yosuke-oshida (yosuke-oshida) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We are willing to ship the lens to Chile.

D7000 camera supports auto focus, and is also available for sports photos.

修正後
We are willing to ship the lens to Chile.

D7000 camera supports auto focus, and is fine to shoot sports photos too.

元の翻訳
According to the trace result of the item in Japan Post,
the item is being delivered with no problems.
However, tracing is not available in some states of the USA.
- Now under construction

And the international post is delayed due to weather condition.
Post delivery has a delay of 2 or 3 weeks, which is usually delivered in a month.

I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but I would be glad if you could wait it for a while as I had already sent a request to trace the item to American Post.

Despite the inconvenience that the item has not delivered, however, I'm going to handle this problem till the end, so you don't have to worry for it.

修正後
According to the trace result of the item in Japan Post,
the item is being delivered with no problems.
However, tracing is not available in some states of the USA.
- Now under construction

And the international post is delayed due to weather condition.
The delivery usually takes a month, but it is currently delayed by 2 to 3 weeks.

I apologize for the inconvenience, but I would be glad if you could wait it for a while as I have already sent a request to trace the item to American Post.

I am aware of the great inconvenience caused by the item not being delivered yet, but please rest assured that I will be on top of the matter until it is solved.

元の翻訳
・タイマー機能付（4時間/8時間）、タイマーを漬けると4時間/8時間後に自動で消灯します。
・ナイトライトとしてまた他の装飾目的にも使用可能です。

・お子様やペットのそばでも安心、風でも消えません。
・1pcs CR2032バッテリー（付属品）で点灯、リモコンでは1pcs CR2025バッテリー（付属品）で動作
・環境に優しく、バーやホテル、キャンプなどでも使用可能
・サイズの異なる３種類のキャンドルとリモコン付属
・バーベキュー、プール、アウトドア活動にぴったり
・部屋を甘くロマンチックな雰囲気に彩る魔法のようなグッズ

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・タイマー機能付（4時間/8時間）、タイマーを漬けると4時間/8時間後に自動で消灯します。
・ナイトライトとしてまた他の装飾目的にも使用可能です。

・お子様やペットのそばでも安心、風でも消えません。
・CR2032バッテリー1個（付属品）で点灯、リモコンはCR2025バッテリー1個（付属品）使用
・環境に優しく、バーやホテル、キャンプなどに最適
・サイズの異なる３種類のキャンドルとリモコン付属
・バーベキュー、プール、アウトドア活動にぴったり
・部屋を甘くロマンチックな雰囲気に彩る魔法のようなグッズ

元の翻訳
その間に、当方の完全版カタログは受け取られましたでしょうか。もし受け取っていなければ、住所を送っていただければ喜んで発送いたします。その間は、www.authenticmodels.comにて当方のコレクションをオンラインでご覧いただけます。

当方へお問い合わせいただき、重ねてお礼申し上げます。
もし他にもお問い合わせをご希望でしたらどうぞお知らせください。
またのお問い合わせをお待ちしております、それでは良い一日を過ごしください！

修正後
ところで、当方の完全版カタログは受け取られましたでしょうか。もし受け取っていなければ、住所を送っていただければ喜んで発送いたします。その間は、www.authenticmodels.comにて当方のコレクションをオンラインでご覧いただけます。

当方へお問い合わせいただき、重ねてお礼申し上げます。
もし他にもお問い合わせをご希望でしたらどうぞお知らせください。
またのお問い合わせをお待ちしております、それでは良い一日を過ごしください！

元の翻訳
This guitar weighs * Kg. The body-back of this guitar is made from 2-piece mahogany.

The exact purchased price should be written on the document. However, many of our customers in the USA say they didn't need to pay the customs.
So please understand that customs are beyond our control.

This BLP series are made carefully and separately by the professional craftsmen in a factory in Nagano, Japan.
The produce ended already, so it has a good value, without any damages and has a good condition.

修正後
This guitar weighs * Kg. The body-back of this guitar is made from 2-piece mahogany.

The exact purchased price should be written on the document. However, many of our customers in the USA say they didn't need to pay customs.
So please understand that customs are beyond our control.

This BLP series is made carefully and individually by professional craftsmen in a factory in Nagano, Japan.
Production has ended already so it's a good value, without any damages and in good condition.

元の翻訳
I saw your playing the bass in your website!
I've been into STING since junior high school! When POLICE came to Japan in **, I went to their Live Performance. STING and your song W is totally great!

As for the bass you've purchased, we will check the condition and let you know later.
We have many stocks, so our warehouse is far from the office.
We will ask our staff to confirm the detailed photos and conditions, then let you know later.
We will do our best to evacuate your worries and risks.

修正後
I saw your playing the bass in your website!
I've been into STING since junior high school! When POLICE came to Japan in **, I went to their Live Performance. STING and your song W is totally great!

