岡　達郎 (jesse-oka) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I got a negative valuation for lately deal from you.
However we are asking customers for payment within 3 days on our item page,
and the period has past, and we took a cancellation process, then got a negative valuation.
Although I handled the deal as what is written on item page, isn't this subject for deleting?
We are very in trouble.
Please give us an advice.

We handled the deal just as we described on the item page.
And you placed a bid, seeing the page.
You should have checked it.
Plus you are ignoring our messages.

You are the first person who acted like this.

Please would you give us a contact right away?

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I got a negative feedback for the recent deal from you.
Although we are asking customers to pay within 3 days on our item page,
and the period has past, and we took a cancellation process, then got a negative feedback.
Although I handled the deal as what is written on item page, isn't this subject for deleting?
We are very in trouble.
Please give us an advice.

We handled the deal just as we described on the item page.
And you placed a bid, seeing the page.
You should have checked it.
Plus you are ignoring our messages.

You are the first person who acted like this.

Please would you give us a contact right away?

元の翻訳
It's regrettable that things has become like this.
Scratched condition has been shown with photos, and we conducted checks before shipping, so if there are other scratches other than the original, possibly it would have been damaged on the middle of transportation.
Would you please send us photos of the scratches?
An assurance may possibly be applied if you could submit a damage report to post office.
Hopefully it could be sold in ebay, but we think we hope to help you as possible as we can.

Kind regards.

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It's regrettable that things has become like this.
The condition of the scratch has been shown by the photos, and we conducted checks before shipping, so if there are scratches other than the original ones, it may have been damaged on the middle of transportation.
Would you please send us photos of the scratches?
An insurance may possibly be applied if you could submit a damage report to post office.
Hopefully it could be sold in ebay, but we hope to help you as much as we can.

Kind regards.

元の翻訳
When I tracked with DHL, item seems to have arrived to Japan today.
Although I’ll check DHL in Kansai, please urge from you too.
If the item won’t reach until 11th, I’ll need to pay penalty to customer.
That means I’ll ask you for proper charge too.

Regarding the order of No.6, there is one addition.
Please check the attached file
It’s a suit of monster jacket 2XL.
If you are already ready for the initial 3 suits, it’s okay that addition is later.

I’ll transfer the price of $360 which subtracts $300 from total $660 toady.

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When I tracked with DHL, item seems to have arrived to Japan today.
Although I’ll check DHL in Kansai, please urge from you too.
If the item won’t reach until 11th, I’ll need to pay penalty to customer.
That means I’ll ask you for proper charge too.

Regarding the order of No.6, there is one addition.
Please check the attached file.
It’s a suit of monster jacket 2XL.
If you are already ready for the initial 3 suits, it’s okay if the addition arrives later.

I’ll transfer the price of $360 which subtracts $300 from the total $660 toady.

元の翻訳
Since the item you made an order got sold out,
we ordered them to manufacturer, but they say its arriving schedule is about xth, x ～ xth, x.

If you wait until then, duo to the system of Amazon the order will be cancelled, so we will treat it as being shipped, and will make a contact you again after they arrived to us.

In case that you cannot wait until then, a cancellation of the item is available, so let us know.

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Since the item you made an order got sold out,
we ordered them to the manufacturer, but they say its arriving schedule is about xth, x ～ xth, x.

If you wait until then, duo to the system of Amazon the order will be cancelled, so we will treat it as being shipped, and will make a contact you again after they arrived to us.

In case that you cannot wait until then, a cancellation of the item is available, so let us know.

元の翻訳
Hello,

My name is OO.

I’d like to purchase commodities at fixed intervals.
Until now, I purchased the following gods using coupon tickets as well.

Part number. OOO
Part number. △△△

Would you please issue coupons only especially for me, since this time I want to order 20 in total?↵
If it’s possible, I’ll be happy if you contact me.

Thanks for reading till the end.
Have a nice day.

Kind regards.

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Hello,

My name is OO.

I’d like to purchase products at fixed intervals.
Until now, I have purchased the following products using coupons.

Part number. OOO
Part number. △△△

This time I would like to order a total of 20 items, and was wondering whether you would be willing to issue me a special coupon?↵
Please contact me back if this is possible.

Thank you for reading until the end.
Have a nice day.

Kind regards.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I purchased this item at Amazon.com.

But this product hasn’t come neither with a warranty and a manual.
I’d like to you to send those to my address.

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Hello,
I purchased this item through Amazon.com.

But this product came with neither the warranty nor the instruction manual.
I’d like to you to send those to my address.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I purchased this item at Amazon.com.

But this product hasn’t come neither with a warranty and a manual.
I’d like to you to send those to my address.

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Hello,
I purchased this item at Amazon.com.

But this product hasn’t come either with a warranty or a manual.
I’d like you to send those to my address.

元の翻訳
Thank you for answering to our question.

I got relieved that you are an agency of xx.

We appreciate your discount of xx.
However, for our contentious business, we can’t make a predominance with that price.

We trade with some American firms.
Although it depends on products, the market price of a wholesale price is generally less than 50%-off of their established price.

Could you sell us this product for $170 per one?
We’ll increase the amount of purchase from now on.
Also we want to buy xx.

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Thank you for answering our question.

I was relieved that you are an agency of xx.

We appreciate your discount of xx.
However, for our contentious [continuous] business, [we can’t make a predominance with that price. >?????<]

We trade with some American firms.
Although it depends on products, the market price of a wholesale price is generally less than 50%-off of their market price [RRP
]↵

Could you sell us this product for $170 per unit/item?
We’ll increase the amount of purchase from now on.
Also we want to buy xx.

