岡　達郎 (jesse-oka) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I found a screw inside the DVD recorder.
I don't know where it came from.
I think that's the reason why this DVD recorder hasn't worked.↵

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I heard rattling sound from inside DVD recorder.
A cause of the sound was, a screw was off.↵
I don't know where it came from.
Perhaps that is, I think, the cause of breaking down, DVD recorder was not working.

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6. With Thai language, when opening CSV files or creating data files, a lot of complicated work is needed.
7. The proficiency level of SS and I is low, so that it takes time for getting response or remedy for issues.
8. On the supplier site, it is possible to increase inventory, but not to decrease it, while the translated text implies the both are possible.
9. On the supplier site, there are columns which are not actually functioning (e.g. Limited quantity).
10. There are lots of suspicious operations or actions taken by the system.
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-When uploading a data file including lots of lines, the system gets white out.

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6. Since it's Thai language, for opening CSV files or creating data files, works are a lot, and they are difficult.
7. The proficiency level of SS and I is low, so they are slow to response or fix the issues.
8. On the supplier site, it is possible to increase inventory, but not to decrease. (Its translation text looks like both are possible.)
9. On the supplier site, some of them are not working while there are columns. (e.g. Limited quantity etc.).
10. Due to the system there are lots of suspicious operations or actions.
-When uploading a data file including lots of items, the screen gets whiteout.

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1. There are cases where the translations are not appropriate and need corrections (especially, the error messages that one got alerted from the browser, unusual error messages, etc. must be checked).
2. The meaning of the down report of the usage performance is funny. (The settings of the DB column is funny, etc.)
3. Sometimes, the screen quickly whites out or blacks out.
4. Because the loading of SP is indispensable, I can't develop services for dealers and customers.
5. Uploading is extremely difficult (the logics of whether to put in values into suppliers and users' columns, showing correct pictures, etc. are wrong [whether to have the 1st line]).

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1. There are cases where the translations are not appropriate and need corrections (especially, the error messages that one got alerted from the browser, unusual error messages, etc. must be checked).
2. The meaning of the down report of the use performance is odd. (The settings of the DB column is strange, etc.)
3. Sometimes, the screen suddenly whites out or blacks out.
4. Because the implementation of SP is indispensable, I can't develop services for dealers and customers.
5. Uploading is extremely difficult (the logics of whether to put in values into suppliers and users' columns, showing correct pictures, etc. are wrong [whether to have the 1st line or not]).

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1. Sometimes translation is not good and we need to correct it (what is specifically necessary is to check the error message alerted from the browser and error message that is usually not shown, etc.)
2. The meaning of down report such as history of use, etc. is not correct (The column of data base is not set appropriately, etc.)
3. Sometimes whiteout and blackout appear suddenly.
4. As SP is necessary, we cannot provide a service to dealer and customers.
5. It is extremely difficult to upload (The logic whether the column of supplier and user is input or not such as appropriate picture, etc. is wrong. Yes or no of the 1st line)

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1. Sometimes translation is not proper and needs to be corrected (what is specifically necessary is to check those message alerted from the browser and those abnormal error message, etc.)
2. The meaning of down report such as history of use, etc. is odd. (The column of data base is not set appropriately, etc.)
3. Sometimes the screen gets whiteout or blackout suddenly.
4. Since equipment of SP is indispensable, we cannot provide the service to dealers and customers.
5. It is extremely difficult to upload (The right pictures etc., Its logic whether those column of supplier and user is input or not, is wrong. [Presence or absence of the 1st line.])

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We heard that the item is damaged. We are going to handle it immediately.
Could you take a picture of it and send it to us by e-mail?
May we suggest you to refund part of 20 dollars depending on the condition of the item?
If you cannot use it by 100 percent, we will claim an insurance and send it to you again.
You do not lose anything in this trade, so please stop worrying.
We apologize to have made you worried.
A.M a person in charge of customers

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We heard that the item is damaged. We will correspond to it immediately.
Could you take a picture of it and send it to us by e-mail?
May we suggest you partial refunding of 20 dollars depending on the condition of the item?
If you cannot use it at all, we will claim an insurance and send it to you again.
You do not lose anything in this trade, so please do not worry..
We apologize to have made you worried.
A.M a person in charge of customers.

