米納　良司 (ryojiyono) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your message.
We certainly understood your intention for return.
We will start refund procedure accordingly.
As for the return procedure, please refer to the regulation posted in our store.

Thank you very much for your message.
We are deeply sorry that the item has damaged.
We would like to refund accordingly, so that please change your evaluation.
Thank you very much for your understanding.
Please also let me know if there is any condition that you would like to address to us.

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Thank you very much for your message.
Your request for the return of the item is duly noted.
We will start refund procedure accordingly.
As for the return procedure, please refer to our store policies.

Thank you very much for your message.
We are deeply sorry that the item has damaged.
We would like to refund accordingly, so that please change your evaluation.
Thank you very much for your understanding.
Please also let me know if there is any condition that you would like to address to us.

元の翻訳
As I am not good at phone call, I am writing instead.

You mentioned that the order has been cancelled due to the discrepancy of credit card information. Please kindly let me know what exactly was not in accordance with my credit card. Since the card is issue in Japan, it should be very small mistake of writing of names or address which was originally written in Japanese. It is, however, that the credit card itself should have no problem because I used the same card to purchase from you a week ago, and am regularly using this card without any problem.

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As I am not good at phone call, I am writing to you instead.

You mentioned that the order has been cancelled due to the discrepancy of the credit card information. Please kindly let me know what exactly was not in accordance with my credit card. Since the card was issued in Japan, it should be very small mistake of writing of names or address which was originally written in Japanese. It is, however, that the credit card itself should have no problem because I used the same card for a purchase from you a week ago, and am regularly using this card without any problem.

元の翻訳
この件についてご連絡いただけて感謝いたします。あなたが100％よいフィードバックをお受けになられていることはわかります。損傷ついてのクレームを明日にでも喜んで出させていただきます。明日以降は出かけておりますため、その予定のため明日以降は返事できません。次回お返事ができるのは7月17日以降になりますが遅すぎますか？地元でカメラの修理を行うのもありでしょうか？

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この件についてご連絡いただけて感謝いたします。あなたが100％よいフィードバックをお受けになられていることはわかります。損傷ついての賠償請求を明日にでも喜んで出させていただきます。明日以降は出かけておりますため、その予定のため明日以降は返事できません。次回お返事ができるのは7月17日以降になりますが遅すぎますか？地元でカメラの修理を行うのもありでしょうか？

元の翻訳
I have received an inquiry from Mr. ●● of Garuda Indonesia.
He wanted to cycling tour around Mount Fuji and Yatsugadake.
As this area is our very familiar location, please let us handle this.
We have organized tour regularly.
Just last month, we have organized a tour of VIP from Taiwan with 30 people around Mount Fuji.

As the detail of the tour is not yet fixed, we are quoting the charge for the guide.
We send you the data of the list of service we provide for your reference.

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I have received an inquiry from Mr. ●● of Garuda Indonesia.
He wanted to cycling tour around Mount Fuji and Yatsugadake.
As this area is our very familiar location, please let us handle this.
We have been organizing tours for groups regularly.
Just last month, we have organized a tour of VIP from Taiwan with 30 people around Mount Fuji.

As the detail of the tour is not yet fixed, we are quoting the charge for the guide.
We send you the data of the list of service we provide for your reference.

元の翻訳
もしまだでしたら、電話で販売者に連絡するのも一手でしょう。このような状況ではそうするのが一番です。eBayのカスタマーサポートに売り手の電話番号をリクエストすることができます。販売者の連絡先を要求する場合は、あなたの連絡先も相手側に伝わります。そうするにはあなたの承認が必要となります。よって、この件についてお返事を下さい。

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もしまだでしたら、電話で販売者に連絡するのも一手でしょう。このような状況を打開するのにはそうするのが一番です。eBayのカスタマーサポートに売り手の電話番号をリクエストすることができます。販売者の連絡先を要求する場合は、あなたの連絡先も相手側に伝わります。そうするにはあなたの承認が必要となります。よって、この件についてお返事を下さい。

元の翻訳
Please recommend me outdoor fashion brand with good quality.

I would like to know a brand which is not yet major and new brand which does not have longer years after establishment.

Please let me know fancy goods brand that you can buy online. I would prefer brand with a lot of fashionable items.

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Please recommend me outdoor goods brand with good quality.

I would like to know a brand which is not yet major and new brand which does not have longer years after establishment.

Please let me know fancy goods brand that you can buy online. I would prefer brand with a lot of fashionable items.

