米納　良司 (ryojiyono) — もらったレビュー

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Limited edition for Fun Club members
【CD+DVD+Milena's Boutique aroma candle（Plumeria）】
AVZ1-38968/B　11,000Yen (tax not inclusive) ※Limited press/ Limited edition for Fun Club members
【CD+Blu-ray+Milena's Boutique aroma candle（Plumeria）】
AVZ1-38969/B　11,400Yen (tax not inclusive)　※Limited press/ Limited edition for Fun Club members
※Special privilege is not available in Limited edition for Fun Club members

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Limited edition versions for fan club members
【CD+DVD+Milena's Boutique aroma candle（Plumeria）】
AVZ1-38968/B　11,000Yen (tax not inclusive) ※Limited press/Limited edition versions for fan club members
【CD+Blu-ray+Milena's Boutique aroma candle（Plumeria）】
AVZ1-38969/B　11,400Yen (tax not inclusive)　※Limited press/Limited edition versions for fan club members
※Special extras are not available in limited edition versions for fan club members

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TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE performance at J-POP SUMMIT in San Francisco! 2 featuring movies on screen at Movie Festival

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TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will perform at the J-POP SUMMIT in San Francisco! Their two movies will also be shown at the concurrent film festival!

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TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE arrives in US! They will be joining as honored guest at J-POP SUMMIT in San Francisco, the biggest Japanese culture festival in US!
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE performs live at the stage, and in addition, their two movies "Gakkou no Kaidan" and "Itsusu Kazoereba" will be viewed at Japan Film Festival of San Francisco followed by stage greetings. Japan Film Festival of San Francisco is full of TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE.

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TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE arrives in US! They will be joining as honored guest at J-POP SUMMIT in San Francisco, the biggest Japanese culture festival in US!
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE performs live at the stage, and in addition, their two movies "Gakkou no Kaidan" and "Itsutsu Kazoereba" will be viewed at Japan Film Festival of San Francisco followed by stage greetings. Japan Film Festival of San Francisco is full of TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE.

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Hello. Thank you very much for your usual cooperation.

Change the broker which uses EA, and also MT4 account.

The new broker which uses EA, and MT4 account is as follows.

Additional request is that I would like you to send me EA file version 2.0 or 2.1 that can work with the latest MT4 Build646

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Hello and thank you very much for your usual cooperation.

The MT4 account and the broker using EA will be changed.

The following are the MT4 account and the new broker that will be using EA.

In addition, I would like you to send version 2.0 or 2.1 of the EA file, which will be compatible with the latest MT4 Build646.

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このたびの手配ありがとうございます。貴殿のご注文の出荷日は7月22日でございます。
プロフォ-マインボイスを添付いたしました。署名の上ご返送いただけますようお願いいたします。
ご指定の配送業者、届け先、必要な出荷書類を教えてください。
箱もしくは製品に貼付するバーコードは必要でしょうか？
お返事をお待ち申し上げます。

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このたびの手配ありがとうございます。お客様のご注文の出荷日は7月22日でございます。
プロフォ-マインボイスを添付いたしました。署名の上ご返送いただけますようお願いいたします。
ご指定の配送業者、届け先、必要な出荷書類を教えてください。
箱もしくは製品に貼付するバーコードは必要でしょうか？
お返事をお待ち申し上げます。

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Dear Customer

I am regrettable to know that you did not like our products, and feel really sorry.
I understand your point, and please send it back to Japan.

Before sending it back, please make sure,
- use registered mail, and sent back to my address
- before sealing, take pictures of goods inside of the package

After shipping, please send me the tracking number and the pictures.
Once I confirm after arriving in Japan, I will duly refund to you.

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Dear customer,

It is regrettable that you did not like our products and I deeply apologize.
I understand your reasons therefore, you are welcome to return it to us.

Before sending it back to us, please make sure
- to use registered mail and sent to the address I have forwarded to you
- before sealing the package, please photograph the items inside it

After shipping, please send me the tracking number and the photos.
Once I have confirmed the package's arrival in Japan, I will duly refund the payment.