As for the bass you've purchased, we will check the condition and let you know later.
We have a big inventory, so our warehouse is far from the office.
We will ask our staff to confirm the detailed photos and condition, and let you know later.
We will do our best to solve any worries and risks that you may have.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。こちらはPENTAX社のディーラーと午前午後と予定があります。来週の月曜日に再度連絡いたします。
英語での間違いがありましたらお許しください。シャッターではなくセレクターのスピードが間違いなのでは？
よい週末を！
フランシス

修正後
こんにちは。こちらはPENTAX社のディーラーと午前午後と予定があります。来週の月曜日に再度連絡いたします。
英語での間違いがありましたらお許しください。シャッターではなくスピードの「セレクター」の間違いでは？
よい週末を！
フランシス

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

I fiiled out the 'Credit Card authorization form'.
I have attached the file, so please see it.

I confirmed the contents of Order sheet.
The number "888003" in itemNo is "16800", is it true?
If this is *** of 18600, it's no problem.

So please make procedure with this form.

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for your message.

I fiiled out the 'Credit Card authorization form'.
I have attached the file, so please [check] see it.

I confirmed the contents of Order sheet.
The number "888003" in itemNo is "16800", is it true?
If this is *** of 18600 [16800], it's no problem.

So please proceed with this [order].

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for giving us the picture so quickly.
We also would like to solve this problem as soon as possible.

This guitar is quite expensive, so could you let us have some time to consider, please?

First, I'm going to report this issue immediately to eBay, PayPal and Japan Post.
We insure all the products to be shipped.
We found no damages on finger board, electric circuits, sounds, etc. when we checked the quality before shipment.
I'm going to let you know our proposal later, so could you wait for a while?

修正後
Thank you for sending us the picture so quickly.
We also would like to solve this problem as soon as possible.

This guitar is quite expensive, so could you let us have some time to consider, please?

First, we're going to report this issue immediately to eBay, PayPal, and Japan Post.
We insure all the products to be shipped.
We found no damages on finger board, electric circuits, sounds, etc (this needs to be revised, but the rest is great). when we checked the quality before shipment.
We're going to let you know our proposal later, so could you wait for a while?

元の翻訳
I've just watched the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed. Good night.

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I've just finished watching the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed now. Good night.

元の翻訳
I've just watched the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed. Good night.

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I've just finished watching the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed. Good night.

元の翻訳
I've just watched the Tour de France, so I'm going to bed. Good night.

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As I've just finished watching the Tour de France, I'm going to bed now. Good night.

元の翻訳
I have several contracts with various buyers. We are running also our own EC site and have multiple sales channels.
We check the expected values according to stock records and books, compare the expected values and actual numbers on stocks, in order to deliver ordered items to every customers.
In addition, high-valued products are stocked in different places from ordinary ones, hedging the steal risk by counting by date.

修正後
I have several contracts with various buyers. We are running also our own EC site and have multiple sales channels.
We check the expected quantities according to stock records and books, compare the expected quantities and actual numbers on stocks, in order to deliver ordered items to every customer.
In addition, expensive products are stocked in different places from ordinary ones and counted daily in order to hedge the theft risk.

元の翻訳
We confirmed the reason why the export inspection is delaying; the gas used in the air conditioner of the car matches the gas prohibited by Ugandan government for import limitation, so it needs long time to deal with. This gas has no limitation in Japan though.

修正後
We confirmed the reason why the export inspection is delayed; the gas used in an air conditioner of the car falls into the category of import restriction imposed by Ugandan government, so it takes a long time to deal with. This gas has no problem in Japan though.

元の翻訳
I would like the refund for the following scripts; they have too many bugs to work.
Users shouldn't be responsible for debugging (in addition we paid money).
I'm going to buy other Script, so please refund the purchased fee.
You can see the following sites, no one can even login.

I tried re-installing after this update, it still has lots of bugs.
You can't even login to management screen. I'm so disappointed, it has more than one or two bugs.
I strongly don't recommend this Script.

修正後
I would like the refund for the following scripts; they have too many bugs to work.
Users shouldn't be responsible for debugging (in addition we paid money).
I'm going to buy other Script, so please refund the purchased fee.
You can see the following sites, no one can even login.

I tried re-installing after this update, it still has lots of bugs.
You can't even login to the management screen. I'm so disappointed, I'm not talking about just one or two bugs.
I strongly don't recommend this Script.

元の翻訳
The items I ordered on 8th and 11th of July haven't arrived yet, did you send them already?
Could you let me know when you sent these items?
Thank you in advance.

修正後
The items I ordered on 8th and 11th of July haven't arrived yet, did you send them already?
Could you let me know when you sent them?
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
The items I ordered on 8th and 11th of July haven't arrived yet, did you send them already?
Could you let me know when you sent these items?
Thank you in advance.

修正後
The items I ordered on 8th and 11th of July haven't arrived yet, did you send them already?
Could you let me know when you sent them?
Thank you in advance.