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Personal shopping
A full-time personal shopper will help you buy Japanese goods.

Store management support.
We will provide support for those from outside of Japan from buying the goods from Japan to selling the goods.

About us
Started business of selling Japanese goods on e-bay on 2004. Started business at Amazon U.S on 2011. Currently, we also do business at England, France, Italy, Spain and Canada through Amazon.
Our internet shop sends more than 10,000 Japanese goods to all over the world, through our internet shop as well as Amazon.

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Personal shopping
A full-time personal shopper will help you buy Japanese goods.

Store management support.
We will provide support for those outside of Japan with everything from the ordering in to the sale of Japanese goods.

About us
Started business of selling Japanese goods on eBay in 2004. Started business on Amazon U.S in 2011. Currently, we also do business in England, France, Italy, Spain and Canada through Amazon.
Our internet shop sends more than 10,000 Japanese goods to all over the world, through our internet shop as well as Amazon.

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I have contacted a distributer in Japan. But they said they did'nt have the product I wanted to get.
I have a warehouse in US, so would you show me a distributer in US?
I Look forward to your favorable reply.

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I have contacted a distributor in Japan. But they said they didn't have the product I wanted to get.
I have a warehouse in US, so could you refer me to a distributor in the US?
I look forward to your favorable reply.

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I have not checked the real item as I live in Japan. It is to be shipped to Japan by way of forwarding company. Although I appreciate your contact to me, I wonder why you did not describe such an important fact on the description for the item. Also, you informed me that a part of the item is missing after you had already shipped the item; I can hardly think this is a sincere response. You informed that a patch and a button are missing, but isn't there anything missing other than that? I hope the refund of $50 for the missing part, is that all right with you?

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I have not checked the real item as I live in Japan. It is to be shipped to Japan by way of forwarding company. Although I appreciate you contacting me, I wonder why you did not include such an important fact on the description for the item. Also, you informed me that a part of the item was missing after you had already shipped the item; I can hardly think this is a sincere response. You informed me that a patch and a button are missing, but is there anything missing other than that? I hope for a refund of $50 for the missing part, is that alright with you?

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Brag your cute Disney nails to your friends!

Disney fans must wear Disney nails ☆
If you are a beginner, this nail is SO GOOD!

This one does not look too Disney, but it is still very CUTE!
On a pale baby pink background, Mickey and Minnie with her pretty ribbon are smiling o(^▽^)o

This one is for adult Disney fans!
Mickey and Tinker Bell are elegantly silhouetted only for you ♪
Mickey silhouetted on the vividly colored background looks especially cool and gorgeous! ♪

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Brag about your cute Disney nails to your friends!

Disney fans must wear Disney nails ☆
If you are a beginner, these nails are SO GOOD!

This one doesn't look too Disney, but it is still very CUTE!
On a pale baby pink background, the Mickey motif and Minnie's trademark ribbon are the selling points o(^▽^)o

This one is for adult Disney fans!
Mickey and Tinker Bell are elegantly silhouetted just for you ♪
Mickey silhouetted on the vividly colored background looks especially cool! ♪

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Thank you for your application.

It requires Japanese communication skill for a applicant to join this project.
All the details of a request and questions & answers will be conducted in Japanese.
Would it be acceptable?

If you will accept this condition, please reply to this message in Japanese.

Warm Regards.

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Thank you for your application.

Japanese communication skill is required for a applicant to join this project.
All explanations of requests and questions & answer sessions will be conducted in Japanese.
Will this be acceptable?

If you accept these conditions, please reply to this message in Japanese.

Warm Regards.

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Thank you for the discount.
Please send it to the remote location address.
I'll wait the invoice. Thanks.

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Thank you for the discount.
Please send it to the remote location address.
I'll wait for the invoice. Thanks.

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Acupuncture treatments can help the body's internal organs of muscles with a small needle.↵
So my acupuncture treatments are very effective against lumbago, a hernia, a sciatic, moderate Spinal stenosis, arthritis of the shoulders and knees with a great trust in patients.

I read that Japan Football Association has recently been beginning to adopt this treatment way for the player during World Cup series and Olympics gam.

I convince that our treatments are very effective for sport player's wound and body maintenance.

Now I am arranging to move to New Zealand with my family and searching for a job at Christchurch.

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My acupuncture treatments are very effective against sciatica, moderate spinal stenosis, and arthritis of the shoulders and knees, results kindly supported by many of my patients.

The Japan Football Association has recently begun to adopt acupuncture for the World Cup series and Olympics games, contributing to the care of players.

I am convinced that acupuncture treatments can produce great results for players' injuries and body maintenance.

I am currently arranging to move to New Zealand with my family and am searching for a job in Christchurch.

