came up.

As you might know, we send your packages via a forwarding service company based in US.
We store some of your packages and then we send your packages as one baggage.

As always, we gave an instruction to send the baggage the other day,
but we are told that packages which are not equipped with invoice cannot be sent overseas due to compliance.

We are sorry to say that only I can do to the company now is to tell them to send the package back to you.

I hasten to ask you if you could receive the package in an emergency..

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Something just came up.

As you might know, we send your packages via a forwarding service company based in US.
We store a few of your packages and then send them as one package.

As always, we gave instructions to send the baggage the other day,
but we were told that packages which are not equipped with invoice cannot be sent overseas due to compliance.

I am sorry to say that the only thing I can do now is tell the company to send the package back to you.

I must quickly ask you if you could receive the package for the time being

元の翻訳
Nice to meet you.
I have a strong interest in a displayed item, so I would like to give you this offer.
Best regards,

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Nice to meet you.
I have a strong interest in your displayed item, so I would like to bid for it.
Best regards,

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Ｉｔ’ｓ nice to meet you. I'm so interested in your item that I'm bidding for it. Thank you in advance.

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Nice to meet you. I'm very interested in the item you posted so I'm bidding for it. Thank you in advance.

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It seems like the items I ordered the other day are still not sent.
I was issued a tracking number, but the package doesn't move at all.
Please send the order quickly or tell me about its state.

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It seems like the items I ordered the other day still haven't been sent.
I was issued a tracking number, but the package doesn't move at all.
Please send the order quickly or tell me what's going on.

元の翻訳
About Ekipedia
Entire site
To make English indication
To go back to the top page
To go back to the previous page
To enlarge or reduce the map

Top page
To display a route map
To display the list of routes
To display the list of station names

To find on a route map
How to search by unreadable station names
To Ekipedia map from a rout map

To find on the list of routes
To Ekipedia map from a route name

To search by a station name
How to search when don't have accurate station names

Ekipedia MAP
To know a route that wheelchair is available
To watch yard figures of JR line or Metro
To watch a timetable
To search transfers

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About Ekipedia
Entire site
To display in English
To go back to the top page
To go back to the previous page
To enlarge or reduce the map

Top page
To display a route map
To display the list of routes
To display the list of station names

To find on a route map
How to search unreadable station names
To Ekipedia map from a route map

To find on the list of routes
To Ekipedia map from a route name

To search by a station name
How to search with incorrect station names

Ekipedia MAP
To know routes with wheelchair access
To see station maps of JR line or Metro subway stations
To see timetables
To search transfers

元の翻訳
I just purchased an item (items) on your shop,↵
but I realized that I registered with the wrong email address.

＊@gmail.com
↓
＊＊@gmail.com

Would it be possible for me to confirm that my order is correct?
My order number is 000000000000.

Could you also check if I made the same order twice?

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I just purchased something on your shop, but I realized that I registered with the wrong email address.

＊@gmail.com
↓
＊＊@gmail.com

Would it be possible for me to confirm that my order is correct?
My order number is 000000000000.

Could you also check if I made the same order twice?

元の翻訳
I just purchase a product in your site, but I registered the wrong email address.
↵
Please change
＊@gmail.com
↓
＊＊@gmail.com

I also would like to confirm the actual order.
Please check for the order Nr 000000000000 ?

Also, please check that the same product is not ordered twice.

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I just purchased a product on your site, but I registered the wrong email address.

＊@gmail.com
↓
＊＊@gmail.com

I also would like to confirm the actual order.
The order number is Nr 000000000000

Also, please check that I didn't order the same product twice.

元の翻訳
I purchased the product at your site a few minutes ago,
but I made a mistake in e-mail address registered.

＊@gmail.com
↓
＊＊@gmail.com

I want to check the current order, but can I do it?
Order number is 000000000000.

Please also check if I oredered the same product twice.

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I purchased the product at your site a few minutes ago,
but I made a mistake in the e-mail address I registered.

＊@gmail.com
↓
＊＊@gmail.com

I want to check the current order, so is that possible?
The order number is 000000000000.

I would also like to check if I ordered the same product twice.

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I sent an email to xxx@yy to confirm about my order, but there is no reply from you.
I also tried to access to your website, but I couldn't.
So, I want to cansel it.

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I sent an email to xxx@yy to confirm about my order, but there has been no reply.
Also, I can no longer access the website which I ordered it through.
So, I will cancel payment for the order.

元の翻訳
As to my order I tried to confirm it by emailing to xx@yyy with no reply, and I can't access to the WEB page where I had ordered either.
Therefore I anounce now to cancel the the payment for the order.

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As for my order I tried to confirm it by emailing xx@yyy but received no reply, and I can't access the webpage where I ordered it either.
Therefore I will cancel the the payment for the order.

