翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私たちの代行業者は宛名が不完全の商品を受け取った。

あなたが発送した商品で間違いないですか？

その上であなたが発送した商品という証明が必要です。

何か証明する画像ををメールで送ってください。

理由は宛名が不完全で私の商品かどうか不明で
私は商品を受け取ることができません。

英語

Our agency received the products with the incomplete address.

Is it products that you have shipped?

If so, you need a proof that you shipped it.

Please send us some image to prove it by e-mail.

The reason is I am not sure if it is my products since the address is incomplete
and I can not accept it yet.

レビュー ( 1 )

tamamiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/13 22:56:45

元の翻訳
Our agency received the products with the incomplete address.

Is it products that you have shipped?

If so, you need a proof that you shipped it.

Please send us some image to prove it by e-mail.

The reason is I am not sure if it is my products since the address is incomplete
and I can not accept it yet.

修正後
Our agency received a product with an incomplete address.

Will you make sure that this is a product which you have shipped?

If so, we need a proof of the product that you shipped it.

Please send us some images to prove it by e-mail.

The reason is that I am not sure if it is my product since the address is incomplete
and I can not accept it yet.

伝えたいことが上手く訳されていると思いました。

[mechamami]

有り難うございました。