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I sent a baggage quickly after I was dismissed from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please deposit $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

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I sent a baggage quickly right after I was discharged from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will make a discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please do payment of $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

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When you ordered last time card information stolen from there site, and there was unauthorized use of the card and the card has been reissued.
After the order this time from your site, I'm in reissue process due to unauthorized use again.
Card information on your site is leaky.

The order number 5 in this time
Although I want to order, but again and again like this thing is annoying.
Can you deal with it?

Please treat me well.


Yesterday, I completed the remittance procedure of $10000.

I ask you quick shipping.

Here we finished the test of 00 person's name input processing.

They are good workmanship. Just wait for the goods arrival.

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When I ordered last time my card information got stolen from your website, and there was unauthorized use of my card and my card has been reissued.
After the order this time from your site, I'm in reissue process due to unauthorized use again.
A huge leakage of card information is occurring in your website.

The order number 5 in this time
Although I want to order, but again and again trouble like this is annoying.
Can you deal with it?

Please treat me well.


Yesterday, I got done with transferring $10,000.

Please ship quickly.

Here we finished the test of 00 for placing name process.

They are good workmanship. I just await arrival of the item.

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The information of the card was stolen from your website when I ordered last time. As the card was used illegally, it was issued again.
After I ordered from your website this time, the card was used illegally again and I am
making a preparation for issuing the card again.
The card information on your website has been stolen.

Order number 5 this time
I would like to order, but I do not want to have this kind of trouble again.
Could you solve it for me?
I appreciate your understanding.

I completed the arrangement of sending 10,000 dollars yesterday.
Would you send it as soon as possible?
I finished testing of processing for engraving the name for 00.
It was completed well. I am looking forward to receiving the item.

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The information of my card was stolen at your website when I ordered last time. As the card was used illegally, it was reissued.
After I ordered from your website this time, the card was used illegally again and I am
making a preparation for reissuing the card again.
A huge data leakage of card information is occurring at your website.

Order number 5 this time
I would like to order, but I do not want to have this kind of trouble again and again.
Could you correspond?
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I appreciate your understanding.

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I am done with transferring 10,000 dollars yesterday.
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Would you send it as soon as possible?
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I finished testing of processing for engraving the name for 00.
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It was completed well. all I do is to await arrival of the item.

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I think the best way is open your account with big bank near you living.
Because you can easily open up a acount with your neighboring bank,
Have you any bank(Tokyo Mitsubishi UFJ, Mizuho,Mitsuisumitomo) around your house?
Because it is probable that these bank has a person who speak english.
You stay in Japan over 6 month, so you can make it with your ID card and seal.
Of course, Me and Mitsu can help you if you need it.
Now Mitsu has many vacation because his work came to an end.
Don't hesitate to contact me if there's anything I can do.

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I think it would be the best that you open your account at the biggest bank near your house or school.
Because you can easily open an acount up if your house is near to the bank,
Plus these banks possibly have staffs who speak English.
Plus, in those big bank, staffs with good at English ability are possibly there.
Have you any branches of banks such as(Tokyo Mitsubishi UFJ, Mizuho,Mitsuisumitomo) around your house?↵
You have been staying in Japan over 6 month, so, if you bring your ID card and you seal, it could be possible.
Of course, Me and Mitsu can go to where you are if you need our help.
Now Mitsu has many holidays because his has got done with his work.
Don't be reserved and tell me if you need anything..

元の翻訳
Thank you for your warm response.

As we will return the goods to you then, please tell me the address for return.
After we send out the goods, we will contact you, please prepare the fee needed for the return delivery.

Moreover, please confirm the exchange good "xxxx" is correct and deliver the correct products. When the exchange goods have been sent out, please tell me the tracking number.

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Thank you for your kind correspondence.

As we will return the goods, please tell me the address for returning.
After we send out the goods, we will contact you, please repay the free for returning.

