Wena Yu (lebron_2014) — もらったレビュー

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Upon investigating your luggage and as shown in the attachment photo, it seems that it has been delivered to your house last December 17.
Can you check once more and kindly confirm it with USPS in case the luggage has not been delivered?

First, were you able to confirm the message that I have sent to you yesterday?
The following is the contents of that message.
As indicated in the message yesterday, your luggage can no longer be tracked and it is very highly that it has been lost.
I have purchased the same product that you have ordered from an American seller and arranged for it to be directly delivered to you.
The product is scheduled to arrive on December 23.

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Upon investigating your baggage and as shown in the attached photo, it seems that it was delivered to your home on December 17.
Could you kindly check this, and if the baggage has not been delivered then check with USPS?

First, I sent you a message yesterday: did you check it?
The message is given below:
As indicated in the message yesterday, your luggage can no longer be tracked and it is highly likely that it has been lost.
I have purchased from an American dealer a product identical to the one you ordered, and have arranged for it to be delivered directly to you.
The product is scheduled to arrive on December 23.

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The Japan Chamber of Commerce and Industry held a "Chamber of Commerce and Industry - tourism liaison" kickoff meeting in the national municipalities hall last December 16.

By building a structure to promote commerce and industry beyond the various regions, the JCCI has been working on building a "Chamber of Commerce and Industry tourism network (CCI tourism NET)" as part of the effort in establishing "tourism liaison" across all 514 Chamber of Commerce and Industry nationwide last September.

Those tourism liaison gathered in this kick-off and deepened their understanding regarding the purpose and the role of CCI tourism NET. There were around 140 people who were present.

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On December 16 the Japan Chamber of Commerce and Industry held the "Kickoff Meeting for the "Chamber of Commerce and Industry's Tourism Liaison" in the national municipalities hall.

The JCCI has been working on building a "Chamber of Commerce and Industry Tourism Network (CCI Tourism NET)" as a structure to promote interregional coordination among chambers of commerce and industry, and as one element of that in September it set up "tourism liaison [officer]s" in all 514 of the chambers of commerce and industry nationwide.

At the [recent] kickoff meeting the tourism liaison officers gathered and deepened their understanding of the purpose and role[s] of CCI Tourism NET. There were around 140 people present.

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You have promised to issue a refund on the product price and the return shipping fee due to the shipping miss on your end.
Please confirm the email sent to me coming from Sheridan last Nov 13.

I have received the return shipping charges in PayPal, but the product price have not been refunded yet.
Please refund the amount urgently via PayPal.

Thank you.

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You promised to issue me a refund for the product price and return shipping fee due to a shipping error on your end.
Please confirm the email Sheridan sent me on November 13.

I have received the return shipping fee through PayPal, but have not yet been refunded the product price.
Please refund that amount via PayPal as soon as possible.

Thank you.

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In addition, to improve the speed of action for the client in terms of stock management and product shipping, ↵
I have hired various person in charge. We will make it a business focusing on FBA in the future.↵
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I want to make my business successful and establish a long and prosperous business between me and your company by adhering to the advises received from you and to satisfy our clients with this opportunity.

I am very sorry for the trouble that I have caused you.

If you have any dissatisfaction with the current proposal, please kindly point this out.↵
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I hope to hear a good response from your end.

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More natural: "In addition, in order to carry out inventory control, product shipping, and customer response quickly, I have hired people to oversee those respective functions. From now on my business will be focused on FBA."

More natural: "I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience I caused you."

More natural: "I very much look forward to hearing back from you."

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I am waiting and looking forward to the arrival of the product.
Are there products that use Thai silk?

When would be the estimated shipping of 00 be?

I am sorry for delays in contacting you since I was on some business trips recently.
I have attached the order chart so I will be paying this amount.
I will contact you after paying the amount.

I have sent the payment.

I have one request.
There is a customs treaty called EPA between Thailand and Japan and there won't be customs taxes if there is an existing certificate of origin.
So can you kindly have the Chamber of Commerce and Industry issue the document and send it over to me?

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I am looking forward to the arrival of the product.
Are there products made of Thai silk?

When would be the estimated shipping of 00 be?

I am sorry for my delay in contacting you since I was on a business trip recently.
I have attached the order chart so I will be paying this amount.
I will contact you after paying the amount.

I have sent the payment.

I have one request.
There is a customs treaty called EPA between Thailand and Japan and there won't be customs duties if there is an existing certificate of origin.
So can you kindly have the Thai Chamber of Commerce issue the document and send it over to me?

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That reason was due to the under value offer on your invoice. The rule of our company is that whenever there's an under value offer coming from the client and despite that the full amount payment has been made for a product, it would be put on hold and reported to the manager. Undervalued product shipping has an exposure in Japanese law so it has to wait for the handling of the manager. During that time, it was decided to be sold in a store within Japan. We ask for your kind understanding. Again, we apologize.

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The reason was due to the undervalued offer on your invoice. The rule of our company is that whenever there's an undervalued offer coming from the client and despite that the full amount payment has been made for a product, it would be put on hold and reported to the manager. Undervalued product shipping has an exposure to Japanese law so it was pending on the manager's direction. During that time, it was decided to be sold in a store within Japan. We ask for your kind understanding. Again, we apologize.

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If you won't be able to immediate respond to the email I've sent, then I will be paying using the current method so please create the profomer and send it to me.
I will immediately proceed with the payment by next week.
Can you ship the product immediately?

Sorry for the trouble, but I ask for your support.

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If you won't be able to immediately respond to the email I've sent, then I will be paying using the current method so please create the pro foma and send it to me.
I will immediately proceed with the payment by next week.
Can you ship the product immediately?