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Thank you very much for shopping from us.
We have wrongly advised you that it can be switched to English display of the item, but that is only for the first version.
I have just now confirmed with the manufacturer that the item available after April is only for Japanese, and can not be switched to English.
Probably, the item sold by the seller is the first version, and that is the reason why the price is high.
We are very much afraid we would like to cancel this deal and refund all to you.
We apologize that we were not able to answer to your expectation.

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Thank you very much for shopping with us.
We have wrongly advised you that the item display can be switched to English, but that is only for the first version.
I have just now confirmed with the manufacturer that the item available after April is only for Japanese and cannot be switched between Japanese and English.
Probably, the item sold by other sellers is also the first version, and that is the reason why the price is high.
We are very sorry, but we would like to cancel this deal and issue a full refund to you.
We sincerely apologize as you were greatly looking forward to the item.

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I am writing to let you know there is some error in registered information.

We are going join the conference with a group of total three people.
The member is as follows.

XXXX

I have just now registered myself through your URL address. Please kindly confirm.

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I am writing to let you know there is some error in registered information.

We are going to join the conference with a group of total three people.
The member are as follows.

XXXX

I have just now registered myself through your URL address. Please kindly confirm.

元の翻訳
WeChat がモバイルストアプラットフォームを発表!

WeChat, 別名 Weixinは本日、待望されていたエコシステム内部でのストア立ち上げを可能にしたビジネス向けのシステムを発表した。そのストアは WeChat Little Storeと名付けられた。

ストアのオーナーは、アイテムをアップロードしたり管理したり、他のメンバーとの間で注文と在庫を管理することができます。
苦情を受け付たり、解決する購入プロテクションプログラム機能も付属する。

このストアを管理することは、説明によれば、ごく簡単で、販売者は注文を管理したり、通知を受けたり、データ管理をするダッシュボードが使用できる。

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WeChat がモバイルストアプラットフォームを発表!

WeChat, 別名 Weixinは本日、待望されていたエコシステム内部でのストア立ち上げを可能にしたビジネス向けのシステム「WeChat Little Store」を発表した。

ストアのオーナーは、アイテムをアップロードしたり管理したり、他のメンバーとの間で注文と在庫を管理することができる。
苦情を受け付たり、解決する購入プロテクションプログラム機能も付属する。

このストアを管理することは、説明によれば、ごく簡単で、販売者は注文を管理したり、通知を受けたり、データ管理をするダッシュボードが使用できる。

元の翻訳
The buyer is requesting refund and returning by making bad use of Amazon system, knowing that the item is not returnable condition.
As the evidence of this, the buyer has already purchased several cards, and requesting us to return them.
We are no longer able to tolerate this malpractice.
Please investigate from the record of our e-mail corresponding, and deny the buyer's request of refund and returning.

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The buyer is requesting refund and returning by making bad use of the Amazon system, knowing that the item is not in returnable condition.
As the evidence of this, the buyer has already purchased several cards, and requesting us to allow him to return them.
We are in no way able to tolerate this malpractice.
Please investigate from the record of our e-mail corresponding, and deny the buyer's request of refund and returning.

元の翻訳
We are unreasonably requested by the buyer for refund and returning goods that we think is fraud.
We sold Playstation network card, and upon the buyer's request we informed a code.
For more detail, please refer to the record of e-mail corresponding.
By informing the code, the buyer is able to play game contents in Playstation.
In other words, even though we have not shipped out the card itself, the buyer is actually receiving the service that he had paid for.

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We are unreasonably requested by the buyer for refund and returning goods that we think is fraud.
We sold a PlayStation network card, and upon the buyer's request we informed him of a code.
For more details, please refer to the record of e-mail corresponding.
By informing the code, the buyer is able to play game contents on PlayStation.
In other words, even though we have not shipped out the card itself, the buyer is actually receiving the service that he paid for.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your response, and I am almost now able to understand.
It may be technically difficult, but it would be good if you can add the function which you can log-in with Twitter account.

I have been waiting already for five days without having the reply. Is it really difficult to solve the bug?

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Thank you for your reply. I have come to understand the situation now.
It may be technically difficult, but it would be great if you could add the function for users to log in with their Twitter accounts.

I have been waiting for the reply for 5 days. Is it really difficult to solve the bug?

元の翻訳
As advised by eBay, I have made the motion to claim to be settled by Claim solution Center. Soon after, I called PayPal and told them that it is the incident occurred during eBay Global Shipping Program shipping, and was told that the claim will be settled by Paypal. For this, I believer we can settle the issue smoothly.

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As advised by eBay, I have made the motion to claim to be settled by Claim solution Center. And I have made a call to PayPal to tell them that it is the accident occurred by the shipping of eBay Global Shipping Program and I was told that the claim will be handled by Paypal. In this way, I believer we can handle the issue smoothly.