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I am so sorry too late to contact.

As for the item you wanted to return, I sent 4days ago, and accepted the return fee.
This is the chasing number.
In this case, the reason why you couldn't send the item was not battery, but the military package picture.
Anyway, I am so sorry.
You sold the item in ebay, right? And the size was o, right? You can send with that size. If you can send 20items, how much do they cost?

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I am so sorry for contacting so late.

As for the item you wanted to return, I sent it 4 days ago, and dealt with the fees for the return.
This is the tracking number.
In this case, the reason why you couldn't send the item was not the battery, but the pictures of weapons in the package.
Either way, I am very sorry about this.
I think you used to sell the 〇 standard made by this maker before on eBay. It seems you can export these so if it was possible to purchase 20 items, how much would it cost?

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It's long time since the last contact!

I hope you're fine.

Sorry that I couldn't wait your reply and send this message before that.

How is the preparation going? I'd like to know when it will be finished.

I'm really looking forward it!

I hope we can continue to keep in touch

I'm waiting to hear from you.

Thank you.
Best wishes.

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It's been a long time since I've heard from you!

I hope you're fine.

Sorry that I couldn't wait for your reply and sent this message.

How is the preparation going? I'd like to know when it will be finished.

I'm really looking forward it!

I hope we can continue to keep in touch

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Thank you.
Best wishes.

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Dear startthereproduct,

Thank you for the reply. I really appreciate the discount.

1. Ted 24 inch r rated x 10 = $70/ea including shipping
2. ted 16 inch x 10 = 53.99/ea including shipping
3. ted backpack clip x10 = 14.95/ea including shipping

How can I make a payment for these?

I hope to have a longstanding relationship with you. Thank you for your help.

Ogata

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Dear startthereproduct,

Thank you for the reply. I really appreciate the discount.

1. Ted 24 inch r rated x 10 = $70/ea including shipping
2. ted 16 inch x 10 = 53.99/ea including shipping
3. ted backpack clip x10 = 14.95/ea including shipping

How can I make a payment for these?

I hope to keep a long-continuing relationship with you. Thank you for your help.

Ogata

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Since the last products I purchased from you were really good, I would like to purchase from you again.

As same as the last time, I wish the products to be arrived within 6 days, so please ship them promptly.

I am considering to purchase your various products in the future. I am looking forward to having business with you again soon.

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Since the last products I purchased from you were really good, I would like to purchase from you again.

Same as the last time, I wish for the products to arrive within 6 days, so please ship them promptly.

I am considering ordering in various products from you in the future. I am looking forward to doing business with you again soon.

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This products are sold on two product pages in Amazon as below:
1.
2.
Competitors are selling it on other pages.

We do not distribute to retailers.
We only sell online to users in our own store.

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These products are being sold on two product pages on Amazon.
1.
2.
Competitors are selling it on other pages.

We do not distribute to retailers.
We only sell online to users in our own store.

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Thanks for your prompt support at all time.
The item recieved does not function properly.
It can be switched on but head does not vibrate.
Although i have bought same item for about 20 units, this is the first case.
I would like to request for replacement.
For return shipment, cost will be higher and should i cover this cost?
It takes time due to sea shipment.Would you send me the replacement after you recieve this item?
Just in case, please inform me the shipping address.

Tracking number is as follows.

Please send me the one which is tested and functions well.

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Thanks for your prompt response as always.
The item received does not function properly.
It can be switched on but the head does not vibrate.
Although I have bought 20 units of the same item, this is the first case.
I would like to request a replacement.
For return shipment, the cost will be higher but do I have to cover this cost?
It will take time due as I sent it by sea mail. Would you send me the replacement once you receive the item?
Just to be sure, please inform me of the shipping address.

The tracking number is as follows.

Please send me one which is tested and functions well.

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Hello,

Please send it to me by cheapest way.

But the item page in ebay says that shipping cost is free.

I'm afraid you may have misunderstood that you have to send it to Japan.

I'd like you to send it to the address in the US.

If the shipping cost will be expensive, there will be no advantage for me since buying in ebay would be cheaper.

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Hello,

Please send it to me by the cheapest way.

But your item page on eBay says that the shipping cost is free.

I'm afraid you may have misunderstood thinking that you have to send it to Japan.

I'd like you to send it to an address in the US.

If the shipping cost will be expensive, it would be better for me to buy it on eBay as it would be cheaper.

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This app is the English version of the popular love game "Phantom Thief X: The Advanced Notice of Love". The way to play is the same as the Japanese version, in which you can play the prologue of the characters to fall in love with free of charge. After that you can choose a character which you want to fall in love with and download it, and continue to read at your own pace.