Also, please confirm the replacement item "xxxx" is correct and deliver the right products. When you get done with sending, please tell me its tracking number.

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Thank you for your kind contact.

I will send the item back, please tell me the address.
After sending back, I will contact you. Then please refund the charge needed for sending back.

And after confirming the exchange purchase "xxxx", please arrange for sending the correct item. When you finish the delivery, please tell me the tracking number. Thank you for your kindness.

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Thank you for your kind correspondence.

I will send the item back, please tell me the address.
After sending back, I will contact you. Then please refund the charge needed for sending back.

Regarding replacement, confirming the "xxxx", please arrange for sending the correct item. When you finish the delivery, please tell me its tracking number.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
The limited items mean that the design of that year is its special specification.
The performance between the watches is not different much.
As for altimeter, it has only the measurement by meter.
We do not handle the strap, and do not know where the strap is sold.
For details of the items manufactured by Casio, please refer to the website below.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The limited items mean that the design of the year is its special specification.
Their performance of the both watches doesn't differ much.
As for altimeter, it has only the measurement by meter.
We do not handle the strap, and do not know where the strap is sold.
For details of the items manufactured by Casio, please make an inquiry in the website below.

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Why can't send the item back after 2months, you can see my address on ebay.
I did’t actually moving test , will accept it back in case of moving trouble.
I sent it to the address
I did't know how to use the machine for sharpening the both side of scissors at once from a workman.

Some hair- salons may understand it. I wish the image help you

It includes lacking broken .

x and x corroborated item

hair- dressing- salons corms made from horns

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Despite my accurate post address can be checked on ebay, why can't you return the item even after 2-month?
Although I haven't conducted validation, however I will accept returning if its operation has problems.
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I have sent commodity to the address you designated.
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A machinery I purchased from a craftsman, which can sharpen both side of iron at once.↵
However I am not sure how to use, since I don't have its manual.

Maybe someone who work for barber can understand? Please judge looking in to the photo.

It includes ones whose parts are lacking or broken.

Collaboration item of ○ and ○.

Barber made from horns, a comb of a beauty parlor.

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I deeply apologize for the inconvenience that you have not received the product.
There was a mistake when filling the address in the form, and the ZIP code was unwritten.
It was our fault. I am sincerely sorry.
You can check the status of the delivery from the web link below. It seems that the package's being sent back to us.
I'm afraid but we will resend the package to you once it will arrive to us, and that will take a while. Hence we would like to refund all your payment, would that be alright?
Thank you very much.

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I deeply apologize for the inconvenience that you have not received the product.
When filling the address in the form, the ZIP code was missing.
It was our fault. I am sincerely sorry.
You can check the status of the delivery from the web link below. It seems that the package has been sent back to us.
I'm afraid but if we will resend the package to you once it will arrive to us, it will take long. Hence we would like to refund all your payment, would that be alright?
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes, thank you.
Please contact me once the C28 glass panel is delivered and received, as I would like to buy 2 units of it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, thank you.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes, please.
Please contact me once the C28 glass panels are arrived, as I would like to buy 2 units of it.
I await.

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Thank you very much for your contacting me.
Yes, please do so.↵
When you receive the glass panels of C28, please let us know as we will purchase two of them.
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you very much for your contact.
When receiving the glass panels of C28, please let us know as we will purchase two of them.
We await.

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I asked Casio.
While many watches have a instruction manual written in English, the watch, apparently, doesn't have it.
I'm sorry, but I didn't know that.
Could you send a return request for me? I will give you a full refund.
If I do it, would you take back the negative feedback?
The watch is sold in other shops, not only in mine.
It was a hurt, writing a negative feedback hastily.

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I have made an inquiry to Casio.
While many watches have instruction manuals written in English, the watch, apparently, doesn't have one.
I didn't know that, I am sorry.
Could you send a return request for me? I will give you a full refund.
If I do it, would you take back the negative feedback?
The watches are sold in also other shops, not only in mine.
It is awefult, you suddenly wrote a negative feedback.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The following list is for this converter on SHIGMA's Website.