元の翻訳
I emailed xxx@yyy for inquiry about my order, but I haven't heard anything from you.
Also I can no longer access to the website where I placed the order.
For these reasons, I will cancel my payment for the order.

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I emailed xxx@yyy to inquire about my order, but I haven't heard anything back.
Also I can no longer access the website where I placed the order.
For these reasons, I will cancel my payment for the order.

元の翻訳
This is the Pinterest page for the US based builder Cycling Fan. I have pinned various information, video, and photos. Please use the e-mail address below to contact the administrator.

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This is the Pinterest page for US-based builder cycling fans. All the latest information, video, and photos are pinned here. Please use the e-mail address below to contact the administrator.

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I want to ask questions here because forum is difficult to use.
I want to confirm that, must I made a copyright notation to the stand out position of source.
I understand why i got bad evaluation. Source is so dirty
It is not able to sell on purpose by myself

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I want to ask a question here because the forum is difficult to use.
I just want to confirm but, do I have to display the copyright in a position where the source stands out?
I understand why I got a bad evaluation, the source was too messy.
It looks like I'm making myself unable to sell it on purpose.

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■I made a $420 product page.
Please purchase from the address below.

There are few products, so please contact me soon.

■Hello, I sent the product the other day.
It will take a little while for it to arrive, so please wait.

■It seems like a medium size in UK is a L size, but please check the new page in which inches are also displayed.

■If you can wait, we can send it to you again, is it ok?

I think I want to ask you something.
If possible, can you try to do the research and registration?

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■I made a $420 product page.
Please purchase from the address below.

There are only a few products, so please contact me soon.

■Hello, I sent the product the other day.
It will take a little while for it to arrive, so please wait.

■It seems like a medium size in UK is a L size, but please check the new page in which inches are also displayed.

■If you can wait, we can send it to you again, is it ok?

I want to ask you to do something for me.
If possible, can you try to do the research and registration?

元の翻訳
And then, Please inform me progress of warranty for the parcel with the tracking number 8799057713
Please give me the solution as soon as possible

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After that, please inform me about the progress of the warranty for the parcel with the tracking number 8799057713
I would appreciate having this resolved as quickly as possible.

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You have some items that you're biting now. Do you mind if I dispatch the pending items together? Please wait to make remittance for items you're biting now in case you'll win the bits until your receiving of invoice.

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I see you are currently bidding for some items, so do you mind if I dispatch the pending items together? Also for the payment for any successful bids you have among the items you have bid for, please wait until you receive the invoice.

元の翻訳
The coffee is almost spilled.
I am too sleepy to work.
Tomorrow I will have afternoon off.

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The coffee looks like it's going to spill.
I am too sleepy to work.
Tomorrow I have the afternoon off.

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I am sorry for replying so late.

Thank you for your kindly comment.↵
It is perfect.
I want to work with you again.

Thank you very much.

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I am sorry for replying so late.

Thank you for your kind comment. It was perfect.
I would like to work with you again.

Thank you very much.

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I apologize for my late reply.

Thank you very much for your kind evaluation and comment.
They were perfefct.
I'm looking forward to working with you again.

Thank you very much.

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I apologize for my late reply.

Thank you very much for your kind evaluation and comment.
They were perfect.
I'm looking forward to working with you again.

Thank you very much.

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For the model I ordered, it says the model number is LAMBO09B, but I think it is 09G.↵

I did not order MATT BLACK (RED BASE).↵

I will return MATTBLACK so please send me Lamborghini URUS Black Nemesis Shanghai Auto show 2012.

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For the model I ordered, it says the model number is LAMBO09B, but I think it is 09G.
I did not order the MATT BLACK (RED BASE).
I will return the MATTBLACK so please send me a Lamborghini URUS Black Nemesis Shanghai Auto show 2012.

元の翻訳
Please request the signature over the printed name of the receiver when you hand it over.

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Please be sure to get the signature and the printed name of the receiver when you hand it over.

元の翻訳
To obtain the exact location
1) Use GPS
2) There are two settings to detect the network (Wifi and mobile base station)
In order to use kiss more convenience, checking both settings are highly recommended.

When Wifi setting is connected successfully, the exact location can be detected.
When you checked the box of the wifi setting, even the wifi connection is at off status, just turned it on when you need to know the location and you can turn it off afterwards

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To obtain location information
1) Use GPS
2) There are two settings to detect the network (wi-fi and mobile base station)
In order to use kiss more conveniently, checking both settings is highly recommended.

When the wi-fi setting is set to on, location can be detected more accurately.
If you check the box of the wi-fi setting, even if the wi-fi connection is set to off, it will change to on while acquiring location information then return to off afterwards