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This app is the English version of the popular love game "Love Letter From Thief X". The way to play is the same as the Japanese version, in which you can play the prologue of the characters to fall in love with, free of charge. After that you can choose a character which you want to fall in love with and download, separate for each character. You can then continue to read at your own pace.

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We are going to sell online this product in Asia, is there any problems for it? It's going to be released on ○ in Japan, we'd like to release it in Asia at the same time. We are planning to use this sales results in Asia as topics because it would be very effective marketing tool in Japan. If the scene with A is used in the TV program, would you send us the recorded data of the scene? We'd like to ask him if it's possible to send us pictures by ○, we can deal with either of them.

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We are planning to sell this product online in Asia, but are there any problems with this? It's going to be released on ○ in Japan, and we'd like to release it in Asia at the same time. We are planning to use these sales results in Asia because it could be used as a topic surrounding our company and therefore a very effective marketing tool in Japan. If the scene with A is used in the TV program, would you send us the recording data of the scene? If you could possibly send it by the ◯th, we would like to ask him to do it, but either way we can work out something.

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Based on your advices, I decided that ■■■ is version 1.

I cannot make a decision using ▲▲▲, right?

Anyway, I like this ■■■, so from now on I will use it with care!

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Based on your advice, I decided that ■■■ is version 1.

It seems ▲▲▲ can't be used to decide the version, can it?

Anyway, I like this ■■■, so from now on I will use it with care!

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Hello.

I would like to know your stocks.
I'm not sure the product number but do you have ○○ of FOX?

I could see the ○○ on your web page before but now I can't.
There are some other products which were on the web page but now aren't. Does this mean they are out of stock or no longer available?

Thank you for your support.

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Hello.

I would like to know your stocks.
I'm not sure of the product number but do you have ○○ of FOX in stock?

I could see the ○○ on your web page before but now I can't.
There are some other products which were on the web page but now aren't. Does this mean they are out of stock or no longer available?

Thank you for your support.

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My company deals many kinds of Japanese products, especially Japan-specific and traditional ones. I would like to spread them to the world.
For the reasons, I would apply to this category to buy the products.↵
I hope them to be dealt there.

Thank you.↵
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翻訳者注：承認→申請ではないでしょうか？

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My company deals in many kinds of Japanese products, especially Japanese toys, as well as items unique and traditional to Japan. I would like to spread them to other parts of the world.
For these reasons, I acknowledge that you would like to sell products in this category.

Best regards,

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It's too expensive about $175!
Could you try to stock goods from wholesaler or manufecturer?

Now, we stock the products which has a sensor by $135 and another product which has no sensor by $120.
These prices are also including carriage.
Could you stock as lower prices than we stock?

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$175 is too expensive!
Could you try to order in the products from a wholesaler or the manufacturer?

We currently order the products in for $135 with a sensor, and for $120 without a sensor.
These prices are also including postage.
Could we purchase the products at a lower price?

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Thank you for purchasing items from me.

Since the package displayed on eBay was damaged,
I will send you another one.

Although the package is different, contents are the same inside.
I’m presenting you one more to express my apology.

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Thank you for purchasing items from me.

Since the package displayed on eBay was damaged,
I will send you another one.

Although the package is different, the contents are the same inside.
I will give you one more to express my apologies.

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These items hasn't arrived in Japan. I guess they are being left at the warehouse in NJ.
Items without a tracking number are never delivered from the warehouse to Japan.
Please send them with a tracking number and an invoice from the next time, thank you.

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These items hasn't arrived in Japan. I guess they have been left at the warehouse in NJ.
Items without a tracking number are never delivered from the warehouse to Japan.
Please send them with a tracking number and an invoice from next time. Thank you in advance.

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I’m Japanese born in Japan. I live in Tokyo suburban green rich hill area with my wife and 2 children.

After graduating from university, I spent 20 years or under, working with financial institutions and engaged in financial education business.

20 years moving forward, I think I would like to do information dispatching concerning the Japanese culture, new commodities and services.

Via American and Europe Amazon and eBay, the various commodities of Japan are being introduced.

In the future, not only in Japan’s Tokyo, I plan to set up the base of life even in Malaysia, Hawaii and Canada etc.

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I’m Japanese born in Japan. I live in a hilly area rich in greenery with my wife and 2 children in the suburbs of Tokyo.

After graduating from university, I spent almost 20 years, working with financial institutions and engaged in the financial education business.

Moving forward 20 years, I now think I would like to provide information concerning Japanese culture, new products and services.

Via American and Europe Amazon as well as eBay, I offer various Japanese products.

In the future, other than Tokyo, Japan I plan to set up base in places like Malaysia, Hawaii and Canada to live.