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The grill I bought is little different from what I expected, could you let me know how to return it ?

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The grill I bought is different from what I expected, so could you let me know how to return it?

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As the grill was not what I expected and I would like to return it, please let me know the procedure.

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As the grill was different from what I expected, I would like to return it, please let me know the procedure.

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Thank you for writing your introduction in Spanish. It was very helpful.
I can't study because I am busy with work now but I think I study little by little in my spare time. Please teach me various things.

Hiragana you wrote were very good.
There were misspells, but never mind because those were a part of difficult Japanese grammar.

7 is said in either way "nana" or "shichi".
Although it is a rough appropriate use, "nana" is used when it is difficult to pronounce "shichi". And vice versa.

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Thank you for writing your introduction in Spanish. It was very helpful.
Recently I'm too busy working to study, but I think I study little by little in my spare time. I wish you could teach me other things.

The Hiragana you wrote were very good.
Although there were some misspellings, never mind because those are a part of difficult Japanese grammar.

7 is said in either way: "nana" or "shichi".
Although it is a rough appropriate use, "nana" is used when it is difficult to pronounce "shichi" and vice versa.

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1. I also listened to that song but it did not sound the same one because it was Classic version. I didn't listen to its full version, though, I guess it might be already uploaded onto Youtube or something.
2. I didn't watch that to the end.
3. With children, no one can notice her tiredness. She always smiles and makes me happy.
4. I always see pictures of children when I feel tired. I'm not sure why but It makes me smile and wipe my tiredness out.
5. I haven't see that.
6. I'm still working now.

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1. I also listened to that song but it did not sound the same one because it was Classic version. I didn't listen to its full version, though, I guess it might be already uploaded onto Youtube or something.
2. I didn't watch that to the end.
3. With children, no one can notice her tiredness. She always smiles and makes me happy.
4. I always see pictures of my children when I feel tired. I'm not sure why but It makes me smile and wipe my tiredness out.
5. I haven't seen that.
6. I'm still working now.

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We are sorry to give you an inconvenience this time.
There was a mistake in setting the price for the item that you had purchased due to system error of the sales of Amazon.

Amazon processed refunding in full and gave you 10 points additionally as their apology.
Are you satisfied with it?
Thank you for checking our store.

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We are sorry to give you an inconvenience this time.
There was a mistake in setting the price for the item that you had purchased due to sales system error of Amazon.

Amazon carried out full refund and gave you 10 points additionally as their apology.
Are you satisfied with it?
Thank you for purchasing in our store.

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Mr, Kanemoto is a person who came back from the worst.

Before his 30, he started living on the street: he got a setback and loneliness that "broke" his heart.

perseverance prevails, keep chasing your goal at least 3 years. Otherwise, if the changes are coming into your life, you won't be able to achieve it. Also be honest, keep respecting others for their advice. You are sure to have people that help you.

OKWave is one of the Japanese biggest sites that has 2million users.

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Mr, Kanemoto is a person who came back from the worst.

Before his 30s, he started living on the street: he got a setback and loneliness that "broke" his heart.

perseverance prevails, keep chasing your goal at least 3 years. Otherwise, if the changes are coming into your life, you won't be able to achieve it. Also be honest, keep respecting others for their advice. You are sure to have people that help you.

OKWave is one of the Japanese biggest sites that has 2million users.

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Mr. Kanemoto is a man who crept up from the "rock bottom" exactly.

The reason he went into the street life, his "heart crash"events that gave him frustration and loneliness occurred on the verge of 30 years old.

3 years on top of the stone. (Patience wins the day.) If you decided this is it, you should dedicate yourself at least 3 years. If you do not, your life would become a life without anything special even if there were opportunities. And you should be honest and always ask people. Then your collaborators will appear without fail.

OKWave is one of the largest Q & A site from Japan with two million people participating.

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Mr. Kanemoto is a man who crept up from the "rock bottom" exactly.

The reason he went into the street life, it was his "heart crash"events that gave him frustration and loneliness occurred on the verge of 30 years old.

3 years on top of the stone. (Patience wins the day.) If you decided this is it, you should dedicate yourself at least 3 years. Otherwise your life would become a life without anything special even if there were opportunities. And you should be honest and always ask people. Then your collaborators will appear without fail.

OKWave is one of the largest Q & A sites from Japan with two million people participating.

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How to cancel by ourselves in case where more than 1 week has passed since the order has been made

It has already been under the status of "Confirm shipment" by a person in charge of sending.
If it has not been under this status, change it to "Confirm shipment" at first.
For the reason of refunding, select "Undeliverable shipping address". 3 dollars are compensated for it. Send the following message.↵

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How to cancel by ourselves in case of orders that have passed more than 1 week since the first order

It should be under the status of "Confirm shipment" by a person in charge of sending.
If it has not done, carry out the procedure of "Confirm shipment" at first.
For the reason of refunding, select "Undeliverable shipping address". 3 dollars are compensated for it. Send the following message.

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I called Japanese post office.
The item was delivered once, but you're out of home. ↵
After that, the item was send back to Japan since redeliver period was out.
(be not in my hand now)

So, let me know about your choice following processes,
1. Redeliver
In this case, USD28 will be charged for deliver cost.
(I called post office to discount this cost, but rejected)

2 Send USD59 back you as product cost.

Although It is not easy to understand, please refer to the home page of Japanese post office, because Italian one isn't renewal.

I look forward to your reply.

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I called Japanese post office.
The item was delivered once, but you were not home when it arrived to your home, so the item was send back to Japan after expiration of redelivery period.
(I haven't received it yet)

So, let me know about your choice following processes,
1. Redelivery
In this case, USD28 will be charged for deliver cost.
(I called post office to discount this cost, but rejected)

2 Refund USD59 to you as product cost.

Although it's hard to get the info because it's not refreshed on italian website, so please refer to the webpage of Japan Post

I'm looking forward to your reply.