元の翻訳
As you say, your order seems to be suspended.
Since this order will be shipped by Amazon, so I need to confirm to Amazon about the detail.
I’ll arrange that Amazon will make a contact to you, so please wait a moment.
If you don’t get a contact from Amazon, please toss an inquiry to them.

I have received the following message from my customer.
Please make a contact to the customer regarding to the status of payment and shipment.
Please contact me too if anything.

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As you say, your order seems to be suspended.
Since this order will be shipped by Amazon, I need to confirm to Amazon about the detail.
I’ll arrange that Amazon will make a contact to you, so please wait a moment.
If you don’t get a contact from Amazon, please inquire at them.

I have received the following message from my customer.
Please contact the customer regarding the status of payment and shipment.
Please contact me too if anything.

元の翻訳
1. Thank you for your trying to understand my clumsy English.
2. I often post comments without checking (if those are the right English sentences), thinking it’ll be ok if I can somewhat convey.
3. Is my English understandable?
4. The way she gets delighted is cute.
5. He slashes (touches?) nearby people when he’s excited is cute.
6. When I see this scene, I remember that time.
7. Her way of talking slowly makes me feel healed.
8. May you be in my dream!
9. Which kind of pastry do you like? Would you mind to take those?

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1. Thank you for your trying to understand my clumsy English.
2. I often post comments without checking (if those are the right English sentences), thinking it’ll be ok if I can somewhat convey.
3. Is my English understandable?
4. The way she gets delighted is cute.
5. That he hits (touches?) nearby people when he’s excited is cute.
6. When I see this scene, I remember that time.
7. Her way of talking slowly makes me feel relaxed
[8. May you be in my dream!]????
9. Which kind of pastry/sweets do you like? Would you accept some of them from me?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your purchase.
I checked your deposit, so we are preparing the shipment.
When the shipment is done, we’ll send you its tracking number, so wait a moment.↵

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Thank you for your purchase.
We have confirmed your payment, and we are preparing for the shipment of your order.
Please allow us some time as we will be providing you with a tracking number for your shipment as soon as the shipment is completed.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your purchase.
I checked your deposit, so we are preparing the shipment.
When the shipment is done, we’ll send you its tracking number, so wait a moment.

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Thank you for your purchase.
I have verified your payment, and we are preparing the shipment.
When the shipment is done, we will send you the tracking number. Thank you for your patience.

元の翻訳
I have received 2 items↵
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

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I have received 2 items, and found out that the presentation box (the outer box) and instruction manual were not included with one of them.
Please ship the presentation box and the manual to me immediately.
If you don’t have the presentation box and the manual available, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
I have received 2 items
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

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I have received 2 items
One of them, was missing a manual and the vanity case (outer case).
Please send the missing vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for that item.

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I have received 2 items
For one of them, there are lack of a manual and a vanity case (outer case).
Please send those lacking vanity case and manual immediately.
If you don’t have vanity case and manual, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

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I have received 2 items
One of them did not come with the fancy box (outer case) and its instruction manual.
Please send them to me immediately.
If you don’t have them to send to me, please give me a refund for those.

Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
In the above-mentioned page, when you click the “Add a product” button in “INVENTORY”, following page appears.
Then if you input “japan import” in the blank which is in around the center there and click “Search”, hundred thousands of Japanese products get displayed.

And click “Sell yours” for an exhibit operation for your product there.

The next page is exhibition screen.

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On the above page, when you click the “Add a product” button in “INVENTORY”, the following page appears.
Then if you input “japan import” in the blank which is in around the center there and click “Search”, hundred thousands of Japanese products get displayed.

And click “Sell yours” for an exhibit operation for your product there.

The next page is an exhibition screen.

元の翻訳
Regarding the item which has arrived to your office. It is the one I purchased with my earned points.
So, the purchasing price is $0, but when I try to enter $0 into “Purchased value”, it got an error and couldn’t enter “$0”. How can I interact with this?↵
Would you tell me?

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Regarding the item which has arrived to your office, it is the one I purchased with my earned points.
Thus, I thought the purchase price would be $0, but when I tried to input $0 into “purchased value”, it came up with an error and I could not enter “$0”. Would you please be so kind as to tell me how I may deal with this?

元の翻訳
This item is not mine.
Because its shipment label is Ste52-034, mine is Ste052-304.
This is your mistake, so please repay $2 which I paid for checking the product image.

Best regards.↵

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This item is not mine.
Its shipment label is Ste52-034, whereas mine is Ste052-304.
This is your mistake, so please send me $2 which was the cost I incurred to check the product image.

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.

I filled in the “Credit Card authorization form”.
And I attached it in this mail, please check it.

I checked the contents of the order form.
Is “888003” of itemNo “16800” right?
If this is *** of 16800, this order is alright.

Please process this order.

Best regards,

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Thank you for contacting me.

I filled out the “Credit Card authorization form”.
I have attached it to this mail, so please check it.

I checked the contents of the order form.
Is ItemNo “888003” “16800”?
If this is *** of 16800, this order is alright.

Please process the order.

Best regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you for arranging the schedule.
*Regarding the meeting with A Company, is it possible to let it start at 17:00?
*Regarding the supper on 18th, September, Tanaka and I both are available.
*I understand the date and the place for the meeting with B Company.

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Thank you for arranging the schedule.
*Regarding the meeting with A Company, would it possible to let it start at 17:00?
*Regarding the supper on 18th, September, Mr./Ms. Tanaka and I both are available.
*I understand the date and the place for the meeting with B Company.