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評価: 60 / 1 Review / 2014/01/23 23:05:04

日本語

夜トなどはジャージを着てフリーターのようにふらふらと生活しているし、学問の神様と呼ばれる菅原道真公は、格好こそ当時のものですが、天神様をグループ化していてまるでフランチャイズ企業の代表です。七福神の一人である毘沙門天などは、まるでSMクラブの女王様のような格好をしています。
物語では人の心を蝕むあやかしとの戦いが主に描かれていますが、それが中心というわけでなく、それぞれの登場人物たちの「生」と「死」についての哲学のようなものが、かなり真面目に描かれています。

英語

Yato wears a jersey and lives a non stable life as a part time worker, and the so called god of academics SUGAWARA no Michizane has such an appearance at that time and the representative of the franchise company that grouped the sky gods. One of the seven gods, Bishamonten is dressed up like the SM club queen.
The story mainly depicts the fight against the Ayakashi who erodes the human heart, but it is not necessarily the heart of it, and the philosophy of the respective characters on "life" and "death" is depicted quite seriously.

レビュー ( 1 )

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/24 10:04:49

元の翻訳
Yato wears a jersey and lives a non stable life as a part time worker, and the so called god of academics SUGAWARA no Michizane has such an appearance at that time and the representative of the franchise company that grouped the sky gods. One of the seven gods, Bishamonten is dressed up like the SM club queen.
The story mainly depicts the fight against the Ayakashi who erodes the human heart, but it is not necessarily the heart of it, and the philosophy of the respective characters on "life" and "death" is depicted quite seriously.

修正後
Yato wears a jersey and lives a rather unstable life as a part-time worker, and the so-called god of academics SUGAWARA no Michizane has such an appearance at that time and the representative of the franchise company that grouped the sky gods [?]. One of the seven gods, Bishamonten is dressed up like an S&M club queen.
The story mainly depicts the fight against the Ayakashi who erodes the human heart, but it is not necessarily the heart of it, and the philosophy of the respective characters on "life" and "death" is depicted quite seriously.

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