iluvsnoopy (iluvsnoopy228) — 付けたレビュー

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Heart-beating is a kaleidoscope.

Get your heart, now I chought it.

Brake any doors, now bang myself
Roudly shout, say YES !
Happy sniper → Hope will be real

Shine of the yale raind down.
Wave to you, run to you.
"Love you!" that I will tell you.
Come true my dream, grad dream.

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Heart-beating is a kaleidoscope.

Get your heart, now I caught it.

Break any doors, now bang myself
Loudly shout, say YES !
Happy sniper → Hope will be real

Shine of the yale rained down.
Wave to you, run to you.
"Love you!" that I will tell you.
Come true my dream, happy dream.

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Jump in to the reverse side train. What has decided? "I'm gonna late for school" !!
Nothing to get, down again today, though. Tomorrow will be
Really HOT just under your eyes.
Single-minded-Possitive-Dream, Gotta chance on my full force.

Heart-beating is a kaleidoscope. Get your heart, now I chought it.
Shine and shine with your color.
Brake any doors, now bang myself
Roudly shout, say YES !
Happy sniper → Hope will be real

How many times have you cryed? Cryed many times, our diamond gets harder.
Let's make ourselves we wished.

All the regretting memory should be the map to success.
Let's rebirth and say BANG!
Crying snaiper → pull your trigger

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Jump in to the reverse side train. I'm definitely "I'm gonna late for school" !!
Nothing to get, down again today, though. Tomorrow will also be
Really HOT just under your eyes.
Single-minded-Positive-Dream, Gotta chance with my full force.

Heart-beating is a kaleidoscope. Get your heart, now I caught it.
Shine and shine with your color.
Break any doors, now bang myself
Loudly shout, say YES !
Happy sniper → Hope will be real

Cried many times, a diamond that gets harder.
Let's make ourselves to what we wish to be.

All the regretting memory should be the map to success.
Let's rebirth and say BANG!
Crying sniper → pull your trigger

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sorry.I didn't find your e-mail.
Products arrived today.

Thank you for your quick arrangement.

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I am sorry.I missed your e-mail.
The products arrived today.

Thank you for your quick arrangement.

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We have informed you several times to repair the goods but, we are very upset that you didn't accept our offer to refund the product even though you were busy at work or something else.

We had been preparing to send you the replacement even though you have not replay back our offer, in our effort.

We were very surprized that you opened the case then.
If you send the product back to us, we will refund.

In addition to that, we can only replace the product if the product has such deficiency in our policy.

We hope you will understand.
What would you like to do?

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We have informed you several times to repair the goods but, it is regrettable that you didn't accept our offer to return the product even though you were busy at work or something else.

We had been putting effort in preparing to send you the replacement even though you have not replied to our offer.

We were very surprised that you opened the case then.
If you send the product back to us, we will refund the full amount.

However, we can only replace the product if there are defects.

We hope you will understand.
What would you like to do?

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ph59202

▼Pachinko
Pachinko is an amusement or a game that the player releases small steel balls from lower left portion of a standing board which a lot of nails are driven on and is covered with a glass plate, leads the balls into specific prize holes by using the array of the nails, and gets scores or more balls. The most common business model employs a system as an adult entertainment business that players exchange the balls into special prizes which the parlors designate, and then, exchange them into cash at exchanges which are run by buyers (second-hand shops) in a manner that buyers buy them.

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ph59202

▼Pachinko
Pachinko is an amusement or a game where a player releases small steel balls from lower left portion of a standing board, where a lot of nails are driven on and is covered with a glass plate, and leads the balls into specific prize holes by making use of the nails to gain scores or more balls. The most common business model employs a system as an adult entertainment business that players exchange the balls into special prizes which the parlors designate, and then, exchange them into cash at exchanges which are run by buyers (second-hand shops) in a manner that buyers buy them.

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I received a guitar on February 12 from seller C, but it was a defective product.
I have just sent an email to the seller, requesting the refund of the product and shipment fee to the U.S.

The product I bought was a guitar, but the switch was broken, the washer and nut was off.
The body of the guitar also has some scars.
At the same time, I also ordered the hard case by * dollars, which also has many scars that I cannot accept to use.
I was disappointed that I received such a product with low quality through shopping on eBay.
I would really like to finish this issue by receiving a refund as soon as possible.

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I received a guitar on February 12 from seller C, but it was a defective product.
I have just sent an email to the seller, requesting the refund of the product and shipment fee to the U.S.