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eb様
私はブラジルの写真家で、キャノン用にタムロンの購入を検討しています。
私の質問はそちら様が出荷する際の申告額についてです。ここブラジルにおいては申告額に基づいてとても高い税率が課せられます。
ですので、出荷する際に、実際の額よりも低い額で申告していただくことが可能かどうかです。
どうぞこの点をご考慮いただき、私がより購入しやすくしていただけることに合意していだだけるようにお願いいたします。
よろしくお願いいたします。

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eb様
私はブラジルの写真家で、キャノン用にタムロンの購入を検討しています。
私の質問はそちら様が出荷する際の申告額についてです。ここブラジルにおいては申告額に基づいてとても高い税率が課せられます。
ですので、出荷する際に、実際の額よりも低い額で申告していただくことは可能かどうか知りたいと思っています。
どうぞこの点をご考慮いただき、私がより購入しやすくしていただけることに合意していだだけるようにお願いいたします。
よろしくお願いいたします。

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I am afraid but I am not available on 30th June.
6th or 7th July will be fine for me.
Please let me know if it is possible that you arrange translator at your side?
Thank you in advance for your confirmation.

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I am afraid that I am not available on 30th June (Fri).
6th or 7th July will be fine for me.
Please let me know if you can arrange a translator.
Please confirm these matters.

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こんにちは
このケースについては注文が重なっております。先週の連休の影響で遅れが出ており、昨日出荷ができませんでした。
重ねてお詫び申し上げます。

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こんにちは
このケースについては在庫切れでした。先週の連休の影響で遅れが出ており、昨日配送はありませんでした。
重ねてお詫び申し上げます。

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こんにちは
このケースについては注文が重なっております。先週の連休の影響で遅れが出ており、昨日出荷ができませんでした。
重ねてお詫び申し上げます。

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こんにちは
↵
このケースは取り寄せを行っておりました［or入荷待ちの状態でした］。先週の連休の影響で遅れが出ております。昨日は、配送［or郵便物］がありませんでした。
↵
（商品の発送が）遅れておりますことお詫び申し上げます。よろしくお願いいたします。

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When leaving dormitory, please make sure you leave nothing behind.
Please resume the room condition as the same as the one when you started to use.
Do not also forget to settle and cancel your contract of gas, water and electricity.
Finally, drop the key to the post at room 105 when you are leaving this weekend.

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When leaving dormitory, please make sure you leave nothing behind.
Please restore the condition of the room to its original state.
Do not also forget to settle and cancel your contract for the gas, water and electricity services.
Finally, drop the key to the post at room 105 when you are leaving this weekend.

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The new E Commerce web site of BreadBoardMania will be ready soon in June.
Once open, we will inform you through Twitter, Facebook and our web pate. Thank you.

Twitter : https://twitter.com/breadbrdmaniac
Facebook : https://www.facebook.com/breadboardmaniac
WEB : http://breadboardmaniac.com

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The new E Commerce web site of BreadBoardMania will be ready soon in June.
Once open, we will inform you through Twitter, Facebook and our web page. Thank you.

Twitter : https://twitter.com/breadbrdmaniac
Facebook : https://www.facebook.com/breadboardmaniac
WEB : http://breadboardmaniac.com

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Please let me know the product name, so that I can inquire the stock availability to supplier.

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Please let me know the product name, so that I can inquire the stock availability to the manufacturer or the supplier.

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Aperture Foundation と MFA programが主催する、School of Visual Artsの芸術批評とライティングクラスのランチ会に参加しませんか？David Levi Strauss氏の最新の著作　「Words Not Spent Today Buy Smaller Images Tomorrow: 写真の現在と未来のエッセイ」（今月発売）のサイン会も開催されます。その25のエッセイの中で、Strauss氏は変化する写真の記録としての役目と、写真世代からの脱却が私たちにもたらすものについて語っています。

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Aperture Foundation と MFA programが主催する、School of Visual Artsの芸術批評とライティングクラスの立ち上げに参加しませんか？David Levi Strauss氏の最新の著作　「Words Not Spent Today Buy Smaller Images Tomorrow: 写真の現在と未来のエッセイ」（今月発売）のサイン会も開催されます。その25のエッセイの中で、Strauss氏は変化する写真の記録としての役目と、写真世代からの脱却が私たちにもたらすものについて語っています。

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I would not like to close this case #5058417827 because even though the seller advised me the items was shipped out, I have not yer received it. There is a possibility that the seller has shipped out to the wrong address. For this reason, I need this case to be still open.

I thank Kory that he is always communicating me with very easy English, whereas my Japanese and English is always messy. I apologize.

Could you please cut the eyebrow a little bit shorter, then it will be completed. I like the paint of the skin and hair you have done so well.

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I don't want to close case #5058417827 because even though the seller advised me that the item was shipped out, I have not yet to received it. There is also a possibility that the item that was shipped by the seller is a fake. Due to this reason, can you continue to leave this case opened?

I thank you Kory for always communicating with me in simple English. However, I apologize for always requesting in messy Japanese and in English.

Could you please cut the eyebrow and make it a little bit shorter. By doing that, it will be finished. The skin paint and the hair were done very well.