iluvsnoopy (iluvsnoopy228) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I will order the following product.
Please kindly let me know the total amount.

Is it possible to pay using a credit card?
Thank you and regards.

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I will order the following product.
Please kindly let me know a total amount.

Is it possible to pay by a credit card?
Thank you and regards.

元の翻訳
I understand about the available stock.
Therefore, I want to request it to be shipped from the factory as soon as possible.
Will 2/18 be the earliest shipping date?

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I understand about the available stock.
Then, I want to request it to be shipped from the factory as soon as possible.
Will February 18th be the earliest shipping date?

元の翻訳
I have phoned the store but it is disappointing that it seems to have ran out stock in all the stores within Japan.
And I tried searching in the Japan auction but the ice mint color is no good right?

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I have phoned the store but it is disappointing that it seems to have ran out of stock in all the stores within Japan.
And I tried searching in the Japan auction but the ice mint color is no good right?

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for providing information from the Japan seller.
We will be following him from our end.

We have already started the activities for xx Japan.

If there are offers or orders from Japan in the future,
please kindly provide us all the information similar to this time.

And as your good business partner,
let's expand our business in the future!

We are currently creating the site for xx Japan.
We are making it similar to your site.

Can we post a link of your site in out site once it is done?
Thank you.

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Thank you very much for providing information from the Japan seller.
We will be following him from our end.

We have already started the activities as xx Japan.

If there are offers or orders from Japan in the future,
please kindly provide us all the information as this time.

And as a good business partner,
let's expand our business in the future!

We are currently creating the site for xx Japan.
We are making it similar to your site.

Can we post a link to our site in your site when it is done?
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for providing information from the Japan seller.
We will be following him from our end.

We have already started the activities for xx Japan.

If there are offers or orders from Japan in the future,
please kindly provide us all the information similar to this time.

And as your good business partner,
let's expand our business in the future!

We are currently creating the site for xx Japan.
We are making it similar to your site.

Can we post a link of your site in out site once it is done?
Thank you.

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Thank you very much for providing information from the Japan seller.
We will be following him from our end.

We have already started the business as xx Japan.

If there are offers or orders from Japan in the future,
please kindly provide us all information similar to this time.

And as your good business partner,
let's expand our business in the future!

We are currently creating the web site for xx Japan.
We are making it look similar to yours.

Can you put a link of our web site on yours once it is done?
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for responding. I lost track of the previous project. Consequently, we do not have experience with A.
We have used your advise as reference to the reduction of production cost (manpower).
And we understand that you have already left from the role in A. We wil contact X-san for advise in the future if we would like to seek advise regarding A.

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Thank you for responding. I lost track of the previous project. Consequently, we do not have experience with A.
We have used your advise as reference to the reduction of production cost (manpower).
And we understand that you have already left from the role in A. We will contact X-san for advise in the future if we would like to seek advise regarding A.

元の翻訳
Good day, how are you? It's been a long time. Thanks for the email.
It is good news for me that you have stock up on high quality mark6 without advertising.
However, it is a bit disappointing that I do not have enough capital to buy the high quality mark6 for selling purposes.

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Good day, how are you? It's been a long time. Thank you for the email.
It is a good news to me that you have a stock of high quality mark6 which is not advertised.
However, it is disappointing that I do not have enough capital at hand to buy the high quality mark6 for selling purposes.

元の翻訳
This price is a special price only for you so it will be difficult for a free shipping.
I also received some other offers.
However, it will be possible to ship via airmail with a o shipping fee.

If you can make me happy then I will do anything for you!
The ◇ has arrived today so I weighed the total package to be sent to you.
The weight is ☆ so the EMS shipping fee is ◯. (It is okay to use e-Packet for a cheaper shipping fee of ◯ but the max warranty is ◯ so I am a bit worried.)

I was somehow able to obtain one from searching in various stores so I can ship ◇ once again if you wish.

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This price is a special price only for you so it will be difficult for a free shipping.
I also received some other offers.
However, it will be possible to ship via airmail with a o shipping fee.

If you can be so happy then I will do anything for you!
The ◇ has arrived today so I weighed the total package to be sent to you.
The weight is ☆ so the EMS shipping fee is ◯. (It is okay to use e-Packet for a cheaper shipping fee of ◯ but the max warranty is ◯ so I am a bit worried.)

I was somehow able to obtain one from searching in various stores so I can ship ◇ once again if you wish.

元の翻訳
Yato wears a jersey and lives a non stable life as a part time worker, and the so called god of academics SUGAWARA no Michizane has such an appearance at that time and the representative of the franchise company that grouped the sky gods. One of the seven gods, Bishamonten is dressed up like the SM club queen.
The story mainly depicts the fight against the Ayakashi who erodes the human heart, but it is not necessarily the heart of it, and the philosophy of the respective characters on "life" and "death" is depicted quite seriously.