The product I bought was a guitar, but the switch was broken, the washer and nut was off.
The body of the guitar also has some scratches.
At the same time, I also ordered the hard case with * dollars, which also has many scratches that I cannot accept to use.
I was disappointed that I received such a product with low quality through shopping on eBay.
I would really like to resolve this issue by receiving a refund as soon as possible.

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I am very sorry to hear this.

You said that last time we did business that you would sell to us if it was a small amount, is this correct?

Does this mean that we are the only purchasers you will not do business with outside of the US?

Mr. ◯◯ said that even if you try and put pressure on the manufacturer that, ultimately, if you shrink your prospective market, you are only hurting your business.

I do not understand what changed, but I do not understand why you will not sell to us.

I wanted to continue doing business with you. If you believe this is possible, please let me know.

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I am very sorry to hear that.

You said that last time we did business that you would sell to us if it was a small amount, is this correct?

So does this mean that you won't be selling to anyone outside of the US?

Mr. ◯◯ said that even if you try and put pressure on the manufacturer that, ultimately, if you shrink your prospective market, you are only hurting your business.

I do not understand what changed, but I do not understand why you will not sell to us.

I want to continue doing business with you. If you believe this is possible, please let me know.

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I am now listing about 50,000 pieces to sell in England, Germany and France.
Recently I have made a Euro account and would like to list items on A.

So, I have a few questions.
I have experienced suspension of account when I upload a large volume of data for listing.
I have a track record in selling items in other countries and wish to sell on your website as well. Can I avoid having my account suspended?

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I am now listing about 50,000 pieces to sell in England, Germany and France.
Recently I have obtained an Euro account and would like to display items in A.

So, I have a question.
I have experienced my account being suspended when I upload a large volume of data for display.
I have a track record for selling items in other countries and wish to sell on your website as well. Can I avoid having my account suspended?

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In addition, could you tell me about the code used to color the yellow in the attached file?
This is a table that organizes the information that was given.

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In addition, could you tell me about the code that was colored with yellow in the attached file?
This is a table that organizes the information that was given.

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Hello, how are you? Thank you for your e-mail.

I'm really glad you still have some of the high-quality mark6 in stock even thought it's not listed in the advertisment.

Unfortunately, right now I don't have enough funds to stock on the high-quality mark6.

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Hello, how are you? Thank you for your e-mail.

I'm really glad you still have some of the high-quality mark6 in stock even though it's not in the advertisement.

Unfortunately, I don't have enough funds for stocking up on the high-quality mark6 right now.

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We have tried to make remittance to your bank from our bank in Japan, and but we were not able to complete the process as some of the information required was missing.

In order for us to further process this remittance, we need the information on your bank, so please give us the following information:
Branch name of your bank:
Address of your bank;
The country where your bank is located:
Payee name:
Payee address:
Payee country:

We apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused you, but please make sure to fill in all information provided above.

We will remit the money as soon as we receive your response

Best regards,

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We have tried to send the remittance from our bank in Japan to you, but we were not able to complete the process as some of the information required were missing.

In order for us to further process this remittance, we need the information on your bank, so please provide us with the following information:
Branch name of your bank:
Address of your bank;
The country where your bank is located:
Payee name:
Payee address:
Payee country:

We apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused you, but please make sure to fill in all the information mentioned above.

We will remit the money as soon as we receive your response

Best regards,

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I'm sorry but I don't remember these purchases.
Did we order these products sometime in the past?

Do you know when we ordered these items?

Could you also let me know why it has been on hold until now?

Is the special price due to the discount that applies twice yearly to bulk purchases?

Have the payments already been settled?

I apologise for asking so many questions.
We will check on our side as well.

Thank you very much.

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I'm sorry but I don't remember these purchases.
Did we order these products before?

Do you know when we ordered these items?

Could you also let me know why it has been on hold until now?

Is the special price due to the discount that is applied twice annually for bulk purchases?

Have the payments already been settled?

I apologise for asking so many questions.
We will check on our side as well.

Thank you very much.

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Please order with the specs on the file attachment. Can you send a softcopy of the order document with the digital signature from the maker once you make the order?
I have explained this to the customer and requested to wait until February for the delivery. And to avoid the customer from cancelling the order, we took $300 off (We almost reached the deficit value). It would be appreciated if you can possibly make it just enough to obtain your benefit.
What are the differences between the upped version of A compared to the previous A? Please let me know the specifics.

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Please order with the specs on the file attachment. Can you send a softcopy of the order document with the signature from the maker once you make the order?
I have explained this to the customer and requested to wait until February of next year for the delivery. And to avoid the customer from cancelling the order, we took $300 off (We almost reached the deficit value). It would be appreciated if you can possibly make it just enough to obtain your benefit.
What are the differences between the upped version of A compared to the previous A? Please let me know the specifics.