Sorry for the trouble, but I ask for your support.

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Almost everyone is riding in a road bike in Japan.
Of course, there are also people who rides piston bikes but the numbers are not high.
(Japan is a country with a lot of slope roads)
Above all, people spend less for piston bike parts.

With such incidents, it will be difficult to sell a lot of "nut set" from the start.
First we sell road bike parts with high needs and we can think of purchasing and selling the "nut set" afterwards.

We like you to kindly understand that road bike dominates the domestic market in Japan.

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Almost everyone is riding a road bike in Japan.
Of course, there are also people who rides [s-v agreement] piston bikes [?] but the number is not high.
(Japan is a country with a lot of slopes.)
Above all, people spend less for piston bike [?] parts [mistranslation].

With such incidents [word choice], it will be difficult to sell a lot of "nut set" from the start.
First we sell road bike parts with high needs and we can think of purchasing and selling the "nut set" afterwards.

We like you to kindly understand [awkward] that the road bike dominates the domestic market in Japan.

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Nice to meet you.
My name is Norika and I am a Japanese.
I found this site by chance.

i am selling overseas interior products in Japan for a long time.

I was impressed with the beauty of the colors and designs of various products.
I wanted to sell the products that are handled by this company.

What would be the steps needed to become a dealer?
Please kindly let me know what the requirements are for entering into a dealer contract ?
Is there a one time purchasing amount?

I want to sell these types of beautiful products in Japan.
Thank you!

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Nice to meet you.
My name is Norikazu and I am Japanese.
I found this site by chance.

I have been selling overseas interior products in Japan for a long time.

I was impressed with the beauty of the colors and designs of various products.
I thought I would like to sell the products that are handled by this company.

What would be the steps needed to become a dealer?
Please kindly let me know what the requirements are for entering into a dealer contract ?
Is there a one-time purchasing amount?

I would like to sell these sorts of beautiful products in Japan.
Thank you!

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This product (particularly one in good condition) is quite hard to obtain even in Japan,
but please kindly contact me once you will be able to purchase it by next month.
We will sell it to you with a 10% off the sales price if this product becomes available by that time.
(The 10% Off will be until Aug 15 and is a thank you to you for contacting us)

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This product (particularly one in good condition) is quite hard to obtain even in Japan,
but please kindly contact me once you will be able to purchase it by next month.
We will sell it to you with a 10% off the sales price if this product becomes available by that time.
(The 10% off was until August 15, but this is a thank you to you for contacting us.)

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Thursday might be difficult.
This is because the package is held in customs.
Would there be problems if it exceeds Thursday?
I will look forward to your response.

I have sent the invoice a while ago.
Has it arrived?

Is the initial D written in small letter?

■ I am sorry. This product was a limited edition product 7 years ago.
Because of this, there are none in stock.
I am very sorry not being able to be of help.

Are there other products that you desire?

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Thursday might be difficult.
This is because the package is held in customs.
Would there be problems if it exceeds Thursday?
I will look forward to your response.

I have sent the invoice a while ago.
Has it arrived?

Is the initial F written in small letter?

■ I am sorry. This product was a limited edition product 7 years ago.
Because of this, there are none in stock.
I am very sorry not being able to be of help.

Are there other products that you desire?

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● ordinary collection payment slip (normal payment slip will be sent from the government office.It is a procedure available only for those that have yet to go beyond the payment deadline ) * Please understand that it might not be possible to modify the collection mention from January to May.

* Unless there are special circumstances, please set individuals outside housemates, adoptive parents as reference.
* With regards to the certificate of entry in the resident card, please acquire the existence of the address, name, birthday and dependents from the municipalities.

* Please submit the certificate of income and withholding tax from the previous job to HR group once you have received it.

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● ordinary collection payment slip (normal payment slip will be sent from the government office.It is a procedure available only for those that have yet to go beyond the payment deadline ) * Please understand that it might not be possible to modify the collection method from January to May.

* Unless there are special circumstances, please set individuals outside housemates, adoptive parents as reference.
* With regards to the certificate of entry in the resident card, please acquire the existence of the address, name, birthday and dependents from the municipalities.

* Please submit the certificate of income and withholding tax from the previous job to HR group once you have received it.

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This Facebook group is mainly focused on the following activities.

1. Introduction of articles about "A" (The moderator will be doing a strict selection of the articles and posting these)
2. Notification and invitations on events to be implemented by "A".
3. Exchange of inquiries and Information regarding Japan.
4. Interaction with fellow Ambassadors.

We hope that all Ambassadors will be able to help expand the Japanese culture around the globe by sharing articles of "A" with friends and families.

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This Facebook group is mainly focused on the following activities.

1. Posting articles about "A" (The moderator will choose which articles will be posted based on strict guidelines)
2. Notification of and invitations to events to be implemented by "A".
3. Exchange of inquiries and information regarding Japan.
4. Interaction among fellow Ambassadors.

We hope that all Ambassadors will help spread Japanese culture around the globe by sharing articles about "A" with friends and families.

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This application is a twitter client application.
The following explains the usage of the functions and the Dropbox API.

You can register often used subjects, hashtags, and URLs as headers and footers within this application in advance. In addition, you can also register tweets and photos as well.
The users can save these headers, footers, tweets and photos as "tweet data" and quickly tweet the data easily when needed.

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This application is a Twitter client application.
The following explains the usage of the functions and the Dropbox API.

You can register often used subjects, hashtags, and URLs as headers and footers within this application in advance. In addition, you can also register tweets and photos as well.
The users can save these headers, footers, tweets and photos as "tweet data" and quickly tweet the data when needed.