翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/09/05 09:04:31

lebron_2014
lebron_2014 52 I am a part time translator during ni...
日本語

この商品は(状態のよいものは特に)日本でもなかなか手に入らないものですが、
来月あなたがご購入できるときにはご連絡ください。
もしその時にこの商品があった時には10%OFFのセール価格でお売りしますので。
(10%OFFのセールは8月15日までですが、ご連絡いただいたお礼です)

英語

This product (particularly one in good condition) is quite hard to obtain even in Japan,
but please kindly contact me once you will be able to purchase it by next month.
We will sell it to you with a 10% off the sales price if this product becomes available by that time.
(The 10% Off will be until Aug 15 and is a thank you to you for contacting us)

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[削除済みユーザ] 44
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/06 10:32:57

元の翻訳
This product (particularly one in good condition) is quite hard to obtain even in Japan,
but please kindly contact me once you will be able to purchase it by next month.
We will sell it to you with a 10% off the sales price if this product becomes available by that time.
(The 10% Off will be until Aug 15 and is a thank you to you for contacting us)

修正後
This product (particularly one in good condition) is quite hard to obtain even in Japan,
but please kindly contact me once you will be able to purchase it by next month.
We will sell it to you with a 10% off the sales price if this product becomes available by that time.
(The 10% off was until August 15, but this is a thank you to you for contacting us.)

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lebron_2014 lebron_2014 2014/09/06 12:17:41

Thank you tocchan!!!!

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