米納　良司 (ryojiyono) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
By A, I was unable to pay by some error.
I will transfer the amount for the item from the bank,↵
so please let me know your account number of the bank.
Thank you.

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By A, I was unable to pay by some error.
Please let me know your bank account number as I will transfer the amount for the item from the bank.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
As there is an error in A's method, the payment is unable to be made.
As the payment for the product is sent from the bank, please kindly tell me the bank account number.
Thank you.

修正後
As there is an error in A's method, the payment is unable to be made.
Please kindly let me know your bank account number as I will pay for the product through the bank.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I couldn't pay in the way of A due to some errors.
I will remit the merchandise price from a bank, so please tell me numbers of your bank account.
Thank you in advance.

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I couldn't pay in the way of A due to some errors.
Please let me know your bank account number as I will remit the merchandise price from a bank.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I'm not good at speaking English, so cannot call you.
I found the page where I guess your twitter is.
As I followed you, would you follow me back?
When you do it, we can exchange messages each other.
My titter acount is 〇〇.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I'm not good at speaking English, so cannot call you.
As I searched your ebay name on Google, I found the page where I guess your twitter is.
As I followed you, would you follow me back?
When you do it, we can exchange messages each other.
My titter acount is 〇〇.

元の翻訳
thank you for the message.

We will ship it soon, and please wait for a little while before we ship it.
Thank you.

Thank you for the message.
Could you print out a label of returning the item on Amazon?
If it is possible, please return it to the following address.
After we receive the item, we will process the refunding.
Thank you.

Thank you for the message.
We are sorry to have kept you waiting.
We will send the item tomorrow.
Thank you.

修正後
thank you for the message.

We will ship it soon, and please wait for a little while till we ship it.
Thank you.

Thank you for the message.
Could you print out a label of returning the item on Amazon?
If it is not possible, please return it to the following address.
After we receive the item, we will process the refunding.
Thank you.

Thank you for the message.
We are sorry to have kept you waiting.
We will send the item tomorrow.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
We've approved your request.

There's no problem with US address.
We will arrange payment when we prepare 5 pieces.
We're looking forward to hearing from you.

修正後
We've approved your request.

There's no problem with US address.
We will arrange payment when you prepare 5 pieces.
We're looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
The color in picture is the same with the products.

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Thank you for your message.
The color in the products is the same with the picture.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your patience.
As we confirmed the order with the maker, it turned out the sales date has been postponed.
The release date is August 29, 2014.

There was a misunderstanding on our side that it was supposed to be released in June, so it has already been sold in the market.
We sincerely apologize for the confusion.

Kindly please choose whether you will wait, or cancel the order.
Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
Thank you for your patience.
As we confirmed the order with the maker, it turned out the sales date has been postponed.
The release date is August 29, 2014.

There was a misunderstanding on our side that it has already been released because it was originally scheduled in June.
We sincerely apologize for the confusion.

Kindly please choose whether you will wait, or cancel the order.
Thank you for your understanding.