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Yato wears a jersey and lives a rather unstable life as a part-time worker, and the so-called god of academics SUGAWARA no Michizane has such an appearance at that time and the representative of the franchise company that grouped the sky gods [?]. One of the seven gods, Bishamonten is dressed up like an S&M club queen.
The story mainly depicts the fight against the Ayakashi who erodes the human heart, but it is not necessarily the heart of it, and the philosophy of the respective characters on "life" and "death" is depicted quite seriously.

元の翻訳
For me to provide the product at a cheaper price, the product listing was set with a shipping method without including a tracking number that the buyer will choose.

As a result, there are a lot of buyers that wish for the cheaper price without a tracking number so there are a lot more transactions without tracking numbers.
And I have upload all of the cases that include a tracking number on eBay.

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For me to provide products at a cheaper price, the product listing was set with a shipping method without a tracking number that the buyer will choose [awkward].

As a result, many buyers wish for a cheaper price without a tracking number so there are a lot more transactions without tracking numbers.
And I upload all the cases that include a tracking number on eBay.

元の翻訳
You did not understand what I meant regarding dishonest.

I mentioned that you were not able to find the product,
but if I was the seller, I would also buy from sites such as ebay or Bestbuy just to have it delivered
and I will not mentioned the truth about not being able to get one.

The picture is the Special edition for PS3 without a doubt.

I have purchased hundred of games. This is the first time I have encountered this type of case.
If you can deliver it to me when I make a purchase then I will give a good evaluation.
Otherwise, I will leave a bad one.

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You did not understand what I meant regarding dishonest.

You mentioned that you were not able to find the product,
but if I was the seller, I would also buy from sites such as ebay or Bestbuy just to have it delivered
and I will not mentioned the truth about not being able to get one.

The picture is the Special edition for PS3 without a doubt.

I have purchased hundred of games. This is the first time I have encountered this type of case.
If you can deliver it to me when I make a purchase then I will give a good evaluation.
Otherwise, I will leave a bad one.

元の翻訳
Good day!
I can no longer sell the product with the claim entered to B by the person in charge of your company ●● and the person who made the claim.
There has been no response even after mailing a dozen of times to the email address that was reported by B.
Is ●● really an employee in your company? In addition, please let me know the email address of your UK branch if you know it. I will also try confirming there.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Have a great day!

This is the address.

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Good day!
I can no longer sell products due to the claim filed to B by the person in charge of your company, a ●●.(←only one person)
There has been no response even after mailing dozens of times to the email address that was reported by B.
Is ●● really an employee in your company? In addition, please let me know the email address of your UK branch if you know it. I will also try confirming there.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Have a great day!

This is the address.

元の翻訳
The product I bought seemed to have been shipped there but I couldn't track it despite entering the tracking number.
The package might have been lost or stolen by the shipping company according to the seller so is it being investigated there?
It is an important package so it's quite urgent.
Please provide a response within the day.

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The product I bought seemed to have been shipped from you but I couldn't track it despite entering the tracking number.
The package might have been lost or stolen by the shipping company according to the seller so is it being investigated there?
It is an important package so it's quite urgent.
Please provide a response within the day.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry. The product you have ordered has missing items. And currently there are also none in stock with the manufacturer. We can prepare a second-hand board that is in very good condition as a replacement. You can purchase this at XX dollars which includes a plastic case, lyrics card and belt.

And as an apology to the lacking items for the new product this time, we will delivery using EMS (Express mail) using the standard shipping fee. So please kindly reconsider.

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I am very sorry. The product you have ordered is out of stock. And currently it is out of stock at the manufacturer. We can prepare a second-hand board that is in very good condition as a replacement. You can purchase this at XX dollars which includes a plastic case, lyrics card, and belt.

And as an apology to the lacking items for the new product this time, we will delivery using EMS (Express mail) for the standard shipping fee. So please kindly consider.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the wonderful proposal.
I am sorry despite you have carefully chosen the products but there are lacking items in three of the product types.
First, I can only prepare 1 out of the 6 of type 1, 3 out of the 10 of type 2 and 4 out of the 10 of type 3.
The quantities of type 1 are not prepared in the stock of store 〇.
I have already mentioned this initially right?

I am sorry but what should be done now after the selection?
If the contents are okay with you then I will send you an email with the order contents and shipping costs details.

I will wait for your response.

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Thank you for the wonderful proposal.
I am sorry that despite the fact that you have carefully chosen the products but there are lacking items in three of the product types.
First, I can only prepare 1 out of the 6 of type 1, 3 out of the 10 of type 2 and 4 out of the 10 of type 3.
The quantities of type 1 are not prepared in the stock of store 〇.
I should have mentioned this to you from the start.

I am sorry but what should be done now after the selection?
If the contents are okay with you then I will send you an email with the order contents and shipping costs details.

I will wait for your response.