This converter is only for the lenses on the list, so the lens you have is out of correspondence.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
Below is the list of this converter which is compatible on SHIGMA's Website.

This converter supports only the lenses listed, so the lens you have is unsupported.

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Thank you for inquiring us.
The following is a list that is compatible with this converter, which↵
is on the website of a manufacturer of Sigma.
As this converter can handle only the lenses that are↵
listed in this list, your lens cannot be handled.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
Below is a compatible list of converters that is on the website of a manufacturer of Sigma.
Since this converter supports only the lenses that are in the list, your lens is not supported.

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It seems that there is a scratch on the display of the watch. I am truly sorry for that.

The watch was purchased from a wholesale dealer, so it is brand new.

Could you please take a photo of the scratch on the display of the watch, and send the image to me?

I have to make a protest against the wholesale dealer for this.

If you wish for a refund, I will pay back the whole amount.

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I am truly sorry that It seems that there is a scratch on the display of the watch.

The watch is brand new since I purchased the watch from a wholesale dealer.

Could you please take a photo of the scratch on the display of the watch, and send me it?

I have to make a protest against the wholesale dealer for this.

If you wish for a refund, I will pay back the whole amount.

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I'm sorry that the reply is delayed.
I've been in hospital for a while.
I'm really sorry.

Now, I'm very sorry for your inconvenient this time.
Would you please return the item to the address below?

After the arrival, I will pay back to you.
I will be responsible for this till the end.

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I'm sorry that the reply is delayed.
I've been hospitalized a while.
I'm really sorry.

Also, I'm very sorry for your inconvenient this time.
Please return the item to the address below.

After the arrival, I will pay back to you.
I'll correspond to this with responsibility till the end.

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This article is not my purchases.
Its tag number is Ste52-034, but my number is Ste052-304.
Since this is your fault, I would like to have my refund $2 on the expense of checking the article image.
Thank you for your consideration.

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This article is not my purchases.
Its tag number is Ste52-034, but my number is Ste052-304 when I see it.
Since this is your fault, I would like to have my refund $2 on the expense of checking the article image.
Thank you for your consideration.

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Thank you for sending a sample book.
We checked the contents, and decided the item that we are going to sell.

The item below is the one that we have sold so far, and we will continue to sell it in the future.

The item below is the new item that we are going to sell.

We request that you send the status of inventory for these all the item every month.
If we know the status of the inventory, it is very helpful for us.

In addition, as the sample book that you had sent was so good, could you please send the
sample book of the item below that has already been sold?

If we have it, we can introduce the items to customers in detail, so it will be easy for us to sell.

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Thank you for sending a sample book.
We checked the contents, and decided the item that we are going to sell.

The item below is the one that we have been selling so far, and we will continue to sell it hereafter.

The item below is the new item that we are going to sell.

We request that you send the inventory status for these all the item every month.
If we know the inventory status, it is very helpful for us.

In addition, as the sample book that you had sent was so good, could you please send the
sample book of the item below that has already been sold?

If we have it, we can introduce the items to customers in detail, so it will be easier for us to sell.

元の翻訳
FTP information is as follows.


Could you tell me the file name that you changed, if possible?

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FTP information is as follows.


Could you possibly tell me the file name, which file you modified?

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As it seems to be difficult to take a lesson in August, I'd like to take it in September.
Currently I don't have any plans in the first half of September, so if you are available on September 1st or 2nd, please give me a lesson.
I'd like to meet you at the cafe at 〜 Station, the same as the previous lesson.
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Would you kindly reply to my email in English?
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My email address has been changed, so please contact me at this address.
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I'd like to take a lesson. Are you available any day next week?

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As it seems to be difficult to take a lesson in August, I'd like to take it in September.
Currently I don't have any plans in the first half of September, so if you are available on September 1st or 2nd, please give me a lesson.
I'd like to meet you at the cafe at 〜 Station, the same as the previous lesson.
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Would you kindly reply to my email in English?
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My email address has been changed, so please contact me at this address from now on.
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I'd like to take a lesson. Are you available any day next week?