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When the independence of Scotland would be accepted, including the case of Spain which was held up after the world war the second, it might give some impact on several areas of western Europe to go to independent movements.

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If the independence of Scotland would be accepted, including the case of Spain which was held up after the Second World War, it might give some impact to independent movements in several areas of western Europe.

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In case independence of Scottland passes, it may cause any reaction toward each Western Eurpoian independence movements including Spain, which has been sealed after the Second World War.

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In case independence of Scotland passes, it may cause a kind of reaction toward every Western European independence movements including Spain, which has been sealed after the Second World War.

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Blue pond in Hokkaido

The area of the pool is 12,000 square meters, and the deep is from 2.5 to 5 meters. Although the water appears light blue when viewed from the land, the water itself is colorless and even without strong acidic, nobody knows what causes the water color being so mysterious.
The photo of this beautiful pond was adopted wallpaper of Apple’s MacBook Pro.
The reason why the water of the pond is blue, cause of the water contained aluminum hydroxide flow from such as "Waterfall of White Beard" at the Platinum Hot springs.

(The waterfall is undercurrent waterfall which is the underground water pouring out from the cliff.)

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Platinum Blue lake in Hokkaido

The area of the lake is 12,000 square meters, and the deep is from 2.5 to 5 meters. Although the water looks light blue when you see from the land, the water itself is clear and not that strong acid, nobody knows what causes the water color being so mysterious.
The photo of this beautiful lake was adopted as wallpaper of Apple’s MacBook Pro.
The reason why the water of the lake is blue, cause of the water contained aluminum hydroxide flow from such as "Waterfall of White Beard" at the Platinum Hot springs.

(The waterfall is undercurrent waterfall which is the underground water pouring out from the cliff.)

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We apologize to have given you an inconvenience.
we checked the history of sending again, and found that it ha↵
d already been sent to you.
It might be suspended at the customs or lost in the process of delivery.
This time we used SAL, by which we cannot track by the tracking number.
For this reason, we cannot track furtheremore, so we cannot check when we can deliver it to you.

As you said, we consider the fact that several months have already passed,
and we would like to process refunding for you.

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We apologize to have given you an inconvenience.
we checked the shipping status again, and found that it had already been sent to you.
It might be suspended at the customs or lost in the process of delivery.
This time we used SAL, by which we cannot track by the tracking number.
For this reason, we cannot track furthermore, so we cannot check when it will be delivered to you.

As you said, we consider the fact that several months have already passed,
and we would like to process refunding for you.

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Thank you for your message.
We have already refunded the product price to your account.
It takes time for the data to be updated.

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Thank you for your message.
We have already refunded the product price to your account.
It may take a while for the data to be updated.

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If it is fine, As a reference, such as dimensions, it would be good to get it underway.
I think its necessary that the installation should based on the schedule of other work adjustment.

(2)Floor drilling
The most important thing is that, the floor of the stage should have a hole.
Its being considered that, the hole should be 4-5cm at 30cm pitch.
I think it is possible to drill a hole because floor is made of plywood.
I am worried whether the hole is perfect, but the grid of the hole is configured along with a line, so i think it is okay.

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If it is fine, As a reference, such as dimensions, it would be good to get it underway.
I think its necessary that the installation should based on the schedule of other work adjustment.

(2)Floor drilling
The most important thing is that the floor of the stage should have a hole.
We are considering that the hole should be 4-5 cm at 30 cm pitch.
I think it is possible to drill a hole because floor is made of plywood.
I am worried whether the hole is perfect, but the grid of the hole is configured along with a line, so i think it is okay.

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(3)The height of the stage
The height is 160cm, so that the stage is close to one's gaze,
I thinks it may be around 110cm-120cm↵
(4)Width of the stage
i would like to make it in the form of 5cm overlie stage plywood.
So the dimension of the foundation will be 4780*7100

(2)Overall information about material
There will be no longer use of iron ,there will be entire use of wood.
There is a lot of wood work.
Carpenter's friend are expected to stay 26th to until and unless the completion of work.
We will again send you the main regarding the raw material etc. Thank you.↵

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(3) The height of the stage
The height is 160cm, so I suppose the height should be around 110 cm - 120 cm because the stage is close to one's gaze.
(4) Width of the stage
I would like to make the stage plywood overhang some 5 cm.
So the foundation size will be 4780 * 7100.

(2) Overall information about material
We no longer use iron, instead produced by wood.
There is a lot of wood work.
Carpenter's friend are expected to stay from 26th until the work is finished.
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We will email you again about the material.↵
Thank you.

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注文について何か質問などありましたら、遠慮せずに連絡ください.
ありがとうございます。

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注文について何か質問などありましたら、遠慮せずに連絡ください.
よろしくお願いいたします。

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I was informed by your company that the lacking shoe was delivered.
You had definitely received the product because you don't admit the shipment if one of the shoes is lacking, hadn't you?
We have asked to the Japanese Customs and the forwarder until today.
The Japanese Customs say they have not opened the package at all.

What we would like to confirm is if you had actualy shipped this lacking part.
We have understood that the personals are trained for the verifications.↵
But a person can take mistakes.
We would like to ask again.↵
Please, could you check your storage area?

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I was informed by your company that the lacking shoe was delivered.
We are suspecting that you had definitely received the product because your company doesn't allow the shipment if one of the shoes is lacking, right?
We have asked the Japanese Customs and the forwarder so far.
They say that they didn't open the package at all.

What we would like to confirm is if you had actually shipped this lacking part.
We understand that the personnel are trained for the verifications, but a person can make mistakes.
We would like to ask you is: could you check your storage area again, please?