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Also I apoligize the confusing spec discription.
As you proposed, I'll give you a discount.
The price of the guitar is now $*.
Please tell me how you find it.

Also, this CLASSIK Series guitar is handmade by craftsman of B comoamy's factory one by one. a veery high-quality guitar.
There is a scratch on the body side. On the red arrow mark on the picture on the website. Thank you for your understanding the second hand quality having a scratch.

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Also I apologize for the confusing spec description.
As you proposed, I'll give you a discount.
The price of the guitar is now $*.
Please tell me your suggestion.

Also, this CLASSIC Series guitar is handmade by craftsman of B company's factory one by one. It is a very high-quality guitar.
There is a scratch on the body side. It is indicated by the red arrow mark on the picture on the website. Please understand that this is a second hand item thus it has a scratch.

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Operation check has been done.

Main unit
Controller
10 softwares

Regarding softwares, some might have little problem reading.
However all has been checked and there was no problem.

-Mario Party 6
-Mario Party 4
-4 Swords
-Gash Bell Friendship Tag
-Harry Potter
-Pokemon Box
-Bokujou Monogatari
-Doubutsu no Mori

Enjoy world famous Japanese gaes.
They'll definitely support you spend wonderful time.

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Operation check has been done.

Main unit
Controller
10 softwares

Regarding softwares, some might have little problem reading.
However all has been checked and there was no problem.

-Mario Party 6
-Mario Party 4
-4 Swords
-Gash Bell Friendship Tag
-Harry Potter
-Pokemon Box
-Bokujou Monogatari
-Doubutsu no Mori

Enjoy world famous Japanese games.
They'll definitely support you spend wonderful time.

元の翻訳
To improve the Post Active Rate, focusing on the 2 points of "Improving the quality of the posted contents" and Increase in high active users" are necessary.

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To improve the Post Active Rate, focusing on the 2 points which are "Improving the quality of the posted contents" and Increase in high active users" are necessary.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>Servicing industry that the main kind shopping service are strong in this trend.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>Service industries centering particularly on selling are strong in that trend.

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#1 Depending on a distribution company holding a transportaiton vehicle, it put weight in the delivery. We have increasing some consultaion, because the duties in the center are performed outsourcing.

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Depending on the distribution company holding the transport vehicle, there are more emphasis given to the weight of the delivery. We receive increasing consultations since there are high cases of the tasks in the center being outsourced.

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We hereby present the answer. It is a sequence whose numbers do not contain the letter "e" when spelled out in English. Thus, the solution to the problem is 2000 (two thousand).

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We hereby present the answer. It is a number series whose numbers do not contain the letter "e" when spelled out in English. Thus, the solution to the problem is 2000 (two thousand).

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Thank you for your purchase.
This product's functionality check has been completed. Rest assured that all of the switches are in full working order.
As this is second-hand, there are some small scratches on the box and on the surface, but it's in fine condition.
With regards to delivery, we will do our best to ensure it is delivered as soon as possible.
However, please understand that it will take 7-10 days to arrive.

Thank you for your co-operation.

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Thank you for your purchase.
This product's functionality check has been completed. Rest assured that all of the switches are in full working condition.
As this is a second-hand item, there are some small scratches on the box and on the item, but it is still in very good condition.
With regards to delivery, we will do our best to ensure it is delivered as soon as possible.
However, please understand that it will take 7-10 days at the earliest for it to arrive.

Thank you for your co-operation.

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I used the auction software to make a bid reservation in your auction. Last night, when I was checking the item being reserved, I was bothered by the concave part of the unit in the photo so I made a cancellation of the bid reservation so why was there a successful bid when I woke up this morning? Apologies for this but can you cancel this? I am very sorry to trouble you. Thank you.

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I used the bidding software to make a bid reservation in your auction. Last night, when I was checking the item being reserved, I was bothered by the concave part of the unit in the photo so I made a cancellation of the bid reservation so why was there a successful bid when I woke up this morning? Apologies for this but can you cancel this? I am very sorry to trouble you. Thank you.

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Not fixed with the numbers but allow me to set it depending on the price.
Please tell if there is any case where the price becomes cheaper, just like before, in cases like 5 and 10 units.

Also,it's not part of the free accessories but I need about 30 pieces ,of 6ft HDMI Cable. how much would these cost?

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The number of quantities are not fixed but allow me to set it depending on the price.
Just like before, please tell me if there are any cases where the price is cheaper like quantities in 5 or 10.

Also, it's not part of the free accessories but how much would 30 pieces of 6ft HDMI Cable cost?