翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/07/02 17:21:41

ryojiyono
ryojiyono 52 英検1級。 TOEFL623。 TOEIC 975。
日本語

メッセージありがとうございます。
商品の返品かしこまりました。
返金手続きの方行わせていただきます。
返品については店のご利用規約を御覧ください。

メッセージありがとうございます。
商品に破損があったこと大変申し訳ありません。
こちらの方で返金対応させていただきますので
評価の方改めていただけませんか?
よろしくお願いします。
お客様の方で条件等あればよろしくお願いします。

英語

Thank you very much for your message.
We certainly understood your intention for return.
We will start refund procedure accordingly.
As for the return procedure, please refer to the regulation posted in our store.

Thank you very much for your message.
We are deeply sorry that the item has damaged.
We would like to refund accordingly, so that please change your evaluation.
Thank you very much for your understanding.
Please also let me know if there is any condition that you would like to address to us.

レビュー ( 1 )

chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/02 17:46:56

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your message.
We certainly understood your intention for return.
We will start refund procedure accordingly.
As for the return procedure, please refer to the regulation posted in our store.

Thank you very much for your message.
We are deeply sorry that the item has damaged.
We would like to refund accordingly, so that please change your evaluation.
Thank you very much for your understanding.
Please also let me know if there is any condition that you would like to address to us.

修正後
Thank you very much for your message.
Your request for the return of the item is duly noted.
We will start refund procedure accordingly.
As for the return procedure, please refer to our store policies.

Thank you very much for your message.
We are deeply sorry that the item has damaged.
We would like to refund accordingly, so that please change your evaluation.
Thank you very much for your understanding.
Please also let me know if there is any condition that you would like